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Aaj ka daur..!! -
19th February 2002, 03:58 PM
Mera Salaam sabhi ko pahuche...ek taaza ghazal likhi hai..hamesha pyaar,mohabbat pe likhti thi to is baar aur woh bhi pehli baar kuch hat ke likhne ki koshish ki hai...bataiyega zaroor ke kaisi lagi..aur meri baat me kuch sacchai hai ya nahi..intizaar rahega
 aaj ke daur meiN,insaan insaan ke khoon ka pyaasa hai jidhar bhi dekho,har taraf yahi manzar hai,nazaara hai laalach ki paTTi bandhi hai, is kadar aankhoN pe paise ke ilaawa,kuch aur dekhna bhi nahi gaNwaara hai kahiN taras jaate haiN log roTi ke ek tukre ko,aur kahiN hota,ek din meiN caRoRoN ka waara niyaara hai jaan,maal,izzat,aabru sabhi to khatre mein hai aajkal buri nazar waaloN se na jaaney kya kya bachaana hai aaye din hota hai yahan danga fasaad,mazhab ke naam pe Allah jaaney kya hashr is khalq ka hone waala hai apni position,power ka galat istimaal karne wale logoN mat bhoolo,tumhe bhi ek din mitti mein mil jaana hai kiska main thamooN haath,kaun apnaa hai,kaun paraaya hai is matlubi duniya mein nahi hota koi kisi ka sahaara hai apne juute ki nok pe logoN ko rakhne wale bereham aadmi sun le, in juutoN ko bhi ek na ek din Ghis janaa hai jaan lo,usi ka dil sabse zyaada chaknachoor hai ghazloN aur sheroN mein jo apne ghamoN ko chupaata hai sukh chain aafiyat ki zindagi ab kise naseeb hai socho to lagta hai ki,ye sab to bas ek guzra zamaana hai jab bahut pyaar mohabbat se,phuslaakar baat kare koi to samajh lo 'Shumaila',daal me zaroor kuch kaala hai!!! --shumaila kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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bahot khoob kaha hai -
19th February 2002, 04:13 PM
aadaab shumailaji......
aapne jo bhi kaha sach kaha hai..... kaun apna hai kaun paraya hai....is duniya mai kisi pe etbaar nahi hota hai...... likhti rahiyega.....accha likha hai...... Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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bahut bahut shukriya..!! -
19th February 2002, 04:19 PM
Adaab tanhadil!!!
Shukriya jo aap ko hamari ghazal acchi lagi..aur sach lagi!! Ek aur ghazal likhi thi..'Adaayein khoob..' isi forum mein..waqt mile to nazar daal lijiye...shukriya!! regards, shumaila kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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10th October 2011, 07:57 AM
Mujhe isi tarah k shair ache lgte hain,pyar Muhabbat sb fazool hai,
agr ap sun rahi hain to main apko khair maqdam kehta hun.thanks in 2011 for 2002's Shumaila.. |
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