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19th April 2006, 09:52 AM
ahl-e-bazm ko kasak ka adaab.......
is raat se rishtaa mujhe mehenga bahut pada,jaane kya kya kho diya sirf iski gulaami karke.... aaj tiirgi* hi meri ghamguzaar hai.....is tiirgi me hi raateiN kati haiN meri.......kisi ke saath..... kisi ke bina...... tiirgi:andhera,darkness =================================== Gar raat se meri dosti nahi hoti, yuN baar-ha khafaa roshni nahi hoti, gaffaar* maiN nahi!sunlo ae muntzir*, ke ishq me meher* laazmi* nahi hoti, [GaffaaR: merciful ; MuntziR: expectant MeheR: kindness ; Laazmi: compulsory] faazir karaar do ya kaatil karaar do, aag-e-masaaf* mujhpe taari nahi hoti, [Faazir: criminal ; masaaf: war,battle] ulfat me is kadar magloob* hooN ke ab, bardaasht zeest* ki dushmani nahi hoti, [MaglooB: defeated ; zeest: life] ek umr ho gayi kilk* ko fanaa huye, par inteha-e-mashk-e-shayri* nahi hoti, [KilK: kalam,pen] inteha-e-mashk-e-shayri:end of practice of poetry kuch is tarah bhi mod aate haiN ishq me, wo saamne ho deed phir bhi nahi hoti, shayar ki hi dua be-asar rahi 'KasaK', afsos hai tehreer* tilismii* nahi hoti........ [TehreeR: writing ; tilismii: magical] ================================== shukriya, KasaK......... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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Re: yuN baar-ha khafaa roshnii nahi hoti...... -
19th April 2006, 03:54 PM
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kya baat hei aapke likney mein. or jis tarah se aapne meanings likey hein unse bohat madad milti hei padney hei. shukriya kasak ji aapki kaanch |
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19th April 2006, 08:43 PM
kya kahen,hum is kalaam i tareef me,jazbaaton ko is khoobsurati ke saath alfaazon me pirone ka aapka andaaz wakai kabil-e-tareef hai.bas mushkil yahi hai ki humare alfaaz shayad iski khoobsurati bayaan hi na kar paayen.bas itna hi kahenge ki jaisa padhne ki khwaish thi aapse shayad kuch hadd tak aapne humari khwaish poori kar di.bas bura yahi laga ki hume urdu aadaab ki ab talak urdu aadaab ki jaankari na ho payi.agar urdu aadaab se waakif hota to shayad is kalaam ki khoobsurati ko aur v behtar samajh pata.darkhwast bas yahi hai ki bas likhti rahiye aap yunhi.taki hum jaise logon ko urdu ke kuch alfaaz to seekhne ko milen.
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Re: yuN baar-ha khafaa roshnii nahi hoti...... -
19th April 2006, 09:42 PM
hello kasak
i dont agree with this last line of urs afsos hai tehreer* tilismii* nahi hoti well its an apsolutely an magical poetry.by writting this poetry u have riased ur standard and prooved that ur simply one of the best here........this poetry defines it........i have never heard of lot of words here..........pata nahi kuch shayr bari bharkam shabdo ke prayog karne me itne ko jate hai ki wo keh nahi pate jo unhe asli me kehna hai........par aapki shayri ki har line appne aapne aap me complete hai..........keep sharing such gems,and hey surely we will ceratinly learn lot of words and enhance our vocablary by reading such shayris bye and take care passionate........... pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra" -------------------Brizesh_kol_------------------------------------- 
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20th April 2006, 11:28 AM
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shukriya humari mehfil me aane k liye...... waie main jaanti thi ki jab mujhe hi in words k meaning samajh me nahi aaye the to apko kaise aate..... anywaz.....thanx 4 coming.... shukriya, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th April 2006, 11:30 AM
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aadaab ghayal sahab..... well m amazed apko ye poetry samajh me aa gayi..... khair sahi baat kahi apne..... urdu to mujhe bhi nahi aati.....maine to bade shayaroN ko padhke hi seekha hai..... isliye aaj yahaaN tak pahunchi hoon..... aaane ke liye shukriya.... KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th April 2006, 11:33 AM
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passionate lover sahab...... adaab..... sab khairiyat se to hai na......badi muddatoN baad aap humari mehfil me shirkat dene aaye...... khair,aaye to aaye....itni taareef bhi kar di..... agar ye apko kuch sikha sake to matlab likhna safal hua..... aur maine bahut ase words use kiye jo ki maine bhi aajtak nahi sune....hehehe..... lekin ab sun liye......aage bhi aate rahiyega...... duaaoN ke aath ijaazat, KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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18th May 2010, 10:10 PM
Dear Kasak.............aap hamesha hi umda likhti haiN, aapko padna bahut accha lagta hai jab kuch khaas padne ka dil ho to hum aap jaise shayroN ke naam doondne lagte haiN
 god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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12th December 2012, 10:46 PM
kasak .. aaj arse baad tumhe padhaa to yoon laga tum saamne hi ho... abhi ki hi to baat lagti hai, jab tum yahaan aati rahtii thee... is behtareen kalaam ke liye meri jaanib se laakhon daad aur duaaen.. ummeed kartaa hoon is daad pe tumhaari nazre qaram ho, aur inhe qubool karo.... likhti raho..
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13th December 2012, 06:49 AM
shayri me aapki taraqqi bahut pehle ho chuki thi, ab thoda rehum-o-karam kareN apne chaahne waaloN pe aur yahaaN bhi shirkat kareN, taaki hum jaisoN ko kuch kuch itna umda padhne ko mil sake... umeed karta huN ki jald hi aapki qalaam se rubaru hoNge....
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13th December 2012, 03:24 PM
Dear Kasak...aaj phir aapki es poetry ko pada...bahut accha lga, aap jaise umda shayroN se hi SDc hai...har ahsaas bahut gehra....missing u alot
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th December 2012, 09:48 PM
Meri har baat aap ke har baat se achih hai meri har saam aap ke har saam se achih hai doli se zaahk kar dehkoh mera janaga aap ki baraat se achih hai
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