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Thumbs up Absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN.......! - 5th February 2007, 12:38 AM

mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart


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5th February 2007, 09:48 AM

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart

hi chotu ustaz

kamal ka kalam likha hai yaar tune to
sachmuch urdu worss ka itna accha sanyojan.......
kash hum bhi esa kar pate.....
daad kabool karna dost
shukriaya

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5th February 2007, 06:22 PM

ASSALAM WALEKUM,,NAMASTE DHAVAL JI,

MASHA ALLAH KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE.



dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..

aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..



hame aapki yeh nazm bohot pasand aayi,uski ek wajah yeh hain,
ki aapne apni is nazm main,,,mohabbat,yaadein,sabr,tasavvur,,har baat ko bohot pyare andaz ke saath likha hai,agar gaur kiya jaye,to ismain har tarah ke ehsaas hain,
bohot khoob aapki mehnat kafi rang layi..

bas isi tarah likhte rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz


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5th February 2007, 09:56 PM

Pyare Dhaval..

Yeh rachna tumhari behtreen rachnaao me se ek hai..

Behad pasand aayi mujhe.. Bahut khoobsoorti se dil ki baat ko keh gaye tum...

Yeh dil tak dastak deti hain..

Take Care..

~Priya



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6th February 2007, 01:01 AM

aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


khaabo me mulakat hogi ye soch,
hum in aankhon ko sulaate hain...


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


hazar rahe bani hai mere shahar me,
hum kyu teri hi gali me aate hain...


zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


khabo me kon ata hai janiyega kabhi,
hosh me bhi tera hi naam lete hain...


dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


dil maan jaye to kahiyega hume bhi,
chalo ek bahana hum bhi banate hain...


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


azmaisho ka dor chal pada aaj se,
har pal ek nai pariksha de aate hain...


lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


na jane kitne mile safar-e-jist me,
fir kyu tujhe hi khabo me khojate hain


Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


tera naam leke marham lagate hain,
tune diya ye kahake zakhm chhupate hain.....

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well apki poem ko dekhke mujhse raha nahi gaya..........likhe bina. to thhoda sa bigaad diya bich me apni poem daal ke. bad na..........che sichifo.....hindi me bole to........samajh gaye honge aap....nahi samjhe.mean bad yaar .......oye soniye itna bhi bura nahi hai haa.

well aap meri daad kabuul kijiyega ji. aapki urdu bahot achhi hai. naya andaaz apki shayri ka.. well done yaar....achha to hum chalte hain....

grazie

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hi dhaval ji

beshaq kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko, par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko, na rahi kisi jannat ki tamanaa e mere dost, us jannat se bhi pyara dost mila humko,

dhaval ji wah aaj aapne kamal hi kar diya
sach mein aaj aapne bahut hi sahi likha hai aaj aapki is rachna ko padh ke mujhe javab dene ke liye jo shayri yaad aa rahi hai wo bhi is rachna ke samne phiki nazar aa rahi hai,

janaab aapne bahhhhuuuuuuuuttttttttt hi khub likha hai


ese hi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart


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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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6th February 2007, 04:52 PM

dhaval
bahut khub likha hai apne.
meir daad kubul kare.
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6th February 2007, 07:56 PM

Dhaval Ji Namaskaar,

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne, meri daad kubul kijiye.
Ek ek sher dil ko choo gaya.

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Bahut khoob.


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hi chotu ustaz

kamal ka kalam likha hai yaar tune to
sachmuch urdu worss ka itna accha sanyojan.......
kash hum bhi esa kar pate.....
daad kabool karna dost
shukriaya

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mere yaar!!

aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi aaj sach me dil khus ho gaya yeH aapki baat sunke aur likhne ke mamle meiN to aap hum se aage hai maiN to abhi sikh raha huN

ais ehi hame sikhate raheN maiN kosisH karunGa aur bhi achha likhne ki

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

aapka shaitaan
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
chottu, bahut khoob likha hai, ab lagta hai ki dhaval ek shayar hai, aise karo signatue mei.n jaha likha hai dhaval ek ahsaas....usko kar do dhaval ek shayar

etna khoobsurat likhney ke liye, bahut sarra pyar aur ashirwaad

tumhari sister


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ASSALAM WALEKUM,,NAMASTE DHAVAL JI,

MASHA ALLAH KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE.



dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..

aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..



hame aapki yeh nazm bohot pasand aayi,uski ek wajah yeh hain,
ki aapne apni is nazm main,,,mohabbat,yaadein,sabr,tasavvur,,har baat ko bohot pyare andaz ke saath likha hai,agar gaur kiya jaye,to ismain har tarah ke ehsaas hain,
bohot khoob aapki mehnat kafi rang layi..

bas isi tarah likhte rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz


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walekum asalaam sony ji,

aapko mera yeH andaz pasaNd aaya bahot hi khusi hui yeH jaanke par is kalaam ka poora credit aapko jaata hai kyuNki aap meri urdu ki teacher ho....! ab kya kareN aapne teacher ne itni shakti se student ko sikhne ko kaha ho to fir thoda sa to aayenGa hi maiN chahta tha ki is kalaam meiN maiN urdu lafzoN ka istemal karuN aapko pasaNd aay mujhe behad khusi hui maiN aage bi kosisH karunGa ki apni urdu aur achhi karuN mujhe pata hai apake jais to naihN hoNgi par kosisH karunGa jaroor , aapka sath milta raha to achhi sikh hi jaunGaa yeh pakka yakeen hai mujhe haha

aap bhi apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

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hi dhaval
bahut bahut achha likha hai aapne, thanks sabke saath apne jaadui shabdo ke haar(aapka kalaam) ko share karne ke liye.
padhkar bahut accha laga.

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Pyare Dhaval..

Yeh rachna tumhari behtreen rachnaao me se ek hai..

Behad pasand aayi mujhe.. Bahut khoobsoorti se dil ki baat ko keh gaye tum...

Yeh dil tak dastak deti hain..

Take Care..

~Priya

priya di namksaar,

bahot hi khusi hui yeH jaanke ki apako meri yeH peshkas meri sabhi peshkas meiN se behtrin si lagi , aur apako pasaNd aayi mujhe to duguni khusi hui aapko mera andaaz-e-bayaaN achha laga , maiN aage bhi kosisH karunGaa ki achha likhuN taki aapka sath milta raheN

aap apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT



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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


khaabo me mulakat hogi ye soch,
hum in aankhon ko sulaate hain...


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


hazar rahe bani hai mere shahar me,
hum kyu teri hi gali me aate hain...


zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


khabo me kon ata hai janiyega kabhi,
hosh me bhi tera hi naam lete hain...


dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


dil maan jaye to kahiyega hume bhi,
chalo ek bahana hum bhi banate hain...


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


azmaisho ka dor chal pada aaj se,
har pal ek nai pariksha de aate hain...


lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


na jane kitne mile safar-e-jist me,
fir kyu tujhe hi khabo me khojate hain


Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


tera naam leke marham lagate hain,
tune diya ye kahake zakhm chhupate hain.....

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well apki poem ko dekhke mujhse raha nahi gaya..........likhe bina. to thhoda sa bigaad diya bich me apni poem daal ke. bad na..........che sichifo.....hindi me bole to........samajh gaye honge aap....nahi samjhe.mean bad yaar .......oye soniye itna bhi bura nahi hai haa.

well aap meri daad kabuul kijiyega ji. aapki urdu bahot achhi hai. naya andaaz apki shayri ka.. well done yaar....achha to hum chalte hain....

grazie

aapki dost
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tumne to meri peshkas ko ek nayaa hi roop de diya baRaa hi achha laga tumhara jawaab paRh ke tumne meri peshkas ko itna dil se samjha aur apne ehsaasoN ko bayaaN bhi kiya dekh ke baRii khusi hui waise meri peshkas se ziyadah tumhari peshkas bahot achhi lag rahi hai shukriya to maiN kahunGaa nahiN bas itna hi kahunGaa ki yeH sath hamesa milta raheN , kosisH karunGaa ki is safar meiN aage bhi kcuh behtrin sa likhuN

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hi dhaval ji

beshaq kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko, par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko, na rahi kisi jannat ki tamanaa e mere dost, us jannat se bhi pyara dost mila humko,

dhaval ji wah aaj aapne kamal hi kar diya
sach mein aaj aapne bahut hi sahi likha hai aaj aapki is rachna ko padh ke mujhe javab dene ke liye jo shayri yaad aa rahi hai wo bhi is rachna ke samne phiki nazar aa rahi hai,

janaab aapne bahhhhuuuuuuuuttttttttt hi khub likha hai


ese hi likhte rahiyega
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namskaar merul ji

aapne itni gehrayioN ke sath mujhe dil se paRHa maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN aur kosisH karunGaa ki aage isse bhi achhi kosisH karuN likhne ki bas yuhiN aap paRHte rahiyenGaa

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dhaval sahab tak is nacheez ghayal ka salaam pahunche,

janaab kya baat hai, roman me aapko likhte dekh kar behad khushi hui...! ahcha andaaz-e-bayaaN tha, par yakeen maaniye, ab v bahut behtari ki oor jaa sakte haiN aap, khushi hui aapko aage badhta dekh kar...! yunhi apni mehfileN sajaate rahiye...!



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hi
bohat khub likha hay yar...
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..

main itna ana jana to nahi hay ab site par koshish karo ga
jab bhi ao tumhari post par jaror ao...bohat acha
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hi daval ji
bhot vadhia likhea hai tusi

je line to app ne bhot hi vadhia likhdi

aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


hamesha idha hi likhede rehna
khush rahna
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dhaval
bahut khub likha hai apne.
meir daad kubul kare.
sakhi

sakhi ji namskaar,

aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh ke mujhe baRa achha laga , aapki daad sar'ankhoN par sakhi ji

aise hi aap mujhe paRHte rahiyenGaa

khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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Dhaval Ji Namaskaar,

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne, meri daad kubul kijiye.
Ek ek sher dil ko choo gaya.

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Bahut khoob.

namksaar surudita ji

aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh ke baRa hi achha laga surudita ji meri peshkasH ko paRHne ke liye aur use dil se samjhne ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN aise hi aage bhi is dost ko paRHte rahiyenGa

aapki daad sar'ankhoN par

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams


zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
dhaval ji ko mera salam,
kyasee hai aap aap ki likhi post humne pari aap ne is post ok itnee achee tarah se likha hai or urdu ka istemaal bhi bahut achaa kiya hai. Mujhe behad pasand aaya.

ab izaazat chahta hun
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chottu, bahut khoob likha hai, ab lagta hai ki dhaval ek shayar hai, aise karo signatue mei.n jaha likha hai dhaval ek ahsaas....usko kar do dhaval ek shayar

etna khoobsurat likhney ke liye, bahut sarra pyar aur ashirwaad

tumhari sister
pranaam sister,

aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh mujhe baRii hi khusi hui hai sister , aur aaj maiN jo kuch bhi likh raha huN yeH aap logoN ne ki hui mehnat hai jo mujhe kuch sikhaya hai maiN un baatoN ko hamesa dhayan meiN rakhta huN aur aap apna ashirwad hamesa mere sath rakhiyenGa kosisH karenGa aapka chhotu ki aage aur bhi behtar kalaam pesh kareN aur abhi to maine safar ki shuruaaT hi ki hai sisiter abhi to bahot kuch sikhna hai
aap yuhiN sath dete raheN mera khus raheN aur apn khayal rakheN

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hi dhaval
bahut bahut achha likha hai aapne, thanks sabke saath apne jaadui shabdo ke haar(aapka kalaam) ko share karne ke liye.
padhkar bahut accha laga.

hamesha u hin likhte rahna

reena ji namskaar

kais haiN aap?

aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi jaanke bahot hi achha laga aur apane mujhe itne dil se paRHa uske liye maiN aapka shukraGuzar huuN

ummid karta huN aap aage bhi is dost ko paRHti rahenGii

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

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dhaval sahab tak is nacheez ghayal ka salaam pahunche,

janaab kya baat hai, roman me aapko likhte dekh kar behad khushi hui...! ahcha andaaz-e-bayaaN tha, par yakeen maaniye, ab v bahut behtari ki oor jaa sakte haiN aap, khushi hui aapko aage badhta dekh kar...! yunhi apni mehfileN sajaate rahiye...!

namskaar mere dost lucky,

aapko yahaaN dekh ke khusi hui , aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi jaanke achha laga..kosisH karunGa aage aur bhi achha likhne ki aise hi paRHte raheN

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dhaval ji bahoot aachi rachn hai..khub likha hai

dear sandhya ji

kaisi haiN aap?


mujhe itne dil paRHne ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN kosisH karunGaa ki aage aur bhi behtar likhuN..

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bohat khub likha hay yar...
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..

main itna ana jana to nahi hay ab site par koshish karo ga
jab bhi ao tumhari post par jaror ao...bohat acha
likha hay likhte rehna
take care
khan

khan bhai adaab aur namskaar,

bhaijaan hamari khuskimati ke aap yahaaN aayeN sach me bahot hi achha lagta hai jab site ke poorane sadasya naye sadasyoN ki housla afzaii karte haiN , baot hi khusi mili aapka jawab dekh ke

kosisH karunGaa ki aage isse bhi behtar likhuN taki aapka sath yuuN hi milta raheN

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

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hi daval ji
bhot vadhia likhea hai tusi

je line to app ne bhot hi vadhia likhdi

aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


hamesha idha hi likhede rehna
khush rahna
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mere dost namskaar!!

aapne mujhe dil se paRHa bahot hi khusi hui dost ..kosisH karunGaa achha likhne kii aap yuuN hi paRHte rahiyenGaa

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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dhaval ji ko mera salam,
kyasee hai aap aap ki likhi post humne pari aap ne is post ok itnee achee tarah se likha hai or urdu ka istemaal bhi bahut achaa kiya hai. Mujhe behad pasand aaya.

ab izaazat chahta hun
aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
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mere dost shaan ji adaab aur namskaa,

jee dost maiN achha huN aap kahiye kaise haiN aap?

aapko urdu lafzoN ka istemal pasaNd aaya janke bahot khusi hui ..aise hi is dost ko paRHte rahiyenGa

aapko khuda khus rakheN aisi dil se dua karta huN

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
hi dhaval ji,

apne bhot hi khubsurat likha hai. aape daar kya barkhubi bayan kiya hai...

aapki dost
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hi dhaval ji,

apne bhot hi khubsurat likha hai. aape daar kya barkhubi bayan kiya hai...

aapki dost
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mitali ji namksaar,

bahot hi khusi hui aapko yahaaN dekh ke mujhe , aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi achha laga jaanke ehsaasoN ka yeH chhota sa mahel mere dil ke bahot karib hai jise maiN apni kosisH kehta huN aur achha lagta hai jab koi ise dil se paRHta hai aise hi aage bhi yuuN paRHte rahiyenGa

apna khayaal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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assalaam Alekum Dhavalji,
hum Jannat Hai Aapki Rachna Padi Dil Ki Gehrai Tak Utar Gayi Mashaallah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aap Ne Toh Urdu Zabaan Ko Falak Pe Bitha Diya Itni Khubsurti Se Ek Ek Alfaazo Ka Istemaal Kiya Hai Ki Hum Toh Bas Un Lofzo Ke Jaal Main Bandh Ke Reh Gaye.
allah Aapko Aise Hi Likhte Rehne Ki Nek Tohfiq Ata Kare.
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lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

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Tareef lafzoN ki mohtaaz nahi hoti .. aur na hi wazni batoN kee. ye sirf dil se nikalti hai dil tak pahunchti hai .. aapke liye mere pas bhi wahi hai ..

Bohat khoob

Likhte raho nikharte raho .. khuda tumhare su-e-alfaaz ko badhata rahe ..

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assalaam Alekum Dhavalji,
hum Jannat Hai Aapki Rachna Padi Dil Ki Gehrai Tak Utar Gayi Mashaallah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aap Ne Toh Urdu Zabaan Ko Falak Pe Bitha Diya Itni Khubsurti Se Ek Ek Alfaazo Ka Istemaal Kiya Hai Ki Hum Toh Bas Un Lofzo Ke Jaal Main Bandh Ke Reh Gaye.
allah Aapko Aise Hi Likhte Rehne Ki Nek Tohfiq Ata Kare.
khuda Hafiz,
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jannat ji adaab aur namskaar

aapka jawab paRH ke bahot hi khusHi hui mujhe achha lagta hai jab koi kosisH ko itne dil se paRHta hai..aap jaise dostoN ki hi wajah se maiN aaj itna sa likH sakta huN warna mujeh kahaaN yeH sab aata tha..bas yehi khaunGaa ki yuuNhi aap is dost ko paRHte rahiyenGaa..

allah aapko bhi khusH rakheN ..apna khayal rakheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

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Tareef lafzoN ki mohtaaz nahi hoti .. aur na hi wazni batoN kee. ye sirf dil se nikalti hai dil tak pahunchti hai .. aapke liye mere pas bhi wahi hai ..

Bohat khoob

Likhte raho nikharte raho .. khuda tumhare su-e-alfaaz ko badhata rahe ..

apka apna

Kunaal

kunal bhaii namskaar,

bahot khusHii hui aapko yahaaN dekh ke jab bhi maiN poorane member ko apni kosisH pe dekhta huN to lagta hai ki maine thoRa sa alag sa likha hai ..aapki baat bilkul sahi hai ki tarif lafzoN ki mohtaaz nahiN hoti .aur na hi wazni baatoN kii..aapne jo mere liye dil se dua di hai yehi kafi hai dost..kosisH karunGaa aage isse bhi achha likhuN ..

apna khaYaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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Just to say it is beautiful

Work of Art Maybe?????


“Zamana Gour Se Daikhey, Jisey Is Ne Khuda Samjha Hai
Woh Is K Hath Ka Pather Tarasha Ho Bhi Sakta Hai
Main Apney Jism O Jaan Ko Sath Rehtey Daikh Ker Samjha
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
dhaval mane to khabar j nathi aa ghazal kyaare lakhi, mai atyaare vaancho to mane bahu afsos thayo ke pehla kem na vanchi. bahut mast lakhi chhe
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Just to say it is beautiful

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kaShiSh jee:

namaskaaR

maiN aapka be-Had SHuKraGuzaar huuN kii aapne ees koshiSh ko pasaNd kiYaa.. bas dil sey jo bhee ehsaas nikalte haiN ussko kaaGaz pe laane kii koShiSheN kartaa rehtaa huuN.. jissey aap sab milke kaamyaab banaate haiN.. ummid karataa huN kii aapka saath YuuNhi miltaa raheNgaa..

apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..


Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams

zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..


absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..


aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears

Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..


Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart

wah dhaval bohat khoob tareef ke liye alfaz nahi dua hai yunhi aagay barrhte raho khush raho aik jaga nishandahi kerna chah rahi hoon dear agar theek lage to amal kerna....


dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..



dhaval is sher main agar tum dil e daastan ki jaga dastaan e dil ka istemaal karo to theek rahega ye meri zaati raye hai aagay tumhe jo theek lage baqi tumhari mehnat saaf dikhti hai dhaval bohat hi zaberdast tehreer hai


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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..

dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..

lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..


Jai mata di .....

...............Bahut acchi ghazal hain dhaval..dil ko chu gayi......uparwale sher behad pasand aaye..aise hi likhte rehna...........

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