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22nd August 2015, 01:33 PM
Pichle mahine ki TPT mein iss ghazal ko aap logo ne bohut pyaar diya. iske liye shukrguzaar hu. isey yahaan share karne ki do wajah hain
Ek.... Main isey apne records mein save kar sakuun. aur dusri mujhe laga iski sahi jagah ishq mein hain. Ye Ghazal mere liye kuch khaas rahegi hamesha . Mohabbat ko hum aazmaane chalein hain Tumhe aaj apna banaane chale hain Jo ulfat mein li thi bohut baar humne Wo kasme wo waade nibhaane chale hain Bohut khoobsurat hai aanchal gulaabi Inhe taaro.n se hum sajaane chale hain Kahe chudiyon ki khanak humse jaanam Naya koi nagma sunaane chale hain Adhoore se lagte hai.n tujh bin meri jaa.n Angoothi mein heera jadaane chale hain Kathin hai bohut chaahaton ka safar ye Tumhe humsafar ab banaane chale hain Mohabbat ko hum aazmaane chalein hain..... Mohabbat ko hum aazmaane chalein hain.....  Sarika |
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22nd August 2015, 01:51 PM
Ahaaan kya baat kai.....sahi kaha aapne iski sahi jagah ishq me hee hai....aur kam se kam jinhone tpt me is pyari si ghazal ko nahi padha hoga unhe bhi ise padhne ka lutf hasil hoga.....maza aa gaya ek baar fir se padh ke.....
Share karne ka shukriya...... Khush raho aise hee pyare nagme likhti raho....... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th August 2015, 08:56 AM
Sarika ji namaste,
Behad khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne is khoosurat tasveer par....aur behad achha kiya jo aapne ise yaha share kiya...... Behad khoobsurati se sari bareekiyo ka dhyan rakha hai aapne.....aur sabse achhi bat ye rahi ki ehsasson me koi technicality nahi dikhi.....behad umdah.. Daad kubul farmaiyega Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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25th August 2015, 09:20 AM
kamaal ki peshkash hai sarika ji............
aapki is ghazal me koi jaadu hai.. jitni baar bhi padho... nayapan hi lagta hai..... bahut si daad pesh hain aapke is kalaam ke liye... likhtii rahen... shaad |
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25th August 2015, 09:50 AM
Sarika....tumhari yeh pyari si koshish hame bahut pasand aaye thi TPT par bhi...aur tumne esko Ishq fourm par share karke aur accha kiya taaki sabhi es ko pad saken jinhone TPT thread par haziri nahi di
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25th August 2015, 10:14 PM
bahut sundar ghazal pesh ki hai aapne sarika jee
likhti rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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26th August 2015, 05:50 AM
One of your best ghazals sarika ji...main to padhte hi samaj gayi thi competition me yahi ghazal jeetegi..
Sabhi ehsaas dil se aur ek dam sachche hain isme Dheron daad.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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26th August 2015, 07:40 AM
Bahut khoob Sarikaji. Padh ker maza aa gaya. Dheir sarii daad.
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26th August 2015, 02:50 PM
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Tum isi tarah aaker housla badhaati raho to main isi tarah likhne ki koshish karti rahungi. Sarika |
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26th August 2015, 02:52 PM
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Mera bhi yahi manna hai ki shayri mein sirf ehsaas jhalakne chahiye technicalities nahi. Sarika |
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26th August 2015, 02:54 PM
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Aapki tasweer hi itni manmohak hai ki apne aap hi kalam chalne lage. Sarika |
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26th August 2015, 02:56 PM
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aap isi tarah apna aashirwaad banaaye rakhen. bohut lagta hai jab aap mere kisi bhi likhe hue par apne vichaar rakhti hain. Sarika |
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26th August 2015, 10:40 PM
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26th August 2015, 10:45 PM
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Thank you Dear. Iske ache hone mein tumhara bhi haath hai. Tumse bohut kuch seekha hai maine. Sarika |
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26th August 2015, 10:47 PM
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