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Life is lonely...... (good one) -
31st October 2004, 10:15 AM
Life is lonely......
Tanha safar me aankhe dhundla gayiN,
kadam ladkhadaye, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Fir shaam ghir aayi, jal gaye charagh,
aasma me aaya chand, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Andhere badhte rahe zindagi ki raat me,
Koi parchhayi jo giri*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
*Parchhayi tabhi girti hai jab andhere me kuch roshni hoti hai.
Alsaye se sooraj ne fir failayi roshni yahan,
fir bistar tha akela, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Beet gaya ek din, laga guzar gaya zamana,
Kuch mohlat hui kam*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
*Mohlat=Time.
*Mohlat hui kam= Zindagi me ek aur din kam ho gaya, tanha kat gaya.
The rememberance and the longing
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31st October 2004, 11:45 AM
Hi Samir Sahab,
Bhai, bohot hi pyari nazm pesh ki hai aapne. Hum to aap ke kayal ho gaye. Humari daad qabool kare.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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31st October 2004, 01:21 PM
Tanha safar me aankhe dhundla gayiN,
kadam ladkhadaye, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Fir shaam ghir aayi, jal gaye charagh,
aasma me aaya chand, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Andhere badhte rahe zindagi ki raat me,
Koi parchhayi jo giri*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
*Parchhayi tabhi girti hai jab andhere me kuch roshni hoti hai.
Alsaye se sooraj ne fir failayi roshni yahan,
fir bistar tha akela, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Beet gaya ek din, laga guzar gaya zamana,
Kuch mohlat hui kam*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
waah sameer waah....ek ek alfaaz mai jaan hai...yu laga.....aaiina dekh raha hu.......din kii shuruwat...khud se hii hoo gai....shukriyaa dost...ek behatareen kalaam likhne k liye......Sanju!
Jindagi se to khair shikvaa tha,
muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..
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Re: Life is lonely...... (good one) -
31st October 2004, 01:55 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by samir4u_in
Life is lonely......
Tanha safar me aankhe dhundla gayiN,
kadam ladkhadaye, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Fir shaam ghir aayi, jal gaye charagh,
aasma me aaya chand, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Andhere badhte rahe zindagi ki raat me,
Koi parchhayi jo giri*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
*Parchhayi tabhi girti hai jab andhere me kuch roshni hoti hai.
Alsaye se sooraj ne fir failayi roshni yahan,
fir bistar tha akela, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Beet gaya ek din, laga guzar gaya zamana,
Kuch mohlat hui kam*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
*Mohlat=Time.
*Mohlat hui kam= Zindagi me ek aur din kam ho gaya, tanha kat gaya.
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samir ji namaskar ...
bohat hi umda kalam hai .... wakai main aapne bohat accha likha hai ... ek ek alfaz ... aapko daad dene se rok na paya khud ko ... meri daad teh dil se kabool kijiyega ...
yaadon ka ana khel ho chuka
tujhse bichad kar tujhse mail ho chuka
ashk behte gaye teri har ek bat pe
sehra-e-manjil* jisme beh chuka ..
*ret ka ghar
yahi khak alfaz likh paya ... aapki roshni main ... apna khayal rakhiyega ...
aapka apna
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Re: Life is lonely...... (good one) -
3rd November 2004, 01:07 PM
Tanha safar me aankhe dhundla gayiN,
kadam ladkhadaye, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Alsaye se sooraj ne fir failayi roshni yahan,
fir bistar tha akela, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Beet gaya ek din, laga guzar gaya zamana,
Kuch mohlat hui kam*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
samir bhai
bahooot khoob!!!! waqqai zindagi mein tanhaiyon ke dagar par har kadam kisi ki yaad dila deta hai..kal tak jin raahon par hamsafar ke saath chale the wohi kadam aaj akele hai...bahoot saleeke se apne jazbaaton ko bayan kiya hai aapne....aapko padhne ke liye dil sada tarasta hai,,kyunki maloom hai aap kabhi niraash nahin karte....ek baar phir bahoot umda kalaam ke liye meri daad kubool kijiye..
likhte rahiye
take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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salim bhai..bahot bahot shukriya... -
3rd November 2004, 08:31 PM
salim bhai,
bahot bahot shukriya aapke reply ke liye .. kya bataoun but its just the pain thats taking me away... ab to jeene ko bhi dil nahi karta... dua ke liye haath uthao to bas aansu hi girte hain haathon me....
bahot todd diya hai mujhe judai ne....
well apna khayal rakhiyega... do keep in touch bhai.
samir
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thanx sanju bhai -
3rd November 2004, 08:41 PM
hi sanju bhai,
aapke taarif ke liye bahot bahot shukriya... chalo mera dard kisi ke kuch kaam to aaya...
any ways sanju bhai aap ne mere kalaam ke liye waqt to nikala ... bahot bahot shukriya...
take care
samir
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kunal bhai -
4th November 2004, 12:43 PM
Kunal bhai aapki is hausla afzaaie ke liye bahot bahot shukriya. alfaaz to bas dil se nikal jaate hain.. varna mai kuch itna kabil e taarif nahi...
Kya bataoun.. I'm away from my sweetheart and that has brought me down...
Any ways apna khayal rakhiyega...
do keep smiling
samir
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Manoj bhai -
4th November 2004, 12:48 PM
Tanha safar me aankhe dhundla gayiN,
kadam ladkhadaye, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Alsaye se sooraj ne fir failayi roshni yahan,
fir bistar tha akela, to teri yaad aa gayi.
Beet gaya ek din, laga guzar gaya zamana,
Kuch mohlat hui kam*, to teri yaad aa gayi.
samir bhai
bahooot khoob!!!! waqqai zindagi mein tanhaiyon ke dagar par har kadam kisi ki yaad dila deta hai..kal tak jin raahon par hamsafar ke saath chale the wohi kadam aaj akele hai...bahoot saleeke se apne jazbaaton ko bayan kiya hai aapne....aapko padhne ke liye dil sada tarasta hai,,kyunki maloom hai aap kabhi niraash nahin karte....ek baar phir bahoot umda kalaam ke liye meri daad kubool kijiye..
likhte rahiye
take care
-MANOJ
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Manoj ji
bahot bahot shukriya... dil ko badaa sukoon milta hai aapki reply padh kar... take care.. and hamesha muskurate rahen yeh hi meri dua hai..
Ijazat chahta hun...
samir
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