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12th December 2012, 05:32 PM
Hoth chuu lene se dil ko karaar aata hai...
K yahi karaar hume fir bekaraar banaata hai... !
KATIL SHAYAR ...
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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13th December 2012, 09:57 AM
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Hoth chuu lene se dil ko karaar aata hai...
K yahi karaar hume fir bekaraar banaata hai... !
KATIL SHAYAR ...
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Mera ya zakhm e ruswaaee banaa nasoor na hota,
Agar ik baar haatho say jo tumnay choo liya hota!
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13th December 2012, 08:06 PM
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Mera ya zakhm e ruswaaee banaa nasoor na hota,
Agar ik baar haatho say jo tumnay choo liya hota!
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ahmed Ji...
Shayad mai ghalat ho sakta hu but 'h' se start karna tha Aapko sher...
Anyway ...
Taabiz mohabbat ka Koi jo banata ho..
Mai Uske kadmo me rakh duunga JEEVAN saara... !
KATIL SHAYAR
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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14th December 2012, 07:07 PM
Rooh jaise hai Jism me, Khushboo basi hai phooloN me,
Shamil tha wo dil me aise, Milna khuchh dushwaar na tha.....nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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14th December 2012, 07:42 PM
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Rooh jaise hai Jism me, Khushboo basi hai phooloN me,
Shamil tha wo dil me aise, Milna khuchh dushwaar na tha.....nm
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jo tum bolo sanwar jayen, jo tum bolo bikhar jayen
magar yeh tootna, jurna boht takleef deta hai.......
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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14th December 2012, 07:55 PM
Ho gaya bahut ab mohabbat ka fasana...
Kabhi tera ruuthna aur mera Kabhi manana...
Zindgi Nahi hai Itni k Yu he gava du..
mila tha Koi KATIL Kabhi bass ye bhuul jaana... !
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Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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14th December 2012, 09:55 PM
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Ho gaya bahut ab mohabbat ka fasana...
Kabhi tera ruuthna aur mera Kabhi manana...
Zindgi Nahi hai Itni k Yu he gava du..
mila tha Koi KATIL Kabhi bass ye bhuul jaana... !
KATIL SHAYAR
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Na poocho yaaro hamsay, vasl o hijar ki baatayn,
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16th December 2012, 08:07 PM
kahen kia koi poche hum se 'mir'
jahaN mein tum aye the, kia kr chale....... (MIR TAQI MIR)
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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18th December 2012, 10:05 AM
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18th December 2012, 10:27 AM
na jaane kya hai uski udhas aankoN meiN,
woh mooh chupa ke b jaaye to bewaffa na lge...
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th December 2012, 10:49 AM
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21st December 2012, 09:13 PM
Ghum-e-hasti ka asad kise ko juz marg-e-ilaj
Shamma har rang men jalti hai seher hone tak
GHALIB SAHAB..
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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21st December 2012, 10:38 PM
Kabhi jo hadh se barrhe teri yaad ka habbas,
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Nt mine...
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23rd December 2012, 11:52 AM
labon pe naam tera hi rakhte hain
jab koi gazal nayee hum kehte hain
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24th December 2012, 08:00 PM
hotii hai tere naam se vahashat kabhii kabhii
bar_ham hu_ii hai yuu.N bhii tabiiyat kabhii kabhii
[vahashat = anxiety; bar_ham = restless]
by..nasir kazmi..
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
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25th December 2012, 05:09 PM
SoNchna is diye ke bujh jaane ke bad
Thi woH roshni ke ye teergi hai achchi
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Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
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1st June 2014, 02:05 PM
Ok fine lets restart this thread...
So its "B"
Bahut udaas hai koi shaqs tere jaane se,
Laut sake to laut aa, tu kisi bahane se.
Nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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2nd June 2014, 03:57 PM
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Ok fine lets restart this thread...
So its "B"
Bahut udaas hai koi shaqs tere jaane se,
Laut sake to laut aa, tu kisi bahane se.
Nm
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lijiye Zainyji, "S" se hamaaraa sher...
sach kahte ho, KHudbeen-o-KHud_aaraa na kyoN hooN ?
baiTha hai but-e-aainaa_seemaa mere aage
( KHudbeen = proud/arrogant, KHud_aaraa = self adorer,
but = beloved, aainaa_seemaa = like the face of a mirror )
~ Mirza 'Ghalib'
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd June 2014, 04:45 PM
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lijiye Zainyji, "S" se hamaaraa sher...
sach kahte ho, KHudbeen-o-KHud_aaraa na kyoN hooN ?
baiTha hai but-e-aainaa_seemaa mere aage
( KHudbeen = proud/arrogant, KHud_aaraa = self adorer,
but = beloved, aainaa_seemaa = like the face of a mirror )
~ Mirza 'Ghalib'
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Aadeil saahab aadaab..... waahh kyaa khoob sher laaye hain... bahot ummdah...
G se hamaara ek sher pesh hai....
Gardishe dauraan ki baaten na pooch aye sanam,
bas ye samajh le isse ham tujhko bhii bhool jaate hain..
Shaad....
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2nd June 2014, 07:33 PM
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Aadeil saahab aadaab..... waahh kyaa khoob sher laaye hain... bahot ummdah...
G se hamaara ek sher pesh hai....
Gardishe dauraan ki baaten na pooch aye sanam,
bas ye samajh le isse ham tujhko bhii bhool jaate hain..
Shaad....
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bohat khoob
"H"
Humne maana ke taghaful na karoge lekin
Khaak hojayenge hum tumko khabar hone tak
Ghalib
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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bohat khoob
"H"
Humne maana ke taghaful na karoge lekin
Khaak hojayenge hum tumko khabar hone tak
Ghalib
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ok "K" se
kisii ke ishq me dil ka safar nahiiN thaa,
ke mere raaste uskaa bhii ghar nahiiN tha...
Shaad....
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3rd June 2014, 07:25 AM
Teraa hijr meraa nasiib hai teraa Gham hii merii hayaat hai*
Mujhe terii duurii kaa Gham ho kyo.n tuu kahii.n bhii ho mere saath hai*
-Nida Fazli
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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3rd June 2014, 08:18 AM
har ek baat pe kahte ho ke tuu kyaa hai,
tumhii kaho ke ye andaaz e guftagoo kyaa hai...
Ghalib..
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3rd June 2014, 11:57 AM
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har ek baat pe kahte ho ke tuu kyaa hai,
tumhii kaho ke ye andaaz e guftagoo kyaa hai...
Ghalib..
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Sameerbhai aur Zainyji... Bahot khub kahi aap logoN ne...
Ghalib saab zindabad
to chaliye, hamaaraa sher "H" se
hamraazoN ke mere jo yagaane niyosh the
sargoshiyaaN huii thii jahaaN hum behosh the
~ "Safeer" Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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3rd June 2014, 01:30 PM
Shukriyah aadil sahab
Tark-e-muhabbat par bhi hogi un ko nidaamat ham se ziyadaa*
kis ne kii hai kaun karegaa un se muhabbat ham se ziyadaa
Nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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Shukriyah aadil sahab
Tark-e-muhabbat par bhi hogi un ko nidaamat ham se ziyadaa*
kis ne kii hai kaun karegaa un se muhabbat ham se ziyadaa
Nm
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Dard mene kamaa liye kaafi,
Zabt ki abb zakaat wajib hai.
NM
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3rd June 2014, 02:16 PM
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Dard mene kamaa liye kaafi,
Zabt ki abb zakaat wajib hai.
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hazaaroN khwaahishe aisee ki har khwaahish pe dam nikle
bahot nikle mere armaaN lekin phir bhee kam nikle
-- Mirza "Ghalib"
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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3rd June 2014, 02:30 PM
le chalaa jaan merii rooth ke jaanaa teraa,
Aise aane se to behtar thaa na aanaa teraa...
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le chalaa jaan merii rooth ke jaanaa teraa,
Aise aane se to behtar thaa na aanaa teraa...
nm
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waaaaaah Sameerbhai, kya Daag Dehelviji kee khubsurat ghazal se yeh sher nikala hai janaab..........
toh lijiye Daag saab kee hi Ghazal se 'R' se mera sher
ra.nj kii jab guftaguu hone lagii
aap se tum tum se tuu hone lagii
'Daag' Dehelvi
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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waaaaaah Sameerbhai, kya Daag Dehelviji kee khubsurat ghazal se yeh sher nikala hai janaab..........
toh lijiye Daag saab kee hi Ghazal se 'R' se mera sher
ra.nj kii jab guftaguu hone lagii
aap se tum tum se tuu hone lagii
'Daag' Dehelvi
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waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh janaab kyaaa khoob sher pesh kiyaa hai aapne...
lijiye fir G se dekhiye...
Ghair ki baaton ka aakhir aitbaar aa hi geya,
Meri janib se tere dil main ghubaar aa hi geya..
nm
Shaad...
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3rd June 2014, 03:53 PM
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waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh janaab kyaaa khoob sher pesh kiyaa hai aapne...
lijiye fir G se dekhiye...
Ghair ki baaton ka aakhir aitbaar aa hi geya,
Meri janib se tere dil main ghubaar aa hi geya..
nm
Shaad...
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waah waah Sameerbhai.... bahot hi aala sher khoj nikala hai aapne
lijiye meri taraf se phir se 'Daag' saab ka 'le chalaa jaan meri...' se hi ye sher 'Ya' se
yah samajh kar tujhe ai maut lagaa rakhaa hai
kaam aataa hai bure waqt me.n aanaa teraa
- 'Daag' Dehelvi
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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waah waah Sameerbhai.... bahot hi aala sher khoj nikala hai aapne
lijiye meri taraf se phir se 'Daag' saab ka 'le chalaa jaan meri...' se hi ye sher 'Ya' se
yah samajh kar tujhe ai maut lagaa rakhaa hai
kaam aataa hai bure waqt me.n aanaa teraa
- 'Daag' Dehelvi
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Raha nahi jata tha ek pal usse juda rahna
Takabbur e ishq mein usse judai mang li
nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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4th June 2014, 10:00 AM
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Raha nahi jata tha ek pal usse juda rahna
Takabbur e ishq mein usse judai mang li
nm
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bahot khub...
lahoo sar chadhaa toh ragoN se ab ummeed kya ho
jigar Khusk hua toh ragoN se ab ummeed kya ho
~ 'Safeer' Adil
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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4th June 2014, 12:21 PM
HazaaroN tukde kiye usne mere dil ke magar "FARAZ",
khud hi ro pada wo har tukde par naam apna dekh kar..*
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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4th June 2014, 02:28 PM
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HazaaroN tukde kiye usne mere dil ke magar "FARAZ",
khud hi ro pada wo har tukde par naam apna dekh kar..*
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waaaaaahhhhh, Zainy sahiba.......
kya khubsurat sher pesh liya hai aapne..... masha allah.... kya dard hai Faraz saab ke is sher meN......
'R' se hamaaraa sher...
ranj humko na kisee unke sitam se bhee hai
unkee ranjish bharee aag se aazaad rahe
~ ' Safeer' Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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waaaaaahhhhh, Zainy sahiba.......
kya khubsurat sher pesh liya hai aapne..... masha allah.... kya dard hai Faraz saab ke is sher meN......
'R' se hamaaraa sher...
ranj humko na kisee unke sitam se bhee hai
unkee ranjish bharee aag se aazaad rahe
~ ' Safeer' Adil
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bohat khoob
Hai aarzoo itni ki unse mulaaqaat ho jaye
Mit jauon mohabbat me or naam amar ho jaye
Nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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~$uper M0der@tor~
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4th June 2014, 05:21 PM
Ek muddat ke baad hum ne yeh jaana aye Khuda,
Ishq teri zaat se sacha hai, baki sab afsaney..
nm
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