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Result: Tasweer pe tahreer July 2014 - 15th July 2014, 11:14 PM

Doston AzizoN ko shaad ka aadaab....

Aap sab ke bharpoor saath aur sahyog ke liye main aur tamaaam SDC team aap sab ki shukrguzaaar hai... aapne jis josh o khuloos ke saath is baar TPT me hissaa liyaa wo kaabile tareef rahaa... aur aap sab badh chadh kar aaage aaye isme hissa liye bahot fakhr aur khushii ki baat hai ham sab ke liye...

aur aaj jaise ke ye competition khatm ho rahaaa hai aur results jiska aap besabrii se intzaar kar rahe they use bataane ka waqt aa gayaa hai..

To is baar jaisaa ke hamne decide kiyaa thaa is baar do winners choosse kiye gaye hain :

1) Public choice (through polling)

2) Critic choice ( through judges)


to polling thread kaa result saamne aa raha hai doston...


Aur Public choice (polling) ke vijetaa haiN... Hassan Saahab....

aur unki ghazal hai...

Tumhari shohrat ko awaazaa na karenge
Sitam seh leiN ge, tamashaa na karenge

awaaza: report about reputation.

Bhale talkh lafzon ke nishtar barsaao
ZubaaN per uff magar laayaa na karenge

Wo phool sa khilta hai raQeeboN ke darmiyaaN!
Hum door se dekheN ge, paas jayaa na kareNge

Khoo un ki jo thehri hai boht sard mizaaji
Hum wehshat-e-ishq ke lahaq, takazaa na karenge

khoo: habit
lahaq: used to

Khaar hi khaar kyuN na rakh do hamari raah per
Zakhm khud seencheN ge, dikhayaa na karenge

Apne ashkoN ko samjhaa liya hai aaj saahil per!
Badal jo haiN barasne ko, woh ab barsaa na karenge



Hassan saahab aapko team SDC ki taraf se bahot bahot mubaarakbaad......
Ham duaa karte hain ke aapke kalam ka zor yuNhi badhta rahe chadhtaa rahe......


Aap sabhi ummeedwaaron ko ek baar fir se tahe dil se shukriyaa aur mubaarakbaad...

Aapka dost

Shaad....


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15th July 2014, 11:21 PM

Lijiye saahebaan aab aap sab ke saamne aa raha hai critic choice ka result...

Aur jaise ke pahle bhi batayaa gayaa thaa, main fir se aap sab ke saamne wo baat rakhnaa chahungaa ke jo bhi Critic choice ka winner hogaa wo agli baar ke TPT me Judge hogaa Zidd saahab ke saath....

To lijiye marking kuch iss tarah se hain...




Wafaa karke dekha = 4 (ufaq saab)
Wafaa karke dekha = 2.1 (zidd saab)

total=6.1

- Ananthpak saahab




Baitha hu kinaare par = 7 (ufaq saab)
Baitha hu kinaare par = 5.35 (zidd saab)

-Aadeil saahab

total= 12.35


Intezaar qayaamat ki tarah = 6 (ufaq saab)
Intezaar qayaamat ki tarah = 6.25 (zidd saab)

total= 12.25

- Talib saahab




Koi bashar tanhaa tanhaa = 5 (ufaq saab)
Koi bashar tanhaa tanhaa = 5 (zidd saab)

total= 10

- Ahmad Hyderabadi saahab



Na jaane kaise ye doori = 5 (ufaq saab)
Na jaane kaise ye doori = 2.75 (zidd saab)

total= 7.75


- Praneeta saahiba



Na bhulenge WO meri Kahani = 3 (ufaq saab)
Na bhulenge WO meri Kahani = 2.25 (zidd saab)

total= 5.25


- Aru saahab


Barsaat bahut zor huyi = 6 (ufaq saab)
Barsaat bahut zor huyi = 6.5 (zidd saab)

total= 12.5

- Shaad




Bheed se nikalkar = 5 (ufaq saab)
Bheed se nikalkar = 3 (zidd saab)

total= 8


- Madhu saaheba


Aaj phir thaam Ke main = 8 (ufaq saab)
Aaj phir thaam Ke main = 7.9 (zidd saab)

total= 15.9


- Ahmad Ali shaqil Saahab





Tumhari shoharat ko = 5 (ufaq saab)
Tumhari shoharat ko = 3 (zidd saab)


total= 8

- Hassan saahab



Teri yaad me ham = 4 (ufaq saab)
Teri yaad me ham = 1.5 (zidd saab)

total= 5.5

- maasoom pyar saahab





Koi bhi bhooka na = 7 (ufaq saab)
Koi bhi bhooka na = 4.85 (zidd saab)

total= 11.85

- Abhi tamrkar saahab



Jin hawaao me majboor = 9 (ufaq saab)
Jin hawaao me majboor = 6.9 (zidd saab)

total= 15.9

- Anjaan saahab



Aur is baar ke Winner hain-- Anjaan saahab aur Ahmad Shakil sahab with 15.9 points

Aap dono ko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad TPT critic choice winner ke liye... aur hame bahot khushi ho rahi hai aap dono ko Agle TPT ki zimmedaari soupte hue... aap dono agii TPT me Zidd saahab ke saath judge honge... Mujhe ummeed hai aap dono is padbhaar ko sambhaalne ke liye is zimmedari ko kuboolne ke liye taiyaar honge....


Main tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon Ufaq saahab aur Zidd saahab kaa jinhone is zimmedari ko bakhubii nibhaaya aur apnaa keemtii waqt diyaa......


Ek baar fir se sabhii Winners aur Participants ko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad...

Aapka dost

Shaad....




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Hearty congratulations to all the winners of Tpt...Hassan sahab. .Sumit ji and Ahmed shakil sahab. .

And sincere thanks to all the participants. .voters and judges




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C o n g r a t u l a t i o n s! - 16th July 2014, 04:57 AM

Congratulations galore Hassan Bhaee, Ahmad Shakil Bhaee , Sumit Bhaee!!!

Buhat buhat mubarak ho aap Teeno Ko!!!! Congratulations and Million Thanks to all the Participants, Organizers, Judges and Especially the Voters!!!


See You All very Soon in the Best Signature Section!!!!!


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congrats to all winners....................


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heartiest congratulations to all the winners...
Hassan ji, sumit ji and ahmad ji...



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Hassanji, Sumeetbhai (Anjaan saab) & Ahmed Shakil saab,

Heartiest congratulations to you all...



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Doston AzizoN ko shaad ka aadaab....

Aap sab ke bharpoor saath aur sahyog ke liye main aur tamaaam SDC team aap sab ki shukrguzaaar hai... aapne jis josh o khuloos ke saath is baar TPT me hissaa liyaa wo kaabile tareef rahaa... aur aap sab badh chadh kar aaage aaye isme hissa liye bahot fakhr aur khushii ki baat hai ham sab ke liye...

aur aaj jaise ke ye competition khatm ho rahaaa hai aur results jiska aap besabrii se intzaar kar rahe they use bataane ka waqt aa gayaa hai..

To is baar jaisaa ke hamne decide kiyaa thaa is baar do winners choosse kiye gaye hain :

1) Public choice (through polling)

2) Critic choice ( through judges)


to polling thread kaa result saamne aa raha hai doston...


Aur Public choice (polling) ke vijetaa haiN... Hassan Saahab....

aur unki ghazal hai...

Tumhari shohrat ko awaazaa na karenge
Sitam seh leiN ge, tamashaa na karenge

awaaza: report about reputation.

Bhale talkh lafzon ke nishtar barsaao
ZubaaN per uff magar laayaa na karenge

Wo phool sa khilta hai raQeeboN ke darmiyaaN!
Hum door se dekheN ge, paas jayaa na kareNge

Khoo un ki jo thehri hai boht sard mizaaji
Hum wehshat-e-ishq ke lahaq, takazaa na karenge

khoo: habit
lahaq: used to

Khaar hi khaar kyuN na rakh do hamari raah per
Zakhm khud seencheN ge, dikhayaa na karenge

Apne ashkoN ko samjhaa liya hai aaj saahil per!
Badal jo haiN barasne ko, woh ab barsaa na karenge



Hassan saahab aapko team SDC ki taraf se bahot bahot mubaarakbaad......
Ham duaa karte hain ke aapke kalam ka zor yuNhi badhta rahe chadhtaa rahe......


Aap sabhi ummeedwaaron ko ek baar fir se tahe dil se shukriyaa aur mubaarakbaad...

Aapka dost

Shaad....
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Congratulations galore Hassan Bhaee, Ahmad Shakil Bhaee , Sumit Bhaee!!!

Buhat buhat mubarak ho aap Teeno Ko!!!! Congratulations and Million Thanks to all the Participants, Organizers, Judges and Especially the Voters!!!


See You All very Soon in the Best Signature Section!!!!!
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congrats to all winners....................
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Hassan ji, sumit ji and ahmad ji...
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Hassanji, Sumeetbhai (Anjaan saab) & Ahmed Shakil saab,

Heartiest congratulations to you all...
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ahmad bhai. . hassan bhaii aur sumeet bhai aap ko bahot bahot badhaaii

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Adaab,,

Apni mehnat se, lagan se jeeti hui haqeeqi khushi kia hoti hai,
yeh aaj mujhe pata chala...

Main mods ka, voters ka, participants ka aur judges ka
shukerguzaar hooN,

Mods ka teh-e-dil se mashkoor hooN k unhooN ne meri ghazal
competition meiN rakhnay laaiq samjhii,,

voters ka jinhooN ne meri ghazal ko wuqqat bakhshi aur vote kiya..

participants ka.. ke un sab ki ghazalieN, nazmieN aik se bad'h
kar aik thiiN....

aur judges ka, ke unhooN ne khaak alfaazooN ko apna qeemati waqt diya...

Mujhe SDC join kiye huay 5 saal honay ko haiN,
aur pal pal milti hui aap sab ki support, guidance se mujhe boht
kuch seekhne ko mila aur yeh achi yadieN mujhe taa-hayaat
yaad rahieN gii....

Allah se dua hai ke aap sab ka saath aise hi mere saath bana rahay,,

DuaooN mieN yaad rakhiye ga,,

Khaaksaar,,


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Chaliye isi baat par hassan saahab ki poori ghazal bhii post kar dete hain .... ek baar winning ghazal ka lutf aaap sab phir se uthaaiye......


Tumhari shohrat ko awaazaa na karenge
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Love Congratulation HSN bhai - 17th July 2014, 06:25 PM

HSN Bhai aur Ahmad bhai...bahut bahut mubarakbaad, bahut umda likha aapne...hamari dilli mubarakbaad kabool kijiye...god bless u


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HSN Bhai aur Ahmad bhai...bahut bahut mubarakbaad, bahut umda likha aapne...hamari dilli mubarakbaad kabool kijiye...god bless u
Adaab baaji,,

Aap ki mubarakbaad se meri khushi do-baala ho gayii...

Apna khiyal rakhiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,


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Chaliye isi baat par hassan saahab ki poori ghazal bhii post kar dete hain .... ek baar winning ghazal ka lutf aaap sab phir se uthaaiye......


Tumhari shohrat ko awaazaa na karenge
Sitam seh leiN ge, tamashaa na karenge

awaaza: report about reputation.

Bhale talkh lafzon ke nishtar barsaao
ZubaaN per uff magar laayaa na karenge

Wo phool sa khilta hai raQeeboN ke darmiyaaN!
Hum door se dekheN ge, paas jayaa na kareNge

Khoo un ki jo thehri hai boht sard mizaaji
Hum wehshat-e-ishq ke lahaq, takazaa na karenge

khoo: habit
lahaq: used to

Khaar hi khaar kyuN na rakh do hamari raah per
Zakhm khud seencheN ge, dikhayaa na karenge

Apne ashkoN ko samjhaa liya hai aaj saahil per!
Badal jo haiN barasne ko, woh ab barsaa na karenge

be-had shukriyaaH Shaad bhai...

na-cheez ko itni pazeraayi bakhshne k liye...

pal pal milta hua aap ka saath mujhe hamesha
yaad rahe ga...

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,


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Love special mention Hassan :) - 18th July 2014, 06:32 AM

congrats to all the winners


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congrats to all the winners

Pari Dear,,

You mention me special,
so here's special thanks for you


Take care,

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Tamaam Ahl-e-Zauq Ahbaab Ko Aadaab....!

Sab Se Pehlay To Taakheer Se aanay Ki Ma'azrat Chahata Huun Tamaam DostoN se...

Me Tamaam Shurakaa, Dono Judges, Janab Zidd Sahab Aur Ufaq Sahab, Aur Tamaam Voters Ka Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkoor Hun, JIn Ki Badolat Ye Competition Kaamiyaab Hua...

Aur Tamaam Ahbaab Jinhon Ne Is Khaksaar Ko Wish Kia Hai Un Ka Sameem-e-Qalb Se Mashkoor Huun...




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18th July 2014, 05:59 PM

Hassan bhai aur Shakil bhai aap donoN ko TPT ka winner chune jaane par bahut mubarakbad.
Aur tamaam dostoN ka bahut bahut shukrguzaar hooN. MaiN is izzat afzaai ke laaik nahiN hooN. Meri nazar meN TPT ke winner Hassan sb aur Ahmad Shakil sb haiN. Kuch bura laga ho agar to mazarat khwaah hooN.


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Hassan bhai aur Shakil bhai aap donoN ko TPT ka winner chune jaane par bahut mubarakbad.
Aur tamaam dostoN ka bahut bahut shukrguzaar hooN. MaiN is izzat afzaai ke laaik nahiN hooN. Meri nazar meN TPT ke winner Hassan sb aur Ahmad Shakil sb haiN. Kuch bura laga ho agar to mazarat khwaah hooN.
AnjAAn saheb...

Qaabil judges ne aap ko choose kiya hai,
is ka matlab hai koi baat to thi aap ki 'tehreer' meiN.......

Congratulations!

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congratulations..... hassan ji .... anjaan ji aur ahmed shakil ji ... for winning the competition.. u all deserve to be winners with such beautiful gazals ... congratulations 1s again...


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doston azizon ko shaad ka aadaab....

Aap sab ke bharpoor saath aur sahyog ke liye main aur tamaaam sdc team aap sab ki shukrguzaaar hai... Aapne jis josh o khuloos ke saath is baar tpt me hissaa liyaa wo kaabile tareef rahaa... Aur aap sab badh chadh kar aaage aaye isme hissa liye bahot fakhr aur khushii ki baat hai ham sab ke liye...

Aur aaj jaise ke ye competition khatm ho rahaaa hai aur results jiska aap besabrii se intzaar kar rahe they use bataane ka waqt aa gayaa hai..

To is baar jaisaa ke hamne decide kiyaa thaa is baar do winners choosse kiye gaye hain :

1) public choice (through polling)

2) critic choice ( through judges)


to polling thread kaa result saamne aa raha hai doston...


Aur public choice (polling) ke vijetaa hain... hassan saahab....

Aur unki ghazal hai...

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khaar hi khaar kyun na rakh do hamari raah per
zakhm khud seenchen ge, dikhayaa na karenge

apne ashkon ko samjhaa liya hai aaj saahil per!
Badal jo hain barasne ko, woh ab barsaa na karenge



hassan saahab aapko team sdc ki taraf se bahot bahot mubaarakbaad......
Ham duaa karte hain ke aapke kalam ka zor yunhi badhta rahe chadhtaa rahe......


Aap sabhi ummeedwaaron ko ek baar fir se tahe dil se shukriyaa aur mubaarakbaad...

Aapka dost

shaad....



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congratulations..... hassan ji .... anjaan ji aur ahmed shakil ji ... for winning the competition.. u all deserve to be winners with such beautiful gazals ... congratulations 1s again...
Anamika,

Teh-e-dil se mashkoor hon.

Milte rehna,

DuaooN ke saath,


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