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देखने परखने में ही उम्र गुज़र जाती है
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देखने परखने में ही उम्र गुज़र जाती है - 6th October 2019, 04:04 PM

देखने परखने में ही उम्र गुज़र जाती है
आते-आते ही दुनिया समझ में आती है l

अपनी ख़ामोशी को इतना ना बढ़ाओ यूँ ही
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बंद आँखें चेहरों को कहां पढ़ पाती है l

ग़म ना कर, उस राह पे ग़र नहीं पहुंचे हैं आज
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देखने परखने में ही उम्र गुज़र जाती है
आते-आते ही दुनिया समझ में आती है l

अपनी ख़ामोशी को इतना ना बढ़ाओ यूँ ही
गुमशुदाओं को ये दुनिया भूल ही जाती है l

देख के चलना ही बेहतर है जीने के लिए
बंद आँखें चेहरों को कहां पढ़ पाती है l

ग़म ना कर, उस राह पे ग़र नहीं पहुंचे हैं आज
कोशिशों से “यश” मंजिल मिल ही जाती है l


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