Jaane kyo vo saanso.n ki dor tutne nhi deta,bus do kadam aur chalne ka vasta de kar mujhe rukne nhi deta,baat karta hai vo hans-hans kar jee lene ki,bada ajeeb shakhs hai mujhe chain se rone bhi nhi deta..Aaj honsla deta hai chand sitaro.n ko choo lene ka,vo pyari si surat mujhe tut kar girne nhi deta...Shayad janta hai vo bhi en ankho mein ansuo.n ka sailab hai,phir bhi vo en ansun.o ko girne nhi deta.......Jaane kyo.n??
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
Jaane kyo vo saanso.n ki dor tutne nhi deta,
bus do kadam aur chalne ka vasta de kar mujhe rukne nhi deta,
baat karta hai vo hans-hans kar jee lene ki,
bada ajeeb shakhs hai mujhe chain se rone bhi nhi deta..
Aaj honsla deta hai chand sitaro.n ko choo lene ka,
vo pyari si surat mujhe tut kar girne nhi deta...
Shayad janta hai vo bhi en ankho mein ansuo.n ka sailab hai,
phir bhi vo en ansun.o ko girne nhi deta.......Jaane kyo.n??
ritu jee namaskaar....aapki poetry ke ahsaas acche lage, bas aapka poetry pesh karne ka thorra sa andaaz badaliye, dekhiye a padna asaaN lag raha hai na.....aur ahsaaso.n mein bhi nikhaar sa lagta hai....jab hum bas likhtey h chale jate haiN, kahiN koi viraam nahi detey to hamara likha ek essay ki tarah lagta hai....agar aap es tarah thorra sa viraam dekar likhNge to aapki poetry jayada behtar lagegi....umeed hai aap meri baat samjane ki koshish kareNgi.
yoon hi mahfil mein aate rahiye
kush rahiye
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
ritu ji bohat achaa likha hai aur sunita di ne theek kaha hai aapne jis tarah likha samajh nahi aaraha tha didi ne jis tarah bataya aap wesay likha karain .............behar haal ahsasaat ache lage likhti rahiye...
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
Thanks. . . . .
Apke suggestions k liye. . .
Take care. . .
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
bohat saal pahle ki baat hai, mere ek net friend ne ek poetry likhi thi jiska aaghaaz kuchh aisa thaa...
"rona bhi jo chaahe.n to rone nahii.n deta,
woh shaksh to palke.n bhi bhigone nahii.n deta..
roz bulaata hai woh khwaabo.n me.n aa kar
sona bhi jo chaahe to sone nahii.n deta"
muaaf keejiyega, baaqi ka kuchh yaad nahii.n... lekin yeh poetry behad pasand hai..... jab aap ki poetry nazar paDi to ek baar hame laga ki aap ne wohi poetry post ki hai.. lekin jab paDha to pata chala ki poetry bilkul alag hai, bas kuchh had tak banaawat waisi hai.... aap ki likhi huii poetry bhi pasand aayee... aap ne khuub likha hai.. par kuchh saja kar likhe.ngi t o aur bhi pyaara lagegaa... yuu, n hi likhti rahe.n... khush rahiye!
Jaan kar accha laga mayank ji ke hamari poetry se apke frnd ki poetry ittefaq rakhti hai. . . . .
Thanks 4 telling.
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
Shayra maante hain log hume.n
to shayri to karni padti hai. . .
Thanks
take care
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #