tainu akhri slaam bi..........

[Tumhari_gazal]

Dosto sub to pehlan main tuhanu thanx kehna chahndi han ke tusi mere kuch peroye hoyr shabda nu pasand kita.thankyou very much.te main koshish karan gi ki jud wi likha changa likha.jehda tuhanu pasand aa jawe.te mainu pta hai ki tusi mainu meri galti te maaf kar dewoge te motivate bi karo ge..aj fir kuch tuhanu byan karna chahndi han.....

Tenu akhri slaam bi na keh payi main,
par mainu,dhokhebaaz jan dgaabaaz wee na samji,
kuchj majburiyan si meriyan jo inj kita,
tu jiteya nahi,fir bi haar na samji,
iss dil de wich tere layi pyaar bathera,
par agle janam layi ih mere te uddar samji,
iss waar te main tere pyar di karjayi ho gayi,
par agle saat janma da wada tere naal,ih weeyaj samji,
chahe duur ho gaye han iss dharti te dowen,
par dharte te han iss sachayi nu yaar te samji,
Gazal(r.sharma) fir wi tere darad nu jaan hai sakdi,
par iss janam wich tu mainu wee apna pyar na samji.
par iss janam wich tu mainu wee apna pyar na samji.

[D33P]

good aa...concept good aa.........par kite tarza di kami khall rhi aa ji...........te concept di clairity v aini nahi ho rhi.................eh meri aapni rai hai.....hora de vichaar shyd hor hon,so never mind it

[rishi22722]

Originally Posted by Tumhari_gazal

Dosto sub to pehlan main tuhanu thanx kehna chahndi han ke tusi mere kuch peroye hoyr shabda nu pasand kita.thankyou very much.te main koshish karan gi ki jud wi likha changa likha.jehda tuhanu pasand aa jawe.te mainu pta hai ki tusi mainu meri galti te maaf kar dewoge te motivate bi karo ge..aj fir kuch tuhanu byan karna chahndi han.....

Tenu akhri slaam bi na keh payi main,
par mainu,dhokhebaaz jan dgaabaaz wee na samji,
kuchj majburiyan si meriyan jo inj kita,
tu jiteya nahi,fir bi haar na samji,
iss dil de wich tere layi pyaar bathera,
par agle janam layi ih mere te uddar samji,
iss waar te main tere pyar di karjayi ho gayi,
par agle saat janma da wada tere naal,ih weeyaj samji,
chahe duur ho gaye han iss dharti te dowen,
par dharte te han iss sachayi nu yaar te samji,
Gazal(r.sharma) fir wi tere darad nu jaan hai sakdi,
par iss janam wich tu mainu wee apna pyar na samji.
par iss janam wich tu mainu wee apna pyar na samji.

iss waar tere pyar di karjayi ho gayi,
saata janma da wada tere naal,
ih weeyaj samji,

Wah... Wah... Touching...

Rishi

Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN
Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT,
Zindgi apni to kiyA,
Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN.

[tilakji]

R Sharma ji bahut khoobi naal aggey wadh rahey ho, kitey kitey subject toN hat gayey par fer vi bahut shaandaar koshish. For me u r one of the poet to be watched... likhdey raho

tilak...