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21st May 2009, 03:49 PM
dil to tere saath tha,tujhe hi yeh gawara na tha,
humne manga us jahan ko, jo kabhi humara na tha...
tum kehte ho pyaar kamjor tha humara,
kya pyar dene ka kuch firz tumhara na tha...
jeene ki aas chhoDna bhi kaise chahe.n,
saaNs lene ka faisla akele humara na tha...
shiDdhat se intzaar kiya har saaNs ne tera,
yeh baat aur hai,kabhi tumhe pukaara na tha..
iis qadar bikhre hain arsh par sapne meri jaan!
ek tere siva duniya me.n koi humara na tha...
aa jana raaho.n me.n kisi ga'er ke sath bhi,
sochenge is dil par kabhi huk humara na tha...
bahaaro.n ne kar diya bedakhal apni duniya se,
varna "udasi ka mausam" kabhi humara na tha...
ab toh tut ke girne ko bataab hai 'ritu',
akele sab sehne ka dum humara na tha..."
>>ritu<<
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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21st May 2009, 06:37 PM
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Originally Posted by Ritu18525
dil to tere saath tha,tujhe hi yeh gawara na tha,
humne manga us jahan ko, jo kabhi humara na tha...
tum kehte ho pyaar kamjor tha humara,
kya pyar dene ka kuch firz tumhara na tha...
jeene ki aas chhoDna bhi kaise chahe.n,
saaNs lene ka faisla akele humara na tha...
shiDdhat se intzaar kiya har saaNs ne tera,
yeh baat aur hai,kabhi tumhe pukaara na tha..
iis qadar bikhre hain arsh par sapne meri jaan!
ek tere siva duniya me.n koi humara na tha...
aa jana raaho.n me.n kisi ga'er ke sath bhi,
sochenge is dil par kabhi huk humara na tha...
bahaaro.n ne kar diya bedakhal apni duniya se,
varna "udasi ka mausam" kabhi humara na tha...
ab toh tut ke girne ko bataab hai 'ritu',
akele sab sehne ka dum humara na tha..."
>>ritu<<
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bahut khoob dear.......................aapke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye....keep it up....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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22nd May 2009, 12:10 PM
bahut bahut shukriya lamha.......................
thank youu sooooooooooooooo much!!
God bless you
khush raho
tumhari ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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22nd May 2009, 02:31 PM
dard bhara khyal....
dard na rahe jeevan me dua hai
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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22nd May 2009, 02:37 PM
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dard bhara khyal....
dard na rahe jeevan me dua hai
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yeh sab to zindgi ka hissa hai sakhi ji...
par lagta hai aapko ghazal pasaNd nahi aayi........
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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22nd May 2009, 02:52 PM
haa dard aur gam jindagi ek hisse hai magar dard ko acha kah anhi pati isliye bas dua ki khushi ki.
gazal achi hai...
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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23rd May 2009, 12:47 PM
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haa dard aur gam jindagi ek hisse hai magar dard ko acha kah anhi pati isliye bas dua ki khushi ki.
gazal achi hai...
sakhi
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Sakhi jee,
ab toh aap par bhi ghazal likhni paDhegi....
tab hi aap khul ke apne jajbaat se ru-ba-roo karaiyega..
abhi chalti hoon..
khush rahiye
God bless you
aapki ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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23rd May 2009, 03:38 PM
Ritu jii..........
Bhai dard ke maumle mein mujhe jyada pata nahi kyunki main jyada ishq per likhana pasand karta huN....
Per aapke ahsaas dard per bahut hi asardar lagte hai.....
Bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne aisa laga jaise kisi ne aapni mohobbat ka sacha apsana bayan kiya ho.....
Is behtrin pesh kash per daad kabool kijiye..........
Keep posting.........
Keep smiling..........
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23rd May 2009, 05:17 PM
Ritu ji !
aapki iss Ghazal ke ehsaas bahut ache lage padhkar....ek pal ko main aapke ehsaaso mai hi dub gaya....kuch sher toh bahut hi ache lage mujhe...vaise toh saari Ghazal hi samvedna ke ras mai dubi hui hai.....
aa jana raaho.n me.n kisi ga'er ke sath bhi,
sochenge is dil par kabhi huk humara na tha...
bahaaro.n ne kar diya bedakhal apni duniya se,
varna "udasi ka mausam" kabhi humara na tha...
in do shero ne mujhe bahut parbhavit kaiya......aise hi likhte rahiyega....
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24th May 2009, 12:16 PM
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Ritu jii..........
Bhai dard ke maumle mein mujhe jyada pata nahi kyunki main jyada ishq per likhana pasand karta huN....
Per aapke ahsaas dard per bahut hi asardar lagte hai.....
Bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne aisa laga jaise kisi ne aapni mohobbat ka sacha apsana bayan kiya ho.....
Is behtrin pesh kash per daad kabool kijiye..........
Keep posting.........
Keep smiling..........
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bahut bahut shukriya sameer jee,
aapki daad humesha sir-aankho.n par.....
khush rahiye
aate rahiye..
God bless you
aapki dost
ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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24th May 2009, 12:32 PM
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Ritu ji !
aapki iss Ghazal ke ehsaas bahut ache lage padhkar....ek pal ko main aapke ehsaaso mai hi dub gaya....kuch sher toh bahut hi ache lage mujhe...vaise toh saari Ghazal hi samvedna ke ras mai dubi hui hai.....
aa jana raaho.n me.n kisi ga'er ke sath bhi,
sochenge is dil par kabhi huk humara na tha...
bahaaro.n ne kar diya bedakhal apni duniya se,
varna "udasi ka mausam" kabhi humara na tha...
in do shero ne mujhe bahut parbhavit kaiya......aise hi likhte rahiyega....
---naresh mehra---
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bahut bahut shukriya naresh jee...
khush rahiye
God bless you
aapki dost
ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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24th May 2009, 01:16 PM
Ritu.........................
aree etna dard chuppa kar rakha hai dil mein
hume aaj tak es baat ka andaza na tha.....
bahut acchi poetry hai aapki....sacchi ritu hume behad hairaani hue aapki poetry padkar, kabhi socha na tha ki ritu ka atit aisa hoga...bhagwaan se dua hai ki aane wala har pal "KhusiyaoN ke mausam" lekar aaye.....ameeN
duao.n ke saath
teri diii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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24th May 2009, 01:17 PM
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dil to tere saath tha,tujhe hi yeh gawara na tha,
humne manga us jahan ko, jo kabhi humara na tha...
tum kehte ho pyaar kamjor tha humara,
kya pyar dene ka kuch firz tumhara na tha...
jeene ki aas chhoDna bhi kaise chahe.n,
saaNs lene ka faisla akele humara na tha...
shiDdhat se intzaar kiya har saaNs ne tera,
yeh baat aur hai,kabhi tumhe pukaara na tha..
iis qadar bikhre hain arsh par sapne meri jaan!
ek tere siva duniya me.n koi humara na tha...
aa jana raaho.n me.n kisi ga'er ke sath bhi,
sochenge is dil par kabhi huk humara na tha...
bahaaro.n ne kar diya bedakhal apni duniya se,
varna "udasi ka mausam" kabhi humara na tha...
ab toh tut ke girne ko bataab hai 'ritu',
akele sab sehne ka dum humara na tha..."
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bahut pyaara likha hai aapne ritu g, sach mein aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne mere dil ka haal likh diya hai, yakeen maaniye apne bhi kuch aise hee jajbaat hain.
Its really superb, daad kubool kijiyega
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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24th May 2009, 01:25 PM
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Ritu.........................
aree etna dard chuppa kar rakha hai dil mein
hume aaj tak es baat ka andaza na tha.....
bahut acchi poetry hai aapki....sacchi ritu hume behad hairaani hue aapki poetry padkar, kabhi socha na tha ki ritu ka atit aisa hoga...bhagwaan se dua hai ki aane wala har pal "KhusiyaoN ke mausam" lekar aaye.....ameeN
duao.n ke saath
teri diii
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hi di...
main yahi soch rahi thi abhi tak di ne meri post paDhi bhi ya nahi...
aapne reply kiya bahut accha laga..........
thaks you sooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhh di!!
ab aap mil gayi ho toh mausam bhi badal hi jayega.........
khush rahiye
aapki chhoti behna
ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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24th May 2009, 01:27 PM
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bahut pyaara likha hai aapne ritu g, sach mein aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne mere dil ka haal likh diya hai, yakeen maaniye apne bhi kuch aise hee jajbaat hain.
Its really superb, daad kubool kijiyega
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jee,
meharbaani aapki........
aapki daad dil se kubool hai..
bahut bahut shukriya
khush rahiye.. God bless you
aapki dost
ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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