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10th June 2015, 07:30 PM
Matla...
na paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
Ist sher
Gudguda k hamen yoN na khud khilkhilao
Kya iraada hai dil me, kuch to batao (bhushan)
2nd Sher
chehre se hu.maare ye naz.ren hataao
n hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao. (Masti)
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10th June 2015, 11:40 PM
Waah kya baat hai sarika ji
Mast bhai mera pehla sher jara jaldbaji me post kiya tha, jara behr se alag hai...uski jagah ye try karte hai
" na sapne dikhao, na neenden udao,
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao"
Bhushan
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11th June 2015, 12:04 AM
Doston kuch kuch takhti ke chalte per badal huye hai main Matle aur agle 2 sher ko takhti ke hisaab se wapas likh raha hoon.
Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
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Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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11th June 2015, 12:28 PM
Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao.(madhu)
4th sher
jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they,
wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao.... (shaad)
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11th June 2015, 12:55 PM
Quote:
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Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao.(madhu)
4th sher
bhale bhukh bacchon ko behad lagee ho,
kabhii bhuul kar bhii na MAGGY khilaao...... (shaad)
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Bohot khoob.....kyaa baat hai Shaad bhai.......bina maggi khaye hi masala maggi ka maza aa gaya
Waaaah
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Bohot khoob.....kyaa baat hai Shaad bhai.......bina maggi khaye hi masala maggi ka maza aa gaya
Waaaah
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bhushan saahab..... maggy ko publically badnaam karnaa hame sahii nahii llagaa isliye apnee shiqaayat waapas le lii.....
baharhaal shukriyaaa jo aapne mazaa le liyaa maggy ka bhi baaton bataon me sahii....
Shaad....
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11th June 2015, 05:20 PM
Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao.(madhu)
4th sher
jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they,
wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao.... (shaad)
5th sher
poore chehre ka deedar hai karna!
meri jaaN! rukh se zulfeN hataao ....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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11th June 2015, 08:57 PM
Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao.(madhu)
4th sher
jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they,
wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao.... (shaad)
5th sher
poore chehre ka deedar hai karna!
meri jaaN! rukh se zulfeN hataao ....{Hasan}
6.th sher
Mujhi se jo roothe aawaz de rahe haiN.
Mere intezar meiN palkeiN bichao (hamdam)
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao.(madhu)
4th sher
jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they,
wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao.... (shaad)
5th sher
poore chehre ka deedar hai karna!
meri jaaN! rukh se zulfeN hataao ....{Hasan}
6.th sher
Mujhi se jo roothe aawaz de rahe haiN.
Mere intezar meiN palkeiN bichao (hamdam)
7.sher
Ajab hai ye dil bhi dhadakta hi jaye
ya tum paas aao ya fir door jao.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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16th June 2015, 05:01 PM
Bahut khoob sher huye hai bazm mein aur is haseen ghazal ko rang dene ke liye sabka shukrguzaar hoon. Lijiye Makhtaa pesh kar raha hooN !!
Matla
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
1st sher
na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)
2nd sher
yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)
3rd sher
Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao (Madhu)
4th sher
jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they
wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao (Shaad)
5th sher
poore chehre ka deedar hai karna!
meri jaaN! rukh se zulfeN hataao (Hasan)
6th sher
Mujhi se jo roothe aawaz de rahe haiN.
Mere intezar meiN palkeiN bichao (Hamdam)
7th sher
Ajab hai ye dil bhi dhadakta hi jaye
ya tum paas aao ya fir door jao (Madhu)
Makhta
Khuda us nazar mein hai kaisi khumari
kahun bhi to kaise na jalwe dikhaao (Mast)
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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16th June 2015, 05:09 PM
Bahut khoob doston......kya mast ghazal huyi hai...
kya khoob makta diya hai anu ji.......waaah!
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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17th June 2015, 08:19 AM
Lijiye doston nayi ghazal ka agaaz karte hain...is matle ke sath..
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1222 1222 1222 1222
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain...(Madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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17th June 2015, 12:27 PM
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Waah madhu wah! Kya matla hai!
Kuch koshish meri taraf se bhi.
Matla
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
Ist sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
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17th June 2015, 04:02 PM
bahut khoobsurat peshkash rahii aap dono ki madhu saahibaa aur Sarikaa jee.... kamaal ki ghazal ka aagaaaz ho rahaa hai.... Subhaan Allaah
mujh haqeer ki taraf se bhi ek chotee si koshish..... pesh hai
Matla
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
Ist sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
(ye sher mujhe kuch zyaada pasand aayaa Sarika jee and u know why)
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain.. (shaad)
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash rahii aap dono ki madhu saahibaa aur Sarikaa jee.... kamaal ki ghazal ka aagaaaz ho rahaa hai.... Subhaan Allaah
mujh haqeer ki taraf se bhi ek chotee si koshish..... pesh hai
Matla
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
Ist sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
(ye sher mujhe kuch zyaada pasand aayaa Sarika jee and u know why)
Haha i completely know why?
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain.. (shaad)
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(Yaad aa gaya mujhko guzra zamaana)
3rd sher
Wo taare jinko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein
Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain
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is pahal se ek baat to acchii huii ke logon me behar seekhne aa rujhaan aa raha hai aur yaqeenan ye bahut acchii pahal ho rahii hai....... meri jaanib se ap sab ko shubh kaamnaaen aur dher saarii mubaarakbaad.....
Shaad....
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is pahal se ek baat to acchii huii ke logon me behar seekhne aa rujhaan aa raha hai aur yaqeenan ye bahut acchii pahal ho rahii hai....... meri jaanib se ap sab ko shubh kaamnaaen aur dher saarii mubaarakbaad.....
Shaad....
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Bilkul sahi kaha aapne shaad ye sach me bahut achchi pahal hai.. apki aur sabhi doston ki shukraguzar hoon ki vo isme poore dil se sath de rahe hain.....yoon ham sab ek sath ise aage badate rahenge yahi ummeed hai.....meri taraf se bhi sabhi ko shubhkamnayein.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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17th June 2015, 11:17 PM
Shaad bhai aapki baat se itefaaq rakhta hoon, yun to yeh mehfil behad shaandaar thi lekin pichli do gazlon mein jab se takhti dekar likhne ki shuruaat huyi mashallah har ghazal bahut behtar ho rahi hai....
Sabhi doston se shaandar sher haazir kiye hai aur ismein ek adnaa si pehal kar raho hoon agle sher se...
Matla
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
1st sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain (Shaad)
3rd sher
Wo taare jin ko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein
Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain (Masti)
4th sher
wahi par aake baitha hoon jaha guzri thi sab shaamein
meri ulfat ke yeh goshe* mujhe ab bhi sataate hai (Mast)
*corner/privacy
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Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
1st sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain (Shaad)
3rd sher
Wo taare jin ko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein
Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain (Masti)
4th sher
wahi par aake baitha hoon jaha guzri thi sab shaamein
meri ulfat ke yeh goshe* mujhe ab bhi sataate hai (Mast)
*corner/privacy
5th sher
ke jab bhii yaad me terii hue hain mubtilaa jaanaa,
to tasweeron ko terii jaane jaaN dil se lagaate hain. (Shaad)
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Matla
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
1st sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain (Shaad)
3rd sher
Wo taare jin ko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein
Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain (Masti)
4th sher
wahi par aake baitha hoon jaha guzri thi sab shaamein
meri ulfat ke yeh goshe* mujhe ab bhi sataate hai (Mast)
*corner/privacy
5th sher
ke jab bhii yaad me terii hue hain mubtilaa jaanaa,
to tasweeron ko terii jaane jaaN dil se lagaate hain. (Shaad)
6th sher
jo dete the su.koon mujh ko kabhi aaghosh mein tere
vo lamhe ab mujhe aksar judaaii mein rulaate hain
(Sunita Virender)
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th June 2015, 11:33 PM
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Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
1st sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain (Shaad)
3rd sher
Wo taare jin ko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein
Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain (Masti)
4th sher
wahi par aake baitha hoon jaha guzri thi sab shaamein
meri ulfat ke yeh goshe* mujhe ab bhi sataate hain (Mast)
*corner/privacy
5th sher
ke jab bhii yaad me terii hue hain mubtilaa jaanaa,
to tasweeron ko terii jaane jaaN dil se lagaate hain (Shaad)
6th sher
jo dete the su.koon mujh ko kabhi aaghosh mein tere
vo lamhe ab mujhe aksar judaaii mein rulaate hain (Sunita Virender)
7th sher
jo honthon par nahin aayi vo apni hi kahaani thi
tha dil kis baat par toota yeh qissa hum bataate hain (Mast)
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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18th June 2015, 11:44 PM
Waah..bahut khoob doston ek se badhkar ek sher huye hain..lijiye akhiri chhoti si koshish meri taraf se...
Matla
Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain
Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu)
1st sher
Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa
Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti)
2nd sher
likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe,
guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain (Shaad)
3rd sher
Wo taare jin ko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein
Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain (Masti)
4th sher
wahi par aake baitha hoon jaha guzri thi sab shaamein
meri ulfat ke yeh goshe* mujhe ab bhi sataate hain (Mast)
*corner/privacy
5th sher
ke jab bhii yaad me terii hue hain mubtilaa jaanaa,
to tasweeron ko terii jaane jaaN dil se lagaate hain (Shaad)
6th sher
jo dete the su.koon mujh ko kabhi aaghosh mein tere
vo lamhe ab mujhe aksar judaaii mein rulaate hain(Sunita Virender)
7th sher
jo honthon par nahin aayi vo apni hi kahaani thi
tha dil kis baat par toota yeh qissa hum bataate hain (Mast)
8th sher
Muhabbat ke tarano si jo in kano me ghulti thi
Na Vo barish he hoti hai na ab badal darate hain(madhu)
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19th June 2015, 10:39 AM
6th sher
jo dete the su.koon mujh ko kabhi aaghosh mein tere
vo lamhe ab mujhe aksar judaaii mein rulaate hain (Sunita Virender)
7th sher
jo honthon par nahin aayi vo apni hi kahaani thi
tha dil kis baat par toota yeh qissa hum bataate hain (Mast)
8th sher
Muhabbat ke tarano si jo in kano me ghulti thi
Na Vo barish he hoti hai na ab badal darate hain(madhu)
khoob se khoob sher kahe hain aap sab ne.. aur behad haseen ghazal huii hai is baar... sabhii members ko tahe dil se mubaarakbaad.......
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19th June 2015, 10:56 AM
Bahut shukriya shaad...aapke sath ke bagair ye mumkin nahi hota.....aage bhi aapka sath har kadam milta rahega aur bazm ki raunak barkaraar rahegi yahi ummeed hai.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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22nd June 2015, 05:53 PM
Shaad bhai mehfil ko aapke matle ka intezaar haiN, tadap rahe hai ki agli ghazal bane, zara dil ki jaanib halat ko sukoon dijiyee
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22nd June 2015, 06:58 PM
Mast saahab ke huqum ki tameel karte hue bazm ko ek sher nazar kar rahaa hoon..... aap sab se guzaarish hai ke is silsile ko aage badhaaya jaae.....
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raat bhar khaamoshiyon se guftagoo karte rahe,
ham charaaGon ki tarah chup chaap se jalte rahe.
Shaad....
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22nd June 2015, 09:21 PM
ek koshish...
Hum bewajah udaasee meiN aankheiN malte rahe
raat ki aagosh meiN saaye humeiN nigalte rahe. (hamdam)
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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23rd June 2015, 12:52 PM
waah bahut khoob matla diya hai shaad ji...isi par aage ek adna si koshish hai meri bhi...agar kuch kami ho to zaroor batayein..
Matla:
raat bhar khaamoshiyon se guftagoo karte rahe,
ham charaaGon ki tarah chup chaap se jalte rahe.(shaad)
1 sher
Hum bewajah udaasee meiN aankheiN malte rahe
raat ki aagosh meiN saaye humeiN nigalte rahe. (hamdam)
2 sher
har subah laayii umeedoN se bhara ek din magar.
Naa khabar lii yaar ne ham shaam ban dhalte rahe.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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23rd June 2015, 01:26 PM
acchaa sher huaa madhu ji aur sanjay ji........ behad mubarakbaad
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23rd June 2015, 02:13 PM
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acchaa sher huaa madhu ji aur sanjay ji........ behad mubarakbaad
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Shukriya shaad ji................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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23rd June 2015, 02:16 PM
wah shaad ji kya matlaa hai aur kya khoob nibhaya hai sanjay ji aur maudhu aapne
Jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain beher ki bohut kam samajh hai mujhe phir bhi koshish kar rahi hun galti ho to durust kijiyega bezhizhak.
Matla:
raat bhar khaamoshiyon se guftagoo karte rahe,
ham charaaGon ki tarah chup chaap se jalte rahe.(shaad)
1 sher
Hum bewajah udaasee meiN aankheiN malte rahe
raat ki aagosh meiN saaye humeiN nigalte rahe. (hamdam)
2 sher
har subah laayii umeedoN se bhara ek din magar.
Naa khabar lii yaar ne ham shaam ban dhalte rahe.(madhu)
3 sher
haath jo tuune meraa thaama nahi aye hamsafar
zulmaton ki raah par hum be jhijhak chalte rahe
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3 sher
haath jo tuune meraa thaama nahi aye hamsafar
zulmaton ki raah par hum be jhijhak chalte rahe
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waaahhhhhh kyaa baat hai..... lafz zulmaton ne to bas qahar hi Dhaa diyaa hai
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23rd June 2015, 11:53 PM
Matla
raat bhar khaamoshiyon se guftagoo karte rahe,
ham charaaGon ki tarah chup chaap se jalte rahe (Shaad)
1st sher
Hum bewajah udaasee meiN aankheiN malte rahe
raat ki aagosh meiN saaye humeiN nigalte rahe (Hamdam)
2nd sher
har subah laayii umeedoN se bhara ek din magar.
Naa khabar lii yaar ne ham shaam ban dhalte rahe (Madhu)
3rd sher
haath jo tuune meraa thaama nahi aye hamsafar
zulmaton ki raah par hum be jhijhak chalte rahe (Masti)
4th sher
aatishon se udh rahe the khwaab mere raat bhar
hasraton ki justjuu mein girte sambhalte rahe (Mast)
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24th June 2015, 08:41 AM
waaaahhhh..sarika aur anu ji...bahut khoob sher pesh kiye hain aap dono ne..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Matla
raat bhar khaamoshiyon se guftagoo karte rahe,
ham charaaGon ki tarah chup chaap se jalte rahe (Shaad)
1st sher
Hum bewajah udaasee meiN aankheiN malte rahe
raat ki aagosh meiN saaye humeiN nigalte rahe (Hamdam)
2nd sher
har subah laayii umeedoN se bhara ek din magar.
Naa khabar lii yaar ne ham shaam ban dhalte rahe (Madhu)
3rd sher
haath jo tuune meraa thaama nahi aye hamsafar
zulmaton ki raah par hum be jhijhak chalte rahe (Masti)
4th sher
aatishon se udh rahe the khwaab mere raat bhar
hasraton ki justjuu mein khwaab hi palte rahe (Mast)
5th sher
ManzileiN to paas thiiN aur walwala bhi Thaa magar
Yaar ki khaatir he aksar raaheiN badalte rahe
Sagar Aashna
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24th June 2015, 01:44 PM
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waaahhhhhh kyaa baat hai..... lafz zulmaton ne to bas qahar hi Dhaa diyaa hai
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waaaahhhh..sarika aur anu ji...bahut khoob sher pesh kiye hain aap dono ne..
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Shukriya aap dono ka. khushi hui aapko koshish pasand aayi.
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aatishon se udh rahe the khwaab mere raat bhar
hasraton ki justjuu mein girte sambhalte rahe (Mast)
5th sher
ManzileiN to paas thiiN aur walwala bhi Thaa magar
Yaar ki khaatir he aksar raaheiN badalte rahe (sagar aashna)
bahut khoob sher hue hain bazm me mast sahab aur Sagar saahab........... bahut si daad pesh hain aapko....
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24th June 2015, 03:27 PM
mast and saagar ji bohut khoob.........................
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24th June 2015, 03:32 PM
Waaahhh...Sagar sahab bahut khoob sher hua hai..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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