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17th November 2009, 07:34 PM
wow!!!.....thats very very sweet of you.....aapne mujhe beti kahaa mujhe behad accha laga.....
..waise aapko abhi pm kiya tha maine aur aapne mujhe 2 waade kiye hain...hope yaad hain aapko.......bhool mat jayiye...
..will be eagerly waiting for both of 'em.............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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17th November 2009, 07:38 PM
Ahaaaahhh great.....6 days without food..haaan paani to pee hi sakte hain warna dehydration ho jayega .......abse main apko guruji kahungi kyunki ap to mujhse bahut aage hai heeeee..... kyunnki mujhe lagta tha aise weird se kaam,bhukh hadtal sirf main hi karti hun....my bro always fight with me and say.....this isnt fair sis,,tu aise EBM karke apni saari baatein manwa leti hain aur sabko ghar mein ullu banati hain........... ...haan apne yeh nahin bataya aise bhukh hadtal kya aaj bhi karte hain...
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th November 2009, 07:48 PM
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bhaiya.........qawaali to bahut khoob sun.ne ko dii hai aapne....majja aa gaya sunkar
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th November 2009, 03:13 AM
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Danny Ji Aadaab,
Aap ka interview pa.Dha aur qaafi mutacir bhi hua. Magar mere yahaaN aane ka maqsad kudrat ke karishmon ke muttaliq hai. Aap ke likes and dislikes ke baare meiN pa.Dha to ais a laga jaise ki aap nahi balki maiN woh saari baateN keh raha huuN. Right from Tom and Jerry, to theology and theosophy, love for western and eastern classical to the kind of family orientation that you have bears an amazing similarity to my basic principles of life too. I sincerely wish you love and peace for all times and will leave you with a question, What is your full name and which part of the country do you originally hail from?
Ummiid hai ek naye sadasya ke sawal ka bura nahii maneNge.
Khush rahiye,
Aadaab
Shyam
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Namaste, Shyam Ji...! Once I read in a scientific magazine that there are at least 3 persons in the world who have the same or similar characteristics of each of us...! I am beginning to believe that this assertion has some truth in it...!
Ab dekhiye na, aap ka naam Shyam hai ( Jo KriShna ji ka ek naam hai ) aur hamara naam Kishore hai ( Unn ko Nandkishore bhi kehlaayaa jaata hai...!
Hamara puura naam Kishore Balraj Govinden hai...! Ghar main Papa, Bhaiyaa aur baDi Didi ke siwaa aur koyi hamein Kishore naam se bulaate nahin the, Chote bhai aur behenein hamein Tibhaiya pukaarte hein kyon ki hum 2nd brother hein...! Bhabhi hamein ' kis ' se sambhodit karti hai aur Mama ke pass hamare liye naamon ke bhandhaar tha, kabhi rajaa to kabhi baap, kabhi sona to kabhi laal, etc...!
Iss mulk main hamara naam lena mushkil tha unnke liye, Italian language main K, J, Y letters ka prayog bahut hi kam hota hai ya hota hi nahin ) so Govinden ko short kiya gayaa aur Danny ban gaye hum...!
I am from Mauritius Island, and was living at Rose-Belle...!
Aap khud ko naye sadasya na kahiyegaa...! Hum ne aap ke saare kalaam paDhe aur inn main bahut apnapan ka ehsaas hota hai humko...! Aap ke bhi naam hamare favourites ke list main hai...!
Interview par aane aur sawaal puuchne ke liye bahut dhanyavaad...! Kuch aur puuchna hai to don't hesitate, ok...?
Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th November 2009, 03:28 AM
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Ahaaaahhh great.....6 days without food..haaan paani to pee hi sakte hain warna dehydration ho jayega .......abse main apko guruji kahungi kyunki ap to mujhse bahut aage hai heeeee..... kyunnki mujhe lagta tha aise weird se kaam,bhukh hadtal sirf main hi karti hun....my bro always fight with me and say.....this isnt fair sis,,tu aise EBM karke apni saari baatein manwa leti hain aur sabko ghar mein ullu banati hain........... ...haan apne yeh nahin bataya aise bhukh hadtal kya aaj bhi karte hain...
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Hamare mehfil waale sochne lageinge ki hum donon Mahatma Gandhi ji ke followers hein...! Woh bhi to apne baat manwaane ke liye yahi option liya karte the na...!
Old habits are hard to die, Mausam behen...! Bhuuk hartaal to hota rehta hai magar sirf naraazgi main aur duration ko bhi kam kar diyaa humne ( minimum 3 din -- maximum 4 din ...! )
Aate rahiyegaa, khushi hoti hai...!
Apna khayaal rakhein
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th November 2009, 03:40 AM
sequel of first love's story
Finally my parents surrended and my insistency beared its fruits…! They asked me to invite ‘ S ‘ parents the week after…! On the family gathering it was decided that we could meet each other but with some restrictions…! More was to be decided on reaching legal age…! Time had no importance for me as long as I got free entry in her house…! And 3 times in a week ( in the evening ) I was in her company …!
A memorable event :
When ‘ Mera naam joker’ was released, one evening her family went to see the movie and earlier she had asked me to come too…! Uss shaam hamare jeb ( pockets ) khaali the, aur udaas bandar ki tarah khaDaa usse cinema theatre main jaate dekha ( she did not see me )…! Itne main Bhaiyaa wahaan se guzar rahe the, puuchne par hum ne sab haal bataaya…! Phir kyaa…? Bhaiya ne mere liye ticket khareed kar laaya aur 2 rupaiye haanth main thamaa diyaa tha aur mujhe upar se niiche dekhkar bole “ champal pehen ke jaaoge…?” ( I was wearing leather champal )
Ek ekant jagah main jaakar unhon ne apne jute aur moze ( socks ) nikaal kar mujhe pehnaaya aur kahaa “ Ab thik hai, tum jaa sakte ho…! “ Aur mere champal pehan kar we ghar chale gaye…!
I always have my sad clown ( a rag doll ) on my pillows and it usually reminds me of my Bhaiya and that event…! He was exceptional…!
Well, one day, without any expectation and reason, ' S ' stopped talking to me…! I asked a million times about the reason of her silence, but she never opened her mouth…! She didn’t even want to see me and I was in total desperation…! And this is when I started to write poetry ( mostly in English and French ) and also tons of letters to which she never replied…!
( More than loving her, I adored her and once I wrote a couplet while thinking of her :
Woh koyi patthar ki murat nahin thi
Unn ko pujaari ki zaroorat nahin thi… )
And my life gradually began to change…! I tried to find comfort in strong drinks etc and I became aggressive …! In short, I was ruining myself…! Then one of my friends told me that he wanted to learn hindi language and asked me to come with him…! ( He left the school a few weeks after. ) Another one was in a karate club and got me admitted there…! After about 1 ½ years I left Karate but continued with Hindi which I loved very much…! Thus, I began to write hindi poetry and one of my first poems was ‘ Tum Mujhe Samajh Nahin Paaogi…! ‘
Many years afterwards, I met ‘ S ’ and asked her about her misdeed and she replied that she doesn’t know what had happened to her…! At least I heard her beautiful voice once again and for a few moments I forgot that I was back home for last rituals of my beloved baDe Bhaiyaa…!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th November 2009, 04:15 AM
sequal hahahaha
bas itna kahunga .. har alfaaz ke emotion mai baha maiN.. aur zehan ke kone kone se dekh paaya ye tasweer
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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19th November 2009, 10:16 AM
Danny Jee
Namaskaar.....
Sabse pahele to aap ke Interview par der se aane ke liye maufi chahti hoon.....
Kaise hai aap??? Ummid karti hoon Khairiyat se honge.... Hummm to aap apna Interview enjoy kar rahe hai..... acchi baat hai
aap ke bare meiN itna jaan'kar bahot accha laga. aapne apne jeevan ke har ek pahelu se jaise hum ko wakif karwaya hai....
aap jaise dost milna sach meiN hamare liye khushi ki baat hai...
Ishwar se yahi prarthana ke woh aap ko aanewale saalo.N meiN dher saari khushiya aur sehat de
Duwao.N ke saath Izzazat
Aap ki Dost
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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20th November 2009, 07:05 PM
4.shayri parivaar me aapke pasandida shayer kaun kaun hain..
Vipin
Kshitij
Dheer
Zidd
Naadaan
Mayoos
Purvi
Hassan
Naresh
Sameer
Diya
Janumanu
Dhaval
Kunaal
Sunita
Mandy
Praneeta
Ajay Nidaan
Maham
Maikash
Lucky
Ps : not enlisted in preference order...!
I miss new poetries of :
Pulkit Gupta
Mayank
Mausam
Pooja
Dilip
Sakhi
Rajveeer
Zainy
Aarya
Koyi to ho
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st November 2009, 10:38 PM
Ist Birthday of my little Angel today...!
May God bless her...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st November 2009, 10:55 PM
5..In char saloN me shayri.com per aapne kya kya tabdeeliyaN mehsoos ki.
Tabdeeliyan zindagi ki har pehlu main hoti rehti hai aur aisa bhi houa Shayri.com par, bas itna kaheinge ki hamare moderators acchi tarah se apni apni zimmedariyan nibhaa rahe hein ( hats off to them ) aur anya sadasya se iltijaa hai ki we unn ka saath dete rahein…!
Shukriyaa
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st November 2009, 11:42 PM
Danny bhaiya:
Pranaam!
maiN bhee haaZir huuN apne kuch sawaaloN ke saath .. !
sab se pehle tou maiN aapko aapke bachpan ki aur School life kii yaadoN meiN waapis le jaanaa chaahuNgaa
1>> bachpan meiN aapki ko'ii aisi Sharaarat jisse aap aaj bhee yaad kar ke bahot haNSte hoN?
Bachpan aur School life ki yaadein hamein bahut azeez hein, Dhaval Bhaiya...!
To ek baar aisa houa tha jab mein 3 1/2 saal ka tha...! Meri Mama mujhe do cousins ke zimme chhoD kar BaDe Bhaiya ko school pahuunchaane gayi thi...! Mein kissi tarah unn donon se ankhein bachaa kar Mama aur Bhaiya ke peeche peeche jaa paDaa...! We jaldi jaldi chal rahe the aur mein kuch der ke baad raaste main bhatak gayaa...! ( Mujhe ghar se bhaagne ki aadat thi issi liye mere kamar main ek ghanTi baandhi gayi thi )
Jab donon dikhaayi nahin de rahe the to mein ek mithaai ke dukaan ke paas jaa khaDaa houa aur ek bheeD mere aaspaas jam gayi thi...! Log puuch rahe the ki ye kiss ka baccha hai aur yahaan akele kya kar raha hai...! Mithaaiyan ki aur saNket karne par mujhe do chaar mithaaiyan diya gaya aur mein chupchaap khaataa gayaa...!
Mama school se laut rahi thi to ussne bheeD dekhi aur kissi ne uss se kahaa ki na jaane kiss ka baccha hai wahaan par jo adh-naNga hai aur kamar main ghanTi bandhi houi hai...!
Maa jab mere paas aayi to mein haNskar unhein mithaayi dene lagaa thaa aur mithhayi na lekar Maa ne unn logon ke saamne nahin magar kuch door lejaa kar meri pitaayi ki aur ro paDi...!
Uss din ke baad woh jahaan bhi jaati thi mein unnke pallu pakDe saath saath tha...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st November 2009, 11:45 PM
Aap to mere jaise the,... hahahaha
khair aapki har baat dil ke kareeb lagti hai.. ye bhi kissa bohat touchy tha..
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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21st November 2009, 11:49 PM
aur aapki little angel ko meri taraf se bhi dheroN shubhkaamayeN...
Hum bhi agar bache hote ...
naam humara hota babblu dablu
aur khaane ko milte laddu..
to duniya kehti happy b'day to u
mera ashirwaad hai uske liye... bhagwaan har khushi nawaaze angel baby ko
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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22nd November 2009, 12:07 AM
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Originally Posted by KunaaL
Aap to mere jaise the,... hahahaha
khair aapki har baat dil ke kareeb lagti hai.. ye bhi kissa bohat touchy tha..
Kunaal
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Tumhaare tasveer dekh kar hi meine anumaan lagaaya tha ki tum bachpan main baDe hi naTkhaT the, Kunnu Bhaiyaa...!
Little Angel ( Eveline ) ko aashirvaad dene ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd November 2009, 01:19 AM
Darasal bat ye hai .. ki maiN bhi khoya hun bachpan mai .. aur ek bar nahi 2 3 baar.. aur nathkathi mai to hum ustaad rahe hai... koi soch na sake is had tak... aur khana na khane mai bhi hum record yafta hai .. kyuNki ye hathiyaar sabse accha hai ...
kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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22nd November 2009, 02:14 AM
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd November 2009, 02:05 PM
namaste bhaiya.....sabse phele to aapki little angle ke janamdin par hamari taraf se usko pyar aur duaeiN
aur haan bhaiya aapke last wale 3-4 post maine apni betiyoN ko padkar sunaye aur woh dono bahut hansi aapki sharateN padkar...muje bhi bahut hansi aaye....
lagta nahi ki aap aise hoNge....ab to aap bahut sanjeeda lagte haiN
regards
aapki chotti behan
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd November 2009, 03:41 PM
hi pooja
kese ho
bahut dino baad aay hu
kya kya likha he ji italian me
hum to sajhe nahi ji
ur lovind didi
shakun
abudhabi
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22nd November 2009, 03:52 PM
Danny Jee........
Aapki Little Angle Eveline ko humari taraf se bahut sari shubhkamnaye aur Pyaar........ Uski zindagii humesha KhushiyoN se bhari rahe... AameeN
Aapke bachpan ki yaaden padhker bahut hasiN aa rahi bachche sach mein kitne natkhat hote hai..... "Har bachpan kuch kehta hai".... Yeh ek nayi prerna bani hai aapki yaaden padhker kuch is title per shayari ho jaye......
Jeete rahiye...
khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
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22nd November 2009, 04:04 PM
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Darasal bat ye hai .. ki maiN bhi khoya hun bachpan mai .. aur ek bar nahi 2 3 baar.. aur nathkathi mai to hum ustaad rahe hai... koi soch na sake is had tak... aur khana na khane mai bhi hum record yafta hai .. kyuNki ye hathiyaar sabse accha hai ...
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Ye baat hai to hum tumhare interview paDhne ke liye besabr hein, Kunnu Bhaiyaa...!
Bhuuk hartaal ke addict ka ek group sthaapit karein to baat banegi...! 3 members are ready to join, I guess...! Mausam.tum aur hum...! Applications are most welcomed...!
Keep coming, khushi hoti hai tumhein yahaan dekh kar...!
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd November 2009, 04:13 PM
Shukriyaa, Choti Behan...!
Aapko aur apni bhaanjiyon ko humne thoDaa haNsaaya,so hum bahut khush houe...! Kabhi hamara motto tha ' HaNso aur haNsaao. ' I am glad to have put it in practice once more...!
Kuch aur ghaTnaaein sunaaeinge aap logon ko...!
Aashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd November 2009, 04:18 PM
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hi pooja
kese ho
bahut dino baad aay hu
kya kya likha he ji italian me
hum to sajhe nahi ji
ur lovind didi
shakun
abudhabi
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Namaste, Shakun Ji...!
Swaagat hai aapka iss interview thread par...!
On request of Pooja, page #19 par humne unnka Italian language main kiye gaye comments ka translation kiyaa hai...!
Aate rahiyegaa aur apna khayaal rakhein, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd November 2009, 04:29 PM
Ameen summa ameen...!
Shukriyaa, Sameer Ji...!
Aap ne bhi hamein bahut haNsaaya ( GTM wale Ghazal ki baat kar rahe hein ) You are exceptional...!
" Har bachpan kuch kehta hai "...! Idea jhakaas hai ji...! Iss shaayri ka bechaini se intazaar hai hamein...! Jaldi se likhkar submit kar dein, ok...?
Aur haan, aap ne kahaa tha ki aap ki English thoDaa kamzor hai, hai na...? Firstly, I don't believe it kyon ki aap iss bhaasha main acche likhte hein...! Secondly, jiss subject main aap khud ko kamzor samajhte hein, ussi par jyaada dhyaan denaa chahiye, ok...? So read and write some more in English...!
Apna khayaal theek se rakhein, ok...?
With blessing
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd November 2009, 04:46 PM
Daany jee........
Maine aapse us title per likhane ke liye kaha hai... Insha Allah main bhi koshish karunga per bachpan ki utni sari mitthi baaten mere zahen se dhul si gayi hai..... Is liye aapse guzarish ki hai ke aap hi kuch aisa likh dijiye...
Jee aapne thik farmaya.... Main english mein kamzor hun but I m improving my weekness in it...... so I think I ll much and more talk in english.... simply I wrote it but hardly I understand so It's my majore problem.....
Thanks for your suggestion.....
Keep smiling...... May God Bless you....
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22nd November 2009, 11:10 PM
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Danny bhaiya:
Pranaam!
maiN bhee haaZir huuN apne kuch sawaaloN ke saath .. !
sab se pehle tou maiN aapko aapke bachpan ki aur School life kii yaadoN meiN waapis le jaanaa chaahuNgaa
1>> bachpan meiN aapki ko'ii aisi Sharaarat jisse aap aaj bhee yaad kar ke bahot haNSte hoN?
Bachpan aur School life ki yaadein hamein bahut azeez hein, Dhaval Bhaiya...!
To ek baar aisa houa tha jab mein 3 1/2 saal ka tha...! Meri Mama mujhe do cousins ke zimme chhoD kar BaDe Bhaiya ko school pahuunchaane gayi thi...! Mein kissi tarah unn donon se ankhein bachaa kar Mama aur Bhaiya ke peeche peeche jaa paDaa...! We jaldi jaldi chal rahe the aur mein kuch der ke baad raaste main bhatak gayaa...! ( Mujhe ghar se bhaagne ki aadat thi issi liye mere kamar main ek ghanTi baandhi gayi thi )
Jab donon dikhaayi nahin de rahe the to mein ek mithaai ke dukaan ke paas jaa khaDaa houa aur ek bheeD mere aaspaas jam gayi thi...! Log puuch rahe the ki ye kiss ka baccha hai aur yahaan akele kya kar raha hai...! Mithaaiyan ki aur saNket karne par mujhe do chaar mithaaiyan diya gaya aur mein chupchaap khaataa gayaa...!
Mama school se laut rahi thi to ussne bheeD dekhi aur kissi ne uss se kahaa ki na jaane kiss ka baccha hai wahaan par jo adh-naNga hai aur kamar main ghanTi bandhi houi hai...!
Maa jab mere paas aayi to mein haNskar unhein mithaayi dene lagaa thaa aur mithhayi na lekar Maa ne unn logon ke saamne nahin magar kuch door lejaa kar meri pitaayi ki aur ro paDi...!
Uss din ke baad woh jahaan bhi jaati thi mein unnke pallu pakDe saath saath tha...!
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Hmm Jam ke miThaa'ii bhee Khaayii aur fir baad meN jam ke mummy jee ki maar bhee..
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22nd November 2009, 11:15 PM
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bhaiya sach meN bachpan ki wo maasoom sii yaadeN.. ChhoTi ChhoTi KhuShiyaaN .. SharaarateN.. dil meiN haMeShaa taazaah rehtii haii..! KhuShii hu'ii bahot hi!
Pranaam!
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23rd November 2009, 02:25 PM
3>> School life meiN aik aisa subject jo aapko bahot pasaNd thaa aur aik aisaa subject jo aapko bilkul bhee pasaNd nahiiN thaa? aur kyuuN pasaNd nahiiN thaa uski wajH bhee bataa'iiyengaa!
Hamein English language and literature bahut pasand the aur Maths bilkul acchi nahin lagti thi...! I did not like the art of combining numbers...! ( Shaayad isse liye humne kabhi beher main kuch likhaa hi nahin )Vajeh kuch khaas nahin tha, shaayad hamein Maths teacher pasand nahin tha...! We used to call him Mr Gorilla...!
4>> kyaa aapne kabhee School meN class BUNK kii haii? Gar haaN tou kaisaa mehsoos huaa thaa jab aapne pehli baar ko'ii Class BUNK ki ho to?
Haan, humne kayi baar class bunk kiyaa hai...! I loved acting in that period and with some friends, I used to go and recite in an old abandoned house nearby the school...! It was just so funny...!
5>> bachpan meiN aapne kisi cheez ko lene ke liye aap zid pe utar gaye hoN aur wo cheez haasil kar ke hi ShaaNt huye aap aisaa kabhee huaa haii kyaa ?
I was a spoiled child aur apne pasand ke cheez ko haasil karne ke liye koyi na koyi rastaa dhuunDh hi leta tha...! ( By hook or by crook ) Jo kuch mujhe pasand tha, wo mera tha...!
Chaliye, iss ke baare main ek aur kissa sunaa dete hein...! I always liked to be the class Captain, aur jo meri jagah leta tha, uss ka khair nahin...!
Once another classmate was promoted because of his good conduct ( I was the best student with worst conduct ) At the recreation, I asked him to fight with me, ( His name was Bahadur ).At the same time, Mama had come to give me my lunch...! Unn ke jaate hi, hum ne jhagraa karna shuuru kiya...! Bahadur ko maar kar, usse ek red ants hill par laa ghaseeTaa aur donon haathon se usske kanDhon ko badaaye rakhaa wahin par...! Jab cheetiyan usse kaaTne lagii, to woh itna zor se cheelaaya ki Maa bhi wahaan pahuunch gayi thi aur mujhe maar maar kar teacher ke paas le gayi...! For punishment, that day teacher made me kneel down on pebbles...!
After school, I invited Bahadur to fight again and we went in that old abandoned house...! That day my friends did not come with me, and I had to go there alone with his two friends...! I told them that I wanted to fight only with their chief...! Bahadur se jhagraa karte waqt, humne uss ke gale ko donon baahon main jakaD liya tha aur ek iron sheet par ragaDne lagaa, wo zor zor se chillaaya...! Uss ke donon dost peeche se aakar humein laat laat marne lage...! Phir kya...? Teenon se yudh karna hamare bas ki baat nahin thi aur hum rafoo chakkar ho liye...!
Shaam ko Bahadur hamare ghar aaya apni Maa aur chaachi ke saath...! Hamari taraf se meri Mama ne unnse maafi maanGi ...! Hum ghar se bhaag gaye the...!
Bahadur is now the owner of a restaurant and lastly when I went to my country, I met him there and we laughed a lot while talking about this event...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd November 2009, 02:50 PM
No 6:>> Shaa'iiiree Parivaar ke kaTh-Ghare meN faNS jaane ke baad kaisaa mehsoos kar rahe.n haii aap??
Well, at first, I was perplexed about what to write...! Phir Zainy Behan ke advice ne hamein bahut encouraged kiyaa...!
These are the words she wrote to me...!
aap bilkul pareshan na hoyiye,infact yahaan to sab apne hi hain, isi liye bejhijak likhiye, jo bhi aapko thhek lage, infact jitna zyada aap likhenge utni hi khushi hogi hum sab ko....try to write long replies........zyada se zyada bataiye apne baare me...
Thanks so much, Zainy Behan...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd November 2009, 09:55 PM
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No 6:>> Shaa'iiiree Parivaar ke kaTh-Ghare meN faNS jaane ke baad kaisaa mehsoos kar rahe.n haii aap??
Well, at first, I was perplexed about what to write...! Phir Zainy Behan ke advice ne hamein bahut encouraged kiyaa...!
These are the words she wrote to me...!
aap bilkul pareshan na hoyiye,infact yahaan to sab apne hi hain, isi liye bejhijak likhiye, jo bhi aapko thhek lage, infact jitna zyada aap likhenge utni hi khushi hogi hum sab ko....try to write long replies........zyada se zyada bataiye apne baare me...
Thanks so much, Zainy Behan...!
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Danny Jii,,,
Oper aap ne Zainy Jii ko beti banaya aur ab behan.................
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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23rd November 2009, 10:59 PM
bhaiya, accha lag raha hai aapke bare meiN jaan kar
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd November 2009, 11:08 PM
So what, Hassan Ji...?
Hamari nazron main rishte banaaye nahin jaate hein, bas khud-ba-khud ban jaate hein...! Hum jab kissi laDki aur mahilaa se dosti karte hein to woh Maa, Behan, Beti, BhaaNji aur Poti ( grand-daughter ) bhi ban sakti hai...! Respect is essential in every relationship...!
Iss typographical error ko aap hamein pm karke bhi bataa sakte the jaise hum kiyaa karte hein...! Kheir, koyi baat nahin...!
Waise, humein iss galti ka aabhaas tha, lekin kissi bhi moderator ko isse sudhaarne ko nahin kahaa tha...!
Ps...! Agar aap gaur se dekheinge, to Zainy Ji ki nayi shaayri " Tujhe Manaun Kaisey" par hum ne unnhein ' Bete ' kehkar bulaaya hai, iss ka matlab kya hogaa, bas aap hi ko iss par vichaar karne ko chhoD dete hein...!
Aate rahiyegaa aur apna khayaal bhi rakhein, ok...?
Shukriyaa
With sincere affection and blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd November 2009, 11:16 PM
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bhaiya, accha lag raha hai aapke bare meiN jaan kar
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Haan, Choti behan...!
Hamaare vajeh se jaane kitne logon ko pareshaani houi thi bachpan aur jawaani main...! Ye sab sochkar hum apne aap par sharmindaa hein...!
This interview thread is more like a confessional booth to me...!
Aate rahiyegaa aur theek se apna khayaal rakhiye, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
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23rd November 2009, 11:18 PM
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regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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24th November 2009, 12:49 AM
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th November 2009, 02:38 PM
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So what, Hassan Ji...?
Hamari nazron main rishte banaaye nahin jaate hein, bas khud-ba-khud ban jaate hein...! Hum jab kissi laDki aur mahilaa se dosti karte hein to woh Maa, Behan, Beti, BhaaNji aur Poti ( grand-daughter ) bhi ban sakti hai...! Respect is essential in every relationship...!
Iss typographical error ko aap hamein pm karke bhi bataa sakte the jaise hum kiyaa karte hein...! Kheir, koyi baat nahin...!
Waise, humein iss galti ka aabhaas tha, lekin kissi bhi moderator ko isse sudhaarne ko nahin kahaa tha...!
Ps...! Agar aap gaur se dekheinge, to Zainy Ji ki nayi shaayri " Tujhe Manaun Kaisey" par hum ne unnhein ' Bete ' kehkar bulaaya hai, iss ka matlab kya hogaa, bas aap hi ko iss par vichaar karne ko chhoD dete hein...!
Aate rahiyegaa aur apna khayaal bhi rakhein, ok...?
Shukriyaa
With sincere affection and blessings
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Muaafi ka talab-gaar hooN ,,
Mujhe yeh PM kar ke kehna chahiye tha....
Jii main ne Zainy Jii ki ghazal mein dekha aap ne unhieN beti bulaya..
Main ne pehle wohi ghazal read ki thi phir yahaN aaya aap ke interview
per to dekh kar heeraaN hua...is liye pooch liya...
Is qadar gustaakhi k liye muaafi chahta hooN.
Umeed hai aap ko bura nahi laga ho ga...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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24th November 2009, 04:22 PM
Hmmm Danny bhaiya bahot hi KhuShi hu'ii saaare jawaab paRh ke!
jai Shree kriShnaa!
aapka
~ Dhaval
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24th November 2009, 07:24 PM
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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Ok BOSS...............................
That's so nice of u...
DuaooN mein yaad rakhiye ga,,
Faqat,
HSN
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th November 2009, 02:57 AM
9>> "Shayri.com" ... kuch lafz...??
Yaha sawaal hamein bahut pasand hai , Dhaval Bhaiyaa…! Shayri.com ke liye kuch hi lafz kehnaa unn ke saath beimaani hogi…! Yaha ek Mandir, Maikhaana, Lateefaaon ka khazaana, Geeton ka khaan, Mauj-masti ka maidaan…kyaa kuch nahin hai hamaara Shayri.com…? It is a diamond of many facets…!
Above all, I like to think of this site as a stage ( ek raNg-manch ) where every artist presents their arts…! Aur meri ek secret tamanna hai ki apni kalaa ko yahaan par antim saNson tak pradarshit karta rahun…! A good artist dreams to die on his stage, isn’t…?
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