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Angry Mat thooko mere HINDUSTAAN pe - 11th September 2009, 09:02 PM


26/11 !!! What else

2-4 ****iyo ne ek Arab ki buniyaad hila di
Suraksha adhikariyon ki sadaksh aukaat dikha di
Unki vijay nahin ye hamare mantralay ki haar hai
Bakhuda humare rakhwale humse zyada lachaar hai

Laanat tumhari hasti tumhare namo-nishaan pe
Mat thooko siyasatdano mere Hindustaan pe


Swiss Accounts

Ek arab janta aur 100 arab ka humpar udhaar hai
In halaat mein vikas ki kaamna karna tak bekaar hai
1200 arab ka kaala dhan swiss bank ke khaato mein
Baant diya 31 tukdo ko bhi hazaro.n lakhon bhago mein

Laanat tumhari hasti tumhare namo-nishaan pe
Mat thooko siyasatdano mere Hindustaan pe


Recently 70 people fell sick and some even died after eating the food from a Pantry car in a train and they werent provided treatment for 18 hours

Sarkaari khana khake insaan mar raha aaj hai
Meri Ayodhya mein Ram nahin Ravan Raj hai
Surkh Ambar Surkh Dhara aankh magar nam hai
Waah ri kismat Maa ki chaati mein bhi dhoodh kam hai


Laanat tumhari hasti tumhare namo-nishaan pe
Mat thooko siyasatdano mere Hindustaan pe


After the recent deaths in a school in delhi, 1 lakh given to each the family where a child died and 50 thousand to every injured child (all victims were girls of class 7th, 10th or 12th)

Bachho ki Zindagi ka mol bas ek lakh lagaya hai
Chipe dabe aakrosh ko, aaj, tumne jagaya hai
Hai fariyaad doston mat nikalo gussa apne bhaiyon par
Chalo barsayein laathiyan hum in kasaiyon par

Laanat tumhari hasti tumhare namo-nishaan pe
Mat thooko siyasatdano mere Hindustaan pe


Farmers commiting suicides after drought

Jaane mere watan ka ab kya hoga anjaam
Andho ke haathon mein sunpi hai humne apni lagaam
Kissan hi Bhookhe mar rahe hain Krishi pradhan desh mein
Siyaar ghoom rahe hain yahan, Rajnayik ke bhes mein

Laanat tumhari hasti tumhare namo-nishaan pe
Mat thooko siyasatdano mere Hindustaan pe


To all my country men

Haath jodta hu hindustaniyo, ab toh jaag jao tum
Aankhe khole sona, maut se zyada kharab hoga
Jab poochega bhavishya tumhari virasat ki dastaan
Apne hi bachhon ke liye kahan koi jawab hoga

Toh Aao mita dein hasti har laalchi siyasatdan ki
Inhi ke lahoo se dho dein gard Hindustaan ki
Jo chinghadein 100 crore sher ek aawaaz me
Kisme himmat hai jo thooke fir Hindustaan pe

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11th September 2009, 11:31 PM

Aaj jo bhi haalaat hai .. uspe taras nahi aata ab .. kyuNki aaj jiski jo haalat hai uska jimmedaar wo khud hai ..

iske alawa mujhe yahan kuch nahi kehna.. par amit is aayine maiN sabke aks haiwaanoN jaise hai mere dost ... mujhe maaf karna... aur apne daantoN ko dekh ke khud ka dil bhi dehal jaata hai .. ki khud ka jism bhi lahu luhan hai in daantoN se... ho sake to samajhne ki koshish karna muujhe

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Aaj jo bhi haalaat hai .. uspe taras nahi aata ab .. kyuNki aaj jiski jo haalat hai uska jimmedaar wo khud hai ..

iske alawa mujhe yahan kuch nahi kehna.. par amit is aayine maiN sabke aks haiwaanoN jaise hai mere dost ... mujhe maaf karna... aur apne daantoN ko dekh ke khud ka dil bhi dehal jaata hai .. ki khud ka jism bhi lahu luhan hai in daantoN se... ho sake to samajhne ki koshish karna muujhe

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Kunaal, kehna asaan hai.
Khud par lekar dekho...

Maa baap ne apne bachho ko subah school exam dene bheja, 70 bachhiyaaan ghar hi nahin aayi.. Kaun zimmedaar hai? Aur uske baad har family ko 1-1 lakh de diye gaye? Neechta hi hudd....

Logo ne toh train ka khana hi khaya, saikadon log beemar aur kai deaths... Kaun zimmedaar???? 18 ghante tak treatment tak nahin diya gaya.. Kadam kya uthaya gaya? Food Manager of the train suspended... Is that enough???

Intelligence failiure resulted in 26/11... Mara aam aadmi aur army men... Kaun zimmedaar??? Taj hotel ke guests ya staff????

Bhai kehna asaan hai....
Khud par lekar dekho...


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Amit Bhai...

Kaise ho achcha laga aapke aise jazbaat dekh ker, sorry ke meri is kalam per aaj nazar padhi, aapke khayal aur sawal behad sahiN hai per aapke ilzaamoN se main mutmain nahi huN... Kyunkii main bhi shayad kunal Bhai ki soch rakhta huN........

Hum jab apna farz proper nahi nibhate to hume kisi aur ko zimmedar tehrane ka bhi koi haq nahi aur rahi baat government per ungli uthane kii to Bhai kisi ki bhi sarkar isse jyada kuch nahi ker sakti jo bhi karna hai aapne khud bhi likha hai phir aap hi raaste se hat rahe hai..... Yeh baat aapne 100% sahiN kahi but yahan bhi aap mein aur mere khayal mein algaav aayenga, kyun kii is desh ko aazaadi hinsa se nahi ahinsa se mili hai..

Hai fariyaad doston mat nikalo gussa apne bhaiyon par
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Kunaal, kehna asaan hai.
Khud par lekar dekho...

Maa baap ne apne bachho ko subah school exam dene bheja, 70 bachhiyaaan ghar hi nahin aayi.. Kaun zimmedaar hai? Aur uske baad har family ko 1-1 lakh de diye gaye? Neechta hi hudd....

Logo ne toh train ka khana hi khaya, saikadon log beemar aur kai deaths... Kaun zimmedaar???? 18 ghante tak treatment tak nahin diya gaya.. Kadam kya uthaya gaya? Food Manager of the train suspended... Is that enough???

Intelligence failiure resulted in 26/11... Mara aam aadmi aur army men... Kaun zimmedaar??? Taj hotel ke guests ya staff????

Bhai kehna asaan hai....
Khud par lekar dekho...
Bhai agar koi hadaasa ho jata hai to iska zimmedar koun agaar isper kuch jyada sochoN aur jawab paye to mujhe bhi batana... aur haan sirf apni nakami, apne gair zimmedari ko apni lachari ko auroN per madna buzdili ki baat hai.....

Aapke jazbaat ki qadar hai mujhe aab tak ki aapki sabse achchi creation lagi mujhe aage bhi aapse aise kalamon per ruberru hone milenga yehi ummid..

Khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye, aur ek important baat Hum khud apni barbadi ke apni lachari ke zimmedar hai kyunki hum apna kartavya aur apne farz ko baraber anjaam nahi dete, humara hi kartvya hai ke hum apni hifazat khud kare.. Kabhi koi apada aayi to aapki jaan bachane koi bhi foran nahi aayenga, rahat karya jari hone mein waqt lagta hai tab tak to apko apni hifazat khud karni padengii...

Aapne shayad dekha nahi ke ek ek insaan ko bachane ke liye helicopter ka tak istemal kiya jata hai, kisi ek masum bache ki jaan bachane ke liye sena ko tak involve kar liya jata hai KyuN aise kaam hum nahi ker sakte kya ?


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Amit Bhai...

Kaise ho achcha laga aapke aise jazbaat dekh ker, sorry ke meri is kalam per aaj nazar padhi, aapke khayal aur sawal behad sahiN hai per aapke ilzaamoN se main mutmain nahi huN... Kyunkii main bhi shayad kunal Bhai ki soch rakhta huN........

Hum jab apna farz proper nahi nibhate to hume kisi aur ko zimmedar tehrane ka bhi koi haq nahi aur rahi baat government per ungli uthane kii to Bhai kisi ki bhi sarkar isse jyada kuch nahi ker sakti jo bhi karna hai aapne khud bhi likha hai phir aap hi raaste se hat rahe hai..... Yeh baat aapne 100% sahiN kahi but yahan bhi aap mein aur mere khayal mein algaav aayenga, kyun kii is desh ko aazaadi hinsa se nahi ahinsa se mili hai..

Bhai agar koi hadaasa ho jata hai to iska zimmedar koun agaar isper kuch jyada sochoN aur jawab paye to mujhe bhi batana... aur haan sirf apni nakami, apne gair zimmedari ko apni lachari ko auroN per madna buzdili ki baat hai.....

Aapke jazbaat ki qadar hai mujhe aab tak ki aapki sabse achchi creation lagi mujhe aage bhi aapse aise kalamon per ruberru hone milenga yehi ummid..

Khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye, aur ek important baat Hum khud apni barbadi ke apni lachari ke zimmedar hai kyunki hum apna kartavya aur apne farz ko baraber anjaam nahi dete, humara hi kartvya hai ke hum apni hifazat khud kare.. Kabhi koi apada aayi to aapki jaan bachane koi bhi foran nahi aayenga, rahat karya jari hone mein waqt lagta hai tab tak to apko apni hifazat khud karni padengii...

Aapne shayad dekha nahi ke ek ek insaan ko bachane ke liye helicopter ka tak istemal kiya jata hai, kisi ek masum bache ki jaan bachane ke liye sena ko tak involve kar liya jata hai KyuN aise kaam hum nahi ker sakte kya ?

Bhai ye baat sach hai ki humein azaadi 1947 mein Ahinsa ke karan mili par agar aap itihaas ke panno ko ulat kar padhein toh ye bhi sach hai ki Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi Ji Bhagat Singh ko phansi se bacha sakte the aur agar unhone aisa kiya hota toh humein azaadi 1947 mein nahin 1934 mein mil jaati....

Mangal Pandey, Rani Lakshmi Bai, ye bhi toh krantiveer the.....

Aur raha sawaal khud apni hifazat karne ka, toh har saal main apni kamaai ka 30% hisssa sarkaar ko isliye deta hu taaki woh mujhe badle mein sab sahuliyatein aur hifazat de.. Warna kanoon aur insaaniyat naam ki koi cheez reh hi nahin jaayegi. Par unpar dependent nahin hu... Apni aur apne parivaar ki hifazat aaj bhi main khud hi karta hu....

Aur kusoor Army ka nahin hai... Ek jawaaan 8000 per month ke liye jaan ki baazi nahin lagata. Maa paiso ke liye apne bachhe ko sarhad par marne nahin bhejti... Farz ke liye bhejti hai..... Toh shahadat ka mol paiso mein kyu lagate ho...

1 lakh chhodo main 10 Lakh deta hu... Himmat hai toh ye politicians apne bachho ko sarhad par bheje... Aaye din mere bhai marte hain.. Hadsa kisi ko batakar ye kisi ki wajah se nahin hota.. Sawaal ye hai ki humne kya kiya??? humare representatives ne kya kiya??? 1 T20 world cup jitwane par indian team ko 60 crore diye aur Kargil mein marne walo.n saikadon jawano (aur unke hazaron family members ko) ko total 2 crore... Kya insaaf hai bhai..

Thookta hu main aisi sarkaar aur aisi vyawastha pe....

Mere father bhi Army se Retire hue hain.. Main hi gaya tha.... Paiso ke liye nahin... Apne liye... Insaaniyat ke liye.... PAr jin halaat mein jawaan jeete hain... Humein mausam badalta hai aur zukaam ho jaata hai.. Summers mein skin tanning ka problem.. waah... Woh -5 degrees thand aur 60 degrees garmi mein bhi haste hain... Kyunki Unhe humario fikr hai....

Aur badle mein hm unhe kya dete hain??? Sochna kabhi


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Bhai Yeh baat aapko main PM per bhi samjha sakta tha but yahan isliye samjha raha huN ke kaash aapki tarha tendency rakhne wale aur log bhi samjh jaye...

To Bhai aap apni kamai ka 30% sarkar ko dete hai jo dena bhi chahiye aur badle mein aap kya sahuliyat chahte hai aur sarkaar kya kya karti hai iska bhi aapko ilm hoga mujhe isper defination dene ki zarurat nahi... aur kitne log apni imandari se tax pay karte hai zara aap apne iman ko bhi tatol lena ke aap kab se kamate hai aur abtak kitna tax diya hai... aur yeh bhi gaur kijiye ke aapke diye hua tax se hi sarkar chalti hai... aur aise hadson per nuksaan sarkar hi nahin hum logon ka bhi hota hai... kyunki jab aye din aise hadse hote rehte hai to kis kis tarha se jaise ek bahu ghar kharch sambhalti hai waise hi sarkar ko chalana padta hai....

Ek aam civilian ke ek lok tantrik desh mein kya kya farz hote hai yeh tak hume maloom nahi aur har baat per hum unhe dosh dete hai jinhe hum hi sir per chadaye hai... jab hume farz nibhana hota hai hum piche hatte hai tab yeh nahi khayal aata ke hum kya galti kar rahe hai... socho bhai..

Aur aapke jo jazbaat un veer jawanon ke liye hai mere bhi hai but isper hum kya ker sakte hai iska bhi sochiye aur yeh bhi sochiye jab hum khud bhi sarhad per khade rehne se katrate hai to kyuN ? Aur janab baat rupye paison ki bhi aati hi hai jo leader log apne bachon ko sarhad per nahi bhejte....

agar har insaan apni imandari se apne kartavyon se muh nahi pherenga to koi bhi musibat humare desh per aa nahi sakti yeh baat samjh lijiye aur iske liye sarkar ko nahi khud ko doshi thehraiye aur apne un bhaiyon ko jagaiye jo abtak isse nawakif hai ke unke farz kya hai......


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Bhai Yeh baat aapko main PM per bhi samjha sakta tha but yahan isliye samjha raha huN ke kaash aapki tarha tendency rakhne wale aur log bhi samjh jaye...

To Bhai aap apni kamai ka 30% sarkar ko dete hai jo dena bhi chahiye aur badle mein aap kya sahuliyat chahte hai aur sarkaar kya kya karti hai iska bhi aapko ilm hoga mujhe isper defination dene ki zarurat nahi... aur kitne log apni imandari se tax pay karte hai zara aap apne iman ko bhi tatol lena ke aap kab se kamate hai aur abtak kitna tax diya hai... aur yeh bhi gaur kijiye ke aapke diye hua tax se hi sarkar chalti hai... aur aise hadson per nuksaan sarkar hi nahin hum logon ka bhi hota hai... kyunki jab aye din aise hadse hote rehte hai to kis kis tarha se jaise ek bahu ghar kharch sambhalti hai waise hi sarkar ko chalana padta hai....

Ek aam civilian ke ek lok tantrik desh mein kya kya farz hote hai yeh tak hume maloom nahi aur har baat per hum unhe dosh dete hai jinhe hum hi sir per chadaye hai... jab hume farz nibhana hota hai hum piche hatte hai tab yeh nahi khayal aata ke hum kya galti kar rahe hai... socho bhai..

Aur aapke jo jazbaat un veer jawanon ke liye hai mere bhi hai but isper hum kya ker sakte hai iska bhi sochiye aur yeh bhi sochiye jab hum khud bhi sarhad per khade rehne se katrate hai to kyuN ? Aur janab baat rupye paison ki bhi aati hi hai jo leader log apne bachon ko sarhad per nahi bhejte....

agar har insaan apni imandari se apne kartavyon se muh nahi pherenga to koi bhi musibat humare desh per aa nahi sakti yeh baat samjh lijiye aur iske liye sarkar ko nahi khud ko doshi thehraiye aur apne un bhaiyon ko jagaiye jo abtak isse nawakif hai ke unke farz kya hai......

Aankhein band karne se khatra nahin mit jaata.....

Agar tax ka paisa sarkaar ko soch ke kharch karna padta hai toh Abhinav Bindra ke liye ek medal jeetne par 1 crore aur Kargil mein mare hue jawano ke gharwalo ko 1 lakh... Waaah

Chalo ye bhi chhodo.. How do u explain 1200 crore of black money for Indians (Mostly Politicians) in Swiss Bank??? Chhodo yaar.....


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Na chahte hue bhi waapas aana pada.. bohat kuch padh liya maine ... maine kaha tha maiN jyada nahi likhna chahta .. kyuNki ye ek aisa mudda hai ki ladka ladki main best koun ye mudda bhi peeche chor de ...

mr amit widhani saahab .. aaj bhi maiN jyada nahi kahuNga .. bas choti si baat maiN samjhata huN ..

yakeeN janiye maiN aapki baat se poora ittefaaq rakhta huN ... aur maiN to kya .. aap jiske paas bhi ye mudda lekar pahunchenge .. ye baateN karenge .. wo bas shuru ho jayega .. iski uski jahan bhar ki .. ye bhi kahega .. ki aaj kal zamaana sach maiN kharaab ho gaya hai .. par zara sochiye .. apne upar koi nahi dekhega ... even aap is baat ko media maiN le jayeN .. ya kisi neta ke paas ya kisi nyay ki kursi pe baithe judge ke paas ,,.. sabka ek hi jawaab hoga .. chand log mere bharat ko kha gaye .. lekin har koi ilzaam doosroN pe madte hi nazar aayega .. par koi ye socho ye chand log aakhir hai koun .. koun hai ... jawaab main ungliyan ek doosre ki taraf uth jayengi ,.. aur sach to ye hai ... na neta sahi hai ,, na media .,.. na judge .. na citizen... kyuN ..??? kyuNki hum sab hi hai ye ..

maiN aapko ek tazaaH kissa sunata huN jo maiNe tv pe dekha .. shayad kisi movie ka hissa hai .. ek insaan car chalate hue ghar jaa raha hai .. saamne road pe accident hua pada hai .. wo sochta hai ki use bacha luN ... car rokne se pehle hi use police ke sawaal yaad aa jate hai .. kanoon ke chakkar yad aa jate hai .. aur wo wahan bina car roke ghar chala jaata hai ... biwi khush sab khush .. thodi dair maiN phone aata hai .. ji aapka bhai mar gaya .. use kisi ne takkar maar dee .. thodi dair pehle hospital aa jaata to bach jaata ... chasmdeed batata hai .. usne ek car rokne ki koshish ki par wo ruki nahi .. aur wo car maiN baitha wahi aadmi tha .. jiska bhai road pe gira hua tha ..ab koun jimmedaar hai uski maut ka .. wo aadmi , police , kanoon , waqt , bhagwaan koun... zahir si baat hai system aisa ho chuka hai ki apne ki madad karne se pehle bhi sochna pad jaye ...

raha sawaal school maiN bacchiyoN ka .. sarkaari building maiN sada cement lagane wale bhi kayi aise honge .. jinki bacchiyan wahan padti hoN .. khuda na khasta unhe kuch nahi hua.. warna wo bhi apne ko muaf nahi kar paate .. shayad aaj unhe malaal bhi na ho .. kyuNki wajah koi aur nahi hai .. hum khud hai .. maiN apne ko kam nahi kehta .. maine aapne har kisi ne bhrastachar ko bhadawa diya hai .. neta chunne wale hai koun hum .. sarkaar maiN party badalne wale koun hai hum...

train maiN khana kha ke log mar gaye ... khana khilane koi mamta benarji nahi aayi thi .. par sabne mil ke sarkaar ke sir pe theekra phod diya .. kyuNki laakhoN log khilaaf hai .. to sarkaar ne bhi baat maan lee... par khana khilane wala tha koun .. wo contractor.. servant ya koi aur .. ab sarkaar kya karegi .. yahi ki unka license cancel ya kuch aur .. ya kuch din ki qaid.. kyuNki jahan logoN ki jaan lene ke baad ajmal kasaab ko aaj tak maara nahi gaya .. unhe saja-e-maut kahan se di jaye...

aur suniye .. aisa nahi hai ki sarkaar kuch nahi karti .. kyuNki marta kya na karta kuch to unhe karna hi padega .. jawaab jo dena hai sarkaar jo chalanai hai ...chota sa udharan dekhiye .. naya sarkaari school bana .. accha bench acche kamre .. acche pankhe.. do mahine baad hi kamre ka rang saaf .. bench ka fatta gayab .. pankhe ke pankh mude hue .. koun kar gaya inhe .. siksha mantri .. nahi .. bacche hi .. chalo bacche shararati ho sakte hai .. sikhane wala koun hai.. jahan sarkari teachers ko jo salary milti hai wo kam nahi hoti .. par wo to period maiN jate hi nahi .. kyuNki mukhyamantri ne mana nahi kiya ,,.. koun hai teachers .. humme se hi kayi..

Rail ke naye dibboN se bulb gaayab .. railway track se loha gayab.. sadkoN pe thuk ka bhandaar .. sadkeN banne se pehle toot jaati hai .. kin kin muddhe ko uthaya jaye,.. koun kar raha hai kya ye sab wo chand log kar rahe hai .. nahi .. hum kar rahe hai .. mana sarkaar bohat maine rakhti hai .. par apne sir pe unko bithane wale bhi hum hai .. aadat hai humeN ghulami ki...

apni kamaai ke jis 30% hisse ki baat aap kar rahe ho .. ki aap sarkaar ko dete ho .. sach hai dete hoge ,,. ghar ka tax alag .. pani ka tax alag .. gadi lete waqt road ka tax alag.. lagbhag saare tax dene ke bawajood kya ho raha hai .. koun kha raha hai ye paisa .. akela koi ek ,, nahi ye khazaana to aisi vaishya jaisa hai .. jiska man kiya haath saaf kar diya .... uske bawajood aap toll tax dete hai .. aap food pe tax dete hai .. aap entertainment tax dete hai.. aur sabse hansi ki baat dekho na hawaai yatra main kiraye ka 3 guna tax hai.. jab ye sab tax dene hai to us 30% ko kyuN liya jaa raha hai .. aur hum sab dekho bevakoof ki tarah khush hai desh badh raha hai .. sadke ban rahi hai.. accha khane ko aa raha hai .. par ye dekho ek hi cheez ke liye do do baar ni****a jaa raha hai sabko ..

sach hai mahatma ji ne marwa diya bhagatsingh ko .. par yakeen jaaniye unhe lagta hi nahi hoga kabhi ki unhone kya kar diya hai .. shayad wo yahi sochte hoNge .. ki ye aazadi ke raste maiN rukawat ban rahe hai ..

baat kisi ek ki nahi hai .. yahan to ped ka har patta apne aap ko ped samajhta hai .. baat hai soch ki bas koi kisi ke sath nahi hai .. to wo uske khilaaf ho jaata hai .. hum sabko zaroorat hai ek mat hone ki .. jo hona na mumkin hai .. humeN zaroorat hai chote faidoN se uper uthne ki .. to jahan koi ek cup chai to pila nahi sakta .. aur kya umeed kareN kisi se .. mitha bol to ab kahiN raha hi nahi .. ye sab koi aur nahi kar raha ... hum kar rahe hai ..

par hum badal nahi sakte .. 2000 saal ghulaam rehne ke baad yahan ke logoN ko aadat hai ghulaam rehne ki .. pehle khud ke raaj ko sadyantroN se khaa liya.. phir afgano ke ghulam ho gaye .. phir mughloN ke .. phir angrejoN ke . aur abhi bhi ye silsila thama nahi hai .. aaj insaan ghulaam hai paise waloN ka.. iska matlab mera naukri se nahi hai .. iska matlab hai paisa hai to izzat karega .. paisa hai to dosti .. paisa hai to pyar .. paisa hai to dil .. warna koi aukaat nahi kisi ki .. insaan insaan ko kuch nahi samajhta ...

khair mujhe jo kehna tha maiNe keh diya ,, kyuNki mere paas bolne ko bohat kuch hai ... par gunahgaar to main bhi huN ,,.. isi liye bas khamoshi liye intzaar karna naye subah ki .. ye maiNe socha hai .. par haan ye waada zaroor hai ,... ki maiN us naye bharat ke kadam ke sath kadam zaroor milaunga ..

baaki in sab se aledah bhi .. maiN apne desh se pyar karta huN jo mera niji kartavya hai ,. aur faisla bhi ... aap apna khyaal rakhiye aur aate rahiye ... khuda aapko khush rakhe ,,,

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Na chahte hue bhi waapas aana pada.. bohat kuch padh liya maine ... maine kaha tha maiN jyada nahi likhna chahta .. kyuNki ye ek aisa mudda hai ki ladka ladki main best koun ye mudda bhi peeche chor de ...

mr amit widhani saahab .. aaj bhi maiN jyada nahi kahuNga .. bas choti si baat maiN samjhata huN ..

yakeeN janiye maiN aapki baat se poora ittefaaq rakhta huN ... aur maiN to kya .. aap jiske paas bhi ye mudda lekar pahunchenge .. ye baateN karenge .. wo bas shuru ho jayega .. iski uski jahan bhar ki .. ye bhi kahega .. ki aaj kal zamaana sach maiN kharaab ho gaya hai .. par zara sochiye .. apne upar koi nahi dekhega ... even aap is baat ko media maiN le jayeN .. ya kisi neta ke paas ya kisi nyay ki kursi pe baithe judge ke paas ,,.. sabka ek hi jawaab hoga .. chand log mere bharat ko kha gaye .. lekin har koi ilzaam doosroN pe madte hi nazar aayega .. par koi ye socho ye chand log aakhir hai koun .. koun hai ... jawaab main ungliyan ek doosre ki taraf uth jayengi ,.. aur sach to ye hai ... na neta sahi hai ,, na media .,.. na judge .. na citizen... kyuN ..??? kyuNki hum sab hi hai ye ..

maiN aapko ek tazaaH kissa sunata huN jo maiNe tv pe dekha .. shayad kisi movie ka hissa hai .. ek insaan car chalate hue ghar jaa raha hai .. saamne road pe accident hua pada hai .. wo sochta hai ki use bacha luN ... car rokne se pehle hi use police ke sawaal yaad aa jate hai .. kanoon ke chakkar yad aa jate hai .. aur wo wahan bina car roke ghar chala jaata hai ... biwi khush sab khush .. thodi dair maiN phone aata hai .. ji aapka bhai mar gaya .. use kisi ne takkar maar dee .. thodi dair pehle hospital aa jaata to bach jaata ... chasmdeed batata hai .. usne ek car rokne ki koshish ki par wo ruki nahi .. aur wo car maiN baitha wahi aadmi tha .. jiska bhai road pe gira hua tha ..ab koun jimmedaar hai uski maut ka .. wo aadmi , police , kanoon , waqt , bhagwaan koun... zahir si baat hai system aisa ho chuka hai ki apne ki madad karne se pehle bhi sochna pad jaye ...

raha sawaal school maiN bacchiyoN ka .. sarkaari building maiN sada cement lagane wale bhi kayi aise honge .. jinki bacchiyan wahan padti hoN .. khuda na khasta unhe kuch nahi hua.. warna wo bhi apne ko muaf nahi kar paate .. shayad aaj unhe malaal bhi na ho .. kyuNki wajah koi aur nahi hai .. hum khud hai .. maiN apne ko kam nahi kehta .. maine aapne har kisi ne bhrastachar ko bhadawa diya hai .. neta chunne wale hai koun hum .. sarkaar maiN party badalne wale koun hai hum...

train maiN khana kha ke log mar gaye ... khana khilane koi mamta benarji nahi aayi thi .. par sabne mil ke sarkaar ke sir pe theekra phod diya .. kyuNki laakhoN log khilaaf hai .. to sarkaar ne bhi baat maan lee... par khana khilane wala tha koun .. wo contractor.. servant ya koi aur .. ab sarkaar kya karegi .. yahi ki unka license cancel ya kuch aur .. ya kuch din ki qaid.. kyuNki jahan logoN ki jaan lene ke baad ajmal kasaab ko aaj tak maara nahi gaya .. unhe saja-e-maut kahan se di jaye...

aur suniye .. aisa nahi hai ki sarkaar kuch nahi karti .. kyuNki marta kya na karta kuch to unhe karna hi padega .. jawaab jo dena hai sarkaar jo chalanai hai ...chota sa udharan dekhiye .. naya sarkaari school bana .. accha bench acche kamre .. acche pankhe.. do mahine baad hi kamre ka rang saaf .. bench ka fatta gayab .. pankhe ke pankh mude hue .. koun kar gaya inhe .. siksha mantri .. nahi .. bacche hi .. chalo bacche shararati ho sakte hai .. sikhane wala koun hai.. jahan sarkari teachers ko jo salary milti hai wo kam nahi hoti .. par wo to period maiN jate hi nahi .. kyuNki mukhyamantri ne mana nahi kiya ,,.. koun hai teachers .. humme se hi kayi..

Rail ke naye dibboN se bulb gaayab .. railway track se loha gayab.. sadkoN pe thuk ka bhandaar .. sadkeN banne se pehle toot jaati hai .. kin kin muddhe ko uthaya jaye,.. koun kar raha hai kya ye sab wo chand log kar rahe hai .. nahi .. hum kar rahe hai .. mana sarkaar bohat maine rakhti hai .. par apne sir pe unko bithane wale bhi hum hai .. aadat hai humeN ghulami ki...

apni kamaai ke jis 30% hisse ki baat aap kar rahe ho .. ki aap sarkaar ko dete ho .. sach hai dete hoge ,,. ghar ka tax alag .. pani ka tax alag .. gadi lete waqt road ka tax alag.. lagbhag saare tax dene ke bawajood kya ho raha hai .. koun kha raha hai ye paisa .. akela koi ek ,, nahi ye khazaana to aisi vaishya jaisa hai .. jiska man kiya haath saaf kar diya .... uske bawajood aap toll tax dete hai .. aap food pe tax dete hai .. aap entertainment tax dete hai.. aur sabse hansi ki baat dekho na hawaai yatra main kiraye ka 3 guna tax hai.. jab ye sab tax dene hai to us 30% ko kyuN liya jaa raha hai .. aur hum sab dekho bevakoof ki tarah khush hai desh badh raha hai .. sadke ban rahi hai.. accha khane ko aa raha hai .. par ye dekho ek hi cheez ke liye do do baar ni****a jaa raha hai sabko ..

sach hai mahatma ji ne marwa diya bhagatsingh ko .. par yakeen jaaniye unhe lagta hi nahi hoga kabhi ki unhone kya kar diya hai .. shayad wo yahi sochte hoNge .. ki ye aazadi ke raste maiN rukawat ban rahe hai ..

baat kisi ek ki nahi hai .. yahan to ped ka har patta apne aap ko ped samajhta hai .. baat hai soch ki bas koi kisi ke sath nahi hai .. to wo uske khilaaf ho jaata hai .. hum sabko zaroorat hai ek mat hone ki .. jo hona na mumkin hai .. humeN zaroorat hai chote faidoN se uper uthne ki .. to jahan koi ek cup chai to pila nahi sakta .. aur kya umeed kareN kisi se .. mitha bol to ab kahiN raha hi nahi .. ye sab koi aur nahi kar raha ... hum kar rahe hai ..

par hum badal nahi sakte .. 2000 saal ghulaam rehne ke baad yahan ke logoN ko aadat hai ghulaam rehne ki .. pehle khud ke raaj ko sadyantroN se khaa liya.. phir afgano ke ghulam ho gaye .. phir mughloN ke .. phir angrejoN ke . aur abhi bhi ye silsila thama nahi hai .. aaj insaan ghulaam hai paise waloN ka.. iska matlab mera naukri se nahi hai .. iska matlab hai paisa hai to izzat karega .. paisa hai to dosti .. paisa hai to pyar .. paisa hai to dil .. warna koi aukaat nahi kisi ki .. insaan insaan ko kuch nahi samajhta ...

khair mujhe jo kehna tha maiNe keh diya ,, kyuNki mere paas bolne ko bohat kuch hai ... par gunahgaar to main bhi huN ,,.. isi liye bas khamoshi liye intzaar karna naye subah ki .. ye maiNe socha hai .. par haan ye waada zaroor hai ,... ki maiN us naye bharat ke kadam ke sath kadam zaroor milaunga ..

baaki in sab se aledah bhi .. maiN apne desh se pyar karta huN jo mera niji kartavya hai ,. aur faisla bhi ... aap apna khyaal rakhiye aur aate rahiye ... khuda aapko khush rakhe ,,,

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Main bhi toh yahi keh raha hui ae siyasatdaano mat thooko mere Hindustaan pe....

Train mein khana khilane ka contractor kaun? Delhi mein CNG aayi, par CNG pumps ka contract kise mila (AUR USE HI KYU MILA)??? Answer dooondho..

"Shayad" kuch aam logo ne ghotale kiya hain... Par mujhe sirf ek aise politician ka naam bataio jo crore pati nahin hai.... 35000 salary aur 1200 crore ke assets.... Kiska hai ye paisa????

Maine ye nahin kaha ki hadse ka reason kya hai.. Maine ye kaha ki Shahadat ka mol kaudiyon mein lagana paap hai.... Ek cricket match ya olympic medal kya un laakhon jawano se bada hai jo roz dushman ki goliyan sehte hain???
Jawaab tumhare paas hai.....


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wa bhai wa maza agaya. muze ita sara post padne me 45 minute lage aur baat hai ki sab ki baat ekich mai bolu sab sahi hai ehsaas bhaiya aap bi sahi hai khahish bhaiya ap bi sahi hai aur pyar bhaiya ap bi sahi hai magar ye bahens chalri kispe uspe jo hamara desh hai unke liye jo humare rakhwale hai kya unke liye jo sarkar chalare..
baat ekich hai mai pyare bhaiya se aur khahish bhaiya ki baat se razi hu muze nai malum ki desh chalta kese hai mayne kabi vote b nai kara..
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bhayee likha to sahi hai
jo sahi nahi laga [ahle bata chuka hun ....

lekin iska hal bhi likh do to ye kavitaa poori ho sahi mayno mai

varne aise bhasan to khud neta log bhi dete hai ... jyada fark nahi hia...

ek neta apni galti chupa ke doosre pe yahi ilzaam dharte hai....

sabke pas ek doosre ke liye kuch na kuch hai kahne ko.....

mere pas bhi hia ... apni galti chupa ke doosro pe ilzaam dharne ko ....

maine aaj tak vote nahi kiya .... ye meri galti hai... lekin vote deke bhi lagta hia galti hi karunga ......

aur kya kahu ....

na chandrsekhar azaad na bhagat ka naam hai
kal bhi tha ye bharat aaj bhi ghulam hai

siyasatdaano mai tabdeele huee hai
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bhayee likha to sahi hai
jo sahi nahi laga [ahle bata chuka hun ....

lekin iska hal bhi likh do to ye kavitaa poori ho sahi mayno mai

varne aise bhasan to khud neta log bhi dete hai ... jyada fark nahi hia...

ek neta apni galti chupa ke doosre pe yahi ilzaam dharte hai....

sabke pas ek doosre ke liye kuch na kuch hai kahne ko.....

mere pas bhi hia ... apni galti chupa ke doosro pe ilzaam dharne ko ....

maine aaj tak vote nahi kiya .... ye meri galti hai... lekin vote deke bhi lagta hia galti hi karunga ......

aur kya kahu ....

na chandrsekhar azaad na bhagat ka naam hai
kal bhi tha ye bharat aaj bhi ghulam hai

siyasatdaano mai tabdeele huee hai
zulm ki mutthi thodi si dheeli huee hai
han pahle se to thoda sa araam hai
kal bhi tha ye bharat aaj bhi ghulam hai


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Bilkul sahi kaha .. abhi shayad yahi baat kahi maine uper .. ki 2000 saal se ghulaam bana ye desh ghulaam hi reh gaya .. aur ise ghulaam rehne ki adat si ho gayi hai ..

baaki baat ye ki behas ka muddha kya hai .. amit bhai ka kehna hai ki kuch log mil ke hindustaan maiN tabaahi macha rahe hai .. aur main is tabahi maiN har ek shaksh ko khada kar raha huN .. mujhe bhi aapko bhi likhne wale ko bhi aur na padhne wale ko bhi ..

mera ye kehne ka matlab ki ye koun hai wo koun hai .. ye katayi nahi hai ki main aapko dhudhne ko keh raha huN ki jao jake dhuNdho .. bas maiN ye baat rakhne ki koshish kar raha hun .. ki hum jaise aam log hi in sabko anjaam de rahe hai ..

jaisa ki maine sabse pehle reply maiN jyada na likhte hue kaha tha .. ki yahan apni haalat ka desh ki halat ka zimmedaar aadmi khud hi hai .. rahi baat .. marne wale ko medal .. cricket ko lakhoN rs .. to is baat ke itne tark hai ki aap saamna nahi kar payenge.,. baaki baat brasht neta ki .. ki 35000 ki salary aur 1200 carore ka asset.. arre koun si field hai jahan ye sab nahi ho raha .. har jagah ho raha hai .. har field maiN ho raha hai .. aur jise mauka nahi mil raha wo doosroN pe arop mad raha hai .. jise mil raha hai wo apni jeb bharne se nahi chook raha ..

in sab baatoN ka behas ka koi faida nahi .. ye sab chunavi bhaasan sa lagta hai bas... fauj main marne walon ki kahani yaad hai .. fauj maiN gadaari ki misaaleN bhi kam nahi hai .. khana banane wale se lekar khana khane wale tak ko jahan mauka mil raha hai apna kaam kar raha hai ..

is liye maiN na to is behas ko aage badhana chahta huN na isme koi mujhe sense nazar aata hai .. baaki maiN is baat ko ye kehke phir se jaunga.. ki apni badhali ka yahaN har koi khud hi zimmedaar hai .. na ki koi neta koi malik ya koi aur ...

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Bilkul sahi kaha .. abhi shayad yahi baat kahi maine uper .. ki 2000 saal se ghulaam bana ye desh ghulaam hi reh gaya .. aur ise ghulaam rehne ki adat si ho gayi hai ..

baaki baat ye ki behas ka muddha kya hai .. amit bhai ka kehna hai ki kuch log mil ke hindustaan maiN tabaahi macha rahe hai .. aur main is tabahi maiN har ek shaksh ko khada kar raha huN .. mujhe bhi aapko bhi likhne wale ko bhi aur na padhne wale ko bhi ..

mera ye kehne ka matlab ki ye koun hai wo koun hai .. ye katayi nahi hai ki main aapko dhudhne ko keh raha huN ki jao jake dhuNdho .. bas maiN ye baat rakhne ki koshish kar raha hun .. ki hum jaise aam log hi in sabko anjaam de rahe hai ..

jaisa ki maine sabse pehle reply maiN jyada na likhte hue kaha tha .. ki yahan apni haalat ka desh ki halat ka zimmedaar aadmi khud hi hai .. rahi baat .. marne wale ko medal .. cricket ko lakhoN rs .. to is baat ke itne tark hai ki aap saamna nahi kar payenge.,. baaki baat brasht neta ki .. ki 35000 ki salary aur 1200 carore ka asset.. arre koun si field hai jahan ye sab nahi ho raha .. har jagah ho raha hai .. har field maiN ho raha hai .. aur jise mauka nahi mil raha wo doosroN pe arop mad raha hai .. jise mil raha hai wo apni jeb bharne se nahi chook raha ..

in sab baatoN ka behas ka koi faida nahi .. ye sab chunavi bhaasan sa lagta hai bas... fauj main marne walon ki kahani yaad hai .. fauj maiN gadaari ki misaaleN bhi kam nahi hai .. khana banane wale se lekar khana khane wale tak ko jahan mauka mil raha hai apna kaam kar raha hai ..

is liye maiN na to is behas ko aage badhana chahta huN na isme koi mujhe sense nazar aata hai .. baaki maiN is baat ko ye kehke phir se jaunga.. ki apni badhali ka yahaN har koi khud hi zimmedaar hai .. na ki koi neta koi malik ya koi aur ...

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Buss itni si baat hai per hum bhi total nishpaksh rahe aur humare ander sacha aur achcha kaam kerne ki sachchi lagan hai to shayad hum aaj nahi to kal kamyab bhi hoge.. Yeh neta log bhi bhashan kerte hai per amal nahi karte hume amal kerna hai, apni zimmedari nibhani hai....

Hum jab auron per ungli utha rahe hai to hum bhi un mein se hi hua... isliye auron per ungli na utha ker hum ne kya kiya iske baare mein sochiye humara kartavya hum nibhaye hum jaage rahe auron ko jagaye bus aage phir koi bhrashtachri ki himmat nahi karenga jab sab jage ho to kisi chore ki himmat nahi hoti hai ke chori kare........

Wel main ab is bhes ko khatam karna chahta hun agar aap samjhe hai to achcha hai nahi to aap mein bhi netao ki tarha hi gun hai yehi lagenga mujhe...


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Aapko kya lagega, isse mujhe koi fark nahin padta.... Na kabhi padega.....
Yahan bhashan main nahin aap chaap rahe ho.... Main koi bhashan dene ya bhadkane nahin aaya.. Upar likhe alfaazo ko dobara padho aur samjho.. Na samajh pao toh kusoor aapka aur nasamjhi bhi.......

Maine ye kaha hai ki na Thooko mere Hindustaan pe. Pehle ye batao ki Hindustaan hai kya??? 31 states ka ek desh? Hum salaried log? Neta? Laloo ka Bihar ya Shivsena ka Bombay??? Nahin Hindustaan hai Maa ke Sanskaar, Ek Pita ke bachhe, Ek bhokha Kissan, Masoom bachhe.. Koi circket ki game nahin aur koi olympic medal nahin.. Main yahan kisi ko jagane nahin aaye... Soye huo ko jagaya jaata hai,.. Ye murdo ka shehar hai.... Aapke saamne aapke padosi ki beti ka rape ho raha hota hai aur aap tamasha dekkhte ho.. Haiwano ko jagane ka theka nahin liya maine...

Main aaya hu Apni Srkaar se kehne karne ki Kisi ki maut ka mol 1-2 lakh na lagao. Kissano ke liye kuchh karo... Kuch lakh ye crore ke liye apne bachho ko na marvao... Ye guzarish hai meri...

Yahan maine kisi ke sir par apni nakami ka theekra nahin phoda. Woh aap kar rahe ho..... Maine jo likha woh mere Khayalaat hain.. Maine aapse aapki rai nahin poochi. ujhe jo theek laga maine likha.. Aapko pasand nahin... Toh its ur business what u want to do.. Yahan tamasha khada mat karo.....


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2000 saal se ghulaam bana ye desh ghulaam hi reh gaya ..
Ab aapse kya behes karu??? 200 saal ki gulaami ko aapne 2000 saal bana diya..... Maan gaye aapki itihaas ki jaankari ko....

Aur haan Ye desh aaj gulaam nahin hai.... Main keh sakta hu kyunki main bhi Hindustaani hu... Aur main kisi ka gulaam nahin.....Sirf lachaar Hu.. Woh bhi apne hi bhaiyon ke aage.....

Main kisi ko bhi saza de sakta hu. Laahi utha sakta hu..... Lekin maru bhi toh kisko? Victim bhi main hu aur culprit bhi main... Ek common Man

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aapki rachna ke jazbaat har hindustaani ko sochne par mazboor zarur karte hai......aur khud se samwaad bhi.......
Naresh Ji,

Yahan aane ka aur ispar sochne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya......

Mere alfaaz kade zaroor hain magar Ehsaas sachhe hain.. Har Hindustaani jaanta hai...


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par aapki pahli hi line achi nahi lagi

Mat thooko mere hindostaan pe ..........

ye thooko word acha nahi laga yaar ho sake to ise change kar dena ... baki padhne ke baad
Bhai kya ek war mein mare sipahi ki zindagi ki keemat paiso mein lagana uski laash par thookna nahin.. Aur agar woh thookna hai, Toh ye batao, kya Tirange mein lipti ek jawaan ki laash. Kya saara Hindustaan wahan simat nahin jaata....

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wa bhai wa maza agaya. muze ita sara post padne me 45 minute lage aur baat hai ki sab ki baat ekich mai bolu sab sahi hai ehsaas bhaiya aap bi sahi hai khahish bhaiya ap bi sahi hai aur pyar bhaiya ap bi sahi hai magar ye bahens chalri kispe uspe jo hamara desh hai unke liye jo humare rakhwale hai kya unke liye jo sarkar chalare..
baat ekich hai mai pyare bhaiya se aur khahish bhaiya ki baat se razi hu muze nai malum ki desh chalta kese hai mayne kabi vote b nai kara..
ab iti sare baata sunne ke bad muze akhal aayi ab mai bi zimmedar hu sabka ita muze lag ra hai..

aapki post achi hai ek dum mast mai aise jazbato ku salam karta shukriya apka.

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lekin iska hal bhi likh do to ye kavitaa poori ho sahi mayno mai
varne aise bhasan to khud neta log bhi dete hai ... jyada fark nahi hia...
ek neta apni galti chupa ke doosre pe yahi ilzaam dharte hai....
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Maanta hu Neta bhi Bhashan dete hain but ab isse hamari badkismati kahein ya Lachaari, neta tabhi sach bolta hai jab woh satta mein nahin virodhi party mein hota hai...........

Magar haan gulaami mein fark hai.. Tab hum angrezo ke gulaam the... Aaj hum khud apne hi Gulaam hain... Ye bediyan tod paana namumkin hai....


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Ab aapse kya behes karu??? 200 saal ki gulaami ko aapne 2000 saal bana diya..... Maan gaye aapki itihaas ki jaankari ko....

Aur haan Ye desh aaj gulaam nahin hai.... Main keh sakta hu kyunki main bhi Hindustaani hu... Aur main kisi ka gulaam nahin.....Sirf lachaar Hu.. Woh bhi apne hi bhaiyon ke aage.....

Main kisi ko bhi saza de sakta hu. Laahi utha sakta hu..... Lekin maru bhi toh kisko? Victim bhi main hu aur culprit bhi main... Ek common Man

Is thread ka maksadsirf itna hai ki kisi ki bhi maut ki insul na ki jaaye.. Agar kisi ka dukh share nahin kar sakte, toh namak mat ragdo....
Amit Bhai,

Jab aap itna sab samjhte hai mera highlighted note ko note kariye aapke hi bol hai main bhi aap se yehi keh raha hun ke jab loktantra mein log hi sab kuch hai to har baat ke log hi zimmedar hua naa, to aap samjh kyun nahi lete ke hum week kahan hai .. jab aap khud keh rahe hai ke main saza de sakta hun jii zarur de sakte hai but ek insaan buniyad nahi hila sakta uske liye ekta ki zarurat hoti hai isliye pahele ekta banaiye, aapke to khayalat hum se hi opposite ho rahe hai to aap kya ekta banayenge, rehne dijiye janab maine galati ki ke aapke ahsaas e jazbe ko sahin disha dene ki galti kii, aap karanti kari hai aur hum ahinsa ke pujari.. Yehi distance tha Bapu mein aur shahid bhagat sing jii mein....

Khair main aapse bhaes nahi kerna chahta meri bahes ka mazak bane mujhe katai pasand nahi....

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Amit Bhai,

Jab aap itna sab samjhte hai mera highlighted note ko note kariye aapke hi bol hai main bhi aap se yehi keh raha hun ke jab loktantra mein log hi sab kuch hai to har baat ke log hi zimmedar hua naa, to aap samjh kyun nahi lete ke hum week kahan hai .. jab aap khud keh rahe hai ke main saza de sakta hun jii zarur de sakte hai but ek insaan buniyad nahi hila sakta uske liye ekta ki zarurat hoti hai isliye pahele ekta banaiye, aapke to khayalat hum se hi opposite ho rahe hai to aap kya ekta banayenge, rehne dijiye janab maine galati ki ke aapke ahsaas e jazbe ko sahin disha dene ki galti kii, aap karanti kari hai aur hum ahinsa ke pujari.. Yehi distance tha Bapu mein aur shahid bhagat sing jii mein....

Khair main aapse bhaes nahi kerna chahta meri bahes ka mazak bane mujhe katai pasand nahi....

Apna khayal rakhiye ...Khuda hafez..
Ji aap mere Ehsaas ko disha baad mein dijiyega (sahi ya galat, woh toh bhool hi jao),,,, pehle main kya keh raha hu usse samjho.. Main keh raha hu shahadat ka mol lagana galat hai, aap keh reh ho aap ahinsak ho??

Bhai saab, Main yeh keh raha hu ki US east mein hai. aap keh rahe ho Hawa West mein chal rahi hai.. pehle apni understanding aur IQ ko sahi disha do........ Mere Ehsaaso.n ki baad mein sochna..


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Yahan bhashan main nahin aap chaap rahe ho.... Main koi bhashan dene ya bhadkane nahin aaya.. Upar likhe alfaazo ko dobara padho aur samjho.. Na samajh pao toh kusoor aapka aur nasamjhi bhi......

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Ji aap mere Ehsaas ko disha baad mein dijiyega (sahi ya galat, woh toh bhool hi jao),,,, pehle main kya keh raha hu usse samjho.. Main keh raha hu shahadat ka mol lagana galat hai, aap keh reh ho aap ahinsak ho??
Amit Saahab..

Sabse pehle to ilteja ye ki .. bokhlaahaiye nahi.. kyuNki hum yahaN is ashiyane maiN bhi aapse roob-o-roo agar ho rahe haiN to is liye .. ki haan humeN lagta hai ki humeN aapke likhe ek saarvjanik khyaal ke uper raaii rakhne ka haq haasil hai .. is liye aapse dil ki gehraai se ilteja karta huN ki apne alfaaz aur apni jawaabdehi maiN sayam aur sneh ko jagah de .. aapko kisi se agar farq padta hi nahi to aap kya kisi ko raah dikhayeNge .. aapas maiN kam se kam meethe lafz istemaal kijiye .. aur agla jawaab dene se pehle mere kahe gaye har alfaaz ko padh ke jawaab dijiyega .. kyuNki aap bas ek lakeer ke fakeer bane nazar aa rahe hai.. muddhe ki baat bhi hogi.. par aage ..

khair .. rahi baat mere gyaan ki to maine koi gadna karke nahi kaha tha .. par tab bhi hazaar saal to aapko ginwa sakta huN .. Kyunki 11th century maiN aaye afgaan hindustaani nahi the .. 14th century se raaj karne wale mughal bhi hindustani nahi the.. aur uske baad ka to aapko bhi maloom hai .. khair muddha ye bhi nahi hai ...

muddha aapki ghazal bhi nahi hai saahab .. maine aapke ghazal ke kisi hisse ko na nishana banaya hai na aapke vicharoN ko .. jabki maine yahi kaha aap jiske paas bhi inko leke jayeNge wo isme rang ke aapke sath ho jayega .. aur apni ungliyan utha dega aapke sur maiN ..

par baat ye bhi nahi .. maine bas aapke vicharoN maiN sahaan-bhooti na rakhte hue .. itna kaha ki aaj jiski jo haalat hai uska zimmedaar wo khud hai .. bas aap lag gaye neta ki iski uski .. arre bhai seedhi see baat hai .. apne aapko marne yani aatmhatya karne waale ko apradhi bataya gaya hai kanoon maiN bhi .. shayad aapko maloom hi hoga .. ki khud apni jaan dene ki KOSHISH bhi karna jurm hai .. to maiN kyuN dikhauN sahaanbhooti ke aansooN aake aapke khyaal pe .. aur maiN akela nahi agar maine aapki post pe reply nahi kiya hota to yahan line lag gayi hoti .. aise sahaanbhooti bhare reply's kee .. jaisa ki akasar hota hai social issue pe likhe hue alfaazoN ke liye .. maiN ye nahi kehta ki aisa nahi hona chaiye .. jo sach hai use apnaya jayega .. aapke alfaazoN ko apnaata huN maiN .. par mere paas iske liye koi sahaanbhooti nahi .. aur na hi shikayat hai kisi neta , adhikaari, ya kisi aur se ..

to maiNe shuruwaat se leke ab tak ek hi baat kahi hai .. ki aaj jo kuch jiske sath ho raha hai .. uska jimmedar har koi khud hai .. bas... ! aur aapne kaha ki humare yahan jo ho raha hai wo sab koi aur kar raha hai ...isi liye apne meri baat ko kaat ke reply kiya tha .. warna agar aap meri baat se ekmat the to reply ka koi arth hi nahi reh jaata tha ...

bas aakhir maiN phir se aapse ilteja karna chahuNga .. yahaN koi india pakistaan ki war nahi ho rahi .. aap apne baat karne ke tareeke maiN naramdili rakhiye aur hum jaise apne bhaiyoN ko itminaan se sunte hue apne bhaiyoN samjhaiye agar hum ghalat bhi hai to.. kyuNki zaroori nahi ki hum hi sahi hoN .. aur ye bhi nahi ki aap hi sahi hoN.. shayad isi liye apne aapko yahan share karne chale aate huM sab yahaN ,... aur aapko kisi ki baat se farq nahi padta acchi bat hai .. par aapki likhi hui kuch baateN aapki raas nahi aayi ...

apna khyaal rakhiye aur mohbbat aur khuloos ko bhadaiye aur sabko pyaar dijiye aur pyar paiye .. meri dua rahegi rab se ...

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Bhai kya ek war mein mare sipahi ki zindagi ki keemat paiso mein lagana uski laash par thookna nahin.. Aur agar woh thookna hai, Toh ye batao, kya Tirange mein lipti ek jawaan ki laash. Kya saara Hindustaan wahan simat nahin jaata....

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Toh ye line galat kahan se hui?????????
bhayee sipahi marta nahi hia saheed hota hai... aur ye uske liye samman ki baat hai ......

aur hume uska samman karna chahiye ....
ab sipahi ho saheedi pe maan hia ya nahi ye sipahi jane
mujeh uski saheedi pe maan hai....

ab kaun kya sochta karta hia uske liye main kya kar sakta hun ....
aur tum hi bata do ki jab koe saheed ho to kya kiya jaye .....

kisko kitni respect di jaye ye personal metter hia .. haan use haq dilane ki bat hia to tum batao uska kya haq banta hia....
sipahi fauj mai jata kyu hia vatan ki rakhsa ke liye ... aur usme saheed bhi hote hai...
mai fouj mai hota to mere sath bhi yahi hota ......

haan uske baad jo uska haq hai woh sakrkaar karti hai. aur kahi nahi bhi karti ... jaha karti hai baha theek hia
jaha nahi karti baha .... haq lena chahiye ... haq cheena bhi jata hai ...... uspe shikbe karna ek saheed ki family ko muejh ni lagta pasand ayega

rahi humari personal feelign ki baat to tumko lagta hia koe aisa saheed hai jisko uska haq nahi mila to ya to use uska haq dila do .... ya khud uski help karo
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bhayee sipahi marta nahi hia saheed hota hai... aur ye uske liye samman ki baat hai ......
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kisko kitni respect di jaye ye personal metter hia .. haan use haq dilane ki bat hia to tum batao uska kya haq banta hia....
sipahi fauj mai jata kyu hia vatan ki rakhsa ke liye ... aur usme saheed bhi hote hai...
mai fouj mai hota to mere sath bhi yahi hota ......


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Mujhe khushi hui sir jee aapka jawaab padh kar .. sahi kaha aapne .. hum kisi ki maut ki keemat laga hi nahi sakte .. unko kuch bhi koi kya dega jo apna kho gaye .. kayi kisse hai aise .. jahan logoN ne di gayi rakam ko lene se inkaar kar diya ... par bhai fauj maiN jaane ka faisla khud us sipahi ka hota hai .. desh prem ke liye kandhoN pe medal ki koi zaroorat nahi hoti .. abhi kisi movie ki tag line thi .. aur usi maiN kahiN kaha gaya tha .. marne se desh ka naam nahi hota .. desh ke liye kuch kar ke mar jaane se desh ka naam hota hai .. desh ke aage kuch bhi nahi .. agar hum sacche desh ke liye 1% bhi sochte hai to .. mujhe garv desh ke naam roshan hone se hota hai .. sipahi ke marne ya dhoni ko medal milne se mujhe farq nahi .. kyuNki ye jeewan chakra hi hai .. mujhe to fakar in donoN pe tab hi hai .. jab inhone desh ka naam sunehara kar diya ..

accha laga aapke har vichaar ko jaan ke ...

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bhayee sipahi marta nahi hia saheed hota hai... aur ye uske liye samman ki baat hai ......

aur hume uska samman karna chahiye ....
ab sipahi ho saheedi pe maan hia ya nahi ye sipahi jane
mujeh uski saheedi pe maan hai....

ab kaun kya sochta karta hia uske liye main kya kar sakta hun ....
aur tum hi bata do ki jab koe saheed ho to kya kiya jaye .....

kisko kitni respect di jaye ye personal metter hia .. haan use haq dilane ki bat hia to tum batao uska kya haq banta hia....
sipahi fauj mai jata kyu hia vatan ki rakhsa ke liye ... aur usme saheed bhi hote hai...
mai fouj mai hota to mere sath bhi yahi hota ......

haan uske baad jo uska haq hai woh sakrkaar karti hai. aur kahi nahi bhi karti ... jaha karti hai baha theek hia
jaha nahi karti baha .... haq lena chahiye ... haq cheena bhi jata hai ...... uspe shikbe karna ek saheed ki family ko muejh ni lagta pasand ayega

rahi humari personal feelign ki baat to tumko lagta hia koe aisa saheed hai jisko uska haq nahi mila to ya to use uska haq dila do .... ya khud uski help karo
ye poem likhne se kahi jayda better hai... ya ispe shikbe karne se

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Main yahan koi information lene nahin aaya. Jaankar achha laga ki aap bhi meri tarah Sipahiyo ke khandaan se hain.. Aapne Maa par thookne ki baat ki,, aap bataiye jab ek beta apni maa par thookne lage toh doosra beta kya kare? kuchh aisa ho raha hai Hindustaan mein....

Ab aap kya jaano ki main kya karta hu aur kya kar raha hu? Main yahan bhashan nahin de raha. woh khokhle logo ka kaam hai.... Main toh apna farz nibha raha hu aur karz chuka raha hu. Magar Sarkaar, kya aap jaag rahe ho???


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Sabse pehle to ilteja ye ki .. bokhlaahaiye nahi.. kyuNki hum yahaN is ashiyane maiN bhi aapse roob-o-roo agar ho rahe haiN to is liye .. ki haan humeN lagta hai ki humeN aapke likhe ek saarvjanik khyaal ke uper raaii rakhne ka haq haasil hai .. is liye aapse dil ki gehraai se ilteja karta huN ki apne alfaaz aur apni jawaabdehi maiN sayam aur sneh ko jagah de .. aapko kisi se agar farq padta hi nahi to aap kya kisi ko raah dikhayeNge .. aapas maiN kam se kam meethe lafz istemaal kijiye .. aur agla jawaab dene se pehle mere kahe gaye har alfaaz ko padh ke jawaab dijiyega .. kyuNki aap bas ek lakeer ke fakeer bane nazar aa rahe hai.. muddhe ki baat bhi hogi.. par aage ..

khair .. rahi baat mere gyaan ki to maine koi gadna karke nahi kaha tha .. par tab bhi hazaar saal to aapko ginwa sakta huN .. Kyunki 11th century maiN aaye afgaan hindustaani nahi the .. 14th century se raaj karne wale mughal bhi hindustani nahi the.. aur uske baad ka to aapko bhi maloom hai .. khair muddha ye bhi nahi hai ...

muddha aapki ghazal bhi nahi hai saahab .. maine aapke ghazal ke kisi hisse ko na nishana banaya hai na aapke vicharoN ko .. jabki maine yahi kaha aap jiske paas bhi inko leke jayeNge wo isme rang ke aapke sath ho jayega .. aur apni ungliyan utha dega aapke sur maiN ..

par baat ye bhi nahi .. maine bas aapke vicharoN maiN sahaan-bhooti na rakhte hue .. itna kaha ki aaj jiski jo haalat hai uska zimmedaar wo khud hai .. bas aap lag gaye neta ki iski uski .. arre bhai seedhi see baat hai .. apne aapko marne yani aatmhatya karne waale ko apradhi bataya gaya hai kanoon maiN bhi .. shayad aapko maloom hi hoga .. ki khud apni jaan dene ki KOSHISH bhi karna jurm hai .. to maiN kyuN dikhauN sahaanbhooti ke aansooN aake aapke khyaal pe .. aur maiN akela nahi agar maine aapki post pe reply nahi kiya hota to yahan line lag gayi hoti .. aise sahaanbhooti bhare reply's kee .. jaisa ki akasar hota hai social issue pe likhe hue alfaazoN ke liye .. maiN ye nahi kehta ki aisa nahi hona chaiye .. jo sach hai use apnaya jayega .. aapke alfaazoN ko apnaata huN maiN .. par mere paas iske liye koi sahaanbhooti nahi .. aur na hi shikayat hai kisi neta , adhikaari, ya kisi aur se ..

to maiNe shuruwaat se leke ab tak ek hi baat kahi hai .. ki aaj jo kuch jiske sath ho raha hai .. uska jimmedar har koi khud hai .. bas... ! aur aapne kaha ki humare yahan jo ho raha hai wo sab koi aur kar raha hai ...isi liye apne meri baat ko kaat ke reply kiya tha .. warna agar aap meri baat se ekmat the to reply ka koi arth hi nahi reh jaata tha ...

bas aakhir maiN phir se aapse ilteja karna chahuNga .. yahaN koi india pakistaan ki war nahi ho rahi .. aap apne baat karne ke tareeke maiN naramdili rakhiye aur hum jaise apne bhaiyoN ko itminaan se sunte hue apne bhaiyoN samjhaiye agar hum ghalat bhi hai to.. kyuNki zaroori nahi ki hum hi sahi hoN .. aur ye bhi nahi ki aap hi sahi hoN.. shayad isi liye apne aapko yahan share karne chale aate huM sab yahaN ,... aur aapko kisi ki baat se farq nahi padta acchi bat hai .. par aapki likhi hui kuch baateN aapki raas nahi aayi ...

apna khyaal rakhiye aur mohbbat aur khuloos ko bhadaiye aur sabko pyaar dijiye aur pyar paiye .. meri dua rahegi rab se ...

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Mujhe khushi hui sir jee aapka jawaab padh kar .. sahi kaha aapne .. hum kisi ki maut ki keemat laga hi nahi sakte .. unko kuch bhi koi kya dega jo apna kho gaye .. kayi kisse hai aise .. jahan logoN ne di gayi rakam ko lene se inkaar kar diya ... par bhai fauj maiN jaane ka faisla khud us sipahi ka hota hai .. desh prem ke liye kandhoN pe medal ki koi zaroorat nahi hoti .. abhi kisi movie ki tag line thi .. aur usi maiN kahiN kaha gaya tha .. marne se desh ka naam nahi hota .. desh ke liye kuch kar ke mar jaane se desh ka naam hota hai .. desh ke aage kuch bhi nahi .. agar hum sacche desh ke liye 1% bhi sochte hai to .. mujhe garv desh ke naam roshan hone se hota hai .. sipahi ke marne ya dhoni ko medal milne se mujhe farq nahi .. kyuNki ye jeewan chakra hi hai .. mujhe to fakar in donoN pe tab hi hai .. jab inhone desh ka naam sunehara kar diya ..

accha laga aapke har vichaar ko jaan ke ...

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Bhai saab agar aapko kisi Sipahi ke marne se farq nahin padta toh aap Hindustaani hi nahin ho.. Ek bachha jab subah 8 school bhi jaata hai toh maa ke seene pe chaaku chalte hain (8 ghante ki judaai ka sochkar)

Us maa ki socho jo apna jawaan beta desh ke liye kho deti hai..... Himmat hai toh apne bhai apne bete ko ladne bhejiyega.... Tab poochunga aapse Jeewan Chakr ka bhashan

Maaf kijiyega but aapki soch bahut chhoti hai.. koi fauji medal ke liye sarhad par nahin jaata. woh to 10 Rs ke bikte hain.. Woh jaata hai desh bhakti ke liye... Khair chhodo.. Jaanta hu aap ye samajh hi nahin paoge...


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Bhai saab agar aapko kisi Sipahi ke marne se farq nahin padta toh aap Hindustaani hi nahin ho.. Ek bachha jab subah 8 school bhi jaata hai toh maa ke seene pe chaaku chalte hain (8 ghante ki judaai ka sochkar)

Us maa ki socho jo apna jawaan beta desh ke liye kho deti hai..... Himmat hai toh apne bhai apne bete ko ladne bhejiyega.... Tab poochunga aapse Jeewan Chakr ka bhashan

Maaf kijiyega but aapki soch bahut chhoti hai.. koi fauji medal ke liye sarhad par nahin jaata. woh to 10 Rs ke bikte hain.. Woh jaata hai desh bhakti ke liye... Khair chhodo.. Jaanta hu aap ye samajh hi nahin paoge...
Janaab mere sipahi ke marne pe dukh karne se wo waapas nahi aa jayega... aur sipahi ke marne pe dukh nahi hota .. uske marne par garv hota hai .. mere khyaal se aap bina padhe hi reply kar dete ho .. maine ye kaha hai ki sipahi ke marne se farq nahi padta par aapne meri doosri line shayad padhi hi nahi .. jisme maine ye likha hai ki .. mujhe farq is baat se padta hai ki kisne mere desh ka naam roshan kiya... arre bhai sarhad pe jisne jaan ganwaai kya usse mere desh ka naam roshan nahi hua .. arre wahan to wo gaurav mila hai jo bayaan nahi kiya jaa sakta.. par maiN dukh manauN kyuN.. kyuN...! jaisa manu bhai ne bhi kaha .. jawaan marta nahi hai saheed hota hai.. aur mujhe saheedi pe koi malaal nahi .. koi gila nahi .. mujhe garv hota hai saheedi pe bhi aur india ke match jeetne pe bhi .. jahaaN mere desh ka naam roshan hota hai .. wahan mujhe garv hota hai ...

Aur rahi baat apne nete ko bhejne ki .. arre doosre ke kandhe pe to bujdil rakhte hai bandook.. meri ragoN maiN khud itni ravani hai .. ki khud is desh pe 100 baar mar jauN.. isi liye try to kiya tha.. par kam hight ki wajah se mauka nahi mila .. aur maiN yahaN apna family background zaahir karna hi nahi chahta .. bas itna zaroor mere dada se lekar is peedi tak sabne desh seva hi kee hai .. aur is baat se zara andaaza laga lena meri daadi ko 4 pension milti hai.. aur kya kahuN aapse ..

aur aansooN baha ke chaar lafz likh dene se koi hindustaani nahi ho jaata .. aur kisi ki khamoshi se tum use uske citizen hone se inkaar nahi kar sakte... aur mere bhai jaise ho tum is liye tumse ilteza hai kabhi ye baat usse nahi kehna jo seene maiN ek hindustani dil rakhta hai .. kyuNki hindustani dil jitna narm hota hai na .. zaroorat padne pe itna sakht ho jaata hai ki wo dikha deta hai ki hindustaani aakhir hota kya hai ...

aap-pe na maine kuch thopa hai na koshish bhi ki hai .. aur aapke vicharoN ka swagat bhi karta huN .. kyuNki sabko apni baat kehne ka haq hai ... par main phir se ilteja karuNga ,.. ki aap apne alfaazoN ko soch samajh ke rakheN .. kyuNki hum yahan ladne nahi apne aapko share karne aaye hai .. aur maine pehle bhi kaha hai .. zaroori nahi maiN sahi huN .. aur zaroori nahi ki tum ... aur yaad rakhiye zubaan se nikla hua shabd us teer ki tarah hota hai jo waaps nahi jaata .. isi liye aap sambhal ke apni baat rakhe .. khuda ki kasam swagat karunga maiN aapka .. jaise ab tak kiya hai ,,,

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Main yahan koi information lene nahin aaya. Jaankar achha laga ki aap bhi meri tarah Sipahiyo ke khandaan se hain.. Aapne Maa par thookne ki baat ki,, aap bataiye jab ek beta apni maa par thookne lage toh doosra beta kya kare? kuchh aisa ho raha hai Hindustaan mein....

Ab aap kya jaano ki main kya karta hu aur kya kar raha hu? Main yahan bhashan nahin de raha. woh khokhle logo ka kaam hai.... Main toh apna farz nibha raha hu aur karz chuka raha hu. Magar Sarkaar, kya aap jaag rahe ho???

bhayee mujeh to ye samjh nahi aa raha hia ki mai reply kis baat pe kar raha hun ... aur tum kis baat pe ...

mudda kya hai ... mudde ka hal kya hai ....

aur mai so raha hun ye tum kaise kah sakte ho.. aur tum sirf tum kaise jaag rahe ho ye tum kaise kah sakte ho .....

ek nazm likhi hia tumne ..... aur mere sone aur jaagne ka faisla kar diya ....
nazme to maine bhi bahut likhi hia tumne padhi nahi ... mai kya karu... lekin nazme likhne se mai khud ko desh bhakt ya jaaga hua hindustani ...

Main yahan koi information lene nahin aaya.

Ab aap lene kya aaye ho yeh hi bata do...... yaar itne sare comment yaha sirf bahas pe hote hai ya ladayee ki post pe ... mujeh nahi lagta kisi ko ab tumhari nazm yaad bhi hogi ya ek do line bhi .......

khair ...

tum bata do ki kavita kyu likhi tumne ... haan jo likha fir padha maine woh sab sach hai ...... no doubt ......

par tumne likhaa isse kya chahte ho .... ye to sab jante hai .... issko likhna ka maksad kya hia tumhara

maine bhi do nazme post ki hia yaha

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par maine inko na hi apni deshbhakti sabit karne ke liye likha .. na hi ye batabne ke liye ki jis sakhs ke liye ye nazme likhi hia uski kya kurabni thi... usko haq do uki respect karo.... kuch bhi nahi .........

woh maine sirf apne liye likhi hai ......... haan padhne wale usko kis taragh len ye woh jane ........

maine jiske liye nazme likhi woh ek saheed tha sacha deshbhakt.. lekin uspe nazme likh ke mai khud ko s\desh bhakt sabit nahi karna chahta na hi doosro ko ye ye kahunga ki tum desh bhakt nahi ho kyunki deshbhakt yeh hai jiske liye maien poem likhi .............


agar desh jke liye kuch kar rahe ho ho to karo...... u dont need to show it and to proove it to me and anyone ........

but plzz dont try to blame ANYONE that he is sleeping or not doing anything for country .....
mujhe tumhari kavite pe koe aapti nahi ... isme jo feelign hia woh sahi hai........

but tumhare jo review hai woh sahi nahi ....

yaar poet mai bhi hun tum bhi ho ........

tumen bhi desh bhakti pe likha hia maine bhi ..... baat barabar hai ........

isse kuch sabit nahi hota ki mai so taha hun tum jaag rahe ho .....

aur maine maine apna khoon khoya hia desh ke liye ... lekin isse mai ye bhi sabit nahi karna chahta ki ... ise mai desh bhakt ho jata hun ...........

aur mai sabit hi nahi karna chahta ...........

na khud ke kahne pe na kisi ke kahne pe ....

na tumse kahta hun tum sabit karo ...... ki tum kaise farz nibha rahe ho kaise karz chuka rahe ho .....


par nazme likhne se aisa bilkul nahi ho sakta na hi bolne se ... sirf karke dikhane se ho sakta hai ....

woh bhi bina swarth ke liye .....
sirf islliye karke dikhao taki aur log bhi kare ..
khud ki deshbhakti sabit karo ....

bas yaar

ab kya kahu ....

isse jayda nahi kah sakta ...

bus request hia ki ye fir mat likhna ki
meri ma pe kisi ne thooka hai .....!!

aisa na hua hia na hoga ...

aasman pe thookne wale khud pe thooka karte hai .....!!

dharti chahe pairo k neechy sahi iska kad iska bajood aur iske liye jo izzat hia woh aasaamn tak hai...

jisne bhi aasmaan pe thookne ki koshish ki hia

thook uske hi munh pe gira hai

thats it

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Dosto.n itna late reply karne ke liye sorry, kuchh aur zaroorui kaamo mein busy ho gaya tha... Yaar hum sab baat ek hi keh rahe hain.. but hamari vichaar mel nahin khaate... koi baat nahin.. Aapko aapki pravriti mubarak aur mujhe meri....

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aaj nazar padi i's par to padhne laga....padhte padhte aakhir tak padh gaya...halaNki, yahaN pehle hi bahut kuch kaha suna ja chuka hai...mere bolne ka koi khaas matlab nahi banta...ba's dil mein aaya to kuch likh raha hooN...kisi ko hurt karne ka udeshya nahi hai mera....ba's jo aap sab ne kaha...waisa hi roz main bhi dekhta hooN...isliye ruka nahi gaya....jisko bhi baat pasand na aaye...bhai nazarandaaz kar dena....

vichaaroN ke khel se kab kiska hua bhala...?
baton hi baton meiN kya dekhi talti koi bala...?


baat mere desh ki mujhko na samjhao...
jaisa bhi hai bhala bura, pehle aage badhkar ise apnao...

gandhi bhagat subhash ki kya karte ho baat...?
nange pair daandi, kabhi desh ke liye chum suli dikhlao...!

Siyaasat bhi hai teri meri, gair bhala hai kaun...?
Ungali uthane se pehle duji 4 ungaliyoN pe bhi nazar ghumao...

main bhi chor, tu bhi chor aur chori hai asool...!
tax bhi padta hai dena, vote nahi dalenge, kya baat bani batlao...?

koi kahe ghulaam hoon main koi kahe hooN aazaad...
koi nahi kehta main banta hoon Hindustaani tum bhi pechhe aa jao...!


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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As a indian main to yahi kahuga Ehsas saheb 400 ya 500 lanat ar lanat bbhejne se kuch sabit nahi hoga...............Agar hame haqiqat me sach ka samna karna hain aur sach kehna hain to hame yahi kehna hoga ke "LANAT HAIN HAR HINDUSTANI PAR"

Auro par sare ilzaam thopkar badi badi baat karna bohat aasan hain lekin isme koi badappan nahi. Aaj hame zarurat hain ke har bhartiye apne desh ki is halat par apne aapko utna hi zimmedar samjhe jitna auro ko samjhata hain.

Main Sajid Ghayel aaj apne desh ki buri ya achchi har baat ki zimmedari leta hu, yeh desh mera ghar hain main koi kiraydaar nahi hu jo makaan malik se shikayat karu.

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Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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Jai Hind

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