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GHAZAL : Ab Talak ... - 1st June 2014, 07:54 PM

Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

............... Naresh Mehra ...............




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

............... Naresh Mehra ...............
Naresh ji sabse pehle to aapka bohat bohat shukriyah. ..mujhe pura yaqeen tha aap humse zyada der naaraaz nahi reh sakte..

ab mehfil me raunak si lagti hai..main waqay bohat khush huun.. ..thanks once again..

ab aate hain aapki ghazal ki taraf..bohat hi acchi ghazal likhi hai aapne..sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain..

yuhi likhte rahiye

khush rahiye




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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

............... Naresh Mehra ...............

waahhh naresh bhai bahot khoobsurat peshakash ke liye main aapko mubaarakbaad dena chahta hoon... aur welcome karta hoon aapka jo aap bazm me dobara tashreef laaye... aate rahen.. likhte rahen

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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

............... Naresh Mehra ...............
naresh jee........welcome to sdc....aap nahin the to raunak nahin thi,...na mujhe koi reps. point milte the..main hamesha yehi sochtg tha naresh jee hote to ab tak kitne points hote mere, LOL..
Aur bahut hee khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne.,......
Aate rahiye aur mehfil kee raunak badate rahiye.



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waah waah ghazal me ek alag saa ehasaas hai very very very nice..........
   
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5th June 2014, 09:23 PM

Naresh Mehra jii adaab bhut shaandaar ghazal se nawaza hai aapne choti behr mai kuch kehna yaqeenan mushkil kaam hai daad hazir hai qubool farmaiye


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10th June 2014, 08:01 AM

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Naresh ji sabse pehle to aapka bohat bohat shukriyah. ..mujhe pura yaqeen tha aap humse zyada der naaraaz nahi reh sakte..

ab mehfil me raunak si lagti hai..main waqay bohat khush huun.. ..thanks once again..

ab aate hain aapki ghazal ki taraf..bohat hi acchi ghazal likhi hai aapne..sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain..

yuhi likhte rahiye

khush rahiye
MohabbatoN Se Nawaazne Kaa Behad ShukriyaaH ... Zainy JI !! Inaayat !!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

............... Naresh Mehra ...............
Aadaab Mehra Saab! Bayhad Khushee huee aapki aamad... rounaq wapas agayee!!
Ayk baar phir say aapnay apnay munfarid andaaz mayn ayk umda kavish say nawaazaa .. dili shukriya! Daad qboul frmayayn aur yoonhi mahfil ki rounaq barhaatay rahayn!


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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

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Bohut khoob! mujhe bohut pasand aaya, shukriya humese isey share karne ke liye.

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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

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Ab Talak .SamajhTaa Thaa MaiN
TuuT Kar SanwarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Kabhi Ho Kar .... Khud Se Khafaa
Aaiine Se .. PuchhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Roshnii Kii .........Tamannaa MeN
Charaag Saa . JalTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Phool Se .. TitTlii Kaa Mel-Milaap
Mohabbat . SeekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Dekhaa Thaa Tujhe FaqaT Ek Roz
Charcha Bahut KarTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jab Lagaa . Bhuul Jaaungaa Tujhe
Ghazal Uss Par LikhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Khoye Pyaar Kii ....... Ghumshudgii
Akhbaar MeN DekhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

Jisse Door Le gaii Galat fahmiyaaN
Aankh MeN . ChubhTaa Thaa MaiN ...

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Namaste Bhaiyaa

aapki es gazal par aaj nazar gye...padne se reh gye thi, aap to jaante hi haiN ki aapko padna hame accha lagta hai...par aap phir se gayab ho gye hai...please aate rha kijiye taaki hame aapko padne ka mokka milta rhe.

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