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Ibaadat me shumaar.... -
25th December 2010, 06:58 PM
Bazm me aaye hue Naazreeno-Hazraat ko shaad ka aadaab... ek khayaal peshe khidmat hai us shokh ke naam pe jisne jab jab apni yaad dilaai hai meri rooh tak ko mahkaaya hai... ummeed hai us jazbaat ko aap sab bhi mahsoos kar sakenge is naacheez ki tahreer me.....nosh farmaaaiye.
Is taraha muhabbat ka wo Izhaar karte hain. khaabon me aakar hi aksar Iqraar karte hain. Ban jate hain Anjaan yuN duniya ke saamne, Jaise ki meri Chaahaton se inkaar karte hain. Jab bhi likhhta hoon main jazbaate-sher koi, Wo baithe sunte hain aur sudhaar karte hain. Kahte to hain ke meri jano-dil me baste hain. Unhi ko hale-dil sunauN to taqraar karte hain. Wo jab bheegi hui zulfon se qahar dhate hain, Suna hai unse pardaa tab aabshaar karte hain. Tune hii pahle Islaam kubool kar liyaa "shaad" Kai unhe aajkal Ibaadat me shumaar karte hain. shaad... |
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25th December 2010, 07:20 PM
Tune hii pahle Islaam kubool kar liyaa "shaad"
Kai unhe aajkal Ibaadat me shumaar karte hain. ye sher bahut hi interesting lagaa shaad sahab. daad kubul kijiye meri. ulaa ki aisi adaan thi ki kya batayen... saani ne ise zara limited kar diya... ek aur saani sochiye sahab.... iska matlab ye nahi ki ye sher koi kam hai......bilkul qahr hai. Jab bhi likhhta hoon main jazbaate-sher koi, Wo baithe sunte hain aur sudhaar karte hain. ab is sher ki taareef kaise ki jaaye...ye samjh nahi aa raha...... koi naya tarika sochna hoga, daad dene ke liye |
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26th December 2010, 03:15 PM
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26th December 2010, 08:31 PM
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Sameer bhai.....bahut accha likha hai aapne, sabhi sher kabil-e-treef haiN, dil se daad hazir hai. khush rahiye duaon ke saath baaji  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th December 2010, 10:10 PM
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Zidd bhai aadaab, behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aapne nacheez ki bazm me tashreef laane ki zahmat uthaai aur hamare khayalon ko padha pasand kiyaa. Aapne jo sher quote kiye hain sach maane to wo hamare khud ke bhi pasandida rahe hain... baharhaal aapne saani ka kaha hai, beshaq aapke zahen me alag khayaal aa sakte hain.. khayalon ka kya hai aate jate rahte hain, hamare is bar yahi aa sake.. Khair saath banaae rahen padhte rahen ho sakta hai aage chalke kabhi hum Hum-khayaal bhi ho jaaen.. shukriya ek baar fir. duaaon me yaad rakhen allaha hafiz. shaad... |
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26th December 2010, 10:12 PM
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26th December 2010, 10:13 PM
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Aadaab Janaab Shaad Sahab! Aaafreen! Aaafreen! Kya karen, sar-sari perh ker daad aur rai pesh kerna is nacheez ki tabeeyat nahi. Isiliye jab bhi comment likhta hoon to boht waqt lagta hai aur sab jagah comments ker nahi pata(waqt ki tangi ki wajah se). Aaapki is ghazal ka har ek shayr re-read kerte kerte andaza nahi reha waqt ka. Zabardast kahoon to shayad boht kam hoga! Deegar shura ne baz cheezen pehle he kehdeen so dohrana bekaar hai! Daad k phool pesh-e-qidmat hain qabool fermaiyega aur ek baar phir se boht boht shukriya apka k aapne humse itni khoobsoorat Ghazal share ki! Khush rahein! |
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26th December 2010, 10:18 PM
Wo jab bheegi hui zulfon se qahar dhate hain,
Suna hai unse pardaa tab aabshaar karte hain. Very Romantic ............ Shaad Ji !!! Tune hii pahle Islaam kubool kar liyaa "shaad" Kai unhe aajkal Ibaadat me shumaar karte hain. Bahut umdaa Khayaal laga hume .... Nice One ... !!! Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul ki jiye ... aur behtar kalaamoN ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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27th December 2010, 10:27 AM
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27th December 2010, 10:45 AM
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pyaare bhai.. aaj aapki aamad dekhi hamari mahfil mein, accha laga aapke khayaal dekhkar, behad khushnaseeb samajhta hoon main khud ko jo aapne apne keemti waqt me se thodaa sa waqt mere liye nikaala aur meri likhi hui is adna si kalaam ko saraaha .. aapdi daad ka main tahedil se istaqbaal karta hoon... aur aapne jo muhabbat aur khuloos lutaai hai main inhe sar aankhon pe rakhta hoon mere bhai.. bas yoonhi saath dete rahna. aate rahna. padhte rahna... apna khyaal rakhiye, hamesha khush rahiye. shaad... |
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27th December 2010, 11:06 AM
Is taraha muhabbat ka wo Izhaar karte hain.
khaabon me aakar hi aksar Iqraar karte hain. Ban jate hain Anjaan yuN duniya ke saamne, Jaise ki meri Chaahaton se inkaar karte hain. Jab bhi likhhta hoon main jazbaate-sher koi, Wo baithe sunte hain aur sudhaar karte hain. Kahte to hain ke meri jano-dil me baste hain. Unhi ko hale-dil sunauN to taqraar karte hain. Wo jab bheegi hui zulfon se qahar dhate hain, Suna hai unse pardaa tab aabshaar karte hain. Tune hii pahle Islaam kubool kar liyaa "shaad" Kai unhe aajkal Ibaadat me shumaar karte hain. sameer saheb aadaaB... yaar kya likha hai, bahut khoob...maza aa gaya padh kar... har sher dusare se behtar...koi ek sher choose nahi kar pa raha huN... bahut kam dikhte haiN is tarha ke qalaam...mujhe khushi hai ki aapne ise likha...meri janib se daad-o-mubaraqbaad qubuul kijiyega....aur yuN_hi likhte rahuiyega... mukhlis, vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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27th December 2010, 12:30 PM
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27th December 2010, 12:48 PM
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Is taraha muhabbat ka wo Izhaar karte hain. khaabon me aakar hi aksar Iqraar karte hain. Ban jate hain Anjaan yuN duniya ke saamne, Jaise ki meri Chaahaton se inkaar karte hain. Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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27th December 2010, 12:58 PM
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behad shukriya tashreef lane ke liye Vikram bhai.. ye aapki nawazish , karam, inaayat hai sarkaar jo aapne Nacheez ki tahreer ko itni izzat bakhshi...ek baar fir se tahedil se shukriya aapka huzoor.. aate rahen, yoonhi saath dete rahen.. shaad... |
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27th December 2010, 01:03 PM
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behad shukriya Radhika jee, jo aapne apne keemti waqt me se thoda sa is nacheez ke liye zaaya kiya... aapne mahfil me aane ki zehmat utthai aur hame pasand bhi kiya.. tahe dil se shukrguzaaar hoon aapka.. aati rahen..khush rahen. shaad... |
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27th December 2010, 01:45 PM
Boht KHooob Shaad Saheb.......
Hr Sher Zabardast Hai....... Likhtay Rahen........ KHush Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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27th December 2010, 02:05 PM
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Kahte to hain ke meri jano-dil me baste hain. Unhi ko hale-dil sunauN to taqraar karte hain. Wo jab bheegi hui zulfon se qahar dhate hain, Suna hai unse pardaa tab aabshaar karte hain. daad kubul farmaayen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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27th December 2010, 02:54 PM
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27th December 2010, 03:01 PM
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janaab rajinder bhai ko shaad kaa aadaab.. bhai is baar bhi aap nacheez ki mahfil me tashreef laaye mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai.. accha laga jkankart ki aapko pasand aaya .. hausal-afzaai ka behad shukriya.. aate rahen. saath dete rahen.. duaaon ka muntazir. shaad... |
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27th December 2010, 03:12 PM
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path par kaante bahut hain tere par manjil par jaana too.ne dar na jatilata se jeewan ki isko saral banana too.ne pasat na hone paye honsle khud ka sahas khud hi juta le 
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27th December 2010, 03:17 PM
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15th January 2011, 05:14 PM
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 Aise hi likhte rahiyee......!!! Khush rahiyee....!!!Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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15th January 2011, 09:57 PM
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Pyaari kavitaa jee ummeed karta hoon khush hogi.. aapka bazm me istaqbaal kartaa hoon main.. aapka is andaaz se har ek sher pe apni raay dena.. is andaaz se tareef karna hame kaayal banaata hai.. aap aaye yahi hamare liye behad khushi ki baat hai.. aati rahiyega.. yoonhi sath detee rahiye. khush raho bitiyaa shaad... |
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