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5th February 2007, 12:38 AM
mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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5th February 2007, 09:48 AM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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hi chotu ustaz
kamal ka kalam likha hai yaar tune to
sachmuch urdu worss ka itna accha sanyojan.......
kash hum bhi esa kar pate.....
daad kabool karna dost
shukriaya
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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5th February 2007, 06:22 PM
ASSALAM WALEKUM,,NAMASTE DHAVAL JI,
MASHA ALLAH KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE.
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
hame aapki yeh nazm bohot pasand aayi,uski ek wajah yeh hain,
ki aapne apni is nazm main,,,mohabbat,yaadein,sabr,tasavvur,,har baat ko bohot pyare andaz ke saath likha hai,agar gaur kiya jaye,to ismain har tarah ke ehsaas hain,
bohot khoob aapki mehnat kafi rang layi..
bas isi tarah likhte rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz
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and ever and ever!
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5th February 2007, 09:56 PM
Pyare Dhaval..
Yeh rachna tumhari behtreen rachnaao me se ek hai..
Behad pasand aayi mujhe.. Bahut khoobsoorti se dil ki baat ko keh gaye tum...
Yeh dil tak dastak deti hain..
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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6th February 2007, 01:01 AM
aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
khaabo me mulakat hogi ye soch,
hum in aankhon ko sulaate hain...
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
hazar rahe bani hai mere shahar me,
hum kyu teri hi gali me aate hain...
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
khabo me kon ata hai janiyega kabhi,
hosh me bhi tera hi naam lete hain...
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
dil maan jaye to kahiyega hume bhi,
chalo ek bahana hum bhi banate hain...
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
azmaisho ka dor chal pada aaj se,
har pal ek nai pariksha de aate hain...
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
na jane kitne mile safar-e-jist me,
fir kyu tujhe hi khabo me khojate hain
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
tera naam leke marham lagate hain,
tune diya ye kahake zakhm chhupate hain.....
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hmmmmmmmm
well apki poem ko dekhke mujhse raha nahi gaya..........likhe bina. to thhoda sa bigaad diya bich me apni poem daal ke. bad na..........che sichifo.....hindi me bole to........samajh gaye honge aap....nahi samjhe.mean bad yaar .......oye soniye itna bhi bura nahi hai haa.
well aap meri daad kabuul kijiyega ji. aapki urdu bahot achhi hai. naya andaaz apki shayri ka.. well done yaar....achha to hum chalte hain....
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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6th February 2007, 01:33 PM
hi dhaval ji
beshaq kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko, par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko, na rahi kisi jannat ki tamanaa e mere dost, us jannat se bhi pyara dost mila humko,
dhaval ji wah aaj aapne kamal hi kar diya
sach mein aaj aapne bahut hi sahi likha hai aaj aapki is rachna ko padh ke mujhe javab dene ke liye jo shayri yaad aa rahi hai wo bhi is rachna ke samne phiki nazar aa rahi hai,
janaab aapne bahhhhuuuuuuuuttttttttt hi khub likha hai
ese hi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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6th February 2007, 04:52 PM
dhaval
bahut khub likha hai apne.
meir daad kubul kare.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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6th February 2007, 07:56 PM
Dhaval Ji Namaskaar,
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne, meri daad kubul kijiye.
Ek ek sher dil ko choo gaya.
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Bahut khoob.
Woh Meri Kismat Mein Nahi
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7th February 2007, 10:12 PM
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hi chotu ustaz
kamal ka kalam likha hai yaar tune to
sachmuch urdu worss ka itna accha sanyojan.......
kash hum bhi esa kar pate.....
daad kabool karna dost
shukriaya
dilip
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mere yaar!!
aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi aaj sach me dil khus ho gaya yeH aapki baat sunke aur likhne ke mamle meiN to aap hum se aage hai maiN to abhi sikh raha huN
ais ehi hame sikhate raheN maiN kosisH karunGa aur bhi achha likhne ki
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka shaitaan
dhaval
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8th February 2007, 05:27 PM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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chottu, bahut khoob likha hai, ab lagta hai ki dhaval ek shayar hai, aise karo signatue mei.n jaha likha hai dhaval ek ahsaas....usko kar do dhaval ek shayar
etna khoobsurat likhney ke liye, bahut sarra pyar aur ashirwaad
tumhari sister
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th February 2007, 11:19 AM
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ASSALAM WALEKUM,,NAMASTE DHAVAL JI,
MASHA ALLAH KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE.
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
hame aapki yeh nazm bohot pasand aayi,uski ek wajah yeh hain,
ki aapne apni is nazm main,,,mohabbat,yaadein,sabr,tasavvur,,har baat ko bohot pyare andaz ke saath likha hai,agar gaur kiya jaye,to ismain har tarah ke ehsaas hain,
bohot khoob aapki mehnat kafi rang layi..
bas isi tarah likhte rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
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(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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walekum asalaam sony ji,
aapko mera yeH andaz pasaNd aaya bahot hi khusi hui yeH jaanke par is kalaam ka poora credit aapko jaata hai kyuNki aap meri urdu ki teacher ho....! ab kya kareN aapne teacher ne itni shakti se student ko sikhne ko kaha ho to fir thoda sa to aayenGa hi maiN chahta tha ki is kalaam meiN maiN urdu lafzoN ka istemal karuN aapko pasaNd aay mujhe behad khusi hui maiN aage bi kosisH karunGa ki apni urdu aur achhi karuN mujhe pata hai apake jais to naihN hoNgi par kosisH karunGa jaroor , aapka sath milta raha to achhi sikh hi jaunGaa yeh pakka yakeen hai mujhe haha
aap bhi apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
allah hafiz
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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9th February 2007, 12:17 PM
hi dhaval
bahut bahut achha likha hai aapne, thanks sabke saath apne jaadui shabdo ke haar(aapka kalaam) ko share karne ke liye.
padhkar bahut accha laga.
hamesha u hin likhte rahna
aksar yaad karte hain un guzre hue lamho ko
aksar yaad karte hain un tere diye zakmhon ko
kuch na baaki bacha hai jeevan mein hamaare
jo jeene ko saathi tu na raha
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10th February 2007, 12:50 PM
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Pyare Dhaval..
Yeh rachna tumhari behtreen rachnaao me se ek hai..
Behad pasand aayi mujhe.. Bahut khoobsoorti se dil ki baat ko keh gaye tum...
Yeh dil tak dastak deti hain..
Take Care..
~Priya
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priya di namksaar,
bahot hi khusi hui yeH jaanke ki apako meri yeH peshkas meri sabhi peshkas meiN se behtrin si lagi , aur apako pasaNd aayi mujhe to duguni khusi hui aapko mera andaaz-e-bayaaN achha laga , maiN aage bhi kosisH karunGaa ki achha likhuN taki aapka sath milta raheN
aap apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapke chhote bhaiya
dhaval
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10th February 2007, 12:54 PM
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Originally Posted by pooja4588
aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
khaabo me mulakat hogi ye soch,
hum in aankhon ko sulaate hain...
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
hazar rahe bani hai mere shahar me,
hum kyu teri hi gali me aate hain...
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
khabo me kon ata hai janiyega kabhi,
hosh me bhi tera hi naam lete hain...
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
dil maan jaye to kahiyega hume bhi,
chalo ek bahana hum bhi banate hain...
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
azmaisho ka dor chal pada aaj se,
har pal ek nai pariksha de aate hain...
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
na jane kitne mile safar-e-jist me,
fir kyu tujhe hi khabo me khojate hain
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
tera naam leke marham lagate hain,
tune diya ye kahake zakhm chhupate hain.....
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hmmmmmmmm
well apki poem ko dekhke mujhse raha nahi gaya..........likhe bina. to thhoda sa bigaad diya bich me apni poem daal ke. bad na..........che sichifo.....hindi me bole to........samajh gaye honge aap....nahi samjhe.mean bad yaar .......oye soniye itna bhi bura nahi hai haa.
well aap meri daad kabuul kijiyega ji. aapki urdu bahot achhi hai. naya andaaz apki shayri ka.. well done yaar....achha to hum chalte hain....
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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dear pooja,
tumne to meri peshkas ko ek nayaa hi roop de diya baRaa hi achha laga tumhara jawaab paRh ke tumne meri peshkas ko itna dil se samjha aur apne ehsaasoN ko bayaaN bhi kiya dekh ke baRii khusi hui waise meri peshkas se ziyadah tumhari peshkas bahot achhi lag rahi hai shukriya to maiN kahunGaa nahiN bas itna hi kahunGaa ki yeH sath hamesa milta raheN , kosisH karunGaa ki is safar meiN aage bhi kcuh behtrin sa likhuN
apna khayal rakho aur khus raho
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
tumhara dost
dhaval
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12th February 2007, 04:05 PM
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hi dhaval ji
beshaq kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko, par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko, na rahi kisi jannat ki tamanaa e mere dost, us jannat se bhi pyara dost mila humko,
dhaval ji wah aaj aapne kamal hi kar diya
sach mein aaj aapne bahut hi sahi likha hai aaj aapki is rachna ko padh ke mujhe javab dene ke liye jo shayri yaad aa rahi hai wo bhi is rachna ke samne phiki nazar aa rahi hai,
janaab aapne bahhhhuuuuuuuuttttttttt hi khub likha hai
ese hi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul
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namskaar merul ji
aapne itni gehrayioN ke sath mujhe dil se paRHa maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN aur kosisH karunGaa ki aage isse bhi achhi kosisH karuN likhne ki bas yuhiN aap paRHte rahiyenGaa
khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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13th February 2007, 03:30 AM
dhaval sahab tak is nacheez ghayal ka salaam pahunche,
janaab kya baat hai, roman me aapko likhte dekh kar behad khushi hui...! ahcha andaaz-e-bayaaN tha, par yakeen maaniye, ab v bahut behtari ki oor jaa sakte haiN aap, khushi hui aapko aage badhta dekh kar...! yunhi apni mehfileN sajaate rahiye...!
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13th February 2007, 09:10 AM
dhaval ji bahoot aachi rachn hai..khub likha hai
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13th February 2007, 10:32 PM
hi
bohat khub likha hay yar...
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
main itna ana jana to nahi hay ab site par koshish karo ga
jab bhi ao tumhari post par jaror ao...bohat acha
likha hay likhte rehna
take care
khan
banjara''''
agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon
or judai main mohabbat kasi????
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13th February 2007, 10:44 PM
hi daval ji
bhot vadhia likhea hai tusi
je line to app ne bhot hi vadhia likhdi
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
hamesha idha hi likhede rehna
khush rahna
take care
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14th February 2007, 10:46 PM
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dhaval
bahut khub likha hai apne.
meir daad kubul kare.
sakhi
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sakhi ji namskaar,
aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh ke mujhe baRa achha laga , aapki daad sar'ankhoN par sakhi ji
aise hi aap mujhe paRHte rahiyenGaa
khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
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15th February 2007, 05:34 PM
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Dhaval Ji Namaskaar,
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne, meri daad kubul kijiye.
Ek ek sher dil ko choo gaya.
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Bahut khoob.
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namksaar surudita ji
aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh ke baRa hi achha laga surudita ji meri peshkasH ko paRHne ke liye aur use dil se samjhne ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN aise hi aage bhi is dost ko paRHte rahiyenGa
aapki daad sar'ankhoN par
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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15th February 2007, 09:33 PM
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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dhaval ji ko mera salam,
kyasee hai aap aap ki likhi post humne pari aap ne is post ok itnee achee tarah se likha hai or urdu ka istemaal bhi bahut achaa kiya hai. Mujhe behad pasand aaya.
ab izaazat chahta hun
aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
take care
SHAAN
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16th February 2007, 12:24 PM
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chottu, bahut khoob likha hai, ab lagta hai ki dhaval ek shayar hai, aise karo signatue mei.n jaha likha hai dhaval ek ahsaas....usko kar do dhaval ek shayar
etna khoobsurat likhney ke liye, bahut sarra pyar aur ashirwaad
tumhari sister
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pranaam sister,
aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh mujhe baRii hi khusi hui hai sister , aur aaj maiN jo kuch bhi likh raha huN yeH aap logoN ne ki hui mehnat hai jo mujhe kuch sikhaya hai maiN un baatoN ko hamesa dhayan meiN rakhta huN aur aap apna ashirwad hamesa mere sath rakhiyenGa kosisH karenGa aapka chhotu ki aage aur bhi behtar kalaam pesh kareN aur abhi to maine safar ki shuruaaT hi ki hai sisiter abhi to bahot kuch sikhna hai
aap yuhiN sath dete raheN mera khus raheN aur apn khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka chhota sa bhai aur dost
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17th February 2007, 01:51 PM
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hi dhaval
bahut bahut achha likha hai aapne, thanks sabke saath apne jaadui shabdo ke haar(aapka kalaam) ko share karne ke liye.
padhkar bahut accha laga.
hamesha u hin likhte rahna
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reena ji namskaar
kais haiN aap?
aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi jaanke bahot hi achha laga aur apane mujhe itne dil se paRHa uske liye maiN aapka shukraGuzar huuN
ummid karta huN aap aage bhi is dost ko paRHti rahenGii
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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dhaval sahab tak is nacheez ghayal ka salaam pahunche,
janaab kya baat hai, roman me aapko likhte dekh kar behad khushi hui...! ahcha andaaz-e-bayaaN tha, par yakeen maaniye, ab v bahut behtari ki oor jaa sakte haiN aap, khushi hui aapko aage badhta dekh kar...! yunhi apni mehfileN sajaate rahiye...!
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namskaar mere dost lucky,
aapko yahaaN dekh ke khusi hui , aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi jaanke achha laga..kosisH karunGa aage aur bhi achha likhne ki aise hi paRHte raheN
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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18th February 2007, 04:26 PM
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dhaval ji bahoot aachi rachn hai..khub likha hai
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dear sandhya ji
kaisi haiN aap?
mujhe itne dil paRHne ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN kosisH karunGaa ki aage aur bhi behtar likhuN..
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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19th February 2007, 01:44 PM
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hi
bohat khub likha hay yar...
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
main itna ana jana to nahi hay ab site par koshish karo ga
jab bhi ao tumhari post par jaror ao...bohat acha
likha hay likhte rehna
take care
khan
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khan bhai adaab aur namskaar,
bhaijaan hamari khuskimati ke aap yahaaN aayeN sach me bahot hi achha lagta hai jab site ke poorane sadasya naye sadasyoN ki housla afzaii karte haiN , baot hi khusi mili aapka jawab dekh ke
kosisH karunGaa ki aage isse bhi behtar likhuN taki aapka sath yuuN hi milta raheN
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
allah hafiz
aapka dost
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19th February 2007, 01:48 PM
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hi daval ji
bhot vadhia likhea hai tusi
je line to app ne bhot hi vadhia likhdi
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
hamesha idha hi likhede rehna
khush rahna
take care
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mere dost namskaar!!
aapne mujhe dil se paRHa bahot hi khusi hui dost ..kosisH karunGaa achha likhne kii aap yuuN hi paRHte rahiyenGaa
apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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19th February 2007, 01:53 PM
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dhaval ji ko mera salam,
kyasee hai aap aap ki likhi post humne pari aap ne is post ok itnee achee tarah se likha hai or urdu ka istemaal bhi bahut achaa kiya hai. Mujhe behad pasand aaya.
ab izaazat chahta hun
aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
take care
SHAAN
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mere dost shaan ji adaab aur namskaa,
jee dost maiN achha huN aap kahiye kaise haiN aap?
aapko urdu lafzoN ka istemal pasaNd aaya janke bahot khusi hui ..aise hi is dost ko paRHte rahiyenGa
aapko khuda khus rakheN aisi dil se dua karta huN
apna khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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19th February 2007, 04:29 PM
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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hi dhaval ji,
apne bhot hi khubsurat likha hai. aape daar kya barkhubi bayan kiya hai...
aapki dost
mitali
Tere har zakham seh jayenge haste haste,
Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste,
Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse,
KYUNKI
Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste.....
TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA...
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20th February 2007, 12:06 AM
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hi dhaval ji,
apne bhot hi khubsurat likha hai. aape daar kya barkhubi bayan kiya hai...
aapki dost
mitali
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mitali ji namksaar,
bahot hi khusi hui aapko yahaaN dekh ke mujhe , aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi achha laga jaanke ehsaasoN ka yeH chhota sa mahel mere dil ke bahot karib hai jise maiN apni kosisH kehta huN aur achha lagta hai jab koi ise dil se paRHta hai aise hi aage bhi yuuN paRHte rahiyenGa
apna khayaal rakheN aur khus raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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20th February 2007, 03:22 PM
assalaam Alekum Dhavalji,
hum Jannat Hai Aapki Rachna Padi Dil Ki Gehrai Tak Utar Gayi Mashaallah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aap Ne Toh Urdu Zabaan Ko Falak Pe Bitha Diya Itni Khubsurti Se Ek Ek Alfaazo Ka Istemaal Kiya Hai Ki Hum Toh Bas Un Lofzo Ke Jaal Main Bandh Ke Reh Gaye.
allah Aapko Aise Hi Likhte Rehne Ki Nek Tohfiq Ata Kare.
khuda Hafiz,
aapki Dost,
Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shehed,Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur mehmoob uski sarhad...
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20th February 2007, 03:48 PM
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lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
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Dhaval Dost
Tareef lafzoN ki mohtaaz nahi hoti .. aur na hi wazni batoN kee. ye sirf dil se nikalti hai dil tak pahunchti hai .. aapke liye mere pas bhi wahi hai ..
Bohat khoob
Likhte raho nikharte raho .. khuda tumhare su-e-alfaaz ko badhata rahe ..
apka apna
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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23rd February 2007, 03:50 PM
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assalaam Alekum Dhavalji,
hum Jannat Hai Aapki Rachna Padi Dil Ki Gehrai Tak Utar Gayi Mashaallah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aap Ne Toh Urdu Zabaan Ko Falak Pe Bitha Diya Itni Khubsurti Se Ek Ek Alfaazo Ka Istemaal Kiya Hai Ki Hum Toh Bas Un Lofzo Ke Jaal Main Bandh Ke Reh Gaye.
allah Aapko Aise Hi Likhte Rehne Ki Nek Tohfiq Ata Kare.
khuda Hafiz,
aapki Dost,
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jannat ji adaab aur namskaar
aapka jawab paRH ke bahot hi khusHi hui mujhe achha lagta hai jab koi kosisH ko itne dil se paRHta hai..aap jaise dostoN ki hi wajah se maiN aaj itna sa likH sakta huN warna mujeh kahaaN yeH sab aata tha..bas yehi khaunGaa ki yuuNhi aap is dost ko paRHte rahiyenGaa..
allah aapko bhi khusH rakheN ..apna khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
allah hafiz
aapka dost
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Dhaval Dost
Tareef lafzoN ki mohtaaz nahi hoti .. aur na hi wazni batoN kee. ye sirf dil se nikalti hai dil tak pahunchti hai .. aapke liye mere pas bhi wahi hai ..
Bohat khoob
Likhte raho nikharte raho .. khuda tumhare su-e-alfaaz ko badhata rahe ..
apka apna
Kunaal
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kunal bhaii namskaar,
bahot khusHii hui aapko yahaaN dekh ke jab bhi maiN poorane member ko apni kosisH pe dekhta huN to lagta hai ki maine thoRa sa alag sa likha hai ..aapki baat bilkul sahi hai ki tarif lafzoN ki mohtaaz nahiN hoti .aur na hi wazni baatoN kii..aapne jo mere liye dil se dua di hai yehi kafi hai dost..kosisH karunGaa aage isse bhi achha likhuN ..
apna khaYaal rakheN aur khusH raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
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3rd November 2007, 01:36 AM
Just to say it is beautiful
Work of Art Maybe?????
“Zamana Gour Se Daikhey, Jisey Is Ne Khuda Samjha Hai Woh Is K Hath Ka Pather Tarasha Ho Bhi Sakta Hai Main Apney Jism O Jaan Ko Sath Rehtey Daikh Ker Samjha Nibhana Ho Jisey Mushkil Woh Rishta Ho Bhi Sakta Hai Nikal Ker Bund Kamrey Se Zara Baazar Main Aao Ager Tum Daikhna Chaho, Tamasha Ho Bhi Sakta Hai”
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4th November 2007, 05:19 PM
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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dhaval mane to khabar j nathi aa ghazal kyaare lakhi, mai atyaare vaancho to mane bahu afsos thayo ke pehla kem na vanchi. bahut mast lakhi chhe
bole to ..............................................ek dum ................jhakkas..
aamaj lakhto rehje
regards
manu
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Just to say it is beautiful
Work of Art Maybe?????
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kaShiSh jee:
namaskaaR
maiN aapka be-Had SHuKraGuzaar huuN kii aapne ees koshiSh ko pasaNd kiYaa.. bas dil sey jo bhee ehsaas nikalte haiN ussko kaaGaz pe laane kii koShiSheN kartaa rehtaa huuN.. jissey aap sab milke kaamyaab banaate haiN.. ummid karataa huN kii aapka saath YuuNhi miltaa raheNgaa..
apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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15th November 2007, 10:53 PM
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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , dostoN aaj maiN aap sab ke bich apna ek nayaa kalaam lekar hazir hua huuN ummid hai ab tak jo aapka sath aur pyaar mila hai mujhe wo is baar bhi barkarrar rahenGa aapke jawab aur sujhavo ka iNtezar rahenGa
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aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur ke kai rang hai,
dil meiN wo ummideN jagaate haiN..
Aagosh-e-tasavvur :Imagination ,dreams
zulf-e-yaar meiN hum yuuN khoye,
absaar meiN kai sapne sajaate haiN..
absaar:eyes, zulf-e-yaar:Beloved's Hair
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..
Ahal-e-ishq:People Who Love
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Ahzaan : Sorrow ,Aab-e-chasm: tears
Maharam-e-dil hai wo meri jist meiN.
usko hi apna haal-e-dil sunaate haiN..
Maharam-e-dil :One Who is Close To The Heart
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wah dhaval bohat khoob tareef ke liye alfaz nahi dua hai yunhi aagay barrhte raho khush raho aik jaga nishandahi kerna chah rahi hoon dear agar theek lage to amal kerna....
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
dhaval is sher main agar tum dil e daastan ki jaga dastaan e dil ka istemaal karo to theek rahega ye meri zaati raye hai aagay tumhe jo theek lage baqi tumhari mehnat saaf dikhti hai dhaval bohat hi zaberdast tehreer hai
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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30th November 2007, 03:29 PM
aankhoN meiN panapte haiN khwaab,
fir bhi wo aankhoN ko rulaate haiN..
dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..
lakh ahzaan ho chaahe is safar meiN,
Aab-e-chasm ko unse chhupate haiN..
Jai mata di .....
...............Bahut acchi ghazal hain dhaval..dil ko chu gayi......uparwale sher behad pasand aaye..aise hi likhte rehna...........
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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