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29th September 2006, 12:23 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
[B]chaliye main nayi gazal ka aagaz muni shree ki is kavita se karta hoo.n 1st sher jindgi jane ko thi humne mout ko bula liya kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya 2nd share tumse bichad ke hum duniya bhi choor aaye, hum se yeh dard-e-judai saha na gaya.... -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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29th September 2006, 12:29 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sunita virender
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waise to tune hame kabka begana kar diya tere pyar ko begana mujhse kiya na gaya.... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th September 2006, 12:33 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sunita virender
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mahobbat to humare diil me bhi thhi, barson purani magar ab tak unse izhar-e-mahobbat kiya na gaya.. graze aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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29th September 2006, 12:38 PM
1st sher
jindgi jane ko thi humne mout ko bula liya kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya 2nd share tumse bichad ke hum duniya bhi choor aaye, hum se yeh dard-e-judai saha na gaya.... -sunita virender 3rd sher mahobbat to humare diil me bhi thhi, barson purani magar ab tak unse izhar-e-mahobbat kiya na gaya.. 'pooja' 4th share na jane kitne janmo se chhahta hoon tujhe, tere inkaar ke dar se ab tak kaha na gaya...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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29th September 2006, 12:40 PM
he bhagwan dekh le aaj tere is bande ke sath ho kya raha hai....
jo bhi aata hai mere sher ko bhich main goal karke apna sher kah seta hai........... he bhagwan tu sun raha hai na yahan se fir mera sher bhich main hi goal kar diya...... thahro tum log main batata hu,.n sabko..... chalo likho mera sher yahan. " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th September 2006, 01:48 PM
pata nahi ye kaunse number ka sher hai big B aap adjust kar dijiyega
sehta raha hamesha dard ko main uske, par ab mujhse is dard ko saha na gaya --dhaval-- |
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 next sher Iss beraham duniya ne mujhe unse jooda kar to diya, magar Chali ai mein unke paas, unse door raha na gaya… graze aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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29th September 2006, 02:12 PM
1st sher
jindgi jane ko thi humne mout ko bula liya kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya dilip 2nd share tumse bichad ke hum duniya bhi choor aaye, hum se yeh dard-e-judai saha na gaya.... -sunita virender 3rd sher waise to tune hame kabka begana kar diya tere pyar ko begana mujhse kiya na gaya.... dilip 4rd sher mahobbat to humare diil me bhi thhi, barson purani magar ab tak unse izhar-e-mahobbat kiya na gaya.. 'pooja' 5th share na jane kitne janmo se chhahta hoon tujhe, tere inkaar ke dar se ab tak kaha na gaya...... 'veer' 6th sher sehta raha hamesha dard ko main uske, par ab mujhse is dard ko saha na gaya --dhaval-- 7th sher Iss beraham duniya ne mujhe unse jooda kar to diya, magar Chali ai mein unke paas, unse door raha na gaya… pooja gustakhi maaf ji............mere chhote se dimmag me itna bada confusen samata nahi hai isi liye ye gustakhi ki hai graze aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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29th September 2006, 08:03 PM
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Kyu narazagi rahahti hai unko humse har pal, Dekh unki berukhi ashq giraye bin raha na gaya…. graze aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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2nd October 2006, 04:04 PM
gum ho gaye sab................kahan ho bhai..................naye kalaam ki shuruvat kariye koi to.................are koi to ho............mera kaam thha aap sab ko iske bare me yaad dilane ka..........ab shuru bhi karo yaar
grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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3rd October 2006, 05:50 PM
gustakhi maaf. mein hi naye kalaam ki shuruvat kar rahi hu ji.
1st sher na khel mere iss toote dil se ei zallim iss kadar, dil kaanch ka tukra hai, zakham tu bhi khayega... ummid hai aap sab isse mukkammal anjaam tak pahonchane me mera saath denge. grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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3rd October 2006, 05:58 PM
1st sher
na khel mere iss toote dil se ei zallim iss kadar, dil kaanch ka tukra hai, zakham tu bhi khayega... 'pooja' wah pooooooja kaya baat hai....really nice starting...... 2nd share main bhe jinda hoon mera bhe dil dharkta hai, karke mera qatal tu kaise begunah kehlayega...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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3rd sher haath me pat''thar leke mara usne mere iss dil pe, zakhm deke kahata hai, ab vo marham lagayega... grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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4th October 2006, 08:39 AM
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karke bewafai tu bhi wafa ki ummid mat rakhna lekar seene main nafrat tu pyar kaise payega... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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4th October 2006, 09:41 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
[B]4th sher karke bewafai tu bhi wafa ki ummid mat rakhna lekar seene main nafrat tu pyar kaise payega... dilip 5th share rahey waffa mai.n humsafar hu mai teri, chorr kar mujhe tu manzil kaise payega.. -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th October 2006, 10:10 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
[B]4th sher karke bewafai tu bhi wafa ki ummid mat rakhna lekar seene main nafrat tu pyar kaise payega... dilip 5th share rahey waffa mai.n humsafar hu mai teri, chorr kar mujhe tu manzil kaise payega.. -sunita virender ------------ Sunita Virender Singh eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh, hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......... 6th sher rahengi tuhi hamesha jindgi ki manzil meri. ye dil tere har us lamhe ko apna banayega......... --dhaval-- |
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4th October 2006, 10:43 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
[B][QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200 [B]4th sher karke bewafai tu bhi wafa ki ummid mat rakhna lekar seene main nafrat tu pyar kaise payega... dilip 5th share rahey waffa mai.n humsafar hu mai teri, chorr kar mujhe tu manzil kaise payega.. -sunita virender ------------ Sunita Virender Singh eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh, hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......... 6th sher rahengi tuhi hamesha jindgi ki manzil meri. ye dil tere har us lamhe ko apna banayega......... --dhaval-- 7th share barso tera intjaar mai.n bethi rahi palke bichye par aaj suna hai ki tu to kabhi lout ke na aayega... -sunita virender -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th October 2006, 11:06 AM
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barso tera intjaar mai.n bethi rahi palke bichye par aaj suna hai ki tu to kabhi lout ke na aayega... -sunita virender 8th share tum bass gai ho is qadar meri sanso main, tere bina tera yeh mureed ab na jee payega..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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5th October 2006, 09:41 AM
raj ji naye shuruyaat kijiye na.............!
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th October 2006, 10:31 AM
dosto sunita ji ke kehne par nai shuruwaat karne ja raha hoon umeed hai appka saath milega....
1st share mera dam mere yaaro ke naam nikle, sakki tere haatho mera aakhri jaam nikle...... 'veer' is me kafiya hai....naam....jaam.....inaam.....badnaam....salaa m.....gumnaam......or isme nikle jo hai wo radeef hai......ab app apne pyare se ehsaas likhae........raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]dosto sunita ji ke kehne par nai shuruwaat karne ja raha hoon umeed hai appka saath milega.... 1st share mera dam mere yaaro ke naam nikle, sakki tere haatho mera aakhri jaam nikle...... 'veer' 2nd sher kar raha hoo.n kab se intzaar tere jawab ka ab koi khat teri mohabbat ka paigam nikle.... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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5th October 2006, 11:09 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
[B][QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer [B]dosto sunita ji ke kehne par nai shuruwaat karne ja raha hoon umeed hai appka saath milega.... 1st share mera dam mere yaaro ke naam nikle, sakki tere haatho mera aakhri jaam nikle...... 'veer' 2nd sher kar raha hoo.n kab se intzaar tere jawab ka ab koi khat teri mohabbat ka paigam nikle.... dilip 3rd share meri gali aaye dil mai chahat chupaye huey, aur, juki ankho se karke salaam nikle.......... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th October 2006, 11:16 AM
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mera dam mere yaaro ke naam nikle, sakki tere haatho mera aakhri jaam nikle...... 'veer' 2nd sher kar raha hoo.n kab se intzaar tere jawab ka ab koi khat teri mohabbat ka paigam nikle.... dilip 3rd share meri gali aaye dil mai chahat chupaye huey, aur, juki ankho se karke salaam nikle.......... -sunita virender ------------ Sunita Virender Singh eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh, hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......... --4th sher--- dil ki ye chahat sirf uske hi liye hai meri, akhri saans me hotho pe usika naam nilkle... --dhaval--- |
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ab zuda nahi raha sakti, aye khuda! kuch aisa kar, ke fir meri uske saath har subha har shaam nikle.. grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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mera dam mere yaaro ke naam nikle, sakki tere haatho mera aakhri jaam nikle...... 'veer' 2nd sher kar raha hoo.n kab se intzaar tere jawab ka ab koi khat teri mohabbat ka paigam nikle.... dilip 3rd share meri gali aaye dil mai chahat chupaye huey, aur, juki ankho se karke salaam nikle.......... -sunita virender --4th sher--- dil ki ye chahat sirf uske hi liye hai meri, akhri saans me hotho pe usika naam nilkle... --dhaval--- 5th sher ab zuda nahi raha sakti, aye khuda! kuch aisa kar, ke fir meri uske saath har subha har shaam nikle.. -pooja 6th sher hai dosti wo nmat khuda ki jo her kisi ko naseeb nahi mere khuda ye jindgi meri mere dosto.n ke naam nikle dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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hai dosti wo nmat khuda ki jo her kisi ko naseeb nahi mere khuda ye jindgi meri mere dosto.n ke naam nikle dilip 7th share ajj ke daur main har koi hai rawan yaha.n, insaniyat ki khatir koi to lakshman ya raam nikle..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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5th October 2006, 08:53 PM
naya kalaam shuru kar rahi hu.................gustakhi maaff.
1st sher logo ne saza ke naam pe mere dil pe waar kiya, vo to paraye thhe, mujhe apno ne badnaam kiya.. grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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kho gaya pyar mera is duniya ki bheed mian kahi.n humne bhi ab khudko veerani main gumnam kiya.... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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3rd sher mein ban gai jalata hua diiya uski mahobbat me, khuda ne use hawaa banake mere naam kiya... grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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6th October 2006, 04:49 PM
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mein ban gai jalata hua diiya uski mahobbat me, khuda ne use hawaa banake mere naam kiya... 'pooja' wah pooja bhut khub kaya baat hai..... 4th share kaya khabar teri bewafai ka gham aakhri ho, yehi soach kar humne uska bhe ehtraam kiya..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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6th October 2006, 04:56 PM
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mein ban gai jalata hua diiya uski mahobbat me, khuda ne use hawaa banake mere naam kiya... 'pooja' wah pooja bhut khub kaya baat hai..... 4th share kaya khabar teri bewafai ka gham aakhri ho, yehi soach kar humne uska bhe ehtraam kiya..... 'veer' ------------ khaab neendo ki dehleez par aakar laut jate hai, teri tarha yeh bhee mujhko aazmate hai......'veer' 5th sher Is dil me chhupaye firte hai ab unhe hum to, pyaar ko mere apnake unhone bada ehsaan kiya.... --dhaval-- |
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6th October 2006, 05:15 PM
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mein ban gai jalata hua diiya uski mahobbat me, khuda ne use hawaa banake mere naam kiya... 'pooja' 4th share kaya khabar teri bewafai ka gham aakhri ho, yehi soach kar humne uska bhe ehtraam kiya..... 'veer' 5th sher Is dil me chhupaye firte hai ab unhe hum to, pyaar ko mere apnake unhone bada ehsaan kiya.... --dhaval-- 6th sher Tamaam shab hum to unki bate.n hi sochte rahe, Subah dam se humne fir unka intzar tamam kiya dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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6th October 2006, 08:19 PM
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Tamaam shab hum to unki bate.n hi sochte rahe, Subah dam se humne fir unka intzar tamam kiya dilip [/B][/QUOTE] 7th sher mahobbat ki hai, jiski saza to mujhe milni hi thhi, uski yaadon ne khatam mujhe har shaam kiya.. grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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7th October 2006, 05:47 PM
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mahobbat ki hai, jiski saza to mujhe milni hi thhi, uski yaadon ne khatam mujhe har shaam kiya.. grazie aapki dost pooja [/B][/QUOTE] unhe to koi fikar hi nahi hai tumhari o "dilip" jinke liye tumne apna hi kaam tamam kiya dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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11th October 2006, 12:34 PM
ye aap sabki yaad-dasht kamzor nahi ho gai, ho gai hai haan ji kisi ko kuch yaad hi nahi hota ki humne ek new page bhi banaya thha shayri ke liye. iss nanhi si jaan ko hi sab yaad rakhna parta hai.
anyways mein naye kalaam ki shuruaat kar rahi hu. jagjiit ji ki ek gazal se kar rahi hu. to arz kiya hai, meine nahi jagjiit ji ne, 1st sher tum itna jo muskura rahe ho, kya gum hai jisko chhupa rahe ho.. ummid hai aap iss shuruat ko ant tak pahunchayenge. ok ji grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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18th October 2006, 04:31 PM
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tum itna jo muskura rahe ho, kya gum hai jisko chhupa rahe ho.. 2nd share apna pyar dekar kuad hi gairo ko, ab kyu udhas huey ja rahe ho.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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apna pyar dekar kuad hi gairo ko, ab kyu udhas huey ja rahe ho.... -sunita virender 3rd share jab se paya hai tumhe jeene ka sabab, meri sanso main samate ja rahe ho.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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18th October 2006, 04:43 PM
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pehle basate ho dil me mujhey apne aur ab khud hi dil ko jala rahe ho.... --dhaval-- |
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