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next>>>>>>
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ya+haaN
1 / 2
aur
yaaN 2
bhi
next word
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tutarnt
tu 1 / ran 2 / t1
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tutarnt
tu 1 / ran 2 / t1
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fir .......... 2
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fir .......... 2
next word >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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1st July 2010, 03:28 PM
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tou = x
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कि - 1
की X ....
and the next word is .............
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कि - 1
की X .... ye theek hai
and the next word is .............
kisi
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maamla yaa kuch uljha ulja hai
ki x / si x
magar 22 sahi lagta hai
12 sahi hai aur 21 bhi sahi sa lagta hai...ek baar nibh sakta hai
11 par dil mutmain nahi hai.....kisi aur ko batana hoga[/B]
agar time mila aur mood hua to precedents dekhta u aur batata hu
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maamla yaa kuch uljha ulja hai
ki x / si x
magar 22 sahi lagta hai
12 sahi hai aur 21 bhi sahi sa lagta hai...ek baar nibh sakta hai
11 par dil mutmain nahi hai.....kisi aur ko batana hoga[/B]
agar time mila aur mood hua to precedents dekhta u aur batata hu
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dhad/k/no
2 1 X
next word is >>>>
tishnagi - thirst
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dhad/k/no
2 1 X
next word is >>>>
tishnagi - thirst
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Tish = 2
na = 1
gi = x
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3rd July 2010, 09:54 AM
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Tish = 2
na = 1
gi = x
Bardasht
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bar 2 / daa 2 / sth 1
( is wors ke 'sth' me ek discussion...jiska ishaara maine pahle aaye 'zeest' word me kiya tha.....magar shayad yaha appropriate nahi hai .....sirf isliye kah raha hu ki omission ka ilzaam na lage)
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bar 2 / daa 2 / sth 1
( is wors ke 'sth' me ek discussion...jiska ishaara maine pahle aaye 'zeest' word me kiya tha.....magar shayad yaha appropriate nahi hai .....sirf isliye kah raha hu ki omission ka ilzaam na lage)
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Pre /2/ m /1/
yeh theek hai zidd sahab
next...... marqaz
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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Pre /2/ m /1/
yeh theek hai zidd sahab
next...... marqaz
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Mar= 2
kaz = 2
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Mar= 2
kaz = 2
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mash 2 / wa 1 /ra x
next >>>>>>>>>>>
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Dha = 1
ram = 2
Dharam = 1 / 2
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Dha = 1
ram = 2
Dharam = 1 / 2
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5th July 2010, 11:55 AM
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gul 2 / shan 2
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jaagate = to wake up-waking-arise-to arise
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X ... 1 hi ayega i think , jaagte bolte hue te word ki sound short hi aa rahi hia har lihaaj se
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5th July 2010, 11:59 AM
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2 1 X
X ... 1 hi ayega i think , jaagte bolte hue te word ki sound short hi aa rahi hia har lihaaj se
Next word >>>>
21x sahi hai
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( info=yaha 'z' bahut chota syllable hai....beher ke agee bhi nikal jaaye last to misra beher me mana jayega)
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kar 2 / z 1
( info=yaha 'z' bahut chota syllable hai....beher ke agee bhi nikal jaaye last to misra beher me mana jayega)
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means
2 wazn ka wrod last mai chahiye baha hum karz likh sakte haiN
21 wazb bhi chalega baha .
kya ye har mizre mai ho sakta hia ghazal ke >?
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ajeeb..
ajee/b
2/1
a/jee/b
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dono tarah se pronounce ho sakta hia, i think ya maine hi karta hun ....
par aji-
VCV wala word suna bhi nahi
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means
2 wazn ka wrod last mai chahiye baha hum karz likh sakte haiN
21 wazb bhi chalega baha .
kya ye har mizre mai ho sakta hia ghazal ke >?
jee ,ye har misre me ho sakta hai jaha radeef ki bandish na ho
bus 2 situation me nahi ho sakta:
# agar apne apna koi beher ijaad kiya ho...tab ye liberty aap nahi le sakte unless an until you are a big urdu daan..and master of prosody and know the manipulations
# sirf aur sirf ye is beher me permitted nahi hai......1222/1222/1222/1222
baki sab standard beher me iska permission hai
difinition of very short syllable:
jo sirf consonant ho aur last me aaya ho...jaise wazn ka 'n'....jald ka 'd'
agar ap 2 / ni 1 ...yaha ni=1 hai magar ye aap nahi le sakte...kyuki
ni=cv
sirf aur sirf 'c'(consonant)
laat ka 'l'....chalega......farz ka'z' chalega...magar
jaise ka 'se' nahi.....
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ajeeb..
ajee/b
2/1
a/jee/b
121
dono tarah se pronounce ho sakta hia, i think ya maine hi karta hun ....
par aji-
VCV wala word suna bhi nahi
ye break up sylabble ke liye hai word ke liye nahi...........
aue aapne aisa suna nahi kyuki aisa possible nahi mostly......
dekhiye.......
vc= me sylabble khatm ho jayega...jaise ajnabi ka 'aj'
ye cv= jaise sadak ka 'sa'
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a 1 / jee 2 / b 1....ye hai v / cvv / c......takhte ke liye hai.....word ke liye nahi
v 1 / cvv 2 / c 1
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bees
bee 2
s 1
bees 21
next: accha??
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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bee 2
s 1
bees 21
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mehmaan
meh 2
maa 2
n 1
mehmaan 221
next:sangdil=hard hearted,merciless
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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mehmaan
meh 2
maa 2
n 1
mehmaan 221
meh 2 / maa 2....bhi shayri me use hota hai....aam bolchal me ho na ho
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san 2 /g 1 /dil 2
( galat lagta hai lekin maine sangdil 2 takhte me bhi dekha hai kisi ustaad ka)
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san 2 /g 1 /dil 2
( galat lagta hai lekin maine sangdil 2 takhte me bhi dekha hai kisi ustaad ka)
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Gu = X
Laa = 2
B = 1
Gulaab = 1 / 2 / 1
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Gu = X
Laa = 2
B = 1
Gulaab = 1 / 2 / 1
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ab aa /ya
2 XX
aise word ka wazan kaise kare jab dono hi X hoN..??
ya
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ab aa /ya
2 XX
aise word ka wazan kaise kare jab dono hi X hoN..??
ab 2 / aa 2 / ya x
aaya ka 'aa' will always be 2 ....koi bhi word 'aa' se shuru hota hai to 2 ka wazn hai
ab izafat hai...neeche...derived takhta hai...syntehetic takhtaa
a 1 /baa 2 /yaa 2 = a.b_aaya
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nee 2 / nd 1
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chat . 2
and next word is
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chat . 2
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kaa = 2
lee = 2
J = 1
kaaleej = 2/2/1
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kaa = 2
lee = 2
J = 1
kaaleej = 2/2/1
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Khi /1/ Lau /2/ Naa /2/
Next..........
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Khi /1/ Lau /2/ Naa /2/
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Shi = 1
Qa = x
Na = 2
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Ab thoda change karta huN ...... ab hum poore misre ki takhti karenge ...
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Mera misra hai :
दिखने मे तो बहुत ज़रा सी है
दिख 2
ने X
मे X
तो 2
ब 1
हुत 2
ज़ 1
रा 2
सी 2
है 2 (X)
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2 X X 2 1 2 1 2 2 X
Plz check this
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बड़ी गहरी मगर उदासी है
ब 1
ड़ी x
गह 2
री 2
म 1
गर 2
उ 1
दा 2
सी2
है 2
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1 x 2 2 1 2 1 2 2 2
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वादे से फिरना न अपना शेवा
वा 2दे1 से x फिर 2नाx न1 अप 2नाx शे 2वा2
बा 2त1 भी2 ते 2री1 तूx भी2 सिया2सी2 है2
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Mera misra hai :
दिखने मे तो बहुत ज़रा सी है
दिख 2
ने X
मे X
तो 2
ब 1
हुत 2
ज़ 1
रा 2
सी 2
है 2 (X)
baher kabhi bhi 1 ke wazn se nahi khatm ho sakta ...never ever
isliye us jagah 'hai' =2 hi hoga....
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2 X X 2 1 2 1 2 2 X
Plz check this
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OK thanx ,
hai misre ke beech mai ho to, X ho sakta hai ....!!
right ?
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OK thanx ,
hai misre ke beech mai ho to, X ho sakta hai ....!!
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