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aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee - 13th July 2014, 05:17 PM
aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee
pyaar se muskura gaya koyee

raaz-e-giriya* bhi kis tarah chhupta
aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meiN pa gaya koyee

maiN ne apna kusoor jab poochha
mujh se nazreiN chura gaya koyee

zakhm seene meiN gardh gaya aise
jaise dil meiN sama gaya koyee

jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee

bosa* shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

us ki baatoN se ye gumaaN hota
lab ko lab se mila gaya koyee

n raha ishq par wafa to hai
ye bharam bhi mita gaya koyee

sab yahaaN ajnabee se kya maaloom
kaun aaya hai ya gaya koyee

zeher chhalka diya hai dete huwe
be-shaooree dikha gaya koyee

hum ne ordhee barahnagee* jo daag
pairahan* meiN laga gaya koyee

"zarraa" aise n ho khafa ke bas
aaina hi dikha gaya koyee

- zarraa

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giriya = crying
bosa = kiss
barahnagee = nakedness
pairahan = robe

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Love 13th July 2014, 05:27 PM
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aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee
pyaar se muskura gaya koyee

raaz-e-giriya* bhi kis tarah chhupta
aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meiN pa gaya koyee

maiN ne apna kusoor jab poochha
mujh se nazreiN chura gaya koyee

zakhm seene meiN gardh gaya aise
jaise dil meiN sama gaya koyee

jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee

bosa* shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

us ki baatoN se ye gumaaN hota
lab ko lab se mila gaya koyee

n raha ishq par wafa to hai
ye bharam bhi mita gaya koyee

sab yahaaN ajnabee se kya maaloom
kaun aaya hai ya gaya koyee

zeher chhalka diya hai dete huwe
be-shaooree dikha gaya koyee

hum ne ordhee barahnagee* jo daag
pairahan* meiN laga gaya koyee

"zarraa" aise n ho khafa ke bas
aaina hi dikha gaya koyee

- zarraa

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giriya = crying
bosa = kiss
barahnagee = nakedness
pairahan = robe
bahot khub zarraa sahab
nice sharing

regards

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13th July 2014, 05:27 PM
Masha Allah bohat khoob zarraa sahab. .

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain..


jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee


yeh 3 ashaar dil ke zyaada khareeb rahe

yuhi likhte rahiye. ..

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13th July 2014, 05:55 PM
bhai jaan bade dinon baad aapko padhne ka mauka milaa... ahchi ghazal hai, par yakeen maaniye akahiri sher tak pahunchte pahunchte maiN matla bhool gaya tha... Yunhi mehfil ki raunak badhaate rahiye saaheb...


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13th July 2014, 06:18 PM
zarra jee.....bahut hee khoobsurat ehsaas lage.....saare aashaar dil ko choo gaye.....


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13th July 2014, 09:18 PM
bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

Wahh ... Wahhh.. Zarra Saheb..

Boht khoob.....

Yonhiii likhtay rahiye,,

DuaooN k saath,,

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14th July 2014, 12:33 PM
waaah... kya kehne Zarraji,
aapkii harek tehreer me.n ek josh-e-rawaanii hotii hai.....
aur ek behteriin ghazal padhkar man-mugdha reh gayaa hoo.n....

dilse daado mubaarakbaad......


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14th July 2014, 01:30 PM
Zarrah Ji...........!
Bahot Khubsurat Aur Mayaari GHazal Hui Hai......
DheroN DAAAAAAAAAD
Likhtay Rahiye
Khush rahiye



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Zarra sahab Khoobsurat ashaaroN par mushtamil aapki ye ghazal bhut khoob rhi har sher daad ka haqdaar bhut aur bhut si daad aapki nazar qubool famaaiye Allah kare zor o qalam aur ziyadah

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bahot khub zarraa sahab
nice sharing

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Masha Allah bohat khoob zarraa sahab. .

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain..


jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee


yeh 3 ashaar dil ke zyaada khareeb rahe

yuhi likhte rahiye. ..

Khaasker


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Smile wah - 15th July 2014, 10:41 PM
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aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee
pyaar se muskura gaya koyee

raaz-e-giriya* bhi kis tarah chhupta
aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meiN pa gaya koyee

maiN ne apna kusoor jab poochha
mujh se nazreiN chura gaya koyee

zakhm seene meiN gardh gaya aise
jaise dil meiN sama gaya koyee

jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee

bosa* shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

us ki baatoN se ye gumaaN hota
lab ko lab se mila gaya koyee

n raha ishq par wafa to hai
ye bharam bhi mita gaya koyee

sab yahaaN ajnabee se kya maaloom
kaun aaya hai ya gaya koyee

zeher chhalka diya hai dete huwe
be-shaooree dikha gaya koyee

hum ne ordhee barahnagee* jo daag
pairahan* meiN laga gaya koyee

"zarraa" aise n ho khafa ke bas
aaina hi dikha gaya koyee

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giriya = crying
bosa = kiss
barahnagee = nakedness
pairahan = robe
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16th July 2014, 08:45 AM
Zarra sahab bahut khoob peshkash rahi aapki...dili daad qabool keejiye aap.....umeed hai yun hi aapke ahsaas hamaari aankhoN se gujarte raheNge.....
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waahhhhh bas waah hi waahhhhhh.......... kamaal ki adaayagee behtareen andaaze bayaan.. aapka andaaz bhi saahab kyaa qayaamat angez hai...... laajawaab

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Wahh ... Wahhh.. Zarra Saheb..

Boht khoob.....

Yonhiii likhtay rahiye,,

DuaooN k saath,,
Tah e dil se aap ka shukrguzaar hoon Hassan bhai

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Bahot khoobsurat peshkash......badi khushi hoti hai jab aisi behtareen ghazal padhne milti hai aur bahot kuch seekhne bhi milta hai...daad qubool kijiye Zarraji.
Aap ki qadrdaani aur pazeerai ka tah e dil se mashqoor hooN Na@zneen ji

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waaah... kya kehne Zarraji,
aapkii harek tehreer me.n ek josh-e-rawaanii hotii hai.....
aur ek behteriin ghazal padhkar man-mugdha reh gayaa hoo.n....

dilse daado mubaarakbaad......
Aadeil bhai ... ye karishma bas aap ki ba-karam nazar aur mohabbat bhare dil ka hai .... aap ka saath bahaut maayne rakhta hai mere liye ... aap ki pazirai ka tah e dil se mashqoor hooN !! aap ko dheron duaein meri jaanib se!!

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Zarrah Ji...........!
Bahot Khubsurat Aur Mayaari GHazal Hui Hai......
DheroN DAAAAAAAAAD
Likhtay Rahiye
Khush rahiye
Ahmad sahab ... tah e dil se shukrguzaar hooN aap ki pazeeraaee aur hausla afzaaee ka !!!

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Zarra sahab Khoobsurat ashaaroN par mushtamil aapki ye ghazal bhut khoob rhi har sher daad ka haqdaar bhut aur bhut si daad aapki nazar qubool famaaiye Allah kare zor o qalam aur ziyadah
Aslam sahab .... aap ki daad aur duaein mere liye beshkeemtee hain...dil ki gehraaiyon se maahqoor hooN aap ka !

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aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee
pyaar se muskura gaya koyee

raaz-e-giriya* bhi kis tarah chhupta
aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meiN pa gaya koyee

maiN ne apna kusoor jab poochha
mujh se nazreiN chura gaya koyee

zakhm seene meiN gardh gaya aise
jaise dil meiN sama gaya koyee

jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee

bosa* shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

us ki baatoN se ye gumaaN hota
lab ko lab se mila gaya koyee

n raha ishq par wafa to hai
ye bharam bhi mita gaya koyee

sab yahaaN ajnabee se kya maaloom
kaun aaya hai ya gaya koyee

zeher chhalka diya hai dete huwe
be-shaooree dikha gaya koyee

hum ne ordhee barahnagee* jo daag
pairahan* meiN laga gaya koyee

"zarraa" aise n ho khafa ke bas
aaina hi dikha gaya koyee

- zarraa

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giriya = crying
bosa = kiss
barahnagee = nakedness
pairahan = robe
Janaab aap agar samne hote to shayad mere dil se nikli wah ki goonj ko sun paate..ehsaason mein doobi huyi yeh nazm ek ankahi daastan se bankar aankhon se guzarti chali gayi aur aankh nam si reh gayi...

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Zarra sahab bahut khoob peshkash rahi aapki...dili daad qabool keejiye aap.....umeed hai yun hi aapke ahsaas hamaari aankhoN se gujarte raheNge.....
Harash sahab !! My pleasure sir !! Aap ke saath ka bahaut shukrguzaar hooN !!

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waahhhhh bas waah hi waahhhhhh.......... kamaal ki adaayagee behtareen andaaze bayaan.. aapka andaaz bhi saahab kyaa qayaamat angez hai...... laajawaab
bas ye aap ki bepanaah mohabbat hai Shaad bhai ki koshish jaari rehti hai ... Is ghazal ko dil meiN jagah dene ka bahaut bahaut shukriya ... aap ko dheron duaein !!!

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Janaab aap agar samne hote to shayad mere dil se nikli wah ki goonj ko sun paate..ehsaason mein doobi huyi yeh nazm ek ankahi daastan se bankar aankhon se guzarti chali gayi aur aankh nam si reh gayi...

Hats off to this masterpiece...

yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..

aapka apnaa
Mast sahab ... aap ke alfaaz meiN is qadar pyaar mohabaat khuloos aur shafqat hai ki saamne n hote huwe bhi mujhe unki goonj pooree tarah sunaayee de rahi hai aur kaanon se dil mein utar gayi hai ... aap ke mohabbat bhare paighaam ka main tah e dil se mashqoor hooN aur aap ki daad sar aaNkhoN pe rakh raha hooN .... Dheron duaein aap ko ...

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nice 1 no
aap ne kya lafz bataya muje pasand aaya

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aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee
pyaar se muskura gaya koyee

raaz-e-giriya* bhi kis tarah chhupta
aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meiN pa gaya koyee

maiN ne apna kusoor jab poochha
mujh se nazreiN chura gaya koyee

zakhm seene meiN gardh gaya aise
jaise dil meiN sama gaya koyee

jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee

bosa* shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

us ki baatoN se ye gumaaN hota
lab ko lab se mila gaya koyee

n raha ishq par wafa to hai
ye bharam bhi mita gaya koyee

sab yahaaN ajnabee se kya maaloom
kaun aaya hai ya gaya koyee

zeher chhalka diya hai dete huwe
be-shaooree dikha gaya koyee

hum ne ordhee barahnagee* jo daag
pairahan* meiN laga gaya koyee

"zarraa" aise n ho khafa ke bas
aaina hi dikha gaya koyee

- zarraa

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giriya = crying
bosa = kiss
barahnagee = nakedness
pairahan = robe


Zarra ji behad khoobsurat ahsaas......................

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aaj dil ko jala gaya koyee
pyaar se muskura gaya koyee

raaz-e-giriya* bhi kis tarah chhupta
aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meiN pa gaya koyee

maiN ne apna kusoor jab poochha
mujh se nazreiN chura gaya koyee

zakhm seene meiN gardh gaya aise
jaise dil meiN sama gaya koyee

jaate jaate gayee n maayoosee
aate aate chala gaya koyee

koyee rehta n aas paas mere
door mujh se hai kya gaya koyee

inteha kyooN n bekhudee ki ho
mujh ko apna bana gaya koyee

bosa* shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

bewafa khwaab meiN bhi kab aaye
neeNd hi jab chura gaya koyee

us ki baatoN se ye gumaaN hota
lab ko lab se mila gaya koyee

n raha ishq par wafa to hai
ye bharam bhi mita gaya koyee

sab yahaaN ajnabee se kya maaloom
kaun aaya hai ya gaya koyee

zeher chhalka diya hai dete huwe
be-shaooree dikha gaya koyee

hum ne ordhee barahnagee* jo daag
pairahan* meiN laga gaya koyee

"zarraa" aise n ho khafa ke bas
aaina hi dikha gaya koyee

- zarraa

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giriya = crying
bosa = kiss
barahnagee = nakedness
pairahan = robe

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