KyuN????

[Preet Dil Di]

Kall di akhbaar te pareya,
ek naujawaN police mukable ch mareya gaya
tasveer dekhi usdi, naal kujh police de karmchari vi khare
chehere te desh seva da garoor, jo hona vi chahida
saaf nazar aa reha
us naujawan vall vi dekhia, 21-22 saal da oh gabroo
khilre kesh, khuliaN akkhaN, jehna ch hun maut da vi supna nahiN
mainu jiveN vaar vaar bula reha
ki gunaH si usda, janaN lai akhbar de har panne nu palta reha
Hmm.. oh taaN attvaadi si, desh nu jis toN sabH toN vaddH khatra
gaddar, apne keete ti saza pa reha
theek hai, eddaN hi hona chahida ehna lokaN naal
lokaN di haaN ch maiN vi si haaN mila reha
phir jiveN acchanak hi mere jehaN ch eh khayal aaya
jiss umar ch hatth ch kalam honi chahidi
ohna hatthaN ch hatthiar kyun??
jiss umar ch akkhaN ch rehande rangeen supne
ohnu maut naal si enna pyar kyuN??
ohde vichoN ek attvaddi panpeya
vichle insaaN di hoi si haar kyun??
ki vajaH oh apneya te haath chuk baitha
apne hi lagge jehar samaaN kyun??
maiN daave naal kehnda ke oh maa do khukhoN
jamda hi eddaN da nahiN si….oh ek vakkhvadi ban gaya
halat paida ho gaye si eddaN de…
ja paida keete gaye???
kinne sawal… jo koi vi nahiN pucchda
jawab koi vi nahiN janda
phir kalle us naujawaN de sir ilzaam kyuN????

[RANJOT MANN]

preet it's jus impossible not to fall in love with your thinking.....kehn lai kuch baki ni reha..superb..fantastic.

[vikramjethi]

Originally Posted by Preet Dil Di

Kall di akhbaar te pareya,
ek naujawaN police mukable ch mareya gaya
tasveer dekhi usdi, naal kujh police de karmchari vi khare
chehere te desh seva da garoor, jo hona vi chahida
saaf nazar aa reha
us naujawan vall vi dekhia, 21-22 saal da oh gabroo
khilre kesh, khuliaN akkhaN, jehna ch hun maut da vi supna nahiN
mainu jiveN vaar vaar bula reha
ki gunaH si usda, janaN lai akhbar de har panne nu palta reha
Hmm.. oh taaN attvaadi si, desh nu jis toN sabH toN vaddH khatra
gaddar, apne keete ti saza pa reha
theek hai, eddaN hi hona chahida ehna lokaN naal
lokaN di haaN ch maiN vi si haaN mila reha
phir jiveN acchanak hi mere jehaN ch eh khayal aaya
jiss umar ch hatth ch kalam honi chahidi
ohna hatthaN ch hatthiar kyun??
jiss umar ch akkhaN ch rehande rangeen supne
ohnu maut naal si enna pyar kyuN??
ohde vichoN ek attvaddi panpeya
vichle insaaN di hoi si haar kyun??
ki vajaH oh apneya te haath chuk baitha
apne hi lagge jehar samaaN kyun??
maiN daave naal kehnda ke oh maa do khukhoN
jamda hi eddaN da nahiN si.oh ek vakkhvadi ban gaya
halat paida ho gaye si eddaN de
ja paida keete gaye???
kinne sawal jo koi vi nahiN pucchda
jawab koi vi nahiN janda
phir kalle us naujawaN de sir ilzaam kyuN????

Preet jii...maiN Ranjot Mann saheb di gal nall pura pura itefaaq rakhda haaN....bahut achhi soch de malik hoN tusi...

Achha laga thode vichaar padh ke, aur maiN thode toN mafi mangda haaN ki maiN bina thodi ijaazat thode thread te Kuch likhn laga haaN....bohat koshish kiti ki mana na likh par pher rukya hi ni gaya taN likh reha haiN....ik vaar pher mafi chaunda haaN.....

Jis desh de nau jawaana nu jamdeyaaN roti di fikar pai jandi hai....uss desh de nau jawaan hathaN ch hathiyaar aapo aap aa jande ne....kuj log supne dikha dinde ne te kuj halaat eho jehe ho jande ne....apni umr da behad achha sama main Punjab ch katya hai....bahut sachaiyaN toN wakaf haaN....
Jad sarkari numaiende sirf apniyaN jebaaN di fikar karde ne taaN kai halaat paida ho jaande ne....pher bhi aatvaad taN hal ni kise cheez da....bhena, maavaN, dhiyaN te vidhwa naaraN nu bahut kareeb toN varlaap karde dekhya hai...bas ik hi gal samjh ch aayee hai....ki duniya chahe kuj vi aakhe, sach bahut asaani naal bahar nahi aunda ya shayad koi leke hi nahi auna chaunda KyoNki sach kauda hunda hai te oh kade ni vekhda ki mera kaun hai te paraya kaun...?
Jis din sach bahar aauga taN iss kyuN da jawaab aape bahar aa jauga te mere aapne na brabar anibhav da kehna hai ki o din auna hi ni.....

[Preet Dil Di]

Originally Posted by RANJOT MANN

preet it's jus impossible not to fall in love with your thinking.....kehn lai kuch baki ni reha..superb..fantastic.

Thankyou sooo much Ranjot ji...tusi pasand keeta bahut bahut meharbani...umeed hai ke thuhada saath eddaN hi baneya rahega.

[Preet Dil Di]

Originally Posted by vikramjethi

Preet jii...maiN Ranjot Mann saheb di gal nall pura pura itefaaq rakhda haaN....bahut achhi soch de malik hoN tusi...

Achha laga thode vichaar padh ke, aur maiN thode toN mafi mangda haaN ki maiN bina thodi ijaazat thode thread te Kuch likhn laga haaN....bohat koshish kiti ki mana na likh par pher rukya hi ni gaya taN likh reha haiN....ik vaar pher mafi chaunda haaN.....

Jis desh de nau jawaana nu jamdeyaaN roti di fikar pai jandi hai....uss desh de nau jawaan hathaN ch hathiyaar aapo aap aa jande ne....kuj log supne dikha dinde ne te kuj halaat eho jehe ho jande ne....apni umr da behad achha sama main Punjab ch katya hai....bahut sachaiyaN toN wakaf haaN....
Jad sarkari numaiende sirf apniyaN jebaaN di fikar karde ne taaN kai halaat paida ho jaande ne....pher bhi aatvaad taN hal ni kise cheez da....bhena, maavaN, dhiyaN te vidhwa naaraN nu bahut kareeb toN varlaap karde dekhya hai...bas ik hi gal samjh ch aayee hai....ki duniya chahe kuj vi aakhe, sach bahut asaani naal bahar nahi aunda ya shayad koi leke hi nahi auna chaunda KyoNki sach kauda hunda hai te oh kade ni vekhda ki mera kaun hai te paraya kaun...?
Jis din sach bahar aauga taN iss kyuN da jawaab aape bahar aa jauga te mere aapne na brabar anibhav da kehna hai ki o din auna hi ni.....

Vikram ji tusi apna keemti sama es poem nu read karan lai ditta...thankyou very much. te please sorry kehaN vaali taaN koi gall hi nahiN hai balke mainu taaN bahut changa lageya... i could tell from your reply that how carefully you have read this poem. jo gallaN maiN keh nahiN sakeya..tusiN keh dittiaN...bilkul theek keha hai tusiN ke sach nu bahar aun vich bahut time lagg janda hai. poverty, politics and religion are some pieces of this puzzle.....and i hope ke agli generation esde kujh hor pieces labh sake.. taaN jo ek din sabh de sahmne clear picture aa sake.....but i completely agree with you that it's gonna take forever.
thankyou once again Vikram ji......take care.

[rajinderseep]

Dear preet ji tuhadi eh rachna nikori poem hi nahi balki ik sachai hai samaaj de ik bahut baday pehlu di.jis ton vakif han aseen saray hi par sochde haan koi hor aa ke gal kare khud honsla nahi karde.smaaj de aj jo halat han is da jumebar kon hai............................................... ............................
ik bari ik gali di nukar te pay gandagi de dhair karke gali de logan di aapas vich benhs ho gai...sab ik doosray nu ilzaam lagaan lagay.koi kehay jad main gand sutia si us ton pehlaan hi ithay dhair lagaa si..........akhir eh faisla hoaya k jis jis ne vee gand sutia hai bapis chak lavay par jis banday ne sab ton akhir vich sutia si kehan lagaa pehlaan oh chuke jis ne sab ton pehlaan sutia si.
preet ji jis samaaj vich is taraan di soch hove uthay mushkil wadh jaandi hai
sirf ilzaam lagaan da kam hi reh jaanda hai
par mainu vishwaas hai tuhaday varge veeraan di kalm jaroor har awaaj atay har swaal nu buland karegi te samaaj nu dishaa devegi.

[Preet Dil Di]

Originally Posted by rajinderseep

Dear preet ji tuhadi eh rachna nikori poem hi nahi balki ik sachai hai samaaj de ik bahut baday pehlu di.jis ton vakif han aseen saray hi par sochde haan koi hor aa ke gal kare khud honsla nahi karde.smaaj de aj jo halat han is da jumebar kon hai............................................... ............................
ik bari ik gali di nukar te pay gandagi de dhair karke gali de logan di aapas vich benhs ho gai...sab ik doosray nu ilzaam lagaan lagay.koi kehay jad main gand sutia si us ton pehlaan hi ithay dhair lagaa si..........akhir eh faisla hoaya k jis jis ne vee gand sutia hai bapis chak lavay par jis banday ne sab ton akhir vich sutia si kehan lagaa pehlaan oh chuke jis ne sab ton pehlaan sutia si.
preet ji jis samaaj vich is taraan di soch hove uthay mushkil wadh jaandi hai
sirf ilzaam lagaan da kam hi reh jaanda hai
par mainu vishwaas hai tuhaday varge veeraan di kalm jaroor har awaaj atay har swaal nu buland karegi te samaaj nu dishaa devegi.

Rajinder..mere pyare veer...thuhadi reply etthe dekh ke mainu bahut khushi hoi.
phir kalle us naujawaN de sir ilzaam kyuN????
es swaal da answer tusi jiss khoobsoorti naal ditta usne mera man moh leya. jehda scenerio tusi use keeta sachmuch us vich kinna kujh lukia hai. ehi taaN apni society di sabh toN vaddi problem hai ke ilzaam den lai taaN har koi tyaar ho janda hai par kujh karaN da kisse kol koi time nahiN hai. thankyou soooo much Rajinder ji ke apna keemti sama tusiN es poem nu paran lai ditta. apna khayal rakhna.