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I am so Lonely, without you - 20th May 2005, 01:10 PM

Hi Everyone,

Yesterday my sister Warda gave me a wonderful picture.....
she wanted me to write about loneliness on it.....
But I thought the Picture was wonderful and romantic...
So i was trying to write on
Loneliness, Love and Pain....
While writing I got a old poem of mine....
So just wanted to share it with you all
Hope you all like it.....

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O! Lonely,
I am so lonely,
...Without you.
Ever since i met you.
My world revolved around you.
Dreams, emotion , passion
all were just for you.
Every breath, every hartbeat,
was just for you.
Now that you are gone.
What is left is tears,
a bottle of bear ,
and few old memories of you.
Here i sit at the bar,
Trying to drain your thoughts away,
but the more i try,
the more it pains,
and what is left is a broken hart.
I am lonely,
Oh god it hurts real bad
but i feel so lonely,
without you.

-- Rohin Bhargava


Special note to Warda...

Hey sister.... I will also write another one just for you....

Take Care
Rohin


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O! Lonely,
I am so lonely,
...Without you.
Ever since i met you.

My world revolved around you.
Dreams, emotion , passion
all were just for you.
Every breath, every hartbeat,
was just for you.

A beautifull feeling.. expressed beautifully


Now that you are gone.
What is left is tears,
a bottle of bear ,
and few old memories of you.

Here i sit at the bar,
Trying to drain your thoughts away,
but the more i try,
the more it pains,

Hmmmmmmm....... Sabhi lute majnuon ka yahi haal hota hai LOL


and what is left is a broken hart.
I am lonely,
Oh god it hurts real bad
but i feel so lonely,
without you.

Beautifull.....!

Hi Rohin!

Pain expressed with softness.... this has come out really beauitful.... Mujhe to bahut pasand aayi..... Aise hi likte rhao.. and keep sharing ur Old calssics with us!! TC


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20th May 2005, 01:20 PM

Big B,

lonely... hmm.. hota hai jab aap kisi ko bahut bhoolaane ki koshish karate ho to wo saks bahut yaad aata hai utna hi akelapan.. lekin usaki yaade hume akela nahi rehane deti tab aur dard lekin pyaar bhari tadap hoti hai..

aapki feelings shayad mujhase alag ho.. lekin meri feelings yehi hai...

jo bhi ho aapne likha bahut bahut achha hai.. I love this poem in one touch.

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Re: I am so Lonely, without you - 20th May 2005, 03:18 PM

Quote:
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Hi Everyone,

Yesterday my sister Warda gave me a wonderful picture.....
she wanted me to write about loneliness on it.....
But I thought the Picture was wonderful and romantic...
So i was trying to write on
Loneliness, Love and Pain....
While writing I got a old poem of mine....
So just wanted to share it with you all
Hope you all like it.....

==============================
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O! Lonely,
I am so lonely,
...Without you.
Ever since i met you.
My world revolved around you.
Dreams, emotion , passion
all were just for you.
Every breath, every hartbeat,
was just for you.
Now that you are gone.
What is left is tears,
a bottle of bear ,
and few old memories of you.
Here i sit at the bar,
Trying to drain your thoughts away,
but the more i try,
the more it pains,
and what is left is a broken hart.
I am lonely,
Oh god it hurts real bad
but i feel so lonely,
without you.

-- Rohin Bhargava



Special note to Warda...

Hey sister.... I will also write another one just for you....

Take Care
Rohin
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its awesome dear. wow i wud suggest share ur oldies once again one by one. irs fantstic buddy. the pain in love, the loneliness of dripting apart. wow well expressed buddy. just loved reading each word of it. take care n keep writing such master pieces. may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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O! Lonely,
I am so lonely,
...Without you.
Ever since i met you.
My world revolved around you.
Dreams, emotion , passion
all were just for you.
Every breath, every hartbeat,
was just for you.
Now that you are gone.
What is left is tears,
a bottle of bear ,
and few old memories of you.
Here i sit at the bar,
Trying to drain your thoughts away,
but the more i try,
the more it pains,
and what is left is a broken hart.
I am lonely,
Oh god it hurts real bad
but i feel so lonely,
without you.

-- Rohin Bhargava


Rohin Bhai...

"I am so lonely,without you" is just outstanding...!Please accept
my praise for this poem.And I beg for pardon of the repetitiveness
of inspiration I get when I read your poems.
"Loneliness, no more" is in workshop...!

See you soon

Thanks...

Amanush...


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20th May 2005, 04:55 PM

Beautiful...!

Rohin .....its really a beauty...love... pain, sorrow, fear.....everything is there.

thanks for shareing it.


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Re: I am so Lonely, without you - 20th May 2005, 06:03 PM

Lonely Lonely Lonely.....
Trying to drain your thoughts away,
but the more i try,
the more it pains,

its nice buddy!!


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20th May 2005, 08:25 PM

rohin,

kai rachna aisi hoti hai jis ka reply fika hi lagta hai .........
ek aisa ahesaas jo dil ko chhu kar dil mai sama gaya
tarif kabul karna

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hmm...widout u!
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hi - 20th May 2005, 11:13 PM

hi dear..
aapne bahut acha likha hai, dard aur tanhayi ka sath ajeeb sa hota hai. i cud imagine the person sitting at bar crying and drinking beer so he can forget the pain..but it does is....jitna bhulne ki koshish karo utna hi vo shaks yaad aata hai.

LOnely without YOU

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21st May 2005, 12:12 AM

hi bhai,

thanx for writing one for me....and this poem is very nice...shows all of love, pain, loneliness

keep writing
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warda

by the way....thanx for being there for me.....


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Hi Rohin,
nice poem........too good....

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21st May 2005, 11:13 AM

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A beautifull feeling.. expressed beautifully
Hmmmmmmm....... Sabhi lute majnuon ka yahi haal hota hai LOL
Beautifull.....!

Hi Rohin!

Pain expressed with softness.... this has come out really beauitful.... Mujhe to bahut pasand aayi..... Aise hi likte rhao.. and keep sharing ur Old calssics with us!! TC
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Old is Gold

pain without softness cannot be felt.... right?
I am really very happy that you liked this one.

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Big B,

lonely... hmm.. hota hai jab aap kisi ko bahut bhoolaane ki koshish karate ho to wo saks bahut yaad aata hai utna hi akelapan.. lekin usaki yaade hume akela nahi rehane deti tab aur dard lekin pyaar bhari tadap hoti hai..

aapki feelings shayad mujhase alag ho.. lekin meri feelings yehi hai...

jo bhi ho aapne likha bahut bahut achha hai.. I love this poem in one touch.

with lots of love
ur's sis
Hi Garma,

Wahi to is poem mein hai....
Akelapan to bheed mein bhi lag sakta hai....

Feelings alag hai... soch nahi....

God Bless you

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dearest rohin,
its awesome dear. wow i wud suggest share ur oldies once again one by one. irs fantstic buddy. the pain in love, the loneliness of dripting apart. wow well expressed buddy. just loved reading each word of it. take care n keep writing such master pieces. may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
Hi Jasu,

Pulkit ko bhi jawab diya tha Old is Gold....

Well I am glad you liked it. If only words could express...
By the way these are not masterpieces... I always cherish the replies I get.... I will consider my work a masterpiece when I get that one reply which I have been waiting for.

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Rohin Bhai...

"I am so lonely,without you" is just outstanding...!Please accept
my praise for this poem.And I beg for pardon of the repetitiveness
of inspiration I get when I read your poems.
"Loneliness, no more" is in workshop...!

See you soon

Thanks...

Amanush...
Hi Amanush bhai,

Outstanding not sure... but your work is for sure...
Arre mujhe to khushi hai ki aapko meri rachnao se kuch inspiration milta hai....

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Beautiful...!

Rohin .....its really a beauty...love... pain, sorrow, fear.....everything is there.

thanks for shareing it.
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Aapka yahan dekh mujhe khushi hui...
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Lonely Lonely Lonely.....
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Dil ko chu le to rachna aur bhi bhi pyaari lagti hai...
Aapko achi lagi .... mujhe bahut kushi hui...

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Widout U Without me .... hehehhe
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aapne bahut acha likha hai, dard aur tanhayi ka sath ajeeb sa hota hai. i cud imagine the person sitting at bar crying and drinking beer so he can forget the pain..but it does is....jitna bhulne ki koshish karo utna hi vo shaks yaad aata hai.

LOnely without YOU

Priya
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Lonely wothout U

Yeah very true.... Dard to hota hi apna koi jab duur chala jaata hai... right...

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hi bhai,

thanx for writing one for me....and this poem is very nice...shows all of love, pain, loneliness

keep writing
your sis
warda

by the way....thanx for being there for me.....
Hi Sister,

I am glad you liked it....
Hai na tumhari tasveer se mail khati hui....
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nice poem........too good....

Regards Nidhi
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I am glad you liked it yaar....

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Hey rohin

this peom reminds me of a song that is kinda my current fav. it goes like this
"lonely--Im am so lonely, i have nobody ,all on my own"

Yes lonliness is a bitter pill to swallow and it hurts like hell.more so lonliness in love. why do men always like to drown their sorrows in alcohol?????????? is it only a man- thing? how do women deal with it? just curious thats all!!!!!!
your poem reveal ur skills for expressing what many of us feel yet try as we may cant express--thanks for putting into words , our feelinsg for us.

take care

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Hey rohin

this peom reminds me of a song that is kinda my current fav. it goes like this
"lonely--Im am so lonely, i have nobody ,all on my own"

Yes lonliness is a bitter pill to swallow and it hurts like hell.more so lonliness in love. why do men always like to drown their sorrows in alcohol?????????? is it only a man- thing? how do women deal with it? just curious thats all!!!!!!
your poem reveal ur skills for expressing what many of us feel yet try as we may cant express--thanks for putting into words , our feelinsg for us.

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Munnia
Hi Munnia,

Well that song is really good....

Well true that lonliness kills.....
Men do not always drown their sorrow in alcahol...
Its just that with tear beer rhymed...

People do many more things then just drink beer,
They sulk.... they cry, .... they try to suicide.... god knows what all more on does... some eat and eat.... lol...

Women well they can do the above too....

If only words could express.... then I would have been glad dear...
But words can never express what is in our heart....

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O! Lonely,
I am so lonely,
...Without you.
Ever since i met you.
My world revolved around you.
Dreams, emotion , passion
all were just for you.
Every breath, every hartbeat,
was just for you.
Now that you are gone.
What is left is tears,
a bottle of bear ,
and few old memories of you.
Here i sit at the bar,
Trying to drain your thoughts away,
but the more i try,
the more it pains,
and what is left is a broken hart.
I am lonely,
Oh god it hurts real bad
but i feel so lonely,
without you.

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ek dam apni baat lagi apki ye poem.
pata hai yahi kuch lagta hai mujhe bhi. but ham jitna kisi ko bhulana chahte hai woh utna jyada yaad aata hai.
bahut khub dil ko choo gya.
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ek dam apni baat lagi apki ye poem.
pata hai yahi kuch lagta hai mujhe bhi. but ham jitna kisi ko bhulana chahte hai woh utna jyada yaad aata hai.
bahut khub dil ko choo gya.
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Hi Sakhi,

Dua hai koi akela na rahe... akela ho to saath botal na ho...
aur Akela ho bhi to saath khushi ke pal yaad ke liye hoon..

I am glad it touched your heart....
I try to .... I am glad sometimes i succed

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