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11th November 2008, 03:49 PM
Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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11th November 2008, 05:03 PM
WaaHHHH
bahut khoob zainy jee ..
masha allaah badi pyaari si ghazal likhi hai ..
mujhe har sher me rabt dikhai dee aur ghazal aapke juzbaat ki zubaan lagi ..
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
yuN to har sher khoobsoorat hai par ye 2 ashaar kuch khaas lage
dua hai aap yuN hi likhti rahiye
tareef Qabool ki jiye
apnaa khyaal rakhiye
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11th November 2008, 05:58 PM
aadaab !
aik a'rse ke baa'd app ki jaanib se kuch peRhne ko mila yaQeen maaniye daNg reh gayaa , aik beHad achi koshish per mere t^araf se daad Qabool fermaaiye ...
youN hi bazm ko ronaQ bakhshtey rahiyee ...
aik baat a'rZ kerni thi keh lafz Khabool nahieN :Qabool: hotaa hai barah-e-karam is ki darustagi ker lijiyee
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11th November 2008, 11:14 PM
SALAM
BOHAT ACHI HAI ZAINY.VERY NICE............
TAKECARE
ALLAHHAFIZ
KOI ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE,
JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE,
PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE,
MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE,
AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI,
KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI,
HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE,
JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE.
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12th November 2008, 01:28 PM
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WaaHHHH
bahut khoob zainy jee ..
masha allaah badi pyaari si ghazal likhi hai ..
mujhe har sher me rabt dikhai dee aur ghazal aapke juzbaat ki zubaan lagi ..
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
yuN to har sher khoobsoorat hai par ye 2 ashaar kuch khaas lage
dua hai aap yuN hi likhti rahiye
tareef Qabool ki jiye
apnaa khyaal rakhiye
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Main aap ki bahut mamnoon hoon jo aap meri post per hazir hoye aur aapne meri likhi ghazal pasand ki,..... beinteha hi khushi hui ,aysa laga jaise mera likhe kalaam ki mehnat wasool ho gayi, waise ek baat yeh hai ke main koi zyada khaas to nahi likhti ,bas jo dil mein ehsaas hote hain unko likh ker yanha post kar deti hoon aur aap jese doston ki nazre karam ho jati hai ..........ek baar phir aapka bahut bahut shukriya dil ki gehraiyon se qabool ho...........khush rahiye.....
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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12th November 2008, 02:53 PM
bahut khub...........
jis ghazal ki zameen pe tumen yeh ghazal likhi hain woh bhi bahut khub thi aur yeh bhi...................very niceeee
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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12th November 2008, 05:00 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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Bohat khoob zainy ji kya kehna hai app ki es koshish ka bohat khubsurat likha hai apne khush rahen..apna khayal rakhna....Or aik baat aj bohat arse k baad meri es site per wapsi hui hai sab se pahla riply app ki post ko he ker raha hoon...ayse he khubsurat likhti rahen...
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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12th November 2008, 09:38 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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Dear Zainy....accha laga tumhare ahsaas padkar....tumhari gazal padkar mujhe apni likhi ek gazal yaad aa gaye, uska link de rahi hoon...bahut kuch es gazal se milti julti hai meri gazal bhi....share kar rahi hoon tumhare saath...shayad tumhe pasand aaye.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=56134
bahut derr baad tumne kuch likha hai....hume pasand aaya tumhara likha....yoon hi likhti.
kush raho
tumhari dii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th November 2008, 11:00 PM
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aadaab !
aik a'rse ke baa'd app ki jaanib se kuch peRhne ko mila yaQeen maaniye daNg reh gayaa , aik beHad achi koshish per mere t^araf se daad Qabool fermaaiye ...
youN hi bazm ko ronaQ bakhshtey rahiyee ...
aik baat a'rZ kerni thi keh lafz Khabool nahieN :Qabool: hotaa hai barah-e-karam is ki darustagi ker lijiyee
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Mujeeb saheb aadaab
Apnaa beshqimat waqt Ghazal ko adaa karne ke liye tah- e -dil se shukraguzaar huN.
mujhe intehaayi khushi huii hai aur mere liye ye faqr kee baat hai ,... aap ki taraf se mili huii is hausala-afzaa'i ke liye, aap ki shukr-guzaar huuN.. yuuN hee bazm meiN sirkat karte raheN.. aur jo ghalti aap ne batai hai...INSHAALLAH koshish karungi ke dubaara na ho... ..
zainy
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12th November 2008, 11:03 PM
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SALAM
BOHAT ACHI HAI ZAINY.VERY NICE............
TAKECARE
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Muskaan ji ..apko hamari ye choti si kosish pasand , ye jaan ker hamein behad khushi hui hai...INSHAALLAH kosish karungi aagey aur bhi accha likho...
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12th November 2008, 11:10 PM
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bahut khub...........
jis ghazal ki zameen pe tumen yeh ghazal likhi hain woh bhi bahut khub thi aur yeh bhi...................very niceeee
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
mausam
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MAUSAM JI AADAAB ARZ HAI,
Aapkee naik duaaN yakheenan asar karegii.... Ghazal par aapke nigaah-e-karam aur hounsla afzayi ke liye mamnoon huN..Jis ghazal ki zameen per humne ye ghazal likhi hai..uske aagey to yeh bas khaakh hain, .......bas isay ek choti si kosish samajh lijiye.....
zainy
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13th November 2008, 12:35 AM
Rizi saheb..
Sab se pehle mein app ko SDC per dubaara Khush Amdeed kehti hon aur umeed kerti hon app yahaan pehle ki tarah aate rahenge..Aap ki daad dil se qabool hai .....Koshish rahegi aagey bhi isi tarah aap sab ke saath apne ehsaason ko share karti rahun..khush rahiye...
zainy..
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13th November 2008, 01:01 AM
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Dear Zainy....accha laga tumhare ahsaas padkar....tumhari gazal padkar mujhe apni likhi ek gazal yaad aa gaye, uska link de rahi hoon...bahut kuch es gazal se milti julti hai meri gazal bhi....share kar rahi hoon tumhare saath...shayad tumhe pasand aaye.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=56134
bahut derr baad tumne kuch likha hai....hume pasand aaya tumhara likha....yoon hi likhti.
kush raho
tumhari dii
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Dear Sunita di ,
Accha lagaa apka review padh ke.....mujhe bahut khushi ho rahi hai ke mera kalaam app ko acha laga , app ki duaon ke sadqey main agay bhi ayse hi likhne ki koshish kerti rahongi ..waise maine apni ghazal mashoor shayer janaab khumaar Barabankwii ji ki mashoor ghazal
vahii phir mujhe yaad aane lage hai.n
jinhe.n bhulaane me.n zamaane lage hai.n
[khumaar]
ki base(zameen) per likhi hai..beher aur radeef to wahi hain bas ehsaas hamare apne hai......waise is zameen per hazaaron ne ghazlein likhi hongi....wakay dilchasp radeef hai yeh..apki ghazal bhi padhi humne,bahut acchi likhi apne......radeef apka bhi wahi hai......yuhi hamara hausla afzai karti rahiye...INSHAALLAH ....aagey bhi apko mayoos nahi karungi...
zainy
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13th November 2008, 05:18 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
shukriya
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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Mohtarma Zaini saheba
bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai apne.................................dil se daad qubool kijiye
ek sher mera bhi sun lijiye...............................
Wo naraz the par idhar kuchh dinon se
hame dekhkar muskarane lage hain
..................................Fezan
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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15th November 2008, 06:57 PM
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Rizi saheb..
Sab se pehle mein app ko SDC per dubaara Khush Amdeed kehti hon aur umeed kerti hon app yahaan pehle ki tarah aate rahenge..Aap ki daad dil se qabool hai .....Koshish rahegi aagey bhi isi tarah aap sab ke saath apne ehsaason ko share karti rahun..khush rahiye...
zainy..
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ji janab bilkul hum zarur ate rahen gy.ager app jayse doston ka saath milta raha..bas app ayse he achi achi post kerti raho hum app ko daad dete rahen g...apna khayal rakhna..KHUSH RAHO HAMESHA...
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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16th November 2008, 03:41 PM
zainy saahiba!
aadaab arz hai!
Aapki ghazal padhkar bahut lutf aaya. Har sher mein koi khaas baat hai..hame aap ki yeh koshish behad achchi lagii....... aap ki mehnat saaf nazar aa rahii hai... zameen bhii mujhe be-Had pasand aa'ii ! meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye! yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n.....
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Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
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bohat khuub!
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16th November 2008, 04:33 PM
bahot khoob.......
aur sab se zyda ye do line bahot accha likha hai.......
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
aise hi likte rahiyega......
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17th November 2008, 03:21 AM
Keep Up Tbhe Spirit Zainy Jee......
Sim
If you want ur dreams to cum true...
WAKE UP...!
Love,
SIMRAN
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17th November 2008, 12:27 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
shukriya
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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va alaikum assalam ,va rehmatullahi va barakatuhu,yagfurul laha alana valakum,nasrum minallahi va fatahun qareeb..
jo gazal leker aaj aap humse rubaru hui,woh beshak qaabil e tareef hai.yeh 4 lines inke liye kehne k liye mere paas word nahi hai.
jo dekha hume toh woh shermaye hai u,
k hathose chehra chhipane lage hai.... or dusra
NASHA ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
SANAM k sitam bhie lubhane lage hai...
mein in lines ki apne lavzo mein tareef nahi ker sakta .duaa hai khuda se aap isse bhie behter qalaam leker agli bar humse rubaru ho...fe amaan allah
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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17th November 2008, 06:31 PM
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Mohtarma Zaini saheba
bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai apne.................................dil se daad qubool kijiye
ek sher mera bhi sun lijiye...............................
Wo naraz the par idhar kuchh dinon se
hame dekhkar muskarane lage hain
..................................Fezan
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Janaab fezan saheb..Aadaab arz hai,
Hamari himmat afzaayii ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa. InshaAllah koshish jaarii rahegii aur bhi accha likhne ki...apka sher accha laga hamein..khabil-e-taareef hai...yuhi sath dete rahiye..
khush rahiye
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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18th November 2008, 03:30 AM
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zainy saahiba!
aadaab arz hai!
Aapki ghazal padhkar bahut lutf aaya. Har sher mein koi khaas baat hai..hame aap ki yeh koshish behad achchi lagii....... aap ki mehnat saaf nazar aa rahii hai... zameen bhii mujhe be-Had pasand aa'ii ! meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye! yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n.....
bohat khuub!
Mayank
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MAYANK JI...
Apki nazare.N inaayat hui ..teh dil se shukriya ,muaafi chaahti hu.N ,shukriyaa der se adaa karne ke liye ..yakeen maaniye alfaz kam padh rahe hai ,shayed kalaam likhte waqt bhi ye alfaaz ki kami nahi mehsoos ki humne jo aaj apko shukriya adaa karne me ho rahi hai...bahut faqr hua khud pe ....
Aapne ghazal pasand ki, yaane ke kuchh had tak kaamiyaab mili. duaaoN aur himmat_afzayii ke liye shukrguzaar huN...
zainy...
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18th November 2008, 03:35 AM
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bahot khoob.......
aur sab se zyda ye do line bahot accha likha hai.......
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
aise hi likte rahiyega......
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NASUHA KHAN SAHEB...
Bahut bahut shukriya janaab...aapko hamari ye choti si kosish pasand aayi, ye jaan ker hamein bahut accha laga..yuhi sath dete rahiye.....
zainy
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18th November 2008, 03:38 AM
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Keep Up Tbhe Spirit Zainy Jee......
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Kaisi hain Simran ji aap...
Bahut dino baad aaj apko yahan dekha humne..aati rahiye....daad ke liye shukriya......
zainy
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18th November 2008, 03:44 AM
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va alaikum assalam ,va rehmatullahi va barakatuhu,yagfurul laha alana valakum,nasrum minallahi va fatahun qareeb..
jo gazal leker aaj aap humse rubaru hui,woh beshak qaabil e tareef hai.yeh 4 lines inke liye kehne k liye mere paas word nahi hai.
jo dekha hume toh woh shermaye hai u,
k hathose chehra chhipane lage hai.... or dusra
NASHA ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
SANAM k sitam bhie lubhane lage hai...
mein in lines ki apne lavzo mein tareef nahi ker sakta .duaa hai khuda se aap isse bhie behter qalaam leker agli bar humse rubaru ho...fe amaan allah
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Aadaab Tahir saheb...
Aapki daad to sar aankho.N pe hazoor... khushnaseebii hai hamari keh aapko ghazal pasand aayee...hamein aapka bhi likhne ka andaaz behad pasand aaya ..ummeed karti huN ye zarra nawaazish barQaraar rahegi ....
FE AMAAN ALLAH
ZAINY...
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18th November 2008, 06:01 AM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
shukriya
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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Zainy ji
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.........
very touchy...........
aapki Ghazal Dil ko chhuu gayi.............Daad hazir hai dilse qabool kijiye...Humesha khus rahiye
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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15th December 2008, 12:23 PM
bahut Bahut Shukriya Diya Ji, Aapne Hamari Is Koshish Ko Saraha Aur Isay Pasand Kiya,yuhi Saath Dete Rahiye...der Se Jawaab Dene Ke Liye Muafi Chahti Hoon...
khush Rahiye
zainy....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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6th March 2009, 03:26 PM
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ji janab bilkul hum zarur ate rahen gy.ager app jayse doston ka saath milta raha..bas app ayse he achi achi post kerti raho hum app ko daad dete rahen g...apna khayal rakhna..KHUSH RAHO HAMESHA...
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rizi saheb...inshallah poori koshish karungi ke aagey aur bhi acchi acchi ghazalein likhu....yuhi saath dete rahiye aur mehfil me aate rahiye..
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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11th March 2009, 10:08 PM
: lekin zainy ji......mera naam Nasuha Khan hai n i m a grl....bt y dis saheb?
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NASUHA KHAN SAHEB...
Bahut bahut shukriya janaab...aapko hamari ye choti si kosish pasand aayi, ye jaan ker hamein bahut accha laga..yuhi sath dete rahiye.....
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12th March 2009, 08:47 AM
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: lekin zainy ji......mera naam Nasuha Khan hai n i m a grl....bt y dis saheb?
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so sorry dear , mujhe pata nahi tha ke aap ladki ho, maine id se ayse hi guess kar liya tha ke shayed aap ladke ho, but anyways sorry again....
aur aapka ek baar phir bohat bohat shukriya meri ghazal ko padhne aur sarahne ke liye...yuhi sath deti rahiye....
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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12th March 2009, 09:12 AM
its k dr.....nvr mind.....
aap likte rahiyega..........gud luck..
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9th June 2009, 07:47 AM
zainy jii
bahut khoobsuraat ghazal ... beautifullll
umeed karti hu aap aur ghazal nazar karte rahye
take care
keep posting tooo
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14th June 2009, 04:27 PM
Aadaab ZainY jii.....
It's really a beautiful and sweet Gazal, What's a touchi feeling's you wrrite.......
whole Gazal touched to my heart each n every sher telling such a beautiful
words.................
You Know I am biggest fan of "Ishq" as like a mad about it's feeling.....
Is khushNuma Gazal per dil se daad kabool kareN
Aur ummid karta Hun aisi aur bhi GazaleN aapki kalam se niklengi....
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14th June 2009, 06:21 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
shukriya
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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Zainy ji... bahut hi khubsurat Ghazal likhi hai aapne...iske shabhi sher dil ko chhu jaate hai...piyaar ki khushbu ka ehsaas bhi khub karati hai....very nice creation....aise hi likhte rahiye...bazm mai aate rahiye....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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14th June 2009, 11:04 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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zainy yaar.............. loveeeeeeeeeee u.........
kitnaaaaaa pyaara hai
sooooooo sweeeeeeeeet
lots and lots and lots of love to u
mmmmuuuuaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
keep writing such
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5th October 2009, 06:51 PM
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zainy jii
bahut khoobsuraat ghazal ... beautifullll
umeed karti hu aap aur ghazal nazar karte rahye
take care
keep posting tooo
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shukriyah mandeep ji....aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi jaanker accha laga...
accha likhne ki koshish jaari rahegi
yuhi saath dete rahiye.............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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5th October 2009, 06:57 PM
shukriyah sameer saheb................
yeh jaanker accha laga ke aapko hamari yeh adnaa si koshish pasand aayi...bas kuch jazbaat the dil me jo qalam ke zariye kaghaz per utar gaye...warna hum is layakh kahaan....
khair koshish jaari rahegi ke aur bhi accha likhun
yuhi saath dete rahiye...........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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6th October 2009, 09:55 PM
Wah wa wa ................ tarif nai kar sakta ita mast lika hai apne bahot bhot mast. matle se maqte tak ek kahani liki hai apne jo sachi me bhot achi lagi....
PARWANA
Abed Farooqui
Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar
Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun
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10th February 2010, 01:54 AM
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Zainy ji... bahut hi khubsurat Ghazal likhi hai aapne...iske shabhi sher dil ko chhu jaate hai...piyaar ki khushbu ka ehsaas bhi khub karati hai....very nice creation....aise hi likhte rahiye...bazm mai aate rahiye....
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shukriyaH Naresh ji....aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi, jaanker accha laga...deri se jawaab dene ke liye muaafi chahti huuN..
yuhi saath dete rahiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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10th February 2010, 01:58 AM
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zainy yaar.............. loveeeeeeeeeee u.........
kitnaaaaaa pyaara hai
sooooooo sweeeeeeeeet
lots and lots and lots of love to u
mmmmuuuuaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
keep writing such
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HELLO KHANAK JI.....kahaaN ghayab haiN aap?...i am glad you liked my ghazal......
Thanks for your love and appreciation.....
keep coming on the site.........we miss you...
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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10th February 2010, 11:56 AM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega
shukriya
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AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
Kabhii paas reh kar kabhii door reh kar,
Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.
JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.
Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
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zainy sahiba
radhe radhe
itne khoobsoorat ahsaas aur unke itne khoobsoorat shabdon me piroya hai ham to aapki gazlon ke mureed ho gaye prabhu se prarthna hai ko vo tumhe isse bhi sundar likhne ki taufeek ada kare
yahi hamaari dua hai
apka apna
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