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yun lagta hai koi mujhe phir pukaare..... - 12th June 2015, 11:52 PM
DostoN,

Doston ek nayi ghazal aap sabke saamne rakh raha hoon. Is ghazal ko maine aur masti ji ne milkar roop dene ki koshish ki hai umeed hai aapki daad ki haqdaar hogi...

vo parbat vo mausam vo dilkash nazaare
vo baadal ke saaye vo lehron ke dhaare

vo jheelon ka paani vo raaton ke taare
abhi yaad mujhko hai saare ke saare

Muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
samajhte the hum tum nazar ke ishaare

yun dhalte the din justjuu mein tumhari
guzarti thi shaamein tumhare sahaare

kabhi to bataao mujhe aake jaanam
kahan kho gaye vo dilkash nazaare

nami si nighaahon mein hai ab bhi baaki
yun lagta hai koi mujhe phir pukaare


वो पर्बत वो मौसम वो दिलकश नज़ारे
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Waaaaah! Anu ji...pahli baar me yahi ek shabd nikla aapki ye khoobsoorat si ghazal padh kar..din ban gaya hai aaj ka yakeen karein.....har sher me ankhon ke samne ek tasweer banti chali gayi...muhabbat me bitaye palon ko kya khoobi se jiya hai aapne har lafz me..dil tak pahunche aapke jazbaat......aur isliye kai baar pada ise bahut sukoon hasil hua....purasar kalaam raha sahab.....

Bahut khooob.........aap dono ko dher sari duayein aur daad dil se nikli is behatreeen ghazal par...likhte rHiye..taki ham aise hee lutf uthate rahein...


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DostoN,

Doston ek nayi ghazal aap sabke saamne rakh raha hoon. Is ghazal ko maine aur masti ji ne milkar roop dene ki koshish ki hai umeed hai aapki daad ki haqdaar hogi...

vo parbat vo mausam vo dilkash nazaare
vo baadal ke saaye vo lehron ke dhaare

vo jheelon ka paani vo raaton ke taare
abhi yaad mujhko hai saare ke saare

Muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
samajhte the hum tum nazar ke ishaare

yun dhalte the din justjuu mein tumhari
guzarti thi shaamein tumhare sahaare

kabhi to bataao mujhe aake jaanam
kahan kho gaye vo dilkash nazaare

nami si nighaahon mein hai ab bhi baaki
yun lagta hai koi mujhe phir pukaare


वो पर्बत वो मौसम वो दिलकश नज़ारे
वो बादल के साये वो लहरों के धारे

वो झीलों का पानी वो रातों के तारे
अभी याद मुझको है सारे के सारे

मुहब्बत में कब थी जुबां की ज़रुरत
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कभी तो बताओ मुझे आके जानम
कहाँ खो गए वो दिलकश नज़ारे

नमी सी निग़ाहों में है अब भी बाकी
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Waaaaaaaaahh!!!

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Nayab ghazal hui hy....
Sir ta paa kamal ka karishma hy...

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Wah sahib, kamaal ki peshkash huyi hai. Aap dono ko dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad.
Bohot he khoobsurat kalaam.
Khush rahiye. Khuda aapko hamesha khush rakhe aur aap humeiN aise he nayaab kalaam paDhne ka mauqa dete raheiN.

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Waaaaah! Anu ji...pahli baar me yahi ek shabd nikla aapki ye khoobsoorat si ghazal padh kar..din ban gaya hai aaj ka yakeen karein.....har sher me ankhon ke samne ek tasweer banti chali gayi...muhabbat me bitaye palon ko kya khoobi se jiya hai aapne har lafz me..dil tak pahunche aapke jazbaat......aur isliye kai baar pada ise bahut sukoon hasil hua....purasar kalaam raha sahab.....

Bahut khooob.........aap dono ko dher sari duayein aur daad dil se nikli is behatreeen ghazal par...likhte rHiye..taki ham aise hee lutf uthate rahein...
Madhu aapne padhaa aur ghazal ki gehraaii aapke dil ko chuu saki yeh jaankar bahut aacha laga...aap yunhi shayar ke ehsaason ko samajhti raheiN aur hum yunhi likhte raheiN..


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naayaab, karishma, ajoobaa, ibaadat......... kyaa khoob hai ye kalaam ke bas daad hi daad... likhte rahiye khush rahiye


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Bahut hi kamal ki rahi.aapki ye peshkash , pyar mein dooba her ashar
aur purani yadoN ke jharokhe se nikalte ehasas..ek khoobsoorat ghazal
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Love God bless u both - 16th June 2015, 02:03 PM
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Doston ek nayi ghazal aap sabke saamne rakh raha hoon. Is ghazal ko maine aur masti ji ne milkar roop dene ki koshish ki hai umeed hai aapki daad ki haqdaar hogi...

vo parbat vo mausam vo dilkash nazaare
vo baadal ke saaye vo lehron ke dhaare

vo jheelon ka paani vo raaton ke taare
abhi yaad mujhko hai saare ke saare

Muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
samajhte the hum tum nazar ke ishaare

yun dhalte the din justjuu mein tumhari
guzarti thi shaamein tumhare sahaare

kabhi to bataao mujhe aake jaanam
kahan kho gaye vo dilkash nazaare

nami si nighaahon mein hai ab bhi baaki
yun lagta hai koi mujhe phir pukaare


वो पर्बत वो मौसम वो दिलकश नज़ारे
वो बादल के साये वो लहरों के धारे

वो झीलों का पानी वो रातों के तारे
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Aapki jaanib se nikli daad seedhe dil tak pahunchi hai. Yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa


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Muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
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sadke jauN apni es pyari si jodi ke pyare se nazaraane par dil garden garden ho gya ji aap dono ki jugal-bandi ko dekh kar.

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aap dono ne bahut acchi gazal padne ka mokka hame diya hai, sabhi sher daad ke haqdaar hai.

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Didi aapke pyaar ka behad shukriyaa, aapki inaayat yunhi bani rahe itni hi dua hai humari...aap bas padh kar daad de dete hai to lagta hai ki theek thaak likh diya hoga..

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Behad Umda kalaam pesh Kiya hai aapne.. Likhte rahiye , sunate rahiye... Hamesh.. shukriya
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Waaaaah! Anu ji...pahli baar me yahi ek shabd nikla aapki ye khoobsoorat si ghazal padh kar..din ban gaya hai aaj ka yakeen karein.....har sher me ankhon ke samne ek tasweer banti chali gayi...muhabbat me bitaye palon ko kya khoobi se jiya hai aapne har lafz me..dil tak pahunche aapke jazbaat......aur isliye kai baar pada ise bahut sukoon hasil hua....purasar kalaam raha sahab.....

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Nayab ghazal hui hy....
Sir ta paa kamal ka karishma hy...

Beshumaar daad qabool kejiye...

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Anu.bhai,
Bahut hi kamal ki rahi.aapki ye peshkash , pyar mein dooba her ashar
aur purani yadoN ke jharokhe se nikalte ehasas..ek khoobsoorat ghazal
ke liye dheron daad kabool.kareiN.

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sadke jauN apni es pyari si jodi ke pyare se nazaraane par dil garden garden ho gya ji aap dono ki jugal-bandi ko dekh kar.

Dear Anu+Sarika
aap dono ne bahut acchi gazal padne ka mokka hame diya hai, sabhi sher daad ke haqdaar hai.

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