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24th September 2004, 03:09 PM
Dil ki baat hum apni,
unse na kabhi bayyan kar sake. Nazar se nazar milti rahi par, labz na kabhi hoton pe aa sake. Saari umra hum to unhe, sirf khwabon mein la sake, Nazar se nazar milti rahi par, labz na kabhi hoton pe aa sake Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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25th September 2004, 01:09 AM
Mona Di...
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne... Aap hi ke sher mein kuch aur add kar rahi hun... zara gaur farmaaiye.. Unki ek nazar se saansein tham jaati thi.. Hum dhadkan na unhe suna sake.. Nazar se nazar milti thi jab.. Hum honth na phir hila sake.. Aankhon se bayaan ki mohabbat.. Ab aur chupa na sake.. Nazar se nazar milti thi jab.. Hum honth na phir hila sake... Take care di.. ~Priiii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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25th September 2004, 08:53 AM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne kausam ji
maine kuch likha hai zara gaur farmaiye- kalam uthai hai par lafs nahi milta jise dhund rahe hai wo shaks nahi milta yu to ghoomte firte hai vo zamane ki talaash me bas humare liye unhe waqt nahi milta keeeeeeep writing........................ I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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26th September 2004, 01:12 AM
hmmmm jab chidiyaa chubh gaii khet tab pachtane se kya hota hai.....bolta raha mil lo mil lo..par koii sune tab naa....
 ..achaa achhaa ab k mai aaun tao boldena sab thik hai tab tak naa tum khayalo mai hii boltii rahoo....aur dhyaan rahe koii aaspass na hoo warna log tumhe pagal na samjh baithe kii dekhoo dekhoo ye paglii khudse baat kartii hai.... allle allle merii mausaam gusaa gusaa..........naa rey naa mazaak kar raha hu..jaa jaa dudh garam karii koii rone na lage..ab mai tao chala jidhar chale rastaa kaha merii manzil...mujhe kyaa pata..hogaa koii mtao mera bhii sathii hogii kahii tao meri bhii manzil............gana hai paK gaii naa pata nahi kyu yaad aa gaya.......chaal chaal thodi sii daad kabul kar le kuch tao bhii likhe k liye....  sanju!!!! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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26th September 2004, 02:03 PM
thanx.....priiiiiiiiiiiii............tumne hamari kavita main accha sa add kar diya.....ab woh aur achi lag rahi hain......................
 plz apna khyal rakhna. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th September 2004, 02:05 PM
thanx zubinjee..............
waise humara naam mausam hain kausam nahin.......... apka jawab bhi badiya hain......... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th September 2004, 02:12 PM
ab sanju tumhari baari..................tumne fir mujhse panga liya......kya bahut dil ho raha hain tumhara mujhse maar khane ke liye..........?????
aur tumhe itna bhi nahin pata khyalon mein baat karne ke liye....bolne ki zarroorat nahin hoti....itna bhi nahin pata darr gaye na..............main bhi mazak kar rahi thi....... ...kya baat hain aajkal bade gaane yaad aate hain..hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........tumhari daad ke liye......humhari taraf se................................................ ............................thnx..... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th September 2004, 06:42 PM
Mousam ji & Priya ji..
aap dono ne hi bahoot achchha likha hai.. samajh mai nahi aata ki kiski taareef karooN.. Mousam ji ka ya fir priya ka.. Kher aap dono hi taaref ke hakdaar haiN.. YuN hi likhte rahiya aur ek dusre ka saath dete rahiya..Dil ki baat hum apni, unse na kabhi bayyan kar sake. Nazar se nazar milti rahi par, labz na kabhi hoton pe aa sake. Saari umra hum to unhe, sirf khwabon mein la sake, Nazar se nazar milti rahi par, labz na kabhi hoton pe aa sake Mousam Unki ek nazar se saansein tham jaati thi.. Hum dhadkan na unhe suna sake.. Nazar se nazar milti thi jab.. Hum honth na phir hila sake.. Aankhon se bayaan ki mohabbat.. Ab aur chupa na sake.. Nazar se nazar milti thi jab.. Hum honth na phir hila sake... Chaahat [color=dark red]LaboN par aati nahi aankhoN se wo samjhte nahi.. Zaalim mere dil par chhupi bat hi kuch aisi thii.. Ab bhi yaad kar ke rota hai dil.. Hame mili Pyaar ki sogaat hi kuch aisi thii.. [/color] -Mayank Daad qabul kijiye.. Mayank |
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27th September 2004, 09:32 AM
hello mayankji...
aap bhi daad kubool kijeye.......kyunki apne bhi humari poems ka thik jawab diya................ mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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