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Darr ya khushi - 8th January 2006, 10:57 PM
Dosto aajkal samay ke saath samanjasya bithaana bahoot mushkil hota jaa raha hai.. isliye kuchhek aise kaam bhi hai jahaan par nigaah to jaati hai lekin wahaa tak pahuchane ke liye waqt hi nahi mil paa raha hai..

kuchh aisi hi baat aaj gujari, aur kisi ne kaha ki Garima aajkal darna sikh rahi hai.. wahi par kuchh ulajhe-sulajhe alfaaz nikal pade..

to maine socha ki apane un toote fuote alfaazo ko aapke sabke saath bhi share kar loon.. maine to yeha apani chhoti badi har khushi ko celebrate kiya hai isliye fir aa hi gayi yehaa.. kitani bhi wyastata ho koi apne ghar ka rukh nahi chhodta mai kaise chhod sakti hoon..

well Garima jyaada philosphy ho gayi.. chhoti bachi ko jyaada nahi bolana chahiye hehehhehe.. isliye ab mai chup ho jaati hoon yeha....


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darr ki baat kaha se aayi yeha
hum to badhate jaa rahe hai

nahi khafa hai kisi ke baat se
bekhaof chalate jaa rahe hai

bina kisi se koi shikayat ke
har ghadi se milate jaa rahe hai

ranj-o-gham ki baat na karo
khushi se chahakte jaa rahe hai

door ke dhol ki tarah na dekho yeha
safedi me rang bharate jaa rahe hai

kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai

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8th January 2006, 11:30 PM
Jeena issi ka naam hai...Garima !

Bahout khubsurati se dil ka haal bataaya hai aapne...!

Keep it up...always a pleasure to read you !

Take good care of yourself...thik hai ?


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9th January 2006, 11:14 AM
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9th January 2006, 04:27 PM
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Post 9th January 2006, 04:39 PM
Garima,

"kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai"

Bahaut himmat aur atal vishvaas parhney ko mila teri iss kriti se. Isi tarah himmat se likhtey rehna aur hamesha khush rehna. Darna tow haara hua Insaan seekhtaa hai, aur tu tow mazbood hauslaon ki misaal hai.

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9th January 2006, 05:50 PM
Saral...per sapasht....!

Achha laga....parhkar.

per tumhaari post se jiyaada us.se pehle bhoomika parhna achchha laga.

Khush raho


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Re: Darr ya khushi - 9th January 2006, 06:04 PM
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Dosto aajkal samay ke saath samanjasya bithaana bahoot mushkil hota jaa raha hai.. isliye kuchhek aise kaam bhi hai jahaan par nigaah to jaati hai lekin wahaa tak pahuchane ke liye waqt hi nahi mil paa raha hai..

kuchh aisi hi baat aaj gujari, aur kisi ne kaha ki Garima aajkal darna sikh rahi hai.. wahi par kuchh ulajhe-sulajhe alfaaz nikal pade..

to maine socha ki apane un toote fuote alfaazo ko aapke sabke saath bhi share kar loon.. maine to yeha apani chhoti badi har khushi ko celebrate kiya hai isliye fir aa hi gayi yehaa.. kitani bhi wyastata ho koi apne ghar ka rukh nahi chhodta mai kaise chhod sakti hoon..

well Garima jyaada philosphy ho gayi.. chhoti bachi ko jyaada nahi bolana chahiye hehehhehe.. isliye ab mai chup ho jaati hoon yeha....


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darr ki baat kaha se aayi yeha
hum to badhate jaa rahe hai

nahi khafa hai kisi ke baat se
bekhaof chalate jaa rahe hai

bina kisi se koi shikayat ke
har ghadi se milate jaa rahe hai

ranj-o-gham ki baat na karo
khushi se chahakte jaa rahe hai

door ke dhol ki tarah na dekho yeha
safedi me rang bharate jaa rahe hai

kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai

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bahut hi sundar bahut pasand aaya didi

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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9th January 2006, 06:49 PM
darr ki baat kaha se aayi yeha
hum to badhate jaa rahe hai

nahi khafa hai kisi ke baat se
bekhaof chalate jaa rahe hai

bina kisi se koi shikayat ke
har ghadi se milate jaa rahe hai

ranj-o-gham ki baat na karo
khushi se chahakte jaa rahe hai

door ke dhol ki tarah na dekho yeha
safedi me rang bharate jaa rahe hai

kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai


Simple but expressive.. Accha likha hai Gudiya...Likhti raho..!

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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10th January 2006, 10:57 AM
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Jeena issi ka naam hai...Garima !

Bahout khubsurati se dil ka haal bataaya hai aapne...!

Keep it up...always a pleasure to read you !

Take good care of yourself...thik hai ?

jee jina yehi hai.. mai apani abhi ke paristhiti se bahoot khush hoon.. aur aapne ise pasand kiya tro maja aa gaya.. thanks

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21st January 2006, 09:06 PM
meri priy garima

bahut hi achhe dhang se tumne apni baat jataayi hai yaha...

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Re: Darr ya khushi - 22nd January 2006, 12:53 PM
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Dosto aajkal samay ke saath samanjasya bithaana bahoot mushkil hota jaa raha hai.. isliye kuchhek aise kaam bhi hai jahaan par nigaah to jaati hai lekin wahaa tak pahuchane ke liye waqt hi nahi mil paa raha hai..

kuchh aisi hi baat aaj gujari, aur kisi ne kaha ki Garima aajkal darna sikh rahi hai.. wahi par kuchh ulajhe-sulajhe alfaaz nikal pade..

to maine socha ki apane un toote fuote alfaazo ko aapke sabke saath bhi share kar loon.. maine to yeha apani chhoti badi har khushi ko celebrate kiya hai isliye fir aa hi gayi yehaa.. kitani bhi wyastata ho koi apne ghar ka rukh nahi chhodta mai kaise chhod sakti hoon..

well Garima jyaada philosphy ho gayi.. chhoti bachi ko jyaada nahi bolana chahiye hehehhehe.. isliye ab mai chup ho jaati hoon yeha....


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darr ki baat kaha se aayi yeha
hum to badhate jaa rahe hai

nahi khafa hai kisi ke baat se
bekhaof chalate jaa rahe hai

bina kisi se koi shikayat ke
har ghadi se milate jaa rahe hai

ranj-o-gham ki baat na karo
khushi se chahakte jaa rahe hai

door ke dhol ki tarah na dekho yeha
safedi me rang bharate jaa rahe hai

kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai

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jindgi jine ka sahi andaj sikhane ke liye sukiriya garima tum sach mai shayri parivar ki garima ho aise hi likho dilon ko chuo .

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31st January 2006, 08:39 PM
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31st January 2006, 08:44 PM
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2nd February 2006, 11:48 AM
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Garima,

"kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai"

Bahaut himmat aur atal vishvaas parhney ko mila teri iss kriti se. Isi tarah himmat se likhtey rehna aur hamesha khush rehna. Darna tow haara hua Insaan seekhtaa hai, aur tu tow mazbood hauslaon ki misaal hai.



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2nd February 2006, 11:49 AM
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per tumhaari post se jiyaada us.se pehle bhoomika parhna achchha laga.

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Re: Re: Darr ya khushi - 2nd February 2006, 11:51 AM
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darr ki baat kaha se aayi yeha
hum to badhate jaa rahe hai

nahi khafa hai kisi ke baat se
bekhaof chalate jaa rahe hai

bina kisi se koi shikayat ke
har ghadi se milate jaa rahe hai

ranj-o-gham ki baat na karo
khushi se chahakte jaa rahe hai

door ke dhol ki tarah na dekho yeha
safedi me rang bharate jaa rahe hai

kuchh juda sabse karane ki chaah
haqiqat me ab banate jaa rahe hai


Simple but expressive.. Accha likha hai Gudiya...Likhti raho..!

hehehe aapko meri har baat achhi lagti hai... thanks bhaiya

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2nd February 2006, 11:53 AM
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meri priy garima

bahut hi achhe dhang se tumne apni baat jataayi hai yaha...

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Re: Re: Darr ya khushi - 2nd February 2006, 11:55 AM
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jindgi jine ka sahi andaj sikhane ke liye sukiriya garima tum sach mai shayri parivar ki garima ho aise hi likho dilon ko chuo .

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