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tere sath hi shahar ki gali badalane ko hai..New Version - 14th October 2014, 03:03 PM

Dosto maine es rachana ko pahale likha tha.. aur punah esmein kuchh sansodhan kiye hain.. pesh ker raha hu aapki khatir..aasha hai naya vergion aapko pasand aaye.. apane vicharo se awagat karaieyega..


num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai
mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai

murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai
mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai


tinke-tinke jamaaye Thea teri chaahat ke jo
berf vahi.... prem ki ab pighalane ko hai

yea pal jo meri jindagi se ab chalane ko hai
lagta hai dil ki dhaDkan ab Thaharne ko hai


na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye saanse meri
tere saath hi... shahar ki gali badalne ko hai..


Akant...


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14th October 2014, 03:19 PM

kya bbaat hai waaahhhhhhhhhhh..... bahot khoob

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14th October 2014, 08:19 PM

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Dosto maine es rachana ko pahale likha tha.. aur punah esmein kuchh sansodhan kiye hain.. pesh ker raha hu aapki khatir..aasha hai naya vergion aapko pasand aaye.. apane vicharo se awagat karaieyega..


num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai
mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai

murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai
mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai


tinke-tinke jamaaye Thea teri chaahat ke jo
berf vahi.... prem ki ab pighalane ko hai

yea pal jo meri jindagi se ab chalane ko hai
lagta hai dil ki dhaDkan ab Thaharne ko hai


na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye saanse meri
tere saath hi... shahar ki gali badalne ko hai..


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14th October 2014, 09:27 PM

bahut achhe se bandhaa hai har ashaar ko achaa laga padh ke


mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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14th October 2014, 10:49 PM

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Dosto maine es rachana ko pahale likha tha.. aur punah esmein kuchh sansodhan kiye hain.. pesh ker raha hu aapki khatir..aasha hai naya vergion aapko pasand aaye.. apane vicharo se awagat karaieyega..


num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai
mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai

murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai
mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai


tinke-tinke jamaaye Thea teri chaahat ke jo
berf vahi.... prem ki ab pighalane ko hai

yea pal jo meri jindagi se ab chalane ko hai
lagta hai dil ki dhaDkan ab Thaharne ko hai


na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye saanse meri
tere saath hi... shahar ki gali badalne ko hai..


Akant...


Akant ji, hame aapki gazal ka nya version bhi bahut pasand aaya.

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14th October 2014, 11:12 PM

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kya bbaat hai waaahhhhhhhhhhh..... bahot khoob

Shaad....
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Dhanyvaad aapka.. jo aapne ese pasand fermaya aur apane kimati shabdo se mujhe avgat keraya.. dil se dhanyvaad..

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thanks - 15th October 2014, 01:59 PM

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Dear madhu ji,

rachana ko pasand kerne tatha apane kimati bhavo ko share kerne ke liye aapka bahut bahut dhanyvaad...

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