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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
 
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Kitna mutaassir hoon' kaise kahun'... -
11th December 2014, 12:11 PM
Kitna mutaasir hoon kaise kahun'
Jaan' leke hazir hoon kaise kahun'.... Har ghadi poochti ho kaun hoon' main Bas ek musafir hoon kaise kahun'.... Karta hoon' main ab jo teri ibadat Ye ki main Kaafir hoon kaise kahun'.... Hai unka karam toe koi fikr nahin Sanjeeda zaakir hoon' kaise kahun'... Mohabbat mein aakhir dagha hee milega Kitna main maahir hoon' kaise kahun'.... (SR) c Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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13th December 2014, 11:51 PM
Bahut achi lagi apki ghazal Shayrana bhai , per ye sher bahut bhaya mujhe..
Mohabbat mein aakhir dagha hee milega Kitna main maahir hoon' kaise kahun'.... YuN hi aate rahiye aur bazm ki raunak badate rahiye Rana ji. aap ko perna achcha lagta hai . Sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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14th December 2014, 02:06 AM
Hamdam Sahab bahut bahut shukriya.
Bilkul aatein rahengey janaab..thank u so much for your kind words. Rgds Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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14th December 2014, 10:21 AM
bahot khooob shayar saahab..... kya andaaz hai aapka... bahot hi khoob
bas likhte rahiye.... aur sdc ki taraf rukh karte rahiye Shukriyaa Shaad...... |
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14th December 2014, 01:38 PM
Shukriya Shaad Sahab'
Glad u like it. Rgds Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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16th December 2014, 12:41 AM
bahut hee khoob Sanjay jee......kya likha hai...,...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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16th December 2014, 02:24 PM
Thanks Arvind Ji......Saadi si chotti si ek koshish:-)
Rgds Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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16th December 2014, 04:13 PM
Waah...Bahut khoob raina ji...........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th December 2014, 04:55 PM
Thank you so much Madhu Ji...bahut bahut shukriya.
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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