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........Unknown Eyes.......... - 18th May 2009, 03:13 PM

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Here i m going to share my poem for the first time on SDC, that poem "Unknown Eyes" is written by me almost a year back, just hoping you'll appreciate that !



Unknown Eyes



Those b’ful unknown eyes,
to which I was a stranger,

I found some sadness today,
On her face,
But m unknown to her,

She is far away from me,
Never ever to come near,
But still her eyes are looking to me,
But I m still unknown to her,

There was a sound of her breath
Deep in my heart,
But I still unknown to her,

Love can leave a mark,
But that’s no cause to stand apart;

It was just love at first sight,
I looked deep into those unknown eyes,
I saw 'ocean of love' in
Those unknown eyes

Now m not unknown to her
She is mine
N mine was her,
Never ever to swindle again,




~Shan~
Ocean of Love


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18th May 2009, 04:18 PM

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ohhh.................those Boastful......aka (b'ful) eccentric eyes.
Who lives apart and sees unlike (cuz they are squint)

Dude if you want i can go on n on n on.... on those Boastful eyes....
hahahahaaaa.... woh boastful eye tujhe dekhkar...... behaal ho jayegi..... aisa kar tu kahi bhi mat ja.......


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Hello Friends

Here i m going to share my poem for the first time on SDC, that poem "Unknown Eyes" is written by me almost a year back, just hoping you'll appreciate that !



Unknown Eyes



Those b’ful unknown eyes,
to which I was a stranger,

I found some sadness today,
On her face,
But m unknown to her,

She is far away from me,
Never ever to come near,
But still her eyes are looking to me,
But I m still unknown to her,

There was a sound of her breath
Deep in my heart,
But I still unknown to her,

Love can leave a mark,
But that’s no cause to stand apart;

It was just love at first sight,
I looked deep into those unknown eyes,
I saw 'ocean of love' in
Those unknown eyes

Now m not unknown to her
She is mine
N mine was her,
Never ever to swindle again,




~Shan~
Ocean of Love


wooooooooooooooooooooooow...................nice one yaar SHAAN..... waise tumne kabhi bataya nahi un 'eyes' ke bareme.....
gr8 job yaar.......keep it up dear.........


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wooooooooooooooooooooooow...................nice one yaar SHAAN..... waise tumne kabhi bataya nahi un 'eyes' ke bareme.....
gr8 job yaar.......keep it up dear.........
tumne kabhi humari aankhon me dekha hi na................. !


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Hello Friends

Here i m going to share my poem for the first time on SDC, that poem "Unknown Eyes" is written by me almost a year back, just hoping you'll appreciate that !



Unknown Eyes



Those b’ful unknown eyes,
to which I was a stranger,

I found some sadness today,
On her face,
But m unknown to her,

She is far away from me,
Never ever to come near,
But still her eyes are looking to me,
But I m still unknown to her,

There was a sound of her breath
Deep in my heart,
But I still unknown to her,

Love can leave a mark,
But that’s no cause to stand apart;

It was just love at first sight,
I looked deep into those unknown eyes,
I saw 'ocean of love' in
Those unknown eyes

Now m not unknown to her
She is mine
N mine was her,
Never ever to swindle again,




~Shan~
Ocean of Love
Shanu jab tu dilse likhta hai na to tera likha har lafz dil ko choo jaata hai, its awesome, feelings & thoughts r superb, u r the best KEEP IT UP sweetheart
   
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Shanu jab tu dilse likhta hai na to tera likha har lafz dil ko choo jaata hai, its awesome, feelings & thoughts r superb, u r the best KEEP IT UP sweetheart
Dil to koi le gaya yaar....... ab aur kaise likhoonga.........


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