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Jaage jaage aankhoN mai soye soye sapne haiN(dedicated to jasleeN) |
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Jaage jaage aankhoN mai soye soye sapne haiN(dedicated to jasleeN) -
3rd March 2006, 09:57 PM
Friends ye post specially Jas di ke liye hai... unse request hai ki wo waapas likhane aaye ...
Jaage jaage aankhoN mai soye soye sapne haiN, Duniya me bhid kitani, kitne yahaaN apne haiN..? Gam apne dil ka sabhi ko hai rulaata yahaaN, Dusro ke gam bhi samjheN, aise log kitne haiN? Koyi nahi khush-kismat, sab ki kismat khoti hai. Jitna chaaho dekh lo diljale yahaaN utne haiN.. Badi si is duniya me, TufaanoN ke kaafile haiN, hum to yahaaN jaise bas bikhare tinake jitne hai.. Bade mahaloN waaloN ke ghar hi bade hote haiN, Kad hai jinki jitni badi, utne dil se baune hai... Sachchaayi ke dagar par, sach to ek mukhota hai, aankhe band kar lo fir, sabhi yahaaN apane haiN.. Koyi nahi hai ham-dum, koyi nahi hai ham-raahi, Jitne chaahe dekh lo adakaar yahaaN utne haiN.. ----- Mayank and Garima note-- didi to wo sirf meri hai... Mayank ji to dost hai...hehehehehe |
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3rd March 2006, 10:09 PM
sach jaso dd aa jao wapas...... parivaar ka 1 sadasy bhi nahi hota hai tab pure parivaar ko chinta hoti hai aa jao
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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3rd March 2006, 11:50 PM
garima ji
accha likha hai aapne isse padhke aapki jad di jaroor aa jaayengi Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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4th March 2006, 12:14 PM
jass ab to tumhe fir se is mahfil mai aana hi hoga
garima ne pyar se manaya hai we all missing u dear aaj to tum khush bhi bhaut ho chlo isi baat par hamari ye maang puri kar do aa jaao apne kalam k saath we all r waiting for u thnx garima wo kahne k liye jo main kahna chati thi lovely creation shrdh 
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4th March 2006, 12:49 PM
dEAR GARIMA
BAHOT HI ACHA AUR DIL KO CHU JANEWALA KALAM LIKHA HAI. |
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4th March 2006, 01:16 PM
Thanks everybody for reply... par mere khayaal se ye post achhi nahi bani hai.. warna didi aa jaati na.. wo to ab tak dikhi hi nahi...
aap sab mere saath ho iske liye bahoot saara thanks  |
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4th March 2006, 01:32 PM
garima n mayank
both of u have done a marvellous job..i just hope jas listens to our call and responds back with a positive answer.... waise garima ghabrao mat jas ise jald padhlegi....abhi toh tum janti hi ho ke woh kitni excited hai...hamari proud proud mommy ko apne bacche ki jeet ka lutf uthane do....inshallah khuda ki marzi hui aur jas ki marzi hui toh woh zaroor laut ayegi.khush raho. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th March 2006, 02:35 PM
Garima Ji,
Aapki prastuti ko padkar acha laga, kyuki bohat acha lika hai. yuhi likte rhiye. aapki Kanchan |
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4th March 2006, 05:37 PM
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4th March 2006, 06:21 PM
Garima nd Mayank ji....
bahut hi acchi hai ye nazm... prayaas bhi accha hai.... dekhte hai kab waapas aati hai humari jaan (JAS) MISS YOU JAS...  COME BACK SOON...jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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jas no gussa -
4th March 2006, 07:46 PM
jas itne pyare pyare bachon ne itne pyare anadz main bulya hai chalee ayo
mujhe koyee is tarah se kaza ke raste se bhee bula le to maut ko akela chor ke laut ayoon zindgee ke sath chale chalte to lautna aur asan hai chalee ayo nahee to garima ko gussa aa jayega use ata hai gussa bhee ------------------------------------------------------------- masoom alfaz ka khayal kiya jaye is site ko thora waqt diya jaye roshnee kaise milgee yahan kisee ko agar roshan hai jo woh diya jaye anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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4th March 2006, 08:14 PM
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Khush kismat hote hain woh log jinko itne logon ka pyaar aur apnapan milta hai... iske baad bhoi koi naa samjhe to usse bada bewakoof koi nahi... Beautiful expression.. Gudiya and mayank bhai... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th March 2006, 08:44 PM
Jaage jaage aankhoN mai soye soye sapne haiN,
Duniya me bhid kitani, kitne yahaaN apne haiN..? Badi si is duniya me, TufaanoN ke kaafile haiN, hum to yahaaN jaise bas bikhare tinake jitne hai.. Hello Sweet Garima aur Namaskar Mayank ji Wat a beautiful composition.....Bahut kuch kehti hay yeh Rachna..... Jas if u r reading then kindly see the true meaning of this poetry.......tum sab ki yahan apni ho....asha karungi ki u come back and not be the silent listener......mughey umeed hay aaj nahin to kal main iss post par tumhara reply Zarur dekhungi.....aur mughey puri umeed hay ki tum mere umeed ko nirash nahin karogi...... Take Care |
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5th March 2006, 04:24 AM
Garima aur Mayank,
Khoobsurat rachna... hai.. bahut acha laga padhkar... Jas u know what i gonna say... So Take Care Rohin |
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5th March 2006, 12:46 PM
MAYANK BHAI AUR SWEET PAGAL SIS.......
bahut hi aacha kalaam likha hai.........aur bahut hi pyari se sweetheart ko dedicate kiya hai............ meri sweetheart........dekho kitna pyar karte hain sab tumse..... jaldi aa jaaooooooooo.........apne ehsaason ko le kar. samjhe..........nahi to dekhna fir........... tum sabka apna.................. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: Jaage jaage aankhoN mai soye soye sapne haiN(dedicated to jasleeN) -
5th March 2006, 02:11 PM
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i m humbled by reading each word of urs. each n every word written by both of u is loved reading n wud be cherished through out. hm dost aur behna mujhe emotionally black mail kar rahe hai. well aisa nahi tha ki mein aap sab ka dil torha chahti thi but today m happy to know tht there r few who really understand jas so well. i m proud that i m bestowed with the love of all of u. atleast i hv few gud reasons to smile. well ur words have touched my soul n yes has brought me back here among all of u. such a inspiral note written by both of u, m really obliged. thx nahi kahunghi kyoki the feelings in my heart are more beyond to it. thx is a very small word for it n i want to tell u tht u really mean a lot to me.ur words taught me so much today tht i just hv tears in my eyes. i read it so many times but sach mein itna pyaar bhara kalam which is just pouring words of love for me, m speechless. well i m back among all of u, n i hope u all wud spare me for my mistake n lets begin with a fresh new day. ur feelings are awesomely expressed n u both cud flow ur feelings in a beautiful way. i loved ur each n every word for me. take care n may god bless u both with his finnest glitters with love urs jas n sweetheart di jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:14 PM
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mauffi ki talabgaar hoon. i know i hv been a reason of ur sadness too. i m back for all of u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:15 PM
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thx for motivating garima n mayanks words. i m back among all of u. take care n may god bless u to with his finnest glitters. with love jasleen |
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5th March 2006, 02:17 PM
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ur warmth of love for me has really made me cum back, but u know yesterday wat u all said abt me in confrence , its just deep inside me. u understood me despite of my not uttering anything. thx for understanding jas. take care n yes today ur wait is over. i wud be posting sumthing soon. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love urs jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:18 PM
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sach mein aapne sahi kaha. dil ko chu lene wala kalam likha mayank aur meri gudiya ne. thx so much for appreciating it. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love jasleen |
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5th March 2006, 02:19 PM
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hey khush ho jao sweetheart. urs n mayank jis efforts worked. m back.with love jas |
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urs n others prayers have succeeded. m back n this time totally back with no door of going out again. all doors are sealed now. yes i was thrilled with the result of vaibhav. well ab intezaar ki ghadiyaan khatam hui n u hv ur friend roshani back on ur site.take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters with love urs jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:24 PM
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yes its awesomely expressed by both of them n their efforts succeeded to. thx for appreciating their work. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love roshani or jasleen |
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5th March 2006, 02:26 PM
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ur silence said so much today. i know sumtimes sum feelings n words are better judged in silence. neways take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love roshani |
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5th March 2006, 02:28 PM
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unka prayas kamyaab hua, n ur love pulled me back here. u missed me, lo m back for u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:30 PM
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i m overwelmed with ur words. ur request is fulfilled. m srry for being so rude to all of u by leaving all of u . plz excuse me, n plz dont leave us too. aaj confrence mein aap kuch paershan they. plz dont go. we all r with u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:33 PM
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i need to prove sumthing. i really have let u down many times. thsi time i wont even say srry. u understand me well wat i need to say. i hv to prove u tht ur jas cant see u feeling bad becoz of her stupidness. give me sum time to bring ur smile n trust back for me. u mean a lot to me. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love urs jas |
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5th March 2006, 02:38 PM
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u always had been my source of inspiration. u hv always motivated me where ever i was feeling very low n pulled back. m srry for doing stupid dumb things n be a reason of tension for all of u but yes aap sab ki ummeedon par poori tarah utarne ki koshish zaroor karughi. well u all mean a lot to me di. well i cud make out the true meaning of this kalam n i cud make out the love for me frm all of u. thx so much for always being there wen i really needed a kick to move ahead. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love urs roshani |
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5th March 2006, 02:39 PM
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ur silence expressed everything. well as i said to pulkit, same goes for u. i wont say anything. i wud prove sumthing now. take care n may god bless u with his finnest gliiters. with love urs ET |
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5th March 2006, 02:42 PM
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