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As Salaam walekum Aslam Sahab !

Janaab aapke guftagu ne kafi achcha mood bana diya mera ke... mujhe yahaaN reply karna hi padha... waah janab aap to bahut achche tarikhe se baateN karte khususan aapke jawaab padhkar bahut lutf aaya mujhe ...

Janab Allah kareN aap jise chaheN woh aapko mile.....
Haan ek baat kahna chaheNge aap apne avataar meiN jo pic lagaye the red tee shirt meiN jo thi wohi pic lagaiye...... bahut achche aur clear dikh raheN hai aap usmeiN.....

Abhi to koi sawaal mera nahi hai..... per zarurr puchuNga janab.....
Aakhir haq banta hai....

Aur haan janaab aapne jo kalaam sher ki hai puri sher kijiye realy bahut achchi kalaam hai ......... ekdum ishqiyaa....

Abhi chalta huN baad meiN phir aauNga KyuN ke kuch log samjh raheN hai maiN mar gaya huN .....
Khush O aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.......

bhut shukriyaH Sameer jii aapne ek baat kahi hai shru mai ke aapko reply karna hi pada means kya aap reply nahi karna chahte they??? kya koii naraazgi to nahi hai mujhse jaane anjaane mai koi baat aapko meri buri lag gayi ho??? agr aisa hai to plzz bata deejiyega
aapki mohabbat hai jo aapko mere jawab achay lage bhut bhut shukriyaH
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aapke sawaaloN ka intezaar rahega, jii meiN poori ghazal post kar raha huN, hosla afzaii ka bhut bhut shukriyaH
"KyuN ke kuch log samjh raheN hai maiN mar gaya huN" aisa kyuN likha bhai kya baat hai sab khair to hai



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Tere do matwaale naina, inse mujhko jaam pila do
chaheiN bhatkuN ya mar jaauN, ik pal ka mehmaan band do

saari shrteiN toD do tum, chaheiN rukh bhi moD lo tum
bas itna sa khaab saja do, chhat par aakar chand dikha do

roz mare haiN roz jiye haiN, ek ek pal hum par bhari hai
bas hole se tum muskaa do, jeene ka andaaz sikha do

aisa bhi manzar dikh jaaye, tu mere sapnoN mai aaye
waqt ki dhaDkan bhi ruk jaye, kuch aise lamhaat chura do

apni zulfeiN tum bikhra do, mera chehra inme chupa lo
us par to lagta rehta hai, is par bhi tum girhan laga do

ek adhoori soch ki chaadar, zehen o dil pe chaaii hui hai
iske khat o khaal bana do, meri uljhan ko suljha do

dil jaane hai hum bichDeinge, phir bhi zidd pe ada hua hai
jaise bachchay ki khaahish ho, wo neela asmaan dila do

raat ki raani behek rahi hai, banke khushboo mehek rahi hai
apni khushboo mujhme bas kar, mere hosh hawas guma do

lams bhi tera jaadu jaisa, tujhko bas mehsoos kia hai
beech ki ye diwaar gira do, saaghar meena tum chatkha do

saari fikreiN tumse aage, saare qisse tumse peechay
ek kahaani sehmi nadiya, isme tum tufaan macha do

nayi navaili dhoop nikal kar, baamo dar tak phuch gayi hai
iski rangat aur nikhregi, tum jo chunar ke rang bikhra do

chup na baitho kuch to bolo, ye khobsurat lab to kholo
tum mere ho ye farama do, jeevan bhr ki saza suna do

meri aankheiN kab se teri, ek jhalak ko tars rahi haiN
aslam diwaana jaan se jaaye, tum rukh se chilman sarka do

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13th October 2010, 04:26 PM

aapko aslam bhai phir se takleef dene aa gaya hu....

ab zara ye gana suniye aur bataiye aap kya karte hai?

jo gana kah raha hai vo peete hai?

ya

jo asl me dikh raha hai vo peete hai

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aapko aslam bhai phir se takleef dene aa gaya hu....



ab zara ye gana suniye aur bataiye aap kya karte hai?

jo gana kah raha hai vo peete hai?

ya

jo asl me dikh raha hai vo peete hai

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bhai sahab jo asal mai dikh raha hai wo mere liyN "Haraam" hai aur baaqi ka meiN shoqeen nhi


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Agar koi aisa shaks jise aap apna dost maante ho..........achanak aapki peeth me chura ghop de ya yu kahe aap ko chaar ke beech me beizzat kar de woh sahi tha ya galat yeh baad ki baat hai...............aise dost ke sath aap kya karege aapke pass 3 option hai in option me se kaunsa option chunege. ( Aapke paas yeh 3 option hi hai. )

Pehla Option: Aap usse sare talluk khatam kar dege aur usse kuch kahege bhi nahi.

Dusra Option: Aap usse jhagda karege aur usse kahege ke aaj ke baad tere mere beech koi rishta nahi, na dosti ka na dushmani ka.

Teesra Option: Muh par uske dost bane rahege magar dil me hamesha usse nafrat karege.


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Agar koi aisa shaks jise aap apna dost maante ho..........achanak aapki peeth me chura ghop de ya yu kahe aap ko chaar ke beech me beizzat kar de woh sahi tha ya galat yeh baad ki baat hai...............aise dost ke sath aap kya karege aapke pass 3 option hai in option me se kaunsa option chunege. ( Aapke paas yeh 3 option hi hai. )

Pehla Option: Aap usse sare talluk khatam kar dege aur usse kuch kahege bhi nahi.

Dusra Option: Aap usse jhagda karege aur usse kahege ke aaj ke baad tere mere beech koi rishta nahi, na dosti ka na dushmani ka.

Teesra Option: Muh par uske dost bane rahege magar dil me hamesha usse nafrat karege.

Sajid sahab aapke sawaal ka khairmaqdam hai magr option de kar aapne meri azaadi to cheen li mujhay aisa lag raha hai ke aap mujse sawaal ka jawaab apne jawaab ke daayere mai hi chahte haiN, choonki aapne jo options mujhay diye haiN mere khyaal se meiN unme se kisi ko bhi chooz nahi karunga haan agr aap is masle mai mere jawaab sunna chahte haiN to ye hazir hai, mazrat ke aapke option mai se kiisi ko bhi nahi chun raha huN

awwal to ye Allah Rabulaalameen ne mujhay jitne bhi dostoN se nawaaza hai wo bepanah mukhlis haiN meri zindagi mai aaj tak kabhi koii aisa moqa nahi aaya jab mujhay apni dosti par sharmindagi ka ehsaas hua ho ye sab unki achchaiyaaN haiN aur mera naseeb ke jo itne meherbaaN dostoN se shanasaii hai
haan agr Allah na kare ke kabhi aisa ho gaya to meiN apne us dost se jisne aisa kia hai khud uske pass ja kar is baat ki poori wazaahat chahunga ke usne aisa kyuN kar kia kahiN iske peechay meri hi to koii kami nahi thi? (meiN aisa usi wqt karunga jab meiN usko sacchay dil se apna dost manta hunga to phir agr us shqs ne kuch ghalat kia hai to meri zimmedaari banti hai ke usko ghalt raah par nahi chalne duN) jab poori baat maloom ho jaayegi tabhi mein kisi failse par phuch sakta huN usse pehle nahi, bhala ye kya hua ke aapka dost aapse bewafaii kar jaaye aapki peeth mai (baqol aapke nazariye, means dost ke nazariye) chura bhok jaaye aur aap usse qate talluq kar deiN to phir aap mai aur us dost mai kis baat ka farq reh jaayega?? aap bhi phir usi qataar mai khade huway nazar aayenge jisme wo hai, meri soch ka nazariyaH ye hai ho sakta hai aap iske bar aks socte hoN aur zaroori nahi ke jo kuch meine kaha wo sahi kaha ho, baharhaal meri yahi soch hai, meiN ek baar phir maazrat khwaah huN ke aape options mai se kisi ko bhi nahi chuna hai, umeed hai aap meri is khata ko darguzar kar dainge shukriyaH, Hamesha khush rhaiye



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aslam saheb aadaaB...!

bahut achha laga aapko yahaN dekhkar....waise to pehle hi dekh liya tha ki is baar aapka interview chal raha hai...aur chaahta bhi tha ki jald se jald aapse mukhitib houN, lekin kuchh arse se waqt hi nahi mila, online zuroor hota tha lekin sawaal jawaab karne layaq waqt nahi mila...
aapka saara interview to nahi padha lekin jitna padha, aapke jawaab qafi mutmaeen karne wale lage mujhe...bahut kam logoN ki soch ka dayara itna bada dekha hai jitna aapka dikha...achha laga bahut achha laga...

aisa koi sawaal abhi tak zehan meiN nahi aa raha jis ka aapse jawaab chaahuN, kyuNki agar aapse sawaal puchhuNga to vo asal meiN sawaal hoga mere liye...uppari taur pe nahi...mujhe ummeed hai ki aap meri baat ko samjh gaye hoNge...aapki interview ke waqfe meiN agar aisa koi sawaal hua to zuroor phir se haazir ho jauNga...

filhaal ijaazat dijiye...

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18th October 2010, 09:42 AM

aslam bhaa'ii:

namaste!

bahot KhuShii ho rahii.n hay aapke baare mei.n itnaa kuChh jaan kar.. sabhee sawaalo.n ke aapne bahot hi Khoob jawaab diye hai.n..!

aapse meraa aik sawaal..

>> beete kal mei.n se ko'ii aik aisaa yaadgaar pal jise aap fir se jeena chaahate ho.n ?



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Aslam Bhai .... Aadaab !ab tak ke interview me aapne jis tarha har sawaal ke jawaab diye hai ... woh aapke behtar zehn ko darshaataa hai ... bahut luft aa raha hai aapke jawaab padhkar .... kuch aise pehluu bhi saamne aaye ... jinse hum achuute the ... aise hi aapke aur anchuyen pehluuoN se ru-ba-ru hote rahenge aage bhi .... aate rahen aur milte rahen humse ....

Aaj mera bhi mann ho aaya ... aap se ek sawaal karne ka .... dekhte hai aapka nazariyaa kya kehtaa ...........

Q. ... Ek kavi aur shaayer hone ke naate ... Aap Aas Aur Pyaas ko kis roop me dekhte hai ... jabki dono ke maaine ek dusre ke vipreet hai ... phir bhi kya ... inme koi samaanta dek paate hai yaa nahi ... aur ab tak ke anubhav ke adhaar par .... aapki rachnaaoN me in dono shabdoN ka kya mehtv raha hai ... ?




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Tere do matwaale naina, inse mujhko jaam pila do
chaheiN bhatkuN ya mar jaauN, ik pal ka mehmaan band do

saari shrteiN toD do tum, chaheiN rukh bhi moD lo tum
bas itna sa khaab saja do, chhat par aakar chand dikha do

roz mare haiN roz jiye haiN, ek ek pal hum par bhari hai
bas hole se tum muskaa do, jeene ka andaaz sikha do

aisa bhi manzar dikh jaaye, tu mere sapnoN mai aaye
waqt ki dhaDkan bhi ruk jaye, kuch aise lamhaat chura do

apni zulfeiN tum bikhra do, mera chehra inme chupa lo
us par to lagta rehta hai, is par bhi tum girhan laga do

ek adhoori soch ki chaadar, zehen o dil pe chaaii hui hai
iske khat o khaal bana do, meri uljhan ko suljha do

dil jaane hai hum bichDeinge, phir bhi zidd pe ada hua hai
jaise bachchay ki khaahish ho, wo neela asmaan dila do

raat ki raani behek rahi hai, banke khushboo mehek rahi hai
apni khushboo mujhme bas kar, mere hosh hawas guma do

lams bhi tera jaadu jaisa, tujhko bas mehsoos kia hai
beech ki ye diwaar gira do, saaghar meena tum chatkha do

saari fikreiN tumse aage, saare qisse tumse peechay
ek kahaani sehmi nadiya, isme tum tufaan macha do

nayi navaili dhoop nikal kar, baamo dar tak phuch gayi hai
iski rangat aur nikhregi, tum jo chunar ke rang bikhra do

chup na baitho kuch to bolo, ye khobsurat lab to kholo
tum mere ho ye farama do, jeevan bhr ki saza suna do

meri aankheiN kab se teri, ek jhalak ko tars rahi haiN
aslam diwaana jaan se jaaye, tum rukh se chilman sarka do

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Aslam jii............thanx a lot
hume poori ki poori gazal behad acchi lagi....aapne hamari baat maan kar poori gazal padne ka hume mokka diya....shukriya.


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aslam saheb aadaaB...!

bahut achha laga aapko yahaN dekhkar....waise to pehle hi dekh liya tha ki is baar aapka interview chal raha hai...aur chaahta bhi tha ki jald se jald aapse mukhitib houN, lekin kuchh arse se waqt hi nahi mila, online zuroor hota tha lekin sawaal jawaab karne layaq waqt nahi mila...
aapka saara interview to nahi padha lekin jitna padha, aapke jawaab qafi mutmaeen karne wale lage mujhe...bahut kam logoN ki soch ka dayara itna bada dekha hai jitna aapka dikha...achha laga bahut achha laga...

aisa koi sawaal abhi tak zehan meiN nahi aa raha jis ka aapse jawaab chaahuN, kyuNki agar aapse sawaal puchhuNga to vo asal meiN sawaal hoga mere liye...uppari taur pe nahi...mujhe ummeed hai ki aap meri baat ko samjh gaye hoNge...aapki interview ke waqfe meiN agar aisa koi sawaal hua to zuroor phir se haazir ho jauNga...

filhaal ijaazat dijiye...

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aslam bhaa'ii:

namaste!

bahot KhuShii ho rahii.n hay aapke baare mei.n itnaa kuChh jaan kar.. sabhee sawaalo.n ke aapne bahot hi Khoob jawaab diye hai.n..!

aapse meraa aik sawaal..

>> beete kal mei.n se ko'ii aik aisaa yaadgaar pal jise aap fir se jeena chaahate ho.n ?



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Aslam Bhai .... Aadaab !ab tak ke interview me aapne jis tarha har sawaal ke jawaab diye hai ... woh aapke behtar zehn ko darshaataa hai ... bahut luft aa raha hai aapke jawaab padhkar .... kuch aise pehluu bhi saamne aaye ... jinse hum achuute the ... aise hi aapke aur anchuyen pehluuoN se ru-ba-ru hote rahenge aage bhi .... aate rahen aur milte rahen humse ....

Aaj mera bhi mann ho aaya ... aap se ek sawaal karne ka .... dekhte hai aapka nazariyaa kya kehtaa ...........

Q. ... Ek kavi aur shaayer hone ke naate ... Aap Aas Aur Pyaas ko kis roop me dekhte hai ... jabki dono ke maaine ek dusre ke vipreet hai ... phir bhi kya ... inme koi samaanta dek paate hai yaa nahi ... aur ab tak ke anubhav ke adhaar par .... aapki rachnaaoN me in dono shabdoN ka kya mehtv raha hai ... ?

Naresh sahab ye aapka baDakpan hai jo aap yuN sochte haiN aapka sawaal sar aankhoN par

Aas aur piyaas mere nazariyaH mai hum aahang hi haiN magr shiddat pasndi zaroori hai, dono hi ek sikke ke shayad do pehloo haiN, agr umeed nahi hogi to tishnagi bhi na hogi, lafz "kaash" in dono surtoN ko bakhoobi ujaagar karta hai, tishnagi us wqt tak koi maane rakhaati hi nahi jab tak ke isme bujhne ki aas ki shiddat shamil na ho, raha meri shayri mai inka ehsaasoN ka istemaal ya to zahir hai meri shayri bhut kuch umeed aur tishanagi ke ird gird ghoomti hai mere khyaal se romaani shayri meiN in dono hi pehlooN ka bhut khaas maqaam hai shayd mera ye sher mere is khyaal ki tarjumaani kar sake

Roz ka aana jaana mushkil hai
dil mai tere thehr na jaauN meiN

yahaN aapko aapke dono pehloo ek door mai piroye huway milenge umeed karta huN ke mera jawaab aapke mayaar ke mutabiq ho,



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Aslam jii............thanx a lot
hume poori ki poori gazal behad acchi lagi....aapne hamari baat maan kar poori gazal padne ka hume mokka diya....shukriya.


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Aslam Ji,

Namaskaar....!

Aapke baare me jaankar bahut hi acha lga...!!! Aapne sabhi sawalo ke jawaab bahut hi khubsurati se diye..!!!

Aapki Gazal

"Tere do matwaale naina, inse mujhko jaam pila do
chaheiN bhatkuN ya mar jaauN, ik pal ka mehmaan band do"


bhi bahut hi pasand aai......!!!

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hello aslam ji...
kaise hai aap ?
accha laga aap ke bare me jaan kar..
aapki gazale to hamesha se hi bahut pasand rahi hai or
jo gazal aapne yaha share ki wo bhi bahut khoob rahi...
filhaal to koi sawal jehen me nahi hai.
par jald hi hazir hoti hu kuch sawalo ke saath..
all the best fo r the interview.....
   
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thnxxxxx so much Kavita jii tht u like my ans.


Que: If you could meet any person in shayri.com, who would it be and why?

Zidd sahab becoz he impressd me alot with his talent i respect him alot, wanna meet him very soon



Que :If your were granted three wishes from god what would you want?

1, no one sleep hungry in the univers
2, my mother's every wish come true
3, death of pain


Que: What is your favorite fantasy?


switzerland tour with my wife


Que:What is the one thing that you have done in your life that you would want to undo?


If i ever hurt anybody




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hello aslam ji...
kaise hai aap ?
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aapki gazale to hamesha se hi bahut pasand rahi hai or
jo gazal aapne yaha share ki wo bhi bahut khoob rahi...
filhaal to koi sawal jehen me nahi hai.
par jald hi hazir hoti hu kuch sawalo ke saath..
all the best fo r the interview.....

Bhut bhut shukiryH Shipra jii is hosla afzaii ka, aapke sawaal ka intezaar rahega agr waqt ne saath dia to im fine


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thnxxxxx so much Kavita jii tht u like my ans.


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Zidd sahab becoz he impressd me alot with his talent i respect him alot, wanna meet him very soon



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1, no one sleep hungry in the univers
2, my mother's every wish come true
3, death of pain


Que: What is your favorite fantasy?


switzerland tour with my wife


Que:What is the one thing that you have done in your life that you would want to undo?


If i ever hurt anybody




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Bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka.....!!! Mujhe aapki 3 wishes me se 2 wishes pasand aai.. last wali achi nahi ..!!! baaki sab sawaalo ke jawaab ache lage... Khush rahiyee..!


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Bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka.....!!! Mujhe aapki 3 wishes me se 2 wishes pasand aai.. last wali achi nahi ..!!! baaki sab sawaalo ke jawaab ache lage... Khush rahiyee..!


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Aadaab, Aslam Ji...! Kaise heiN aap...?

Aap ke baare meiN jaankar khushi ho rahi hai and nice to see that you have a nice personality...!

Shaayad yaha pehli baar hai jo hamaari aap se baateiN ho rahi hai...! Hamesha se aap ko hum paDhte rahte heiN aur yakeeN maaniye, aap likhte bahut acche heiN...!

So mawkaa paakar aap se hum bhi kuch sawaal puuchna chaahte heiN, ok...?

1 ) Do you have any complexes...? (obsessions, inhibitions, superstitions, manias, phobias)

2 ) If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be...?

3) What is your favourite colour and why...?

4 ) What is your favourite childhood memory and the worst one ...?

5 ) What is the strangest ( unsual ) thing you've ever eaten in your life...?


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Aadaab, Aslam Ji...! Kaise heiN aap...?

Aap ke baare meiN jaankar khushi ho rahi hai and nice to see that you have a nice personality...!

Shaayad yaha pehli baar hai jo hamaari aap se baateiN ho rahi hai...! Hamesha se aap ko hum paDhte rahte heiN aur yakeeN maaniye, aap likhte bahut acche heiN...!

So mawkaa paakar aap se hum bhi kuch sawaal puuchna chaahte heiN, ok...?

1 ) Do you have any complexes...? (obsessions, inhibitions, superstitions, manias, phobias)

2 ) If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be...?

3) What is your favourite colour and why...?

4 ) What is your favourite childhood memory and the worst one ...?

5 ) What is the strangest ( unsual ) thing you've ever eaten in your life...?

In sawaalon ka jawaab aap hindi/urdu main bhi de sakte heiN...!

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Im fine thnxxxxxxx so much Danny jii for ur kind words ya i think this is our first intraction nd very healthy too, but i have a one request, plzz translate ur questions in hindi or urdu to undrsand, othrwise i have to consult with dictionay for answer thnxxxxxxx


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bhut shukriyaH Sameer jii aapne ek baat kahi hai shru mai ke aapko reply karna hi pada means kya aap reply nahi karna chahte they??? kya koii naraazgi to nahi hai mujhse jaane anjaane mai koi baat aapko meri buri lag gayi ho??? agr aisa hai to plzz bata deejiyega
aapki mohabbat hai jo aapko mere jawab achay lage bhut bhut shukriyaH
pic change kar di hai
aapke sawaaloN ka intezaar rahega, jii meiN poori ghazal post kar raha huN, hosla afzaii ka bhut bhut shukriyaH
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Aslam Sahab Aadaab!

Janab aap bhi kamaal karte hai... Dar asal yeH thread per aayeN to koi na koi sawaal lekar aana hi achcha hota hai... Tab mere zahen meiN koi sawaal nahi tha so socha ke bad meiN kuch puch luNga... Par aapki guftagu itni dilchasp chal rahi thi so socha kyuN na ek reply dekar thread meiN subscribe kar luN taki mujhe yahaaN ke haal chaal pata hote raheN..

Yaar aapse mujhe kisi baat ki shikayat nahi aap khamakhaan kuch bhi mat sochiye.... maiN aise hi kuch bhi kah deta huN..
Pic change kar dii yaa nikal hi dii ....... ???????

Janab aapki puri kalaam hi behad khoob hai aur sach kah raha huN agar puri kalaam ki koi request nahi karta to itne khoob ahsaasat maiN ruberu nahi ho pata..... Behad khoob kalaam thi janab shukriyaa jo apni khaas peshkash ko humare saath share kiya.... Aur daad bhi hazir hai...

Abhi bhi koi sawaal zaheN meiN nahi hai.... Jo kuch puchne ka dil hua tha so kaiyoN ne pahele hi puch liya....
Khair ek sawaal hai. Kafi personal hai..
PuchuN kya..... ??????

Janab Ek sher kahta chaluN..

Khuda jaane kab jahaaN se rukhsati ho jaye
Ek lamhe meiN khatam phir zindagi ho jaye

Khush O aabaad rahiye.......
Apna khayaal rakhiye.......
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Aslam sahab,

Asak

Aapne Kunaal sahab ke interview per yeh sawaal pucha tha, jiska jawaab woh de na sake..chaliye aapse hi is sawaal ke jawaab puuch lete haiN...

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Janab aap bhi kamaal karte hai... Dar asal yeH thread per aayeN to koi na koi sawaal lekar aana hi achcha hota hai... Tab mere zahen meiN koi sawaal nahi tha so socha ke bad meiN kuch puch luNga... Par aapki guftagu itni dilchasp chal rahi thi so socha kyuN na ek reply dekar thread meiN subscribe kar luN taki mujhe yahaaN ke haal chaal pata hote raheN..

Yaar aapse mujhe kisi baat ki shikayat nahi aap khamakhaan kuch bhi mat sochiye.... maiN aise hi kuch bhi kah deta huN..
Pic change kar dii yaa nikal hi dii ....... ???????

Janab aapki puri kalaam hi behad khoob hai aur sach kah raha huN agar puri kalaam ki koi request nahi karta to itne khoob ahsaasat maiN ruberu nahi ho pata..... Behad khoob kalaam thi janab shukriyaa jo apni khaas peshkash ko humare saath share kiya.... Aur daad bhi hazir hai...

Abhi bhi koi sawaal zaheN meiN nahi hai.... Jo kuch puchne ka dil hua tha so kaiyoN ne pahele hi puch liya....
Khair ek sawaal hai. Kafi personal hai..
PuchuN kya..... ??????

Janab Ek sher kahta chaluN..

Khuda jaane kab jahaaN se rukhsati ho jaye
Ek lamhe meiN khatam phir zindagi ho jaye

Khush O aabaad rahiye.......
Apna khayaal rakhiye.......
Khuda Hafez...........

yaar aap itne dino baad aaye haiN change karke nikaal di dost log daikh daikh dar rahe they aapko ijaazat hai koi bhi sawaal pooch sakte haiN aapne jo sher likha hai bhut hi khoob hai aur suchchaii ka ek satoon bhi bhut acha laga ye sher apna khyaal rakhiyega
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Asak

Aapne Kunaal sahab ke interview per yeh sawaal pucha tha, jiska jawaab woh de na sake..chaliye aapse hi is sawaal ke jawaab puuch lete haiN...

Aap hi bataiye is saare sawaloN ke jawaab..

Zainy saheba ye sher Mohtarm Azhar Inaayeti sahab ka hai, zindagi ke bhut se pehluoN par unhone bepah khooburat aashaar kahe haiN ye sher bhi unhi aashaaroN mai se ek hai

kunaal sahab se mera sawaal tha, jinse ki ab rukh badal kar aapka jama pehen lia hai to jawaab hazir hai

ek mustanad shayad ka sher hai

Mijaaz hi mai buzurgoN se hum nahi baDle
wo chehre mohre ki saari shabaahteiN bhi gayiN

shayar ne is sher mai kis pasmanzar ki tarf nishaandehi ki hai? kya aap shayar ne jo kaha hai aap us baat ki taaeed karte haiN? agrchay haan to kyuN kar?


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kunaal sahab se mera sawaal tha, jinse ki ab rukh badal kar aapka jama pehen lia hai to jawaab hazir hai

ek mustanad shayad ka sher hai

Mijaaz hi mai buzurgoN se hum nahi baDle
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shayar ne is sher mai kis pasmanzar ki tarf nishaandehi ki hai? kya aap shayar ne jo kaha hai aap us baat ki taaeed karte haiN? agrchay haan to kyuN kar?

shayar kehta hai ke jo hamara lab o lehja hai wo jo hamari riwaayateiN thiN wo tamaam baateiN jo hamare buzugoN ke mizaaj mai shamil thiN wo sab hum se chhot gayi haiN na wo apnaaiyat na wo mohabbat na wo inkesaari na wo adab o adaab ye tamaam baateiN jo ke hamaare khoon ka hissa hua kartiN thiN jinpar aane waali nasal fakhr karti thi hum un tamaam cheezoN se mehroom ho gaye haiN na sirf ye ke hum wo lab o lehja bhool chuke haiN balke ab hamare chehre par bhi wo chamak damak baaqi nahi hai wo ziya nahi dikhaaii daiti jo hamaari riwaayat ki baani thi yaani hum poori tarah se is naye dour ke haathoN gariftaar haiN jisne hamko hamse hi juda kar dia hai, aur yaqeenan meiN is baat ki taaeed karta huN unhi ke is sher ke saath

RaastoN kya huway wo log jo aate jaate
har aadaab pe kehte they ke jeete rahiye (Azhar inaayeti)

yaqeenan aaj ke dour mai salaam bhi ye soch kar kia jaata hai ke ye mujhay salaam karta hai ke nahi aur jawaab ka andaaz bhi wahi hai usme dua ka koi lehja bacha hi nahi kehne ka matlab hum mai wo wazadaariyaan ab rhi hi nahi jisme agr dushman bhi kuch dino dikhaaii na de to qaasid bhaija jaata tha ke daikh kar aao ke kahiN koi baat to nahi (ye baat sirf lafzo tak mehdood nahi hai balke aisa haqeeqatan hua karta tha, log is baat ke zamin haiN) to kahaN se laayenge hum itna zarf, yaqeena hum labo lehje hi mai nahi balke chehre mohre se bhi badal gaye haiN ab rahi baat kyuN kar ki to Allama iqbaal ne ek baat kahi thi unka kehna tha ke "shehr jinte chote honge masaail utne hi kam", mere khyaal se ye saara masla is tez raftaari ka hi hai jahaN shyad hame utna seekhne ko milta hi nahi jo dar asal hame wo sabaq pada sake ke humne is zindagi ko kaise jeena hai, na hi ab wo baithakeiN haiN jinme adab o adaab ki baateiN hua karti thiN aapko kaise baat karni hai kahaN par bolna hai kahaN chup rehna hai ye sab kuch seekhya nahi jata daikh kar ke seekhi jaati thiN ye saari cheezeiN, aaj bojh to hai zaroor kaandhoN par magr shayad tarbiyat us madarse ki kam hai jiski bhut aur bhut ziyada hona chahiye thi, maazrat ke jawaab bhut lamba de dia shayd yahi baat kam lafzo mai bhi kahi ja sakti thi magr afsos ke mere pass wo jaadu kahaN


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arey wahhhhhhhhhh..... kya baat hai Aslam... tussi to chha gaye..... is baar aapko in sawaalon ke bich fasaa hua dekh achcha laga ...
chaliye ab mai yaha aa hi gayi hu to lage haath mai bhi kuch puch hi leti hu...

to bataiye ke ........
1... aap ki nazar me dosti ke sahi maayne kya hai??
2.... aapki khud ki zindagi me dosti ka kya mukaam hai??
3..... dosti aur mohabbat ke bich kitna fark hai??
4..... agar kabhi zindagi me dosti aur mohabbat me se kisi ek ko chun'na pade to kise chunenge ? kyu?

mere in sabhi sawaalon ke vistaar se jawaab dijiyega...

khush rahiye...





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[QUOTE=LAMHA;414308]arey wahhhhhhhhhh..... kya baat hai Aslam... tussi to chha gaye..... is baar aapko in sawaalon ke bich fasaa hua dekh achcha laga ...

Bhut shukriyaH Lamha aapka.............

chaliye ab mai yaha aa hi gayi hu to lage haath mai bhi kuch puch hi leti hu...

most welcome.............

to bataiye ke ........
1... aap ki nazar me dosti ke sahi maayne kya hai??

Meri nazar mai dosti ek bhut hi muqaddas rishta hai, agrchay waqaii dosti hai to phir yahaN koi bandish nahi, ek aisa jazba jiske liyN kisi bhi izhaar ki zaroorat nahi jiske liyN koi zaat kisi ki mohtaaj nahi, jiske liyN kisi paat ka koi wajood nhi jo belos hai, jo bhrose ki faseel hai, jo mohabbat ki inteha hai, jo diwaangi hai, jo ibaadat bhi hai, jo har us lamhe aapke saath hai jab aap par tez doop ho to wo saayebaaN ban kar, jab aap muskura rahe hoN to wo bahaar banke aapke ird gird ghoomti huii nazar aaye, jiske liyN aapko lafzo mai kuchna nahi pade wo aapke chehre ke aate jaate rangoN se mousamoN ka andaaza laga sake yahi hai dosti ek succhi aur belos ba maayne dosti J

2.... aapki khud ki zindagi me dosti ka kya mukaam hai??
Allah rabulAalameen ne is maamle mai bhut aur bhut hi khusnaseeb banya hai agarchey iske alawa yuN kahuN to ghalat nahi “zindagi jaisi tawaqqo thi nahi kuch kam hai….har ghadi hota hai ehsaas kahiN kuch kam hai” to shayad mujh par sahi baiththa hai magr dosti ke maamle mai badi dhani banya hai, jo mera dost hai jab se bhi hai wo aaj tak hai aaj tak meri koi bhi dosti nahi tooti aur Allah se dua hai ke aisa kabhi na ho aameen, mere tamaam dost bhut aur bhut mukhlis haiN bepanh mujhse piyaar karte haiN jabki meiN is qabil nahi mujhay fakhr hai un par aur hamesha rahega J

3..... dosti aur mohabbat ke bich kitna fark hai??

Bhut, dosti ek alag jazba hai aur mohabbat alag bandhan, mohabbat ko izhaar ki zaroorat hoti hai dosti iski mohtaaj nahi hua karti J meri nazar mai yahi sabse baDa farq hai J

4..... agar kabhi zindagi me dosti aur mohabbat me se kisi ek ko chun'na pade to kise chunenge ? kyu?
Mushkil sawaal J ye baat mai isliyN keh raha huN ke ye baat wqat par munhassir karti hai ke halaat kaise haiN agr baat dono mai ek ko chunne ki hai to iska matlab ke dono mai kuch aisa ghalt hai jisme aapko ye maloom karna hai ke kon sahi hai aur kon ghalt to jo sahi hoga meiN usko chununga zahir hai meiN kya sab aisa hi karenge, magr meiN ye nahi samjhta ke ek succha dost jo aap par jaaN nisaar karne ko tayyar hai uski wajh se aapki mohaabat aapse juda ho jayegi agr aisa hai to phir wo dosti kabhi ho hi nahi sakti kabhi nahi J

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Arai itnaa type karne ka time mil gaya apko hmm..... msg karne ka time nahi hai aaaaayiiiiiiiiii Arai kya No. phir se du kya hahahahha..nyways nice to see an ample response..... YM pe milna allah hafiz.

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Shukriyah Aslam Sahab...

Waqay bohat hi dilchasp raha aapka interview...aapne badi hi imaandari aur nekdili ke saath,sabhi ke sawaloN ke jawaab diye...

Aapke is interview se ,Sdc ke sabhi members ko,aapko aur bhi acchi tarah se jaanne aur samajhne ka maukha mila,

Ummid hai aap isi tarah mehfil me shamil hote rahenge aur apni khoobsurat ghazaloN se mehfil roshan kiya karenge..

Hamesha khush rahiye...

DuaoN ke saath izazat..

*Aapse guzarish hai ke jo sawaal bach gaye hain unke jawaab zarur de deiN.





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Arai itnaa type karne ka time mil gaya apko hmm..... msg karne ka time nahi hai aaaaayiiiiiiiiii Arai kya No. phir se du kya hahahahha..nyways nice to see an ample response..... YM pe milna allah hafiz.

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Dil Me Sach Na Ho To Jumbish Bhi Akharti Hai Ab


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Shukriyah Aslam Sahab...

Waqay bohat hi dilchasp raha aapka interview...aapne badi hi imaandari aur nekdili ke saath,sabhi ke sawaloN ke jawaab diye...

Aapke is interview se ,Sdc ke sabhi members ko,aapko aur bhi acchi tarah se jaanne aur samajhne ka maukha mila,

Ummid hai aap isi tarah mehfil me shamil hote rahenge aur apni khoobsurat ghazaloN se mehfil roshan kiya karenge..

Hamesha khush rahiye...

DuaoN ke saath izazat..

*Aapse guzarish hai ke jo sawaal bach gaye hain unke jawaab zarur de deiN.

*Mushkil(Danny) ji se guzarish hai ke apne sawaal urdu me puuchen...(as requested).

Zainy saheba aapka aur poore SDC pariwaar ka tahe dil se shukurguzaar huN ke unhone itni mohabbat se nawaaza, aap tamaam hi logoN ke sawaal bhut dilchsp the maine apni tarf se poori koshish ki ke jawaab aap sabhi ke mayaar ke mutabiq hoN kahaN tak poora utra is imtehaan mai wo to aap hi jaante honge, mashaAllah se bhut enjoy kia maine aap sabhi log bhut aur bhut achay haiN, ek baar phir tamaam haazreen ka tahe dil se shukrguzaar huN bhut nawaazish, Naresh sahab seat par aa hi gaye haiN to unki taraf rukh karte haiN yahaN se alwida


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aslam bhaa'ii:

namaste!

Shayri Parivaar ko apnaa qeemtee waqt dene ke liye tah-e-dil se ShuKriyaa'h.. ees Guftagu ke zar'iiye hum sabhee ko aapke baare mei.n bahot kuChh jaanne ko milaa KhuShii hu'ii

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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aslam hai intehaayee maazarat ke saath aap ko ittelaa denaa chaahitaa hun ki apnee mashghooliyat ki benaa par sawaalaat ki zanjeer ka hissa na ban sakaa
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arey wahhhhhhhhhh..... kya baat hai Aslam... tussi to chha gaye..... is baar aapko in sawaalon ke bich fasaa hua dekh achcha laga ...

Bhut shukriyaH Lamha aapka.............

chaliye ab mai yaha aa hi gayi hu to lage haath mai bhi kuch puch hi leti hu...

most welcome.............

to bataiye ke ........
1... aap ki nazar me dosti ke sahi maayne kya hai??

Meri nazar mai dosti ek bhut hi muqaddas rishta hai, agrchay waqaii dosti hai to phir yahaN koi bandish nahi, ek aisa jazba jiske liyN kisi bhi izhaar ki zaroorat nahi jiske liyN koi zaat kisi ki mohtaaj nahi, jiske liyN kisi paat ka koi wajood nhi jo belos hai, jo bhrose ki faseel hai, jo mohabbat ki inteha hai, jo diwaangi hai, jo ibaadat bhi hai, jo har us lamhe aapke saath hai jab aap par tez doop ho to wo saayebaaN ban kar, jab aap muskura rahe hoN to wo bahaar banke aapke ird gird ghoomti huii nazar aaye, jiske liyN aapko lafzo mai kuchna nahi pade wo aapke chehre ke aate jaate rangoN se mousamoN ka andaaza laga sake yahi hai dosti ek succhi aur belos ba maayne dosti J

2.... aapki khud ki zindagi me dosti ka kya mukaam hai??
Allah rabulAalameen ne is maamle mai bhut aur bhut hi khusnaseeb banya hai agarchey iske alawa yuN kahuN to ghalat nahi “zindagi jaisi tawaqqo thi nahi kuch kam hai….har ghadi hota hai ehsaas kahiN kuch kam hai” to shayad mujh par sahi baiththa hai magr dosti ke maamle mai badi dhani banya hai, jo mera dost hai jab se bhi hai wo aaj tak hai aaj tak meri koi bhi dosti nahi tooti aur Allah se dua hai ke aisa kabhi na ho aameen, mere tamaam dost bhut aur bhut mukhlis haiN bepanh mujhse piyaar karte haiN jabki meiN is qabil nahi mujhay fakhr hai un par aur hamesha rahega J

3..... dosti aur mohabbat ke bich kitna fark hai??

Bhut, dosti ek alag jazba hai aur mohabbat alag bandhan, mohabbat ko izhaar ki zaroorat hoti hai dosti iski mohtaaj nahi hua karti J meri nazar mai yahi sabse baDa farq hai J

4..... agar kabhi zindagi me dosti aur mohabbat me se kisi ek ko chun'na pade to kise chunenge ? kyu?
Mushkil sawaal J ye baat mai isliyN keh raha huN ke ye baat wqat par munhassir karti hai ke halaat kaise haiN agr baat dono mai ek ko chunne ki hai to iska matlab ke dono mai kuch aisa ghalt hai jisme aapko ye maloom karna hai ke kon sahi hai aur kon ghalt to jo sahi hoga meiN usko chununga zahir hai meiN kya sab aisa hi karenge, magr meiN ye nahi samjhta ke ek succha dost jo aap par jaaN nisaar karne ko tayyar hai uski wajh se aapki mohaabat aapse juda ho jayegi agr aisa hai to phir wo dosti kabhi ho hi nahi sakti kabhi nahi J

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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Aslam.... i m impressed
bahut khoob dear... aapse yahi umeed thi...i m glad ke aap mere dost hai.....
khush rahiye....


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4th November 2010, 04:14 AM

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aslam bhaa'ii:

namaste!

Shayri Parivaar ko apnaa qeemtee waqt dene ke liye tah-e-dil se ShuKriyaa'h.. ees Guftagu ke zar'iiye hum sabhee ko aapke baare mei.n bahot kuChh jaanne ko milaa KhuShii hu'ii

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

BHut shukriyaH janaab

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4th November 2010, 04:17 AM

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aadaab
aslam hai intehaayee maazarat ke saath aap ko ittelaa denaa chaahitaa hun ki apnee mashghooliyat ki benaa par sawaalaat ki zanjeer ka hissa na ban sakaa
tamaam hazaraat ke sawaalaat umdah hain us ke jawaabaat sone par sohaagah
meree jaanib se dilee mobaarakbaad qabool farmaayen
aapkaa apnaa dost
masood hassaas

Masood bhai koi baat nahi, mujhay pata hai ke aap kitne masroof thay, aapka bhut bhut shukriyaH ke aapko saare jawaab achay lage bhut inayat


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