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Phir kia banday tuu ne paya…? - 28th November 2011, 05:46 PM
Arbab-e-Zoq Ko Aadaab……!
Abhi Bethay Bithaye Yunhi Kuch Khyalat Zehn Me Tarteeb Paye, Jinhen Aik Nazm Ki Surat Me Qaid Krnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai, Raaye ka Intizaar Rahay Ga…..

PHIR KIA BANDAY TUU NE PAYA…?

Ghaat Ghaat Ka Paani Pi Kr
Suthra Pehn Ke, Acha Ji Kr
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Gr Tu Kisi Ke Kaam Na Aaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya…?

Oonchay Oonchay Mehal Bana Kr
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Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya….?

Dil Me Ishq Ka Dard Jaga Kr
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Apni Jhooti Shan Barha Kr
Gr Na Dil Se Mail Mitaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya……?




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28th November 2011, 05:50 PM
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28th November 2011, 06:46 PM
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PHIR KIA BANDAY TUU NE PAYA…?

Ghaat Ghaat Ka Paani Pi Kr
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Gr Tu Kisi Ke Kaam Na Aaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya…?

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Jag Me Apna Naam Kama Kr
Daulat Ke Anbaar Laga Kr
Gr Na Kisi Ka Bojh Uthaya
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28th November 2011, 07:49 PM
Shakil bhai bahot achha likha hai aapne , padh ke aisa lagta hai jaise mere dil ki baat kah di ... majja aa gaya sahab !!
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28th November 2011, 08:19 PM
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Arbab-e-Zoq Ko Aadaab……!
Abhi Bethay Bithaye Yunhi Kuch Khyalat Zehn Me Tarteeb Paye, Jinhen Aik Nazm Ki Surat Me Qaid Krnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai, Raaye ka Intizaar Rahay Ga…..

PHIR KIA BANDAY TUU NE PAYA…?

Ghaat Ghaat Ka Paani Pi Kr
Suthra Pehn Ke, Acha Ji Kr
Dard Chupa Kr,Zakhm Bhi Si Kr
Gr Tu Kisi Ke Kaam Na Aaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya…?

Oonchay Oonchay Mehal Bana Kr
Jag Me Apna Naam Kama Kr
Daulat Ke Anbaar Laga Kr
Gr Na Kisi Ka Bojh Uthaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya….?

Dil Me Ishq Ka Dard Jaga Kr
Hr Muflis Ke Kaam bhi aa Kr
Apni Jhooti Shan Barha Kr
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Shakil bhai bahot achha likha hai aapne , padh ke aisa lagta hai jaise mere dil ki baat kah di ... majja aa gaya sahab !!
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29th November 2011, 03:38 PM
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bahut achha likha hai aapne... padhate samay yah mahsoos hua ki aapki hindi ki pakad bahut badhiya hai...

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Janaab Shakeel ahmed ji ko aadaab. Shakeel bhai aapki nazm bahut achhi lagi hai. Aise hi likhte rahein bhai. Aise umdaa aasaar hamare sath bantne ke liye tahe dil se shukriya.

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Arbab-e-Zoq Ko Aadaab……!
Abhi Bethay Bithaye Yunhi Kuch Khyalat Zehn Me Tarteeb Paye, Jinhen Aik Nazm Ki Surat Me Qaid Krnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai, Raaye ka Intizaar Rahay Ga…..

PHIR KIA BANDAY TUU NE PAYA…?

Ghaat Ghaat Ka Paani Pi Kr
Suthra Pehn Ke, Acha Ji Kr
Dard Chupa Kr,Zakhm Bhi Si Kr
Gr Tu Kisi Ke Kaam Na Aaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya…?

Oonchay Oonchay Mehal Bana Kr
Jag Me Apna Naam Kama Kr
Daulat Ke Anbaar Laga Kr
Gr Na Kisi Ka Bojh Uthaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya….?

Dil Me Ishq Ka Dard Jaga Kr
Hr Muflis Ke Kaam bhi aa Kr
Apni Jhooti Shan Barha Kr
Gr Na Dil Se Mail Mitaya
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waah kya baat hai janaab waah khoob bhut khooob................daad hazir qubool farmaaiye


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Arbab-e-Zoq Ko Aadaab……!
Abhi Bethay Bithaye Yunhi Kuch Khyalat Zehn Me Tarteeb Paye, Jinhen Aik Nazm Ki Surat Me Qaid Krnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai, Raaye ka Intizaar Rahay Ga…..

PHIR KIA BANDAY TUU NE PAYA…?

Ghaat Ghaat Ka Paani Pi Kr
Suthra Pehn Ke, Acha Ji Kr
Dard Chupa Kr,Zakhm Bhi Si Kr
Gr Tu Kisi Ke Kaam Na Aaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya…?

Oonchay Oonchay Mehal Bana Kr
Jag Me Apna Naam Kama Kr
Daulat Ke Anbaar Laga Kr
Gr Na Kisi Ka Bojh Uthaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya….?

Dil Me Ishq Ka Dard Jaga Kr
Hr Muflis Ke Kaam bhi aa Kr
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Gr Na Dil Se Mail Mitaya
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MASHAALLAHI LA QUWWATA ILLA BILLAHIL ALIYYIL AZEEM!

AsSalamalykom Ahmad Shakil Sahab!

Qibla aap nay humayn apna mureed banaliya apnee is kavish kay ba'd!

HAR MISRA NAHI BALKI HAR LAFZ DIL KO JHANJHOR GAYAY!

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30th November 2011, 09:38 AM
janaab ahmad shakil saheb aadaab,

wah kya baat hai....behad khoobsurat khayal haiN aur utne hi khoobsurat alfaaz haiN...bahut khoob...meri jaanib se daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...

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Arbab-e-Zoq Ko Aadaab……!
Abhi Bethay Bithaye Yunhi Kuch Khyalat Zehn Me Tarteeb Paye, Jinhen Aik Nazm Ki Surat Me Qaid Krnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai, Raaye ka Intizaar Rahay Ga…..

PHIR KIA BANDAY TUU NE PAYA…?

Ghaat Ghaat Ka Paani Pi Kr
Suthra Pehn Ke, Acha Ji Kr
Dard Chupa Kr,Zakhm Bhi Si Kr
Gr Tu Kisi Ke Kaam Na Aaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya…?

Oonchay Oonchay Mehal Bana Kr
Jag Me Apna Naam Kama Kr
Daulat Ke Anbaar Laga Kr
Gr Na Kisi Ka Bojh Uthaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya….?

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Apni Jhooti Shan Barha Kr
Gr Na Dil Se Mail Mitaya
Phir Kia Banday Tuu Ne Paya……?
Ahmad Shakil ji..... yahan nai hun aur pehli bar hi aapko padha hai... behad khbsurat nazm pesh ki hai aapne... behad achche khyaal aur khubsurat andaaz....
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bahut achha likha hai aapne... padhate samay yah mahsoos hua ki aapki hindi ki pakad bahut badhiya hai...

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wah kya baat hai....behad khoobsurat khayal haiN aur utne hi khoobsurat alfaaz haiN...bahut khoob...meri jaanib se daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...

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MASHAALLAHI LA QUWWATA ILLA BILLAHIL ALIYYIL AZEEM!

AsSalamalykom Ahmad Shakil Sahab!

Qibla aap nay humayn apna mureed banaliya apnee is kavish kay ba'd!

HAR MISRA NAHI BALKI HAR LAFZ DIL KO JHANJHOR GAYAY!

ALLAH Paak aapko sadaa khush wa khurram rakhay!

Duagoh
Ahmad!

Janab AHMAD Sb....... Aap Ne Jis Darya Dili Se Is Kalaam Ko Daad Se NAwaza Hai , Us Par Tahe Dil Se Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun... Sada Khush Rhaiye



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