Tumse bichde to mar jaenge hum
Kuch iss tarah to na marna hume.
Marne ke liye to teri judaai hi kafi hai,
Kabhi bewafai se na mar dena hume.
Wafa karne ka wada to hum bhi na kar paenge tumse
Magar yeh zaroor kehte hai bewafai na hogi humse ..
A DREAM IS A WISH YOUR HEART MAKES WHEN
YOU ARE ASLEEP......
your sher is good ...... -
17th October 2002, 09:02 PM
what u have written is very good i like it .....
Wafa karne ka wada to hum bhi na kar paenge tumse
Magar yeh zaroor kehte hai bewafai na hogi humse ..
wah wah wah wah wah
jitni bhi tariif kii jaye kam hain
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee