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Pyaar Tadpaayega - 12th June 2016, 10:33 AM

Jise chaha woh ishq se bekhabar nikla
Yeh to yaaron kaatilon ka shahar nikla
Paak mahobbat ko badnaam kar gaye
Ek din khat pyaar ke woh nilaam kar gaye
Ham mahobbat ka harzaana bharte rahe
Woh sar-e-aam bewafai karte rahe
Rutha hua mausam laut kar na aayega
Pyaar har haal me dil ko tadpaayega.
   
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12th June 2016, 10:41 AM

Bohat khoob nazm pesh ki hai aapne pooja ji

Apne shirkat se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye

Na-cheez ki daad qubool kijiye
   
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12th June 2016, 01:44 PM

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Bohat khoob nazm pesh ki hai aapne pooja ji

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Na-cheez ki daad qubool kijiye
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buhet achee nazm likhee hey aap ney pooja
buhet khoob


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Waaaahhhhh!!!! Bahut khoob..........



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21st June 2016, 12:43 AM

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Jise chaha woh ishq se bekhabar nikla
Yeh to yaaron kaatilon ka shahar nikla
Paak mahobbat ko badnaam kar gaye
Ek din khat pyaar ke woh nilaam kar gaye
Ham mahobbat ka harzaana bharte rahe
Woh sar-e-aam bewafai karte rahe
Rutha hua mausam laut kar na aayega
Pyaar har haal me dil ko tadpaayega.
Pooja ji , aadaab...

ummeed karta hoon khush hongi aap.... jaisaa ki aapke kalaam ko bazm me maujood paakar ham khush hue hain....

bahut hi dard se labrez kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.. hamaari malik se duaa hai ke aapko sukoon mile, aur aapke kalaam jald hi dard se muhabbat ki taraf rukh karte chale jaaen......

khush rahiye

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