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Dard Ka Smander -
4th October 2002, 12:56 PM
Hey all I'm trying this 1st time.. please help me.. if any thing wrong or not matched here... Thenx
"Darde dil dekho kitne gum jhele hai, mere massoom dil main zakhmo ke mele hain" mahefil ki khwaish thi muje yaro, dekho zindagi main ajj hum kitne akele hain. Jal Ke Dil Khakh hua Ankho se Roya Na gaya, Zakham Kuch aise diye phoolo pe soya na gayy, Kya Jane kub maut ka paygam aa jaye, na jane kub zindagi ki shaam aa jaye bus ab to ak hi khwaish dil main liye bethe hain, dum nikle bhi to teri chokhat pa... -Monal |
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behtar. -
5th October 2002, 02:22 PM
aadaab monal saahibaa..
jazbaat to bahot acche the sher me..ghazal kehne ki bhi acchi koshish thi...lekin....kya aapko aisa nahi lagta ki ye lines kahin suni hui hain. khayal bahot umdaa pesh kiya hai aapne per bahr radeef aur kaafiye sab ke sab missing hain. is bande ko bhi aise to bahot tazurbaa nahi hai per fir bhi itna to keh hi sakta hun ki koshish acchi thi....sikhte sikhte hi sab sikhte hain....aapki agli ghazal aur ek aur koshish ka intezaar rahega....aakhir aap hamare shaher se hain....itna dhyaan to dena hi padega na  fir mulaakaat hogi. rabrakhaa. ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote |
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