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koi bat nahi - 17th May 2006, 09:42 PM

Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi
Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi
Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se
Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi
Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko
Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha
Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi
Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana
Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi............................!


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koie baat nahie - 26th May 2006, 06:28 PM

salam,

nice poetry u wrote ---

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koi baath nahi - 30th May 2006, 04:53 PM

yeh aapka sher,

kamaal hai

sydney, fiji, karachi, newzealand, india.

i have sent it everywhere. it is amazing sher. keep it up, keep it going.

cheers

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Paheli


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shukriya - 1st June 2006, 10:35 PM

hausla afjai ke liye shukriya

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lekin apki jankari ke liye, ye sher maine sirf shayri.com par likhe hain inhe likhne wale ka to mujhe bhi nahi pat
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