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~Ajeeb Larki~ - 20th May 2009, 11:39 AM


Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahti hoon
Main khud ko rakh kar ke kahin bhool jana chahti hoon

Mere naseeb ki khushiyan bhi kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umer bhar aansoo bhahana chahti hoon

Najane kitni Mohabbat hai ranj-o-gham se mujhe..
Koi bhi dard ho dil main chupana chahti hoon


Jise ek umer dil main chupa ke rakha hai..
Woh raaz aaj main sab ko batana chahti hoon


Wahi hai yaad jo acha kaha hai logon ne..
Baqi sare sitam bhool jana chahti hoon


Mujhe zamane ne pather samaj liya hai..
Main ek larki hoon sab ko batana chahti hoon


Jo mujhse rooth chuki hain zamane ki khushiyan..
Toh main bhi un khushiyon se rooth jana chahti hoon


Tu apne Dil ke har ek dar ko khool de..
Main dard ban kar tere dil main aana chahti hoon.
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Mere naseeb ki khushiyan bhi kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umer bhar aansoo bhahana chahti hoon

Najane kitni Mohabbat hai ranj-o-gham se mujhe..
Koi bhi dard ho dil main chupana chahti hoon

Mujhe zamane ne pather samaj liya hai..
Main ek larki hoon sab ko batana chahti hoon

ye lines mujhe acche lage..

Keep going..

Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
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Achhi poem hai
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20th July 2009, 06:22 PM
Rani ji..........nazm ke sabhi sher ache lage ..........ehsaas bahut khubsurat hai.......
aur kaise hai aap......kaha busy ho aaj kal.........



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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very nice
dubara aisi hi nazam sunna chahta hoon

hum ne tu chaha bahut ghazal rubayi aur shyar ka likhna
magar jo nazm bhi likhi tu woh marsiye main tabdeel ho gayi

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21st July 2009, 03:58 AM
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Achhi poem hai
Thanks for sharing

Apka dost
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thank u so much
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ke aapne hamari sharing
ke upar reply dena zaruri samjha
thanx alot

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very nice
dubara aisi hi nazam sunna chahta hoon

hum ne tu chaha bahut ghazal rubayi aur shyar ka likhna
magar jo nazm bhi likhi tu woh marsiye main tabdeel ho gayi
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21st July 2009, 04:04 AM
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Rani ji..........nazm ke sabhi sher ache lage ..........ehsaas bahut khubsurat hai.......
aur kaise hai aap......kaha busy ho aaj kal.........
pehle toh aapka bohot
shukriya ke aap ne
hamari sharing ko pasand ki
humne toh site chorne ka faisla kiya tah
naresh ji msg bhi kiya tah shayad
kisi ne dekha nahin
anyways
asal main hamare
papa ka 13 june ko inteqaal ho gaya tah
yahi wajha tih hamari busy rehne ka

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21st July 2009, 08:12 AM
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pehle toh aapka bohot
shukriya ke aap ne
hamari sharing ko pasand ki
humne toh site chorne ka faisla kiya tah
naresh ji msg bhi kiya tah shayad
kisi ne dekha nahin
anyways
asal main hamare
papa ka 13 june ko inteqaal ho gaya tah
yahi wajha tih hamari busy rehne ka
Rani ji.........aap se yeh dukhad samachar sunkar mujhe bhi bada kasth hua......yeh jeevan ki niyati hai........insaan yahi aake haar jata hai.......parmatma aapko aur aapke parivaar ko iss dukh ko sehne shakti de.......aur aapke papa ji aatma ko sat gati....main aapke iss dukh ke saath hu....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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21st July 2009, 03:08 PM
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Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahti hoon
Main khud ko rakh kar ke kahin bhool jana chahti hoon

Mere naseeb ki khushiyan bhi kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umer bhar aansoo bhahana chahti hoon

Najane kitni Mohabbat hai ranj-o-gham se mujhe..
Koi bhi dard ho dil main chupana chahti hoon


Jise ek umer dil main chupa ke rakha hai..
Woh raaz aaj main sab ko batana chahti hoon


Wahi hai yaad jo acha kaha hai logon ne..
Baqi sare sitam bhool jana chahti hoon


Mujhe zamane ne pather samaj liya hai..
Main ek larki hoon sab ko batana chahti hoon


Jo mujhse rooth chuki hain zamane ki khushiyan..
Toh main bhi un khushiyon se rooth jana chahti hoon


Tu apne Dil ke har ek dar ko khool de..
Main dard ban kar tere dil main aana chahti hoon.
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Hello,

Bayaani bahut achhi hai... khoobsurat nageena dhoond kar laayi hain aap... haan ehsaasaat poori tarah pasand nahin aaye mujhe...kisi ke mann me bhi khud ko jalaane ka khayal nahin aana chaahiye...

Khair... app is khoobsurat ghzal ko dhoond kar laayin, iske liye shukriya... aage bhi aise nagine laati rahiyega...

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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21st July 2009, 08:17 PM
Raani jee,

abhi aap ke post se pata chala ki 13th june ko aap ke pita jee ka intakaal ho gaya.. yeh sun kar behad dukh huaa.. is dukh ki ghadi me.n hamaari sambedanaaye.n aap ke saath hai. ooparwaale se binati hai ki, woh aap ke pitajii ki aatma ko shanti de aur aap ke parivaar ko yeh dukh sahne ki aur is se ubarne ki shakti de...

aap bhi apna khayaal rakhiye..

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23rd July 2009, 08:56 AM
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Rani ji.........aap se yeh dukhad samachar sunkar mujhe bhi bada kasth hua......yeh jeevan ki niyati hai........insaan yahi aake haar jata hai.......parmatma aapko aur aapke parivaar ko iss dukh ko sehne shakti de.......aur aapke papa ji aatma ko sat gati....main aapke iss dukh ke saath hu....

thank u so much naresh ji
aapka saath bas yunhi bana rahe
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23rd July 2009, 08:58 AM
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Hello,

Bayaani bahut achhi hai... khoobsurat nageena dhoond kar laayi hain aap... haan ehsaasaat poori tarah pasand nahin aaye mujhe...kisi ke mann me bhi khud ko jalaane ka khayal nahin aana chaahiye...

Khair... app is khoobsurat ghzal ko dhoond kar laayin, iske liye shukriya... aage bhi aise nagine laati rahiyega...
ji zarur aage bhi koshish karenge ke
aise hi khubsuart gazal dhund kar laane ki
n thanx reply dene ka

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Raani jee,

abhi aap ke post se pata chala ki 13th june ko aap ke pita jee ka intakaal ho gaya.. yeh sun kar behad dukh huaa.. is dukh ki ghadi me.n hamaari sambedanaaye.n aap ke saath hai. ooparwaale se binati hai ki, woh aap ke pitajii ki aatma ko shanti de aur aap ke parivaar ko yeh dukh sahne ki aur is se ubarne ki shakti de...

aap bhi apna khayaal rakhiye..

mayank
thank u so much mayank ji
ke aap ne is dukh main hamara saath
diya bas aap sab ka yunhi saath bana rahe
toh zarur dard halka ho jayega
bas aap sab se ek guzarish hai ke aap sab hamari mom ki liye dua kare

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23rd July 2009, 11:43 AM
Wonderful composition Rani,
very well composed and exhibitted.
aap sachmuch daad k kabil hain....
keep it up and keep entertaining us byt ur golder words.
Take Care.

Mohabbat ki raahon mein chalna sambhal ke
Yahan jo bhi aaya...gaya haath mal ke..!

Log kehte hain Sher kehta hun .
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25th July 2009, 03:58 AM
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Wonderful composition Rani,
very well composed and exhibitted.
aap sachmuch daad k kabil hain....
keep it up and keep entertaining us byt ur golder words.
Take Care.
thank u very much
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