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22nd August 2014, 01:40 AM
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zindagi yuhi imtihaan leti rahegi aksar
kabhi zindagi jeena ka koi falsafa mil jaaye
Faraaz aaye to sabr na kho dena yaaroN
Na jaane nasheb ka saath fhir kahan mil jaaye
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Ananth sir... kia kehne aap ke.. bohat bohat khoob...
dherooN daad haazir hai,
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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22nd August 2014, 01:41 AM
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irtikaaz-e-zaat* meN kiskaa faraaz kiskaa nasheb
aaj wo uncha hua kal jo maa-tahtii** tha tera
*convergence of castes
** subordinate (मा-तहती)
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waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah!
bohat aalaa soch Adil bhai...
Iss behtareeN soch ke liye be-shumaar daad qaabol kejiye..
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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22nd August 2014, 01:42 AM
raaH meiN nasheb aaye ya faraaz, chalte jaana hai!
yeH zindagi farz hai guzaarni, bas jeetay jaana hai ..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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22nd August 2014, 05:40 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
aapne to jaise hamaare sher ka interpretation hi kar diya
laajavaab........... bahot khub....
dheroN dheroN daad, hamaari jaanibse, Ananthji.....
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Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab............
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22nd August 2014, 05:42 AM
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irtikaaz-e-zaat* meN kiskaa faraaz kiskaa nasheb
aaj wo uncha hua kal jo maa-tahtii** tha tera
*convergence of castes
** subordinate (मा-तहती)
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Wwwwaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Kya baat hai....dheron daad Aadeil sahab
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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22nd August 2014, 05:44 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Ananth sir... kia kehne aap ke.. bohat bohat khoob...
dherooN daad haazir hai,
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
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Bohat bohat shukuriya Hassan bhai ..........
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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22nd August 2014, 05:50 AM
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raaH meiN nasheb aaye ya faraaz, chalte jaana hai!
yeH zindagi farz hai guzaarni, bas jeetay jaana hai ..
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Kya khoob likha hai Hassan bhai ...dheron daad
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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22nd August 2014, 09:10 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah!
bohat aalaa soch Adil bhai...
Iss behtareeN soch ke liye be-shumaar daad qaabol kejiye..
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
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Wwwwaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Kya baat hai....dheron daad Aadeil sahab
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Hassanbhai & Ananthji,
aapka dono ka behad mashkoor hooN.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd August 2014, 09:22 AM
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raaH meiN nasheb aaye ya faraaz, chalte jaana hai!
yeH zindagi farz hai guzaarni, bas jeetay jaana hai ..
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
ek haqiqat kii aala bayaanaat pe dheroN daad, Hassanbhai
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd August 2014, 11:39 AM
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Kya khoob likha hai Hassan bhai ...dheron daad
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Had darja manooN hooN sir aap ki inayat ke liye!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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22nd August 2014, 11:42 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
ek haqiqat kii aala bayaanaat pe dheroN daad, Hassanbhai
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Teh-e-dil se mashkoor hooN.. Adil bhai.. aap ki mohabbat ke liye!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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22nd August 2014, 12:28 PM
Sabse pehle toh zarra sahab ka bohut bohut shukriya. Main bohut dinon se apki paathshala ki distance learning student hun, kuch masrufiyat ki wajah se apki kaksha Mein baith nahi paa rahi thi. Aaj waqt mila to socha apni attendance laga loon.
Ek koshish kar rahi Hun agar kuch kami ho to sahi kar dijiyega.
Faraaz ki chah hai toh nasheb se kya darna
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22nd August 2014, 12:31 PM
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Sabse pehle toh zarra sahab ka bohut bohut shukriya. Main bohut dinon se apki paathshala ki distance learning student hun, kuch masrufiyat ki wajah se apki kaksha Mein baith nahi paa rahi thi. Aaj waqt mila to socha apni attendance laga loon.
Ek koshish kar rahi Hun agar kuch kami ho to sahi kar dijiyega.
Faraaz ki chah hai toh nasheb se kya darna
Suna hai ghode bhi uunchi chalaang se pehle do kadam peeche chalte hain.
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Wahhh! waaaaaaaaaaaaaah.... Sarika jii..
aap ne toH aate saath hi meHfil loot li....
bohat bohat umdaH khiyaal pesh kiya hai...
dherooN daad qabool kejiye...
Aate rahiye aur fusooN meiN apne jalway bikhraatay rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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22nd August 2014, 12:48 PM
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Sabse pehle toh zarra sahab ka bohut bohut shukriya. Main bohut dinon se apki paathshala ki distance learning student hun, kuch masrufiyat ki wajah se apki kaksha Mein baith nahi paa rahi thi. Aaj waqt mila to socha apni attendance laga loon.
Ek koshish kar rahi Hun agar kuch kami ho to sahi kar dijiyega.
Faraaz ki chah hai toh nasheb se kya darna
Suna hai ghode bhi uunchi chalaang se pehle do kadam peeche chalte hain.
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Sarikaji,
bahot hi khubsurat sher bayaan kiya hai....
dheroN dheroN daad, aapko hamaari aur se....
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd August 2014, 01:33 PM
Shukriya hassan ji n adil ji. Himmat badhane ke liye.
Apki dost
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22nd August 2014, 02:15 PM
Thanks a lot, Naaz...
I am extremely touched by this gesture
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd August 2014, 02:16 PM
hai nasheb-o-faraaz to maah ke bhii
taa amaavas jo hai to poonam bhii
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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22nd August 2014, 03:07 PM
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Waaahhhh! Bahot khoob jij.....simply awesome
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Thanx saali sahiba...bohat bohat shukriya
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Sabse pehle toh zarra sahab ka bohut bohut shukriya. Main bohut dinon se apki paathshala ki distance learning student hun, kuch masrufiyat ki wajah se apki kaksha Mein baith nahi paa rahi thi. Aaj waqt mila to socha apni attendance laga loon.
Ek koshish kar rahi Hun agar kuch kami ho to sahi kar dijiyega.
Faraaz ki chah hai toh nasheb se kya darna
Suna hai ghode bhi uunchi chalaang se pehle do kadam peeche chalte hain.
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Namaskar masti ji....bohat khoob likha hai aapne...dheron daad
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hai nasheb-o-faraaz to maah ke bhii
taa amaavas jo hai to poonam bhii
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Wwwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!
Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab
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22nd August 2014, 03:12 PM
jo hain mehdood* unhe, nasheboN faraazoN Ka fikr kahan
daastaan-e-safar main unke, pairoN ke chhaaloN ka zikr kahan
*determined
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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22nd August 2014, 03:34 PM
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Wwwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!
Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab
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aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Ananthji....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd August 2014, 03:47 PM
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jo hain mehdood* unhe, nasheboN faraazoN Ka fikr kahan
daastaan-e-safar main unke, pairoN ke chhaaloN ka zikr kahan
*determined
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waaah!! Ananthji,
behad khubsurat sher kahaa aapne. Ek savaal zehn meN aayaa hai iis sher ko leke, lafz 'faraazoN' ke lihaaz meN, jahaaN tak mera maanna hai, faraaz kaa plural nahi hai, phir bhii aapne istemaal kiya hai, shaayad aapka iis lafz se kahii vaastaa huaa ho? thoRi roshni daalenge to hamaare liye bhii ye seekh hongi
muaafee chaahunga agar koii gustaakhee huii ho..
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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22nd August 2014, 05:05 PM
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waaah!! Ananthji,
behad khubsurat sher kahaa aapne. Ek savaal zehn meN aayaa hai iis sher ko leke, lafz 'faraazoN' ke lihaaz meN, jahaaN tak mera maanna hai, faraaz kaa plural nahi hai, phir bhii aapne istemaal kiya hai, shaayad aapka iis lafz se kahii vaastaa huaa ho? thoRi roshni daalenge to hamaare liye bhii ye seekh hongi
muaafee chaahunga agar koii gustaakhee huii ho..
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Aadeil sahab...shukriya actually mujhe bhi doubt hua ki main faraazoN ka istemaal kar sakta hun ya nahi ...main ne is par research nahi kii...naahi mujhe kahi ye shabd padh ne ko mila...lekin fhir main ne zarraa sahab ka intro padha jahan unho ne mention kiya hai nashebon aur faraazon ka istemaal hum kar sakte hain...aap mujhe se kahin jyada jaankar hain ,mujhe behad khusi hogi agar aap is par roshni daal paye to
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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22nd August 2014, 05:27 PM
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Aadeil sahab...shukriya actually mujhe bhi doubt hua ki main faraazoN ka istemaal kar sakta hun ya nahi ...main ne is par research nahi kii...naahi mujhe kahi ye shabd padh ne ko mila...lekin fhir main ne zarraa sahab ka intro padha jahan unho ne mention kiya hai nashebon aur faraazon ka istemaal hum kar sakte hain...aap mujhe se kahin jyada jaankar hain ,mujhe behad khusi hogi agar aap is par roshni daal paye to
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Ananthji,
mujhe bhii yehi doubt tha iisii liye ye savaal kiya... shaayad Zarraasaab hi usspe koii roshni daal de?
Waiting for Zarraasaab's reply
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd August 2014, 06:56 PM
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KyuN na kheluN tujhse aye zindagii bataa
Tu khelti rahii nasheb-o-faraaz ka juwaa
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Lajawaaaaab......
*hSn* : parStaar
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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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22nd August 2014, 07:53 PM
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Faraaz ki chah hai toh nasheb se kya darna
Suna hai ghode bhi uunchi chalaang se pehle do kadam peeche chalte hain.
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bahot accchi tarah se aapne Faraaz o nasheb kaa istemaal kiyaa hai Masti sahiba..... aapke parwaaz ko main daad deta hoon.... dil se daad....
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22nd August 2014, 08:05 PM
rah-e-junooN ke nasheb-o-faraaz meiN "mohsin"
khirad ka phool bhi saNg-e-giraaN se kam to n tha
- Mohsin Naqvi
kya nasheb-o-faraaz thi "tanveer"
zindagi aap ne guzaar hi di
- Habeeb Tanveer
Zarraa saahab qaayal hoon main aapki is adaa kaaaa..... alfaazon ka intekaab is mahfil me jo aap karte aaye hain uske baaare me kyaa kahun... lafz lafz ek nageenaa hai aur jo sher aapne pesh kiye hain wo sab ke liye misaal hain..... bahot seekhne ko mil raha hai aapki is bazm se.... dher saarii duaaen aapko pesh hain mere bhai...... jazaaaq Allah
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23rd August 2014, 09:41 AM
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KyuN na kheluN tujhse aye zindagii bataa
Tu khelti rahii nasheb-o-faraaz ka juwaa
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Wwaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Bohat khoob...dheron daad........
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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23rd August 2014, 11:44 AM
dostoN ..... wwwwwwwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh !!!! aap sab ne is baar aashaar ki kya khoobsurat aur shaandaar anjuman saja di hai !!! behad hi umdah aashaar, aur kis mohabbat se ek doosre ki hausla afzaayee kar rahe hain. aur kuchh bahaut hi sahi, achchhe aur aham sawaal bhi aaye hain.
behad hi maazrat khwaah hoon ki pichhle do din se safar kar raha tha to aap ki khidmat mein pesh naheen ho paaya. jaldi hi fursat se saare posts dekhoonga aur un par apne comments le kar haazir hounga, aur sawaalon par discussions mein bhi contribute karoonga.
magar aap, ai yaaraan-e-mehfil, yoon hi khoobsurti bikhere jaayein!!!
duaon ke saath
zarraa
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23rd August 2014, 04:30 PM
AADEIL SAHAB KE AASHAAR
shab ke hone tak yahaaN aaftaab nasheb meN Garq huva
maah na niklaa, tum na aaye, ye samaa taarik raha
nasheb-e-chashm-e-tamaashaa mujhe banaaye kyuN?
faraaz-e-daar-o-rasan kii havas jagaaye kyuN?
safeer, nasheb-o-faraaz to hai umr kii haqiiqat
faraaz-e-koh-saar* bhii to nasheb se hi utHte aaye
muhabbat nasheb-o-faraaz kii na hotii
mazaa bhii na aataa udaasii na hotii
wo bachpan tha faraaz aur nasheb javaani thii
fareb ye bhii, ki budhaape kii zindagaanii thii
nasheb se na Darr, wo bhii manzil kii aur hai
achchhaa hai, faraaz warnaa sakHti-e-raah tha
uDaa, to faraaz meN paroN ne sambhaalaa
nasheb meN, sabaa kaa sahaaraa nahi tha
arz-o-samaa haiN naqsh nasheb-o-faraaz ke
milke ufaq pe de jo sabaq irtikaaz ke
irtikaaz-e-zaat meN kiskaa faraaz kiskaa nasheb
aaj wo uncha hua kal jo maa-tahtii tha tera
hai nasheb-o-faraaz to maah ke bhii
taa amaavas jo hai to poonam bhii
- AADEIL
Aadeil sahab, aap ek kamaal ki soch aur ghazab ka hunar rakte haiN.aap ek original philosopher hain .... sublime thinker hain .... master of expression hain ..... saath hi ek bahaut hi productive artist bhi !
maiN aap ke aashaar ko hamesha se bahaut pasand karta tha ... aaj main aap ki soch aur aap ke hunar ka qaayal ho gaya hooN ...
aap ke saare ke saare aashaar kis had tak behtareen hain laajawaab hain bayaan naheen kar sakta.... amazing .... wo humein sirf alfaaz "nasheb-o-faraaz" ki hi seekh naheen dete, balki zindagi, kudrat, hayaat, kaaynaat ke nasheb-o-faraaz ki bhi seekh dete hain. aur highlighted aashaar to aise hain ki jinhone pooree tarah spell bound kar diya, ki jaise kisi ne fusoon mein baandh liya ho jaise. N@zneen ji ne bilkul sahi kaha hai ki ye fusoon-e-Aadeil ka karishma hai
I consider myself privileged for being an audience to your compositions !
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 04:36 PM
ANANTHPAK SAHAB KE AASHAAR
Niyaz-o-naz-o-nasheb-o-faraaz-o-ranj-o-gham
Musaahib, zindagi inke baghair kya hai ?
zindagi yuhi imtihaan leti rahegi aksar
kabhi zindagi jeena ka koi falsafa mil jaaye
Faraaz aaye to sabr na kho dena yaaroN
Na jaane nasheb ka saath fhir kahan mil jaaye
jo hain mehdood unhe, nasheboN faraazoN Ka fikr kahan*
daastaan-e-safar main unke, pairoN ke chhaaloN ka zikr kahan
- ANANTHPAK
wwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhh !!!! behad hi umdaah aashaar kahe Ananthpaak sahab. behad hi saaf aur pukhtah tareeke se zindagi ke nasheb-o-faraaz ka bayaan kiya hai. bahaut khoob aur dheron daad !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 04:41 PM
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raaH meiN nasheb aaye ya faraaz, chalte jaana hai!
yeH zindagi farz hai guzaarni, bas jeetay jaana hai ..
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Wwwaaahhh !!! Khoobsurat sher ... ek achchhee naseehat ... jis mein shikwe ya majbooree ki bhi halki si jhalak hai ...jo sher ko wus'at deti hai !!! Bahaut si daad Hassan sahab !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 04:46 PM
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Wwwaaahhh !!! Khoobsurat sher ... ek achchhee naseehat ... jis mein shikwe ya majbooree ki bhi halki si jhalak hai ...jo sher ko wus'at deti hai !!! Bahaut si daad Hassan sahab !!!
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Zarraa saheb.. aap aaye, meHfil meiN bahaar aayi!
zarra-nawaazi ke liye be-had shukriyaaH!
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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23rd August 2014, 05:06 PM
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Sabse pehle toh zarra sahab ka bohut bohut shukriya. Main bohut dinon se apki paathshala ki distance learning student hun, kuch masrufiyat ki wajah se apki kaksha Mein baith nahi paa rahi thi. Aaj waqt mila to socha apni attendance laga loon.
Ek koshish kar rahi Hun agar kuch kami ho to sahi kar dijiyega.
Faraaz ki chah hai toh nasheb se kya darna
Suna hai ghode bhi uunchi chalaang se pehle do kadam peeche chalte hain.
Masti
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Masti ji ... main is bazm mein aap ka ehteraam karta hoon.
Ji haan, ye ek ajeeb si paathshaalaa hai Yahaan hum sab "double role" play karte hain. Hum sab khud hi students hain aur khud hi teachers. Hum ek doosre ki ungli thaam kar ek doosre se seekhte bhi hain, aur sikhaate bhi hain.
Hum yahaan mashq-e-sukhan bhi karte hain, aur lutf-e-sukhan bhi uthaate hain.
Aap ka sher bahaut achchha raha Masti ji. Aap ne zindagi ke nasheb o faraaz ki analogy di hai jis se baat saaf bhi huwee aur lutf bhi aaya hai. Yahaan oonchee chhalaang aur faraaz ki analogy bilkul accurate lagi mujhe kyunki donon mein same physical dimension hai, that is of going up. Haalanki, peeche hatne aur nasheb mein physical similarity us had tak naheen lagi mujhe jitni pehli analogy mein hai, par main ise kami naheen samajhtha kyunki ek to sher ka message pooree tarah waazeh ho raha hai aur nasheb aur peechhe hatne ki spirit similar lag rahi hai. phir bhi, agar aap aur mashq e sukhan karna chaahein to koyee sher keh ke dekh sakteen hain jahaan nasheb o faraaz ki analogy kisi up and down motion se ho.
Masti ji, these were my humble opinions and suggestions only .... only a directional thought, not very exact or prescriptive points ... agar aap ka koyee aur nazariya ho to wo bhi zaroor farmaayein ... we believe in a free-flowing and easy-going conversation
ek baar phir se, sher par dheron daad aur tashreef laane ka shukriya..aur ummeed hai ki aage bhi humein aap ki behtareen soch aur sukhan ka lutf haasil hota rahega...
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 05:18 PM
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KyuN na kheluN tujhse aye zindagii bataa
Tu khelti rahii nasheb-o-faraaz ka juwaa
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wwwwwwwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh kya kehne !! bahaut si baatein keh daaleen hain aap ne ek mukhtasar se sher mein N@zneen ji !! kya khoob fiqr bhi aur andaaz bhi !! is sher ka narrative style bhi barha lutf dene waala hai .... kyunki jaise jaise sher aage bardhta gaya, mazmoon ke naye naye pehlu khulte gaye. bahaut si daad aur dheron mubaarakbaad aap ko !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 06:09 PM
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waaah!! Ananthji,
behad khubsurat sher kahaa aapne. Ek savaal zehn meN aayaa hai iis sher ko leke, lafz 'faraazoN' ke lihaaz meN, jahaaN tak mera maanna hai, faraaz kaa plural nahi hai, phir bhii aapne istemaal kiya hai, shaayad aapka iis lafz se kahii vaastaa huaa ho? thoRi roshni daalenge to hamaare liye bhii ye seekh hongi
muaafee chaahunga agar koii gustaakhee huii ho..
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Aadeil sahab...shukriya actually mujhe bhi doubt hua ki main faraazoN ka istemaal kar sakta hun ya nahi ...main ne is par research nahi kii...naahi mujhe kahi ye shabd padh ne ko mila...lekin fhir main ne zarraa sahab ka intro padha jahan unho ne mention kiya hai nashebon aur faraazon ka istemaal hum kar sakte hain...aap mujhe se kahin *jyada jaankar hain ,mujhe behad khusi hogi agar aap is par roshni daal paye to
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Ananthji,
mujhe bhii yehi doubt tha iisii liye ye savaal kiya... shaayad Zarraasaab hi usspe koii roshni daal de?
Waiting for Zarraasaab's reply
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Aadeil sahab, Ananthpak sahab ... ji bahaut bahaut shukriya ki aap ne is baat par guftagoo chherhhee hai, jis se mujhe aur baaki doston ko kuchh seekhne ko mil sakta hai. aise discussions se hi is activity ka sahi maqsad pooree tarah se haasil hota hai.
Aadeil sahab ka kehna mujhe sahi lagta hai aur main un ki donon baaton se ittefaaq rakhta hoon.
But just a few observations before I present my make-shift opinion
1. "faraaz" ko plural sense mein use kar sakte hain, aisa mujhe bhi lagta hai ... e.g. agar kahein "raah mein jitne faraaz aaye" to wo sahi sound kar raha hai mujhe
2. lafz "faraazoN" dekhne ko naheeN milta hai. kya ye is liye ki ye lafz exist naheeN karta hai ? quite possible.
3. maiN ye lafz "faraazoN" bas 1-2 baar hi dekha hoga. ek link copy kar raha hooN, ek bahaut hi khoobsurat nazm ka (in this beautiful nazm, the usage of this word is quite similar to how Ananthpak sahab has used in his misra). shayad, zehn mein ye kaheen n kaheen yehi baat rahi ho aur is wajah se main ne introduction mein ise mention kar diya tha. but, like always, I have a completely open mind about it and would love to learn more about this aspect. is activity ke peechhe mera ek bahaut selfish maqsad hai, which is self learning
https://www.facebook.com/shahzadnayy...46739695436698
4. hum kisi bhi lafz par definitive raay kaayam karne ke liye, puraane classical shora ya maanhe huwe ustaad shora ke qalaam ki misaal dekhte hain, aur is lafz ke mutalliq us tarah ke shora ki koyee misaal dekhne ko naheen milee hai mujhe ab tak.
to in sab baatoN ko dekhte hue, at this point and with the information at our disposal at present, to ek substantial doubt zaroor create hua hai lafz "faraazoN" ko le kar. as of now, it might be safer not to use it till there is a doubt over it, because we have not found very substantial and irrefutable evidence in it's favor as of now.
par seekhne ke lihaaz se, main sabhi members se appeal karna chaahoonga ki jo bhi is masale par roshni daal sakte hain, ya koyee opinion rakhte hon, please saamne zaroor aayein aur humein is ek pehloo par seekhne ka mauka dein.
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 06:19 PM
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rah-e-junooN ke nasheb-o-faraaz meiN "mohsin"
khirad ka phool bhi saNg-e-giraaN se kam to n tha
- Mohsin Naqvi
kya nasheb-o-faraaz thi "tanveer"
zindagi aap ne guzaar hi di
- Habeeb Tanveer
Zarraa saahab qaayal hoon main aapki is adaa kaaaa..... alfaazon ka intekaab is mahfil me jo aap karte aaye hain uske baaare me kyaa kahun... lafz lafz ek nageenaa hai aur jo sher aapne pesh kiye hain wo sab ke liye misaal hain..... bahot seekhne ko mil raha hai aapki is bazm se.... dher saarii duaaen aapko pesh hain mere bhai...... jazaaaq Allah
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Shaad mere bhai ... is mohabbat aur khuloos se bhari huwee pazeeraayee aur hausla afzaayee se dil bhar aaya hai mera !! Ye meri bahaut barhi khush naseebee hai ki aap jaise hunarmand qadradaan aur mohabbat bhara dil rakhne waale mehrbaan ka saath milta aaya hai mujhe !! yoon hi aap ke sahaare ki zaroorat bani rahegi is koshish mein .... aap ko dheron duaein !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 06:41 PM
ek taaza sher ...
ye safar jo tanha hai is qadar to phir uth raha hai ghubaar kyooN
n nasheb hai n faraaz hai to kathin hai raahguzaar kyooN
- zarraa
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23rd August 2014, 06:49 PM
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We are missing your presence and beautiful comments zarraji
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Thx for remembering N@zneen ji
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