TeRaA DiL MeRaA GhAr HaI.............!! -
13th November 2005, 08:40 AM
jab jab janeman tumhe mera khyaal ayega
zindagi pay tumhe tab behad pyaar ayega
chalte chalte jab waqt kuch thair sa jayega
muskurate hoton pe tere mera naam ayega
jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega
is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega
har subah jab sooraj khidkipe jagmagayega
uski kirno se tumhara man cham chamayega
raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega
teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega
kitna khoobsurat woh manzar nazar aayega
teraa yeh pyar ka ghar mera ghar kehlayega
mere yaar us khuda ka dil bhi machal jayega
jab meraa naam tere naam say judh jayega
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega
is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega
raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega
teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega
keep writing.....take care...bye...
An idea of being in love is better than actually falling in love........
Farhana ji aaj kal aap ishq vishq par likh rahi hai
jankar Behad acha laga
Aap ki shayri hamein bohat achi lagi
"Ek pyaara sa aashiya hum tum banayenge
Hum dono ki khushiyo se usko sajayenge
Saath rehenge milkar hum dono
Mohabbat ki hum ek nayi duniya basayenge...."
hmm diggaj...kaise ho dear?
mujhe khushi hai jaanke ki tumhe mere shayr-o-shayri pasand arahi hai...hamesha dard pe likhti hoon isliye kuch ishq pe bhi likkh doon socha.....
aise hi aate rehna.
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
Hi Farzana you have Beautiful Written your part, i just tried to reply it in same form as you thought.
jab jab janeman tumhe mera khyaal ayega
zindagi pay tumhe tab behad pyaar ayega
chalte chalte jab waqt kuch thair sa jayega
muskurate hoton pe tere mera naam ayega
jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega
is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega
har subah jab sooraj khidkipe jagmagayega
uski kirno se tumhara man cham chamayega
raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega
teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega
kitna khoobsurat woh manzar nazar aayega
teraa yeh pyar ka ghar mera ghar kehlayega
mere yaar us khuda ka dil bhi machal jayega
jab meraa naam tere naam say judh jayega
Teri Nigaho Mein Meri Tasveer Nazar Ayegi
Tanha Mann Aiyene Mein Dekh Tu Muskuraigi
Baho Mein Bhar Lene Ki Kasis Tujhe Tadpayegi
Teri Ye Reshmi Zulfe Jab Jab Lahrayegi
Is Dewane Ka Mann Machle Ga Aur Tu Sharmaiyegi
Intezar Hai Mujhe Us Raat Ka Jab Tu Ayegi
Payal Ki Aur Chudiyo ki Khahanahat Se Mujhe Uthaygi
Agosh Mein Bhar Ke Tu Mujse Yeh Iltiza Karjayegi
Raha Nahi Jata Ab Tanha Kab Teri Dulhan Bun aongi
Tere Is Sune Ghar Ko Main Chand Taro Se Sajaongi
Mujhe Mere Babul Ka Mahel Acha Nahi lagta Chodaongi
Tere Saat Ji Virane Mein Kai Gul Khilaongi
Khuwab Kiya Haqeekat Mein Tu Mujhe Mil Jayegi
Aisa Rista Ho Ga Hamara Tumse Ki Yeh Duniya Jal Jayegi
Wafa Ki Kitabo Mein Apne Kisse Chapjayegi
Ithihas Ekk Bar Phir Hume Dekh Laila Majnu Kahjayegi
Waseem.
Kaisey Kahdey Ki Yeh Dil Deewana Nahi Hai
Tanha Hai Magar Awara Nahi Hai
hmmm hi there waseem....glad u liked my kalaam...aur haan tumne bhi bahaut accha likkha hai....
yuhin likhte raho aur meri post pe aate rehna...take care....byeeeeee
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
hello farha wonder ful -
15th November 2005, 09:27 PM
hi farha lovely tera dil mera ghar hai............... title hi khubsurat hai aur uske ghar ki cheeze bhi behat lovely hai toooooo gud lovely expressed ............... u have decorated his home in gud manner i think u r architecture of hearts any ways i feel gud by readin ur stuff ........ likte rehna aise hi ........ main padta rahunga waise hiiiiiiii ...
any ways bye for now ..
hello faiq...how r u doin...jaanke khushi horahi hai ki aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya aur aapne ise tareef ke kabil samjha...
yuhin aage bhi apni pasand napasand batate rehna..
take care
bye
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
Re: TeRaA DiL MeRaA GhAr HaI.............!! -
22nd November 2005, 05:35 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by farhana jab jab janeman tumhe mera khyaal ayega
zindagi pay tumhe tab behad pyaar ayega
chalte chalte jab waqt kuch thair sa jayega
muskurate hoton pe tere mera naam ayega
jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega
is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega
har subah jab sooraj khidkipe jagmagayega
uski kirno se tumhara man cham chamayega
raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega
teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega
kitna khoobsurat woh manzar nazar aayega
teraa yeh pyar ka ghar mera ghar kehlayega
mere yaar us khuda ka dil bhi machal jayega
jab meraa naam tere naam say judh jayega
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh......CUTO!!!!
really nicely written farhana....romantic!! aise hi likhti raho
hmmm for the first time i guess ur replying to my kalaamssss(not including the songs n stuff)
well i thot that may u dont like any but at last sumthing u liked dear...keep coming sweets...take care...bye
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
dear mandeep...tumhe apni post pe bahaut khushi horahi hai warna rarely tum nazar aati mere kalaamon pe....khair tum aayi jaanke khushi hui aur tareef bhi ki isse aur zyada khushi hui...aati rehna....
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."