Salam O Allecum Zeba Ji,,
Buhat Hi Aacha Kaha Ha Aap Na,,
Waqat , Waqat ki Bat ha,,
Waqat , Halat or Khayalat kabhi aak Gasa Nahi Rehata,,
Keep smiling,
B happy, b brave, and B ALIVE
zs
zeba ji
bohat achcha likha hai aap ne.
shairy takraar zabardast hai aur alfaz mein eik naghmagi hai.
shabash zeba keep it up.
or haan, mein ne bhe eik nazm shairy. dard mein kal post ki hai, waqt mile to eik nazar daal len, aur please agar aap apni tanqeedi raaey bhejen to mujhe shukhi ho gi.
take care and wishing you all the best.
musharrafhusain
Aapko lag raha hoga ke aapko bahut der baad reply karr raha huun main..shayad aapko parna kam kar diya hoga.
Magar aisa hargiz nahin hai..aapki likhi har post main zaroor parta huun..par jab dekhta huun ke pehle hi itne log aapki tareef kar chuke hain to ,main ghabra kar raply nahin karta kahin meri tareef itne bare logon ke beech feeki na lage.
Khair aapne ye ghazal bhi apni har ghazal ki tarah khaabsurat likhi hai..
Aage bhi likhte rehna
Varinder
kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
varinder ji,
aap ka behad shukriya aap ne finally reply ki to sahi,itna waqt nikaal isko padhne ka aur iski tareef ke liye bhi shukriya.
mai koshish karoongi accha likh sakoon.