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yaad - 3rd September 2004, 12:20 AM

pehre hai hazaaro tere ghar ke samne
aaya hu main aaj tujhko yeh samjhane
duniya ki rasme todi toh kya bura kiya
is dil ne tujhko yaad kiya toh kya gunah kiya

sab kuch dhundla sa hai
pyaar mera tera he to hai
jo tune mujhko apnaya toh kya bura kiya
is dil ne tuje yaad kiya toh kya gunah kiya

pedo se patte dhal gaye
hawaein bhi rukh mod gaye
kabra pe hamare voh phool laye toh kya bura kiya
aakhir is dil ne tujhko yaad kiya toh kya gunah kiya
   
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very beautiful words - 4th September 2004, 06:42 PM

Namaskar Harmeet Ji

Pehle baar aapka likha hua kuch pada.very nice words.
Bahut hi sundar lafzon mein aapne apni rachna ko dhala hay.
Daad kabul kijeye.Keep up the good work.These lines are very beautifully composed.

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4th September 2004, 06:49 PM

pehre hai hazaaro tere ghar ke samne
aaya hu main aaj tujhko yeh samjhane
duniya ki rasme todi toh kya bura kiya
is dil ne tujhko yaad kiya toh kya gunah kiya

Really nice words... Do keep it up...


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