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21st March 2012, 06:00 AM
yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Se Aarasta Ghazal Huii ... Praneeta Ji !
UMDAAH !!
MUBAARAQBAAD !!!
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21st March 2012, 10:49 AM
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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Ji Bhaut sunder.......................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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23rd March 2012, 03:52 PM
pari ji
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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bohat khoob....praneeta ji...........................
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
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qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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waahh kya baat hai Praneeta ji.. behad khoob aashar lage aapke.. bahot ummmdah khayaalon se labrez kalaam ke liye tahe dil se badhaai.. likhti raheN.. khussh rahen...
Shaad...
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सारी उम्र आंखो मे एक सपना याद रहा,
सदियाँ बीत गयी पर वो लम्हा याद रहा,
ना जाने क्या बात थी उनमे और हममे,
सारी मेहफिल भुल गये बस वह चेहरा याद रहा
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kahaan gaayab hai paree ji......... aapki shayri ko aaj waapas padhaa to rok na paaya khud ko tareef karne ke liye..... bas jaldi se ab waapas aa jaaaiye.... khush rahiye
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Pyari Pari.........bahut khoobsurat aur behad saache ahsaas hai yeh....sabhi sher dil ke kareeb rhe....!
pyar aur duaoN ke saath
diii
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3rd January 2013, 05:08 AM
originally posted by praneeta
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
too good
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
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qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
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Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Se Aarasta Ghazal Huii ... Praneeta Ji !
UMDAAH !!
MUBAARAQBAAD !!!
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Shukriya Naresh ji......................
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Ji Bhaut sunder.......................
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Shukriya Radhika ji......................
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good one........... keep writing ..............take care................
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Thank you..............................................
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take care
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shukriya.........................................
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bohat khoob....praneeta ji...........................
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thanks........................................
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Wah, !....bohat khoob...kahaan ghayab ho dear. ?.?.......missing you.....
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thanks Zainy.........................
I lost my mom in 2012 so lost track of everything
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31st May 2014, 06:17 AM
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
chahe mujhe barbaad kar
qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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Aadaab Pari Sis,
hmmmmmm... well... a lot of pain is being squeezed into a few lines here... it feels like the lines are yelling please stop.. please stop... hats off to the intensity.... and your choice of words!
And we're very sad...... to hear of your irrepairable loss sis !!
Dua hai... ho zor e qalm aur bhi zyaadaa!
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waahh kya baat hai Praneeta ji.. behad khoob aashar lage aapke.. bahot ummmdah khayaalon se labrez kalaam ke liye tahe dil se badhaai.. likhti raheN.. khussh rahen...
Shaad...
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thank you Shaad...................
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सारी उम्र आंखो मे एक सपना याद रहा,
सदियाँ बीत गयी पर वो लम्हा याद रहा,
ना जाने क्या बात थी उनमे और हममे,
सारी मेहफिल भुल गये बस वह चेहरा याद रहा
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bahot khoob.....you should make your own thread
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kahaan gaayab hai paree ji......... aapki shayri ko aaj waapas padhaa to rok na paaya khud ko tareef karne ke liye..... bas jaldi se ab waapas aa jaaaiye.... khush rahiye
Shaad...
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thanks again Shaad.......I am back now and will try to remain active
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Pyari Pari.........bahut khoobsurat aur behad saache ahsaas hai yeh....sabhi sher dil ke kareeb rhe....!
pyar aur duaoN ke saath
diii
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pyari di thanks for your encouragement
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originally posted by praneeta
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
too good
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shukriya rajinderseep ji..............
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bahot khoob praneeta ji
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Aadaab Pari Sis,
hmmmmmm... well... a lot of pain is being squeezed into a few lines here... it feels like the lines are yelling please stop.. please stop... hats off to the intensity.... and your choice of words!
And we're very sad...... to hear of your irrepairable loss sis !!
Dua hai... ho zor e qalm aur bhi zyaadaa!
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thank you Ahmad bhai............
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thanks again Shaad.......I am back now and will try to remain active
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Thanks alot praneeta...... hope u will enjoy here once again and we will try our best to make this site as per the members expectations...
thanks,
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Aayiye aayiye. ..aap dubaara aaye dubaara bahaar aayi....
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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1st June 2014, 10:12 PM
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Thanks alot praneeta...... hope u will enjoy here once again and we will try our best to make this site as per the members expectations...
thanks,
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well i have no issues with the site............
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thank you ma'am.................
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God Bless u.
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shukriya......................
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4th June 2014, 05:03 PM
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yaad kar fariyaad kar
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qaid kiya hai ruh tak jisne
un yaadon se azaad kar
tanha hum tanha hi rahenge
tu mahefilen apni abaad kar
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
fitrat se to bulbul hi hai 'pari'
khud ko phir na saiyaad kar
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Good one praneeta ji...yun to saare sher asardaar hai par dil ko yeh sher chuu gaya..
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..
-aapka apna
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Good one praneeta ji...yun to saare sher asardaar hai par dil ko yeh sher chuu gaya..
mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..
-aapka apna
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shukriya Mast sahab..................
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mumkin nahi mukammal hona
aisi toh na koi muraad kar
Wahhhhhhh... boht khoob Pari jiii...
DuaooN k saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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