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Talking Jaane kyon......... - 7th October 2008, 11:19 AM

Jaane kyo vo saanso.n ki dor tutne nhi deta,bus do kadam aur chalne ka vasta de kar mujhe rukne nhi deta,baat karta hai vo hans-hans kar jee lene ki,bada ajeeb shakhs hai mujhe chain se rone bhi nhi deta..Aaj honsla deta hai chand sitaro.n ko choo lene ka,vo pyari si surat mujhe tut kar girne nhi deta...Shayad janta hai vo bhi en ankho mein ansuo.n ka sailab hai,phir bhi vo en ansun.o ko girne nhi deta.......Jaane kyo.n??


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7th October 2008, 11:25 AM

Jaane kyo vo saanso.n ki dor tutne nhi deta,
bus do kadam aur chalne ka vasta de kar mujhe rukne nhi deta,

baat karta hai vo hans-hans kar jee lene ki,
bada ajeeb shakhs hai mujhe chain se rone bhi nhi deta..

Aaj honsla deta hai chand sitaro.n ko choo lene ka,
vo pyari si surat mujhe tut kar girne nhi deta...

Shayad janta hai vo bhi en ankho mein ansuo.n ka sailab hai,
phir bhi vo en ansun.o ko girne nhi deta.......Jaane kyo.n??




ritu jee namaskaar....aapki poetry ke ahsaas acche lage, bas aapka poetry pesh karne ka thorra sa andaaz badaliye, dekhiye a padna asaaN lag raha hai na.....aur ahsaaso.n mein bhi nikhaar sa lagta hai....jab hum bas likhtey h chale jate haiN, kahiN koi viraam nahi detey to hamara likha ek essay ki tarah lagta hai....agar aap es tarah thorra sa viraam dekar likhNge to aapki poetry jayada behtar lagegi....umeed hai aap meri baat samjane ki koshish kareNgi.


yoon hi mahfil mein aate rahiye

kush rahiye
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Talking Thanking you... - 7th October 2008, 12:35 PM

Thanks sunita ji,puri koshish rahegi kamiya na rahein...
   
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7th October 2008, 02:58 PM

baat karta hai vo hans-hans kar jee lene ki,
bada ajeeb shakhs hai mujhe chain se rone bhi nhi deta..

kyaa baat hai ritu ji .

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6th November 2008, 02:16 PM

Bahut bahut Shukriya janumanu ji. . . !!


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Hmmm Very Nice Sharing Keep it up Janab




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7th November 2008, 10:14 AM

Thanks a lot. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . !!


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8th November 2008, 12:14 AM

ritu ji bohat achaa likha hai aur sunita di ne theek kaha hai aapne jis tarah likha samajh nahi aaraha tha didi ne jis tarah bataya aap wesay likha karain .............behar haal ahsasaat ache lage likhti rahiye...


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8th November 2008, 12:40 PM

Thanks. . . . .
Apke suggestions k liye. . .
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10th November 2008, 09:12 PM

Ritu jee:

bohat saal pahle ki baat hai, mere ek net friend ne ek poetry likhi thi jiska aaghaaz kuchh aisa thaa...

"rona bhi jo chaahe.n to rone nahii.n deta,
woh shaksh to palke.n bhi bhigone nahii.n deta..

roz bulaata hai woh khwaabo.n me.n aa kar
sona bhi jo chaahe to sone nahii.n deta"

muaaf keejiyega, baaqi ka kuchh yaad nahii.n... lekin yeh poetry behad pasand hai..... jab aap ki poetry nazar paDi to ek baar hame laga ki aap ne wohi poetry post ki hai.. lekin jab paDha to pata chala ki poetry bilkul alag hai, bas kuchh had tak banaawat waisi hai.... aap ki likhi huii poetry bhi pasand aayee... aap ne khuub likha hai.. par kuchh saja kar likhe.ngi t o aur bhi pyaara lagegaa... yuu, n hi likhti rahe.n... khush rahiye!

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11th November 2008, 07:12 PM

Jaan kar accha laga mayank ji ke hamari poetry se apke frnd ki poetry ittefaq rakhti hai. . . . .
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20th November 2008, 12:49 PM

Bahut bahut shukriya harash jee. . . . .
Khushi hai,meri poetry apko pasand aayi. . .
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Shayra maante hain log hume.n
to shayri to karni padti hai. . .
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