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Red face Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum... - 21st September 2004, 12:11 AM

Kuch is kadar meri jaan ne diye mujhe gam...
Paake inhe na has sakenge, na ro sakenge hum..
Kuch is kadar meri jaan hui mujhse khafa..
Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum...

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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21st September 2004, 12:17 AM

Priya...hauslaa dena aasaan hai aur karna mushkil..par phir sirf ek baat yaad aati hai

"Umeed par duniya kayam hai"

Kuch is kadar meri jaan ne diye mujhe gam...
Paake inhe na has sakenge, na ro sakenge hum..
Kuch is kadar meri jaan hui mujhse khafa..
Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum...

Eh-le-ulfat ka hota hai dastoor yeh ghum
mere dil par bhi huye kuch aise hi sitam
teri halat bhi mere dil se nahi dur sanam
kaho kaise kinaare par duub jaayenge hum

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21st September 2004, 02:37 AM

that's what u made me do.. smile..

Aapne bahut hi khoobsoorat sher likha reply mein...

Eh-le-ulfat ka hota hai dastoor yeh ghum
mere dil par bhi huye kuch aise hi sitam
teri halat bhi mere dil se nahi dur sanam
kaho kaise kinaare par duub jaayenge hum


kinaare pe na doobenge hum..
kinaara to paayenge hum..
bas kiya na karo hum pe tum yun sitam..
tumhare bina ji na paayenge hum..

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Very nice Di,

But nothing stays forver di. Gam ke yeh badal aaj hain, kal nahi honge, dekh lena aap.

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hi - 23rd September 2004, 05:29 AM

hey ree
mast ne sahi kaha ki ummed par tiki hai ye duniya !!

na jee sakoge na mar sakoge tum
par ik baat jarur kar sakoge tum
unke ilawa aur bhi hai tumahre chahne wale...
ab na kehna ki muskra na sakoge tum??

what u say??

Luv ya alwys Priya


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Re: hi - 23rd September 2004, 08:25 PM

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hey ree
mast ne sahi kaha ki ummed par tiki hai ye duniya !!

na jee sakoge na mar sakoge tum
par ik baat jarur kar sakoge tum
unke ilawa aur bhi hai tumahre chahne wale...
ab na kehna ki muskra na sakoge tum??

what u say??

Luv ya alwys Priya
Hey Priya.........

Unke siva chaahne vaalon ka kya karun..
woh hi na ho to is zindagi ka kya karun..
woh ik baar jo has ke dekh lein..
main to yeh zindahi bhi unpe vaar dun..

Haan par sirf muskuraane tak to theek hi hai..

Kahan ho tum.. nazar hi nahi aati aaj kal.. busy ho shaayad.. chalo apna khayaal rakhna..

~Pree



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Namaskar Priya - 23rd September 2004, 08:43 PM

Namaskar Priya

kaise hain aap.Aapka sher acha laga.2 panktiyaan dil ko chuu gayee.

Kuch is kadar meri jaan hui mujhse khafa..
Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum...

Kuch kehna chahunge apne 2 panktiyon se from one of my Rachna

Ek Jaan hay baakey tere khafa honey kay baad
Ek Aas hay baakey tere jaaney kay baad

Bhagwan na kare koi kissi se khafa ho...................Kissi ka khafa hona bahut dukh deta hay.Yahi dua hay khuda se aap sada khush rahain aur koi aap se kabhi khafa na ho
   
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Re: Namaskar Priya - 24th September 2004, 01:07 AM

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kaise hain aap.Aapka sher acha laga.2 panktiyaan dil ko chuu gayee.

Kuch is kadar meri jaan hui mujhse khafa..
Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum...

Kuch kehna chahunge apne 2 panktiyon se from one of my Rachna

Ek Jaan hay baakey tere khafa honey kay baad
Ek Aas hay baakey tere jaaney kay baad

Bhagwan na kare koi kissi se khafa ho...................Kissi ka khafa hona bahut dukh deta hay.Yahi dua hay khuda se aap sada khush rahain aur koi aap se kabhi khafa na ho
Aakhir aapne vakt nikaal hi liya...

bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. jo aapko yeh sher pasand aaya...

aapki bhi woh do panktiyan khoob hain..

Aapki duaaon ka bhi bahut bahut shukriya...

Khush rahiye..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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24th September 2004, 05:04 PM

Kuch is kadar meri jaan ne diye mujhe gam...
Paake inhe na has sakenge, na ro sakenge hum..
Kuch is kadar meri jaan hui mujhse khafa..
Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum...


priya behan .....

ashko ko daman main kaise samet te hum...
pani nahi khoon se kaise khelte hum
tere har sitam ki kahani to ek inam hai....
par ye inam bina uff kiye kaise jhelte hum...

chale gaye jo to unhe rok na sake hum...
juban ko chah kar bhi kaise hilate bhi hum....
tune dekha bhi palat kar bhi .....
tere ko aawaz lagate bhi kaise hum....

behan apna khayal rakhna aur apni shadi main jaroor bulana ok main mast bhai ke sath aaounga ... ok


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25th September 2004, 01:05 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
priya behan .....

ashko ko daman main kaise samet te hum...
pani nahi khoon se kaise khelte hum
tere har sitam ki kahani to ek inam hai....
par ye inam bina uff kiye kaise jhelte hum...

chale gaye jo to unhe rok na sake hum...
juban ko chah kar bhi kaise hilate bhi hum....
tune dekha bhi palat kar bhi .....
tere ko aawaz lagate bhi kaise hum....

behan apna khayal rakhna aur apni shadi main jaroor bulana ok main mast bhai ke sath aaounga ... ok
Kunal Bhai..

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka jo aapne mujhe reply kiya, aur itne pyaare sher likh daale.. bhaiyon ke bina kya behan ki shaadi ho sakti hai? yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai..

Khush rahiye..

~Priya



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26th September 2004, 01:02 AM

Kuch is kadar meri jaan ne diye mujhe gam...
Paake inhe na has sakenge, na ro sakenge hum..
Kuch is kadar meri jaan hui mujhse khafa..
Na jee sakenge.. na marr sakenge hum...

ek baat tao bataoo tumhe mere dil ka haal kaise pata pad jaata hai...hmmmm...sorry yaar tumhare offline ka jaawab nahi de paya....bade bhai samjh kar maaf kar denaa...
aur sunaoo tum kab india aa rahii hoo........jaldii se aa kar shehanaii bajvaoo bhai....kahi koii intazaar karte karte sukh kar kanta naa ho jaye...
chaloo meri achii behnaa tumse se tafsil se baat karenge....15 oct k badh achaa...tab tak intazar karnaa..ok.......tumhara bhai..sanju

achha likhaa hai..........


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28th September 2004, 12:38 AM

Bhaiya..

bas agle mahine india aa jaaongi..

aap SA aaye, aur bhabhi naaraaz ho gayi kya? jo aapne kaha mere dil ka haal.. woh to hongi hi.. ab itni door jo gaye ho unhe akela chod ke..

Take care..

~Priya



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