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I Will Never Leave u - 18th August 2009, 01:01 AM
I will never leave u
I’ll always be with u
But don’t u leave me
Alone like a dream
Leaves alone a person
After coming true.
It’s hard to live
Without u when u r
Here it feels like
The whole world
Is with me it feels like
That u were made for me
I will never leave u
It’s not because u
Never left me it’s
Because I love u
So much I have
Ever loved myself
Don’t think I want to
Repay u because u
Stayed with on the
Good and Bad times
But I really love u
And I don’t want to
Leave u alone
Because my world is
From u my love
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9th September 2009, 09:27 PM
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I will never leave u
I’ll always be with u
But don’t u leave me
Alone like a dream
Leaves alone a person
After coming true.
It’s hard to live
Without u when u r
Here it feels like
The whole world
Is with me it feels like
That u were made for me
I will never leave u
It’s not because u
Never left me it’s
Because I love u
So much I have
Ever loved myself
Don’t think I want to
Repay u because u
Stayed with on the
Good and Bad times
But I really love u
And I don’t want to
Leave u alone
Because my world is
From u my love
_NM_


From u my love
excellent............
in the same vein...only the meter is different

'dont break my heart...dont break my ha--aa---TT

am giving you a link ..listen ..ehenever u have the time

ub40......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5CeTDCFonw

regards
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nice written.........................

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14th November 2009, 01:55 PM
in the same vein...only the meter is different

'dont break my heart...dont break my ha--aa---TT

am giving you a link ..listen ..ehenever u have the time

ub40......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5CeTDCFonw

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well its novel for sure

and the link from teen age days ...nostalgia galore..
great

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16th November 2009, 04:49 PM
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in the same vein...only the meter is different

'dont break my heart...dont break my ha--aa---TT

am giving you a link ..listen ..ehenever u have the time

ub40......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5CeTDCFonw

regards

well its novel for sure

and the link from teen age days ...nostalgia galore..
great

cheers[/QUOTE]

hahhahaaha,,,,,,,

had the same hubris when i read it..............
nostalgia simply pervaded me..........
so gave the link
this guy or girl.....is surely a teenager.........
   
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