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Sad Kisi ke intzar mein - 24th May 2012, 12:47 PM
Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
Din dhalta nahin
Raat kat ti nhi….
Soona lagta hai ghar ka ik ik kauna…
Bhool chukin hoon , khil khilakar khush hona…
Dil pathar bankar ab tidkne lga hai…
Dard bhi lahu bn kar risne lga hai
Kis se kahun , kaise kahun… har pal dard ka bhojh dhoti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein..
   
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25th May 2012, 06:59 AM
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Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
Din dhalta nahin
Raat kat ti nhi….
Soona lagta hai ghar ka ik ik kauna…
Bhool chukin hoon , khil khilakar khush hona…
Dil pathar bankar ab tidkne lga hai…
Dard bhi lahu bn kar risne lga hai
Kis se kahun , kaise kahun… har pal dard ka bhojh dhoti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein..
very touching lines .............. nice

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very touching lines .............. nice

Thanks manshaa ji ................................................ .
   
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26th May 2012, 07:02 PM
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Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
Din dhalta nahin
Raat kat ti nhi….
Soona lagta hai ghar ka ik ik kauna…
Bhool chukin hoon , khil khilakar khush hona…
Dil pathar bankar ab tidkne lga hai…
Dard bhi lahu bn kar risne lga hai
Kis se kahun , kaise kahun… har pal dard ka bhojh dhoti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein..
Dil Ko Chhootii Hai .. Loveleen Ji ! Aap Kii Shabd Rachnaa !!

KhoobSurat Komal EhsaasoN Ko BaDhe KareeNe Se Likhaa Hai !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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26th May 2012, 08:14 PM
bahut hee khusurat lines hain loveleen jee........... daad kubul karein


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Dil Ko Chhootii Hai .. Loveleen Ji ! Aap Kii Shabd Rachnaa !!

KhoobSurat Komal EhsaasoN Ko BaDhe KareeNe Se Likhaa Hai !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!

teh dil se shukria naresh ji... aapne meri rachna ko apna waqt diya aur sarhaya...............
   
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[QUOTE=aru;438962]bahut hee khusurat lines hain loveleen jee........... daad kubul karein

dhanyawad aru ji ..............................
   
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7th June 2012, 09:45 AM
Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
(waah kya baat hai kya neend hai kash esi neend hume bhi naseeb ho jaye....)

Loveleen ji, aapke ehsaas acche lage mujhe.......

aapka.

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13th July 2012, 01:21 AM
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kya baat hai - 13th July 2012, 04:03 AM
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14th July 2012, 03:54 PM
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Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
Din dhalta nahin
Raat kat ti nhi….
Soona lagta hai ghar ka ik ik kauna…
Bhool chukin hoon , khil khilakar khush hona…
Dil pathar bankar ab tidkne lga hai…
Dard bhi lahu bn kar risne lga hai
Kis se kahun , kaise kahun… har pal dard ka bhojh dhoti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein..
bhut khhoob..............

kafiir

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mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai

Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye
tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye


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Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
Din dhalta nahin
Raat kat ti nhi….
Soona lagta hai ghar ka ik ik kauna…
Bhool chukin hoon , khil khilakar khush hona…
Dil pathar bankar ab tidkne lga hai…
Dard bhi lahu bn kar risne lga hai
Kis se kahun , kaise kahun… har pal dard ka bhojh dhoti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein..


Dear Loveleen.....ab intejaar khatam....har din har pal ab khush-gavaar hoga, saath tere ab Piya ka pyar hoga

god bless u

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Khamoshion mein kahin kho rahin hun mein…
Sooraj chadne par bhi so rhi hun mein…
Din dhalta nahin
Raat kat ti nhi….
Soona lagta hai ghar ka ik ik kauna…
Bhool chukin hoon , khil khilakar khush hona…
Dil pathar bankar ab tidkne lga hai…
Dard bhi lahu bn kar risne lga hai
Kis se kahun , kaise kahun… har pal dard ka bhojh dhoti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein...
Kisi ke intzar mein bas din raat roti hun mein

Loveleen ji dil ki gehrai se nikal kar aayee hai yeh aap ki kavita
sundar hai lekin dard saaf nazar aata hai.

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