mai

[garima]

Dosto fir ek alag sa khayaal...
waise harpal mai aisa nahi soch paati.. jis pal se harwaqt yehi khayaal mere dil me bas jaaye, aur harek insaan ke dil me bas jaaye jo kisi na kisi wajah se udaas ho, usi pal udaasi mit jaayegi...
waise shabd shayad kahi kahi galat hai.. mujhe khood bhi sahi sahi sab nahi lag raha hai.. isliye yeha post kiya koi..meri kami bataake sudhaar sake to pls and pls jaroor apani raay de..



phool hoti to masal dete..
diya hoti to bujha dete..
hoti mai baadal,
hawa ban uda dete...

patthar jo hoti
tum tod dete
pannchi jo hoti
par kaat lete..

gar hoti hawa
chattan ban rok lete
khiloana samajh
fir kahi chhod dete

par aisa nahi
na rok paaoge mujhako
mai bas, Mai hoon
na samajh paaoge mujhako

mai kiran me
mai chandani me
mai phoolo me
mai har daali pal
mai har me,
har kan me basi
kaho, kaha -kaha
dhundh paaoge
jitana pakdana chaahoge
khood se door paaoge

mai wo ret hoon
band muthi se fisal jaaon
mai hawa hoon
kahi se nikal jaaon
dil se chaaho
mai paas hoon tumhaare
band kar lo aankhe
mai dhadkan me basi

mai aazaadi hoon
tumhaare dil ki
mai Garima hoon
tumhaare sapano ki
mai zazbaat hoon
tumhaare baato ki
mai bas mai hoon
aur koi upama nahi
haqiqat hoon
koi sapana nahi

[farhana]

dearest garima...ab kya kahoon...padhke dil khush hogaya...ek alag ehsaas jo dard se pare hai...bahaut accha laga yeh confidence ...yeh sabhi tumhare vichaar...sabhi kuch is rachna mein mujhe behad pasand aaya hai...sahi kaha tumne ke agar sabhi aisa sochne lage toh udassi khud b khud mit jayegi.....
par kabhi aisi soch hone ke bawajood hum apni soch se haar jaate hain....aisi tez hawayein chalti hain ke dil ki basti ujad jaati....magar mujhe khushi hai ke tum aisa sochti ho...khuda tumhara yakeen yuhin banaye rakkhe aur sada khush rakkhe....
apna khyaal rakhna aur yuhin mehfil sajati rehna....

[Parul]

Dear garima,

Tumhare khyaal bahut pasand aaye... tumhare aatmvishvaas par likhi huyi yeh rachna bahut kuch keh rahi hai, jo ki bilkul sahi hai... Sab ko prernaa dene wali tumhari iss rachna par meri daad kubul karna... apna khyaal rakhna aur khush rehna!

[shayar_abhishek]

nice veryyyyyy nice
keep sharing such wonderful creations

[KunaaL]

beta

Swach aur niramal ... bas yahi kahUnga tumhe padhne ke baad...

tumhara bhai

Kunal

[Prerna Maitrey]

HI GARIMA bahut acha likhte ho aur usse bhi acha sochti ho kisne kaha tumhe ke acha nahin likhte jo dil ko choo jaye woh likhte ho,jo dil ko sakoon de woh likhte ho.thx 4r writing this.Ilike ur confidence plz maintain this & keep writing.bye take care & all the best for ur next creation.

[Rohin]

Garima,

Bahut acha likha hai... mein mai hoon... aur yeh mai mai se kitna vishal hota hai... pata nahi... magar tumhari kavita kuch keh rahi hai... aur cheekh cheekh kar keh rahi hai... jeevan ko apne sidhanto pe apne sharton pe jiyo... jo bilkul sach hai....

Take Care
Rohin

[shayri12345]

dear garima
behad khoobsurati se kaha hai tumne, apne sharton par hi zindagi jeeni chahiye

i like the way u wrote it

every word reflected something about it

too good

Luv
Priya

Keep writing.

[garima]

Originally posted by farhana
dearest garima...ab kya kahoon...padhke dil khush hogaya...ek alag ehsaas jo dard se pare hai...bahaut accha laga yeh confidence ...yeh sabhi tumhare vichaar...sabhi kuch is rachna mein mujhe behad pasand aaya hai...sahi kaha tumne ke agar sabhi aisa sochne lage toh udassi khud b khud mit jayegi.....
par kabhi aisi soch hone ke bawajood hum apni soch se haar jaate hain....aisi tez hawayein chalti hain ke dil ki basti ujad jaati....magar mujhe khushi hai ke tum aisa sochti ho...khuda tumhara yakeen yuhin banaye rakkhe aur sada khush rakkhe....
apna khyaal rakhna aur yuhin mehfil sajati rehna....

yups dard se pare, lekin sirf dard se hi nahi khushi se bhi pare.. jahaan sirf mai hoon.. khushi bhi hogi to kisi aur se mili hogi.. kisi se humaari koi wishes puri hui hogi.. lekin mai sirf mujhase nikal kar hona chahati hoon..

well ye abhi soch hai.. jaisa ki aapne kaha kabhi kabhi hum haar jaate hai.. mai bhi haar jaati hoon.. but ek virodhatmaak aabhaas jo mere andar hai mujhe toorant us haar se upar kar jaati... aur fir mai mujhase ho jaati hoon..

Thanks for liking it..

[garima]

Originally posted by Parul
Dear garima,

Tumhare khyaal bahut pasand aaye... tumhare aatmvishvaas par likhi huyi yeh rachna bahut kuch keh rahi hai, jo ki bilkul sahi hai... Sab ko prernaa dene wali tumhari iss rachna par meri daad kubul karna... apna khyaal rakhna aur khush rehna!

in sabko pasand karane ke liye thanks parul.. tum abhi apana khayaal rakhana

[meetaparekh]

dear garima
i am confused.bahot dard bhi hai.

[Star]

Another wonderful poem of urs
u r simply great.............
Take Care

[garima]

Originally posted by shayar_abhishek
nice veryyyyyy nice
keep sharing such wonderful creations

Thanks... keep coming

[garima]

Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
beta

Swach aur niramal ... bas yahi kahUnga tumhe padhne ke baad...

tumhara bhai

Kunal

thanks bhaiya

aapka beta

[garima]

Originally posted by Prerna Maitrey
HI GARIMA bahut acha likhte ho aur usse bhi acha sochti ho kisne kaha tumhe ke acha nahin likhte jo dil ko choo jaye woh likhte ho,jo dil ko sakoon de woh likhte ho.thx 4r writing this.Ilike ur confidence plz maintain this & keep writing.bye take care & all the best for ur next creation.

Thank u so much for ur nice compliments take care

[garima]

Originally posted by Rohin
Garima,

Bahut acha likha hai... mein mai hoon... aur yeh mai mai se kitna vishal hota hai... pata nahi... magar tumhari kavita kuch keh rahi hai... aur cheekh cheekh kar keh rahi hai... jeevan ko apne sidhanto pe apne sharton pe jiyo... jo bilkul sach hai....

Take Care
Rohin

haan bhaiya mai mai hoon.. kitana vishaal hai isaki chinta karani hi nahi hai.. mujhe bas jeena hai har pal apane saath, najdiki aur baariki se dekhate hue.. apane sidhant apane shart, apani baate, jahaan sabkuchh mera apana ho.. hai na sach.. aapane to pahale hi maan liya..

luv u
aapki lallu

[garima]

Originally posted by LuvPriya
dear garima
behad khoobsurati se kaha hai tumne, apne sharton par hi zindagi jeeni chahiye

i like the way u wrote it

every word reflected something about it

too good

Luv
Priya

Keep writing.

thanks.. achha laga ki aapko bhi meri baate pasand aayi.. i m feeling so great

[garima]

Originally posted by meetaparekh
dear garima
i am confused.bahot dard bhi hai.

hey aunty why confused..?

haan aunty dard to hona hi tha.. virodh khushi se nahi hota.. jab dard ka koi tal na mile to wahi se virodh utpann hota hai.. usase baahar nikalane ke liye..

aapka saath achha laga

with love
aappki garima

[garima]

Originally posted by Star
Another wonderful poem of urs
u r simply great.............
Take Care

Thanks for liking it.. but I m not great. just a learner..

[meena chheda]

meri priy garima,

humesha ki tarah yah khayal pasand aaye ...

maa

[sandhaya]

Bahut ACha Likha Hai Garima JI..............ye Aaapke Liye Meri Taraf Se...

Tum Ho Pari Koi Apsara
Koi Aag Ho, Baarish Bhi Tum
Boonde Bhi Tum Samander BHi
Ehsaas Bhi Ho Vishwaas Bhi Tum
Mere tann Mann Ki Pyaas Bhi
Tum Pyaar Ho Preet Bhi Tum
Tum Rasm Bhi Aur Reet BHi Tum
Tum Aksaah Ho Jaameen Bhi
Tum Hasin Bhi.Najnin Bhi TUm
Meri Jujtaju Aur Aarjoo Bhi Tum
Main Pana Chahun Khudko Khoke BHi
meri Jaan TUm Meri ZindagiBhi Tum

[garima]

Originally posted by meena chheda
meri priy garima,

humesha ki tarah yah khayal pasand aaye ...

maa

shurkiya maa

aapki laadali

[garima]

Originally posted by sandhaya
Bahut ACha Likha Hai Garima JI..............ye Aaapke Liye Meri Taraf Se...

Tum Ho Pari Koi Apsara
Koi Aag Ho, Baarish Bhi Tum
Boonde Bhi Tum Samander BHi
Ehsaas Bhi Ho Vishwaas Bhi Tum
Mere tann Mann Ki Pyaas Bhi
Tum Pyaar Ho Preet Bhi Tum
Tum Rasm Bhi Aur Reet BHi Tum
Tum Aksaah Ho Jaameen Bhi
Tum Hasin Bhi.Najnin Bhi TUm
Meri Jujtaju Aur Aarjoo Bhi Tum
Main Pana Chahun Khudko Khoke BHi
meri Jaan TUm Meri ZindagiBhi Tum

aapne likha to bahoot achha hai..... lekin "ye Aaapke Liye Meri Taraf Se..." yeha ulajh gayi mai...

anyway thanks for liking it.. take care

[garima]

mai na hi dard hoon
na teri tadap hoon
mai pehchaan ho meri
na koi geet na gazal hoon

mai mera hi dil
meri hi dhadkan hoon
mai mere hi khayaal
mere hi ehsaas hoon

mai bhaawhin
mai sunya hoon
mai bhaawyukt
har rang hoon

mai Garima hoon
mere hi dil me rehati hoon
mai jeevan hoon
sang sabhi ke bahati hoon

mai maut hoon
har ant ka srijan hoon
mai hi ant hoon
nawsrijan ka path hoon

mai bas mai hoon............

Dosto.. wahi thread hai.. bas baat thodi alag hai.. aise hi kuchh dimaag me ghode daud rahe hai.. aur haath aap se aap apna kaam kar rahi hai.. pata nahi kya likha.. jo likha aapke saamne hai.. yeha mai se matlab sirf Garima naam ki ladaki nahi hai.. mai ek astitva hai.. jo chaahe to vidhwansh kar sakata hai chaahe to srijan kar sakata hai..

Raawan kahta tha..ekkoham dwitiyonasti lekin wo vidhwansh karane ke liye tha... aur bhagwaan ne bhi kaha ki sabko chhodkar sirf mere sharan me aao lekin wo srijan ke liye thay..
isliye mai ek astitva hai, wo srijan ka roop bhi hai aur ant ka kaaran bhi hai.. aap logo ke vichaar bhi jaanana chahunge...



Thanks
Garima

[Vipinbox]

Garv,
Bahaut hee acche shabdon ko parha aaj

mai kiran me
mai chandani me
mai phoolo me
mai har daali pal
mai har me,
har kan me basi
kaho, kaha -kaha
dhundh paaoge
jitana pakdana chaahoge
khood se door paaoge

-=========
mai Garima hoon
mere hi dil me rehati hoon
mai jeevan hoon
sang sabhi ke bahati hoon

Tum sach mein hee Garv ho
..
Vipin

[Pulkit_gupta]

mai kiran me
mai chandani me
mai phoolo me
mai har daali pal
mai har me,
har kan me basi
kaho, kaha -kaha
dhundh paaoge
jitana pakdana chaahoge
khood se door paaoge


Gudiya,

Humesha ki tarah bahut hi pyaara likha hai tumne... Sach me apni garima ko pehchanna chhaiye, woh aisi hi hoti hai... use aap baandh nahi sakte...

acche lage tumhaare ehsaas...bass yun hi likhti raho...apna khayal rakhna acche se....