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zalim yeh gareebi! - 26th November 2006, 12:49 AM
Unka dil kahan unke paas hai,
jo vo hume dil denge.
Hum to bevajah gareeb ho gaye,
yun unko dil deke.

Par is gareebi mein,
ek ajeeb sa sukoon hai dard hai,
jeene marne ki tamanna hai.
Kyun koi kaise ab unhe bataye,
adhure se hum akele hi jeena hai...

Ishq karo, Isq karna tumhara paidayishi haq hai,
Magar kyun na is baar watan ki mitti ko mashuqa bana le!
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26th November 2006, 01:10 PM
aseem ji adaab aur namskaar

bahot hi dard bhare ehsaso ko aapne bayan kiya hai achha likhte ho aur achhi tarh se bayan bhi kiya hai khuda apko khus rahe hamesa ummid karta hu aap aage bhi aise likhte rahenge

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26th November 2006, 11:17 PM
Dhanyawaad Dhawalji. Isse bhi acha likhne ki zaroor koshish karoonga.

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aseem ji pehle to aapka shayri ki is duniya me swagat karta hun main....!
ahcha sher pesh kiya hai aapne, par yakeen maaniye jis cheez ne mujhe baandh diya wo tha aapka footnote, i salute u my frnd for such a brillliant thought...!

waise sher ahcha hai,

adhure hon ya poore hon,
akele yahaan koi nahi jeeta hai,
koi saathi hoga khada tere liye v,
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