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Post kitne achche the... - 9th July 2014, 06:24 PM

Kitne achche the jab bachche the ham,
Man ke kitne sachche the ham.
Na jane ye duniya dari,
Bas lagti thi gudiya pyari.
Kya kahna hai,kya sunana hai,
Kab jagna hai,kab sona hai.
Na thi fikra kabhi koi
pariyon ki duniya me khoi.
Itni karte the shaitani,
Tang thi hamse dadi nani.
Dadi ke pyare gaun me,
Thandi neem ki chaanv me,
June ki bhari dopahar me,
Sab sote the jab apne ghar me,
Ham apni dhun me rahte the.
Chchoti baton par ladte the.
Socho vo bachpan kaisa tha?
Ret ke us ghar jaisa tha,
Apne hathon se banaya tha,
Phoolon patton se sajaya tha,
Samandar ki tej lahar ne akar
Use mitaya tha.
Mit gaya vo bachpan bhi usi tarah
Ab to jhagde hain aur jirah.
Gam jyada hain khushiyaan kam hai,
Har baat par ye aankhe nam hain.
Ye uska hai,vo mera hai.
Kyon main fikra karoon tu jane jo tera hai.
In sab bagon ke peeche hi,
Ye sari duniya bhaag rahi.
Bachpan me thi jo dost mere,
Ab kanha vo pyari baat rahi.
   
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9th July 2014, 11:56 PM
Good one madhu ji. ................



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acchii peshkash madhu ji......... likhti rahen

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bahut hee khoobsurat ehsaas madhu ji....yun hee likhti rahein...


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thank u - 10th July 2014, 10:26 AM
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11th July 2014, 08:32 PM
Madhu ji.
Yeh kaisi.vidambana hai , ki.jab koi cheez haath se nikal jati
hai tau.humein uski value samajh aati.hai.
Aap ke bachpan.ke chitran mein kuch aisa maine mehsoos kiya..

Two lines from my poem childhood...

Our parents were our custodeons ,
Our elders were our guide ,
We just had to follow their footsteps,
So easy was the life.
So easy was the life I.wish I had not grown,
To face realities of life & drudgeries of this world.

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thank u - 11th July 2014, 08:58 PM
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Madhu ji.
Yeh kaisi.vidambana hai , ki.jab koi cheez haath se nikal jati
hai tau.humein uski value samajh aati.hai.
Aap ke bachpan.ke chitran mein kuch aisa maine mehsoos kiya..

Two lines from my poem childhood...

Our parents were our custodeons ,
Our elders were our guide ,
We just had to follow their footsteps,
So easy was the life.
So easy was the life I.wish I had not grown,
To face realities of life & drudgeries of this world.

Sanjay Sehgal
Bahut khoob kaha sanjay ji sach yahi hai vaqt ho ya insaan uske jane ke baad hi uski kadra hoti hai..apni childhood poem ki lines share ksrne ke liye shukriya,these are so true...
   
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