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A Thought -
27th February 2006, 11:12 PM
Dosto ek chhoti si baat hai... kisi ek saks ko adhaar nahi maana hai is kavita me...humaare ird gird.. aisa ho raha hai.. jaane kab tak hota jaayega...
kaash...... aksar ye sun.ne me aata hai “bahoot pyaar hai tumse dil kya jaan bhi de denge” aksar ye sun.ne me aata hai “kabhi ajmaa ke to dekh lena jaroorat par jahaan bhi de denge” aksar ye sun.ne me aata hai “ pyaar me tumhaare hai itne dube chaand taare bhi tod ke laa denge” aksar kayi baat sun.ne me aati hai... par sach kya hai... sau log kahate hai kuchh hi kar paate hai.. usme bhi chaand taare to kya ek pal bhi saath nahi de paate hai... kho jaate hai wo waade jo khushiyon ke waqt kiya tha toot jaati hai wo rasme.. aur bachta hai .. ya to nafrat... ya “kaash” fir ye sun.ne me aata hai “kaash” mai kuchh kar sakta |
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27th February 2006, 11:34 PM
Hi sweetu
behad khoobsurati se sach pesh kar diya tumne Aksar aisa hi hota hai aur pyar ki mushkil ghari me hi sachey pyar ki pehchan hua karti hai  kehne aur karne me behad farak hota hai! par shayad jahan sachahyi aur vishwaas ho! vo hi rishta chalta hai hamesha luv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Re: A Thought -
28th February 2006, 12:15 AM
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bohat hi dilfareb khayal .. ek sach hi nahi .. ek sawaal bhi .. sach jo sabke saath hai sabne dekha hai ... sawaal ye ki kya wakai maiN .. sab dhoka tha .. badal tha .. kya hum hum na the ,... ya wakai hum kuch kar sakte the .. karodoN dil par sawaal shayad yahi .. na sirf mohabbat ka .. har rishte ka .. har pehchan ka .. aur insaniyat ka bhi ... dekh raha huN mera beta bada ho gaya hai .. khush bhi huN .. apna khayal rakhna aur likhti rehna .. tumhara bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th February 2006, 08:23 AM
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kitani dino baad dikhi aap... kaisi ho? sab maje me na? aur haan ye baat sahi hai.. har rishte ke saath jude hai ye sawaal... kisi ek vyakti par nahi samaaj me chaaya huwa ek sawal... aur ye bhi sach hai ki har jagah nahi hota.. warna ye samaj naam ki koi chij nahi hoti... sab kuchh dhaarashaayi ho gaya hota.. apna khayaal rakhiyega with love sweetu |
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28th February 2006, 09:11 AM
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Wah ! kya kahu , bus pasand aa gayi , kuch alfaaz humare dil ko choo gaye, khaas kar shurvaati lines . bus aise hi likhte rahiye.... khoziii ***khozii*** |
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28th February 2006, 10:32 AM
dd bahut acchi likhi hai aur yahi sachai hai ke sab yeh wada karte hai par thode log hi ise nibha paate hai bahut sundar dd..............yuhi likhte raho
tumhara chottu wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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28th February 2006, 11:07 AM
priya garima....
ek bahaut badi baat tumne bade hi saadhaaran roop me bayaan ki hai...... sach me kehne aur karne me bahaut farq hota hai... yeh zindagi aksar kaash lafz ke ird gird ghoomti hai... kya vaadein kya rasmein..kispe bharosa kiya jaye patanahi.... bahaut sahi kaha tumne kehne wale toh chaand taare bhi tod laane ke bade bade bolte hain par haqeeqat me gar woh bas apna thoda waqt aur thoda sa pyaar hi hamein de payein toh bahaut badi baat hogi... insaan ko yahi koshish karni chahiye ki woh utna hi kahe jo poora kar sake aur jo kehta hai use zaroor poora kare.... warna baad me beeti zindagi pe afsos karne se kuch haasil nahi hota hai... Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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28th February 2006, 12:44 PM
Hmmm...
Gudiya... pata nahi.. what made u write this... but yes aisa hota hi hai... But then its life....not evrythign happens the way u want... fir aata hai Kaash... jiska to koi ant hi nahi hai... Khair likhti raho tum...apna khayal rakhna Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th February 2006, 01:07 PM
meri pyari garima
sach kahne ka ye tarika achha laga , sachaee yahi hai pyar mai kiye wade kab keese tootte hain pata nahi aur wo kab dard ka roop le lete hai koi nahi janta chand tare todna aur jahan bhul jane jeesa to pyar se umedd bhi nahi par do pal saath gamo mai mil jaaye to kahna hi kya anyways this is called life keep writing my doll shrdh 
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28th February 2006, 06:02 PM
Garima,
ek bohat acha comment kiya hei aaj ki duniya per. muje bohat jada khusi hei ki tumne esa kiya. ek jordar kadam. tumari Kaanch |
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28th February 2006, 08:42 PM
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28th February 2006, 08:55 PM
Garima,
sacch mein ik dum sahi baat kahi hai tumne... aksar yahi hota hai pyar mein... or pyar mein kya har rishte ka yahi hota hai... tc jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Re: A Thought -
28th February 2006, 10:46 PM
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Ek sach ko ujaagar kiya hai tumhne. afsos bhi hota hai ki yeh haqiqat hai. Aise hee likhtey rehna beta. v i p i n |
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1st March 2006, 01:12 AM
aapke ahsaas padh ke mujhein bahut se logon ki yaad aayi,kai aise mod yaad aaye jin pe logon ne akela chora,kai aise waade jo poore na hue .Na jaane kitni hi baar ek hi prashna maine apne aapse poocha ke "tum to mere saath aisa na kar sakte the?"
magar aaj tak maine yeh koshish ki hai ke mere liye yeh prashna koi aur na soch paaye .khair maine jo koshish ki yaa nahi ki use choriye , baat aaj yeh hai ke agar aapke is ahsaas se hum mein se kuch log waada karke nibhaana seekh le to kya baat hogi. maaf kijiyega agar mai kuch zyaada bola magar kabhi-2 aap logo ke alfaaz dil ke kisi tanha kone mein ghar basaane ki koshish karte hai. Dard ab bhi wahi hai Waqt shayad badal gaya hai Meri shakhshiyat ab bhi wahi hai. GKS |
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1st March 2006, 01:13 AM
Garima,
kash... kaash shabd hi kyun hai... nahi hota to acha tha... kyun? Bus samjh lo yehi hai sansaar... Take Care Rohin |
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1st March 2006, 10:32 AM
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Bhaiya aapko ye sawaal dikha aapne samjha...wyakt kiya... bahoot achha laga... jawaab... shayad hum huma na thay... ye sirf kitaabi baato me reh gaye.. Rishte ko practically nahi dekha... ek prawaah me sab bolte gaye... aur jab prawaah toota.. aur haqiqat ki dharti kathor lagi to saath chhut gaya... hehehehe mai bhi prawaah me na bol doon... apna khayaal rakhiyega aapka Beta |
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1st March 2006, 10:35 AM
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1st March 2006, 02:57 PM
Dear Garima,
Sahi kaha... sau log kahate hai kuchh hi kar paate hai.. usme bhi chaand taare to kya ek pal bhi saath nahi de paate hai... kho jaate hai wo waade jo khushiyon ke waqt kiya tha toot jaati hai wo rasme.. aur bachta hai .. ya to nafrat... ya “kaash” fir ye sun.ne me aata hai “kaash” mai kuchh kar sakta Par waqt ke saath priorities change hoti rehti hain. Agar koi sach mein apna hai toh wo bhale chaand tare na tod paye... par agar waqt pe kaam aaye, itna hi bahut hai. Tumne sacchayee ko bakhubi pesh kiya Daad kubool karna Yun hi likhti rehna ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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1st March 2006, 09:03 PM
kho jaate hai wo waade
jo khushiyon ke waqt kiya tha toot jaati hai wo rasme.. aur bachta hai .. ya to nafrat... ya “kaash” fir ye sun.ne me aata hai “kaash” mai kuchh kar sakta Dear Garima Jab bhi tumhey padha sach hi sach nazer aaya tumhari Rachnaon mein......this one is even so near the Life and so such a hard truth of life.....yuun hi likhti raho God bless u Take Care Di |
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