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Red face Be misaal...... - 24th December 2012, 10:18 AM
SDC par shirkat karne walay sab dosto ko slaam.mein yeh kavita is thread pe post kar raha huN kyuNki mujhay laga k yeh ek samajik dard hai tou kyn na isay sayri-e dard par post karuN.is mein mainay jo apne desh meiN har roj ki haalat chal rehi us par kuch paNktiaN likhi hein,yeh khaas tor par us ladki ko smarpit hai jis par haal hi delhi ki ek chalti bus meiN zulam hua hai or sara desh us k saath uth kharha hua hai.

NETA G KA PEGAM DESH K NAAM..........


Aap jaante heiN hum netaoN k baaray
hum kab apna bachan nibhatay heiN
aap apni suraksha ki maaNg karte
hum apni bhi na kar paatay heiN.

ik avla nari ki asmat[ izat] luti
hum kahaN inkaar karte heiN
par jinke liay aap sazaa mangte
hum bhi unhi se darte heiN.

jinhone kia shoshan tumahra
wohi hamara shoshan karte heiN
hum bhi aap ki trah masoom heiN
kyuN hum pe dosharopan karte hein.

dekho, hum ne aapko sab samjha dia
ab kyuN dharna karte ho
bhukhay reh kar khaoge pulis ki goli
kyN be mout hi tum marte ho.

dekhiay.kuch bhi ho kareiNge shanti bahaal
is k liay karni padhay chahay dharti bhi laal
insaaf ja be insaaf hum nahi jaante
jo bho hoga bas hoga bemisaa,
hoga be misaal.

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24th December 2012, 11:06 AM
Bohat acchi kavita hai raj ji.......Bas aasha ki jaa sakti hai ke hamaare neta insaaf karna seekha....aur kabhi kisi per atyachaar na ho...



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24th December 2012, 12:28 PM
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NETA G KA PEGAM DESH K NAAM..........


Aap jaante heiN hum netaoN k baaray
hum kab apna bachan nibhatay heiN
aap apni suraksha ki maaNg karte
hum apni bhi na kar paatay heiN.

ik avla nari ki asmat[ izat] luti
hum kahaN inkaar karte heiN
par jinke liay aap sazaa mangte
hum bhi unhi se darte heiN.

jinhone kia shoshan tumahra
wohi hamara shoshan karte heiN
hum bhi aap ki trah masoom heiN
kyuN hum pe dosharopan karte hein.

dekho, hum ne aapko sab samjha dia
ab kyuN dharna karte ho
bhukhay reh kar khaoge pulis ki goli
kyN be mout hi tum marte ho.

dekhiay.kuch bhi ho kareiNge shanti bahaal
is k liay karni padhay chahay dharti bhi laal
insaaf ja be insaaf hum nahi jaante
jo bho hoga bas hoga bemisaa,
hoga be misaal.

rajinderseep.....
AchChhaa Hai Samajhne Ke Liye ..... Rajinder JI !!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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24th December 2012, 01:24 PM
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SDC par shirkat karne walay sab dosto ko slaam.mein yeh kavita is thread pe post kar raha huN kyuNki mujhay laga k yeh ek samajik dard hai tou kyn na isay sayri-e dard par post karuN.is mein mainay jo apne desh meiN har roj ki haalat chal rehi us par kuch paNktiaN likhi hein,yeh khaas tor par us ladki ko smarpit hai jis par haal hi delhi ki ek chalti bus meiN zulam hua hai or sara desh us k saath uth kharha hua hai.

NETA G KA PEGAM DESH K NAAM..........


Aap jaante heiN hum netaoN k baaray
hum kab apna bachan nibhatay heiN
aap apni suraksha ki maaNg karte
hum apni bhi na kar paatay heiN.

ik avla nari ki asmat[ izat] luti
hum kahaN inkaar karte heiN
par jinke liay aap sazaa mangte
hum bhi unhi se darte heiN.

jinhone kia shoshan tumahra
wohi hamara shoshan karte heiN
hum bhi aap ki trah masoom heiN
kyuN hum pe dosharopan karte hein.

dekho, hum ne aapko sab samjha dia
ab kyuN dharna karte ho
bhukhay reh kar khaoge pulis ki goli
kyN be mout hi tum marte ho.

dekhiay.kuch bhi ho kareiNge shanti bahaal
is k liay karni padhay chahay dharti bhi laal
insaaf ja be insaaf hum nahi jaante
jo bho hoga bas hoga bemisaa,
hoga be misaal.

rajinderseep.....


Aaj ke samaaj aur hone waali hulchal pe bahot teewra kutharaghaat kiyaa hai shaayar ne... bahot acche aur sacche lage jazbaat... meri taraf se is kavish ke liye daad beshumar rajinder saab... likhte raheN...

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24th December 2012, 01:29 PM
rajinder saaheb:

namaste!

aapki bhaavnaao ki main tah-e-dil se qad'r kartaa huun... yuunhi likhate rahiyengaa aage bhee

Khush rahiye... apnaa khayaal rakhen

duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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26th December 2012, 11:41 AM
Rajinder ji....us dardnaak haadse par aapki kalam ne jo dard bayaan kiya hai...ham bhi us dard meiN shamil hai...!!

aasha karti hu ki us ladki ko insaaf jaroor milega....ameeN


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Rajinder jee ...bahut hee marmik aur ek vyangya bhi hai un netaon ke liye...daad kubul karein...


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