tere sath hi shahar ki gali badalane ko hai..New Version -
14th October 2014, 03:03 PM
Dosto maine es rachana ko pahale likha tha.. aur punah esmein kuchh sansodhan kiye hain.. pesh ker raha hu aapki khatir..aasha hai naya vergion aapko pasand aaye.. apane vicharo se awagat karaieyega..
num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai
mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai
murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai
mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai
tinke-tinke jamaaye Thea teri chaahat ke jo
berf vahi.... prem ki ab pighalane ko hai
yea pal jo meri jindagi se ab chalane ko hai
lagta hai dil ki dhaDkan ab Thaharne ko hai
na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye saanse meri
tere saath hi... shahar ki gali badalne ko hai..
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
Dosto maine es rachana ko pahale likha tha.. aur punah esmein kuchh sansodhan kiye hain.. pesh ker raha hu aapki khatir..aasha hai naya vergion aapko pasand aaye.. apane vicharo se awagat karaieyega..
num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai
mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai
murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai
mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai
tinke-tinke jamaaye Thea teri chaahat ke jo
berf vahi.... prem ki ab pighalane ko hai
yea pal jo meri jindagi se ab chalane ko hai
lagta hai dil ki dhaDkan ab Thaharne ko hai
na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye saanse meri
tere saath hi... shahar ki gali badalne ko hai..
Akant...
.........Bahut khoob akant ji.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
Dosto maine es rachana ko pahale likha tha.. aur punah esmein kuchh sansodhan kiye hain.. pesh ker raha hu aapki khatir..aasha hai naya vergion aapko pasand aaye.. apane vicharo se awagat karaieyega..
num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai
mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai
murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai
mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai
tinke-tinke jamaaye Thea teri chaahat ke jo
berf vahi.... prem ki ab pighalane ko hai
yea pal jo meri jindagi se ab chalane ko hai
lagta hai dil ki dhaDkan ab Thaharne ko hai
na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye saanse meri
tere saath hi... shahar ki gali badalne ko hai..
Akant...
Akant ji, hame aapki gazal ka nya version bhi bahut pasand aaya.
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...