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Baitbaazi-e-kalaam-e-Asaatzaa -
2nd July 2003, 02:45 PM
Dear all viewers Adaab,
Yahan mein ek naya thread start kar raha hoon, Baitbaazi-e-kalaam-e-Asaatzaa,yani Ustaad Shoaraa Hazraat ke kalaam ke saath baitbaazi, aap sabhi shayri.com members se guzaarish hai ki is new thread mein shirkat kar ke lutfandoze hon aur mujhe bhi kuchh seekhnen ka moqaa faraaham karen.
Request ye hai ki is thread mein sirf barhe ustaad shoaraa hazraat ka hi kalaam bhejen. Chaliy "MEER" Taqi Meer ke is sher ke saath Aghaaz karte hain............
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
"MEER"Taqi Meer
hotaa hai kyaa.....................yani ab aap ALIF ya YE se shuroo karen, intzaar rahega.
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3rd July 2003, 04:26 PM
Are bhai saare baazauq log kahan gaye, koi to likhen please is thread mein,chaliye mein hi silsile ko age barhata hoon shayad ke kuchh baat bane........
Ye jo hai hukm mere paas na aaye ko_ii
is liye rooTh rahe hain ki manaaye ko_ii
taak me.n hai nigah-e-shauq Khudaa Khair kare
saamane se mere bachataa huaa jaaye ko_ii
"DAAGH"Dehelvi
waiting for a reply from your side,aap men se koi likhiye please
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5th July 2003, 06:41 PM
Yaaro kisi qaatil se kabhi pyaar na maango
apane hi gale ke liye talavaar na maango
gir jaaoge tum apane masihaa kii nazar se
mar kar bhii ilaaj-e-dil-e-biimaar na maango
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14th July 2003, 07:18 PM
Are bhai saare ahl-e-sukhan logo kahan hain please koi to is silsile ko age barhayiye please..........???????????????
Chaliye mein hi koshish karta hoon..................
Go haath ko jumbish naheen aankhon mein to dam hai
rehne do abhi saaghar-o-meena mere aage
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17th July 2003, 11:18 AM
Still Waiting
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Are Yaar koi to jawaab do?
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Mohammed Nasiruddin Haqeer -
19th July 2003, 08:21 PM
ya konse hai mahfil konsi jagaha hai!
har taraf pathar bikhrey hain!!
insaniyat roorahi hai insan kaha hai!
duniya to nahi ya konsi jagaha hai!
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helle my dear cool down -
19th July 2003, 08:30 PM
tum kisi ko na pukaroo koie nahi ayage.....
kounki mudey kabhi khaber se bola nahi kartey...
" Zindagi bus itni hai ! ek boond pani aasman se aaya aur zameen per ger gaya .... haan ager aap ko kuch aur waqt milta hai tu kisi se pyar karo"
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26th August 2003, 07:17 AM
saahil saahab
ba-sad mazrat khaadim ka salaam tasleem farmaayeN
aapka PM mila tha , pabaaNdi-e-waqt ne ijaazat na di ke fauran jawaab de paauN...ba-har-haal aapke huqm ke mutaabiQ haazir huuN......
nasir saahab ne shayiir hazraat ka zikr nahiiN kiya isliye aap hi ke aakhir baNd ko lete hue silsilaa aage badhaate haiN
Ghaafil na apni deeda-daraa'i se humko jaan
sab dekhte haiN par nahiiN kehte hayaa se hum
daagoN se hi bhari rahe cHaatii tamaam umr
yeh phuul-gul chunaa kiye baaGh-e-wafaa se hum
meer taqi meer
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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30th August 2003, 10:06 AM
maie bhi munh maie jabaan rakhta hu
kaash! puchho ki mud.aa kya hai
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30th August 2003, 05:12 PM
Maikash sahab aur Meena Ji bahut bahut shukriya silsile ko aage barhane ka, chaliy aur aage chalte hain.
kya hai............ yani "H" ya "HE" se shuroo karna hai
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Jaate hain....... yani "N" ya "NOON" se shuroo karna hai, to lijiye Meena ji "Jigar Sahab" ke sher ka jawaab isee ghazal ke unhin ke Sher se.....
Niyaaz-o-naaz ke jhagade mitaaye jaate hain
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4th September 2003, 09:46 PM
Haath chhoote bhi to rishte nahin chhodaa karte
vaqt ki shaakh se lamhen nahin todaa karate
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Jawaab dijiye plz......
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sahil ji jawab lijiye -
10th September 2003, 12:27 AM
apne e par chooda hai mein yahan se start karti hun ---
ek parwaaz dekhai di
hai teri awaaz sunai di hai
gulzaar saheb
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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n aaj lutf kar itna ke kal gujar na sakae
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Hain aur bhi duniya mein sukhanwar bahut achche
Kahte hain ki Ghalib ka hai andaaz-e-bayaan aur
Mirza Ghalib
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rahae-khaza.n maie talashae-bahaar kartae rahae
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13th September 2003, 12:52 PM
Sahab , Aap likhte to achha hain. Par aapke Urdu ke Lafz kafi bhari hain. Aur aap pehele aise shayar hian, jisne apne hi nazmo pe replies kar-kar ke use popular kar diya... Keep it Up
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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13th September 2003, 05:23 PM
ek purana khat khola anjaane mein
khushbu jaise log mile afsaano mein.
gulzaar sahib
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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3rd October 2003, 01:51 AM
Duniyan ne ham pe jab koi ilzaam rakh diya
Hamne muqaabil uske tera naam rakh diya
Qateel Shifai Sahab
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3rd October 2003, 02:02 AM
Sorry Sakhi sahiba, hamne mistake kar di ham ko M se shuroo karna tha.............., chaliye ab M se likhe dete hain, isko maniyega.......
Main chaahtaa bhi yahi tha vo bevafaa nikle
Use samajhne ka koi to sil_silaa nikle
Prof. Waseem Barelvi
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hi -
10th October 2003, 01:23 AM
lavoin pe kuch na aya tere naam ke baad
hamne tujhe yaad kiya harpal us shaam ke baad
(sakhi)
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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14th October 2003, 02:34 PM
Sakhi Sahiba,
Ye thread Asaatzaa ke kalaam ke liye hai,isliye meherbaani farma kar sirf Barhe Shayaron ke hi ashaar ismein likhen.
Daayam paraa hua tere dar par nahin hoon mein
Khaak aisee zindagi par ke paththar nahin hoon mein
Mirza Ghalib
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sorry -
28th October 2003, 08:29 PM
sorry khan ji
ab yaisa nahi hoga age ok
mein bhi shayad bura nahi hota,
woh agar be-wafa nahi hota.
(bashir badra )
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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3rd November 2003, 09:51 PM
Tundi-e-baadi-e-mukhaalif se na ghabra aye uqaab
Ye to chalti hain tujhe ooncha udhaane ke liye
Allama Sir Muhammad "IQBAL"
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4th November 2003, 02:02 PM
ye hum jo hizr mein deewaar-o-dar ko dekhte hai
kabhi saba to kabhi nahabar ko dekhte hai.
galib ji
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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5th November 2003, 11:48 AM
Hain aur bhi duniyan mein sukhanwar bahut achche
Kehte hain ki Ghalib ka hai andaaz-e-bayan aur
Mirza Ghalib
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5th November 2003, 12:09 PM
ro padi shahnaaiya bujh gaye dil ke chiraag
yaar hamko de gaye hai nazraane mein jaane kya
"madhav madhukar"
regards
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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6th November 2003, 12:08 PM
Yaad hain saare vo aish-e-baafaraaghat ke maze
dil abhi bhoolaa nahiin aaghaaz-e-ulfat ke maze
Hasrat Mohani
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28th November 2003, 10:49 PM
jami ke saath hi ambar khareed sakte ho
magar batao mukkaddar khareed sakte ho
kisi ka qatal karoge to haath kapenge ye
ye aur baat hai khanjar kharid sakte ho
-muzeeb siddaqi(mauz)
sakhiiiiiii
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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6th December 2003, 06:26 PM
hamein kya kaam jo nahak sahara gair ka DhunDhe
sahara yahan khuda hii ka kuchh aisaa hai kii kya kahiye
bahadur shah zafar
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8th December 2003, 10:35 PM
ye muhabbat hai inayat hai ya karam hai koi
mere dushman ne mere hak mein dua mangi hai
firak aazmi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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bebasii jurm hai hausalaa jurm hai
zindagii terii ik-ik adaa jurm hai
ai sanam tere baare me.n kuchh soch kar
apane baare me.n kuchh sochanaa jurm hai
yaad rakhanaa tujhe meraa ek jurm thaa
bhuul jaanaa tujhe duusaraa jurm hai
kyaa sitam hai ke tere hasii.n shehar me.n
har taraf gaur se dekhanaa jurm hai
...ayaz jhanswi
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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10th December 2003, 02:34 PM
paras sahiba ji
apne ye gazal likhi yahan bhut achi hai ye meine bhut suna hai ise.lekin apko yahan jo sher post karna chaiye tha woh hai se start hona tha kyun ki mera last word hai hai na isliye.
khair
mein hi is silsile ko aage badati hoon ok
HAIn AUR BHI DUNYYA MEIn SUKANWAR BAHUT ACHHEY
KAHTEY HAIn KE GHALIB KA HAI ANDAAZ-E-BAYAAn AUR
galib
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sakhiiiiiiiiiiiiii
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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10th December 2003, 04:52 PM
REEKHTEY KE TUMHI USTAAD NAHIEn HO GHALIB
SUNTEY HAIN AGLEY ZAMAANEY MAIn KOI MEER BHI THAA
kyun sakhi kaisi rahi
As I stand here today with the world as my witness,
I pledge to you my undying and everlasting love.
I will stand beside you as your partner,
I will stand before you as your protector,
And I will stand behind you as your solace.
Please spend and end your life with me.
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10th December 2003, 07:23 PM
bhut achi rahi janab
ankhoin mein jal raha hai kyun, bujhta nahi dhunaa
uthata to hai ghata saa barsata nahi dhunaa
gulzaar ji
rgds sakhiiii
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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10th December 2003, 08:11 PM
oops sakhii!
thanks for reminding me of my galti...aainda dhyaan rakhoongi
aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa
jo bhii degaa vahii Khudaa degaa
meraa qaatil hii meraa mu.nsib hai
kyaa mere haq me.n faisalaa degaa
sudarshan fakir
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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